Author Topic: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 3/13 Chapter 11
Araxie 
Registered: Mar '06
44304_Padme Watching the Jedi Temple
Date Posted: 11/1/06 3:11pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Beautifully written.

 

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Golden_Jedi 
Registered: Jun '05
14707_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 11/1/06 3:51pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Awful, awful, awful.... What Tarkin did to Alderaan, of course! wink Hot scene in the Coruscati streets, but leia gave a good reason for not giving into Han... Darn it! tongue

 

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RebelMom 
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Registered: Apr '00
44413_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 11/1/06 4:04pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
It's so weird sometimes to see Han and Leia not fighting. It will be nice when the "real" Han shows up and the fireworks begin...at least I think they'll have fireworks.

Leia's awakened Force sensitivity allowed her to "feel" the disturbance at the death of Alderaan. good job with that

 

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Tatooine_Ghost 
Registered: Jul '06
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Date Posted: 11/1/06 4:11pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

 

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ikarit 
Registered: Feb '06
18916_Barriss Offee
Date Posted: 11/1/06 5:00pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Oh, Leia! It's harder this time than it is in the movie--not only does she have to deal with the destruction of her planet and everyone on it, but with the knowledge that Han knew, he knew the whole time that it was going to happen. I hope she can forgive him, but I somehow doubt it'll be quickly.

And Han had some shocks of his own to deal with, too. I was really surprised to see that he's found out exactly who Darth Vader is underneath that mask. I wouldn't have thought that he would find out anytime soon, but on second thought, it's not like there would be any other opportunity for him to find out, would there?

Thanks so much for the PM!

 

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Healer_Leona 
Registered: Jul '00
44266_Fan Art - Female Chiss
Date Posted: 11/1/06 5:09pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
I can very much see this scenario being just what happened, with the Force ghosts helping Leia get through this time. Nothing ever made sense how Vader didn't feel naything about her. You've presented a viable option to believe.

Han took a seat next to the Princess and leaned close to her ear. “Or you could just remember last night and give Vader a thrill.”

“You’re incorrigible,” Leia said with a half-hearted smile.


love grin

“You’re playing hard to get tonight,” Han grinned as he tried to move in and kiss her.

Leia quickly ducked out of his embrace and continued to walk along the streets of Coruscant. “It’s fun to watch you try and fulfill your quota of kissing me every night.”


Aren't they both incorrigible.

Evil to end at that point. Next post is going to be a doozy!!!! grin grin

 

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Arkady 
Registered: Dec '04
23979_Han
Date Posted: 11/1/06 6:27pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Great post. So will she be able to forgive him?

Arkady

 

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starwarsfan68 
Registered: May '03
Date Posted: 11/1/06 7:03pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
I am speechless. AWESOME!

 

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dm1 
Registered: Jun '04
6575_Princess Leia
Date Posted: 11/1/06 9:50pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
I agree with Starwarsfan68, this was truly awesome. You really dovetailed everything so nicely. I love the dream sequences and their banter and kisses. Poor Han, knowing all of this and yet unable to prevent it. I wonder what their next conversation will be like.

 

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Fifilla 
Registered: Mar '06
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Date Posted: 11/2/06 12:27am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Wow, that was great!
And now Han knows that Vader is Anakin, interesting turn!

Thanks for the PM happy

 

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ccp 
Registered: Apr '05
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Date Posted: 11/2/06 5:49am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
She's going to be so mad when she sees ghost Han. And we're about to meet real Han, I can't wait. She'll be throwing out insults both directions.

 

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Blue_Milkshake 
Registered: Nov '05
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Date Posted: 11/2/06 11:22am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Just popping in to say that I'm loving this story!

 

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anakin_luver 
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 11/2/06 4:57pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
excellent work. i love the way you write Leia's thoughts, and the entire "Vader/serum" sequence was brilliant!

great work,

 

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KELIA 
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Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 11/3/06 11:48am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Ooohhhh Han walked through Vader - shock shock

Creepy!

Loved the mushy sweetness between Han and Leia - face heart.

And now she's suffered the worst blow of all - I hope Han is able to offer her some comfort.

Great udpate

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sweetheart68 
Registered: Jul '06
14565_Han Solo
Date Posted: 11/3/06 2:25pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Wow, powerful stuff. I just hope Leia won't be too hard on 'real' or 'ghost' Han. Yet another great post Irish, can't wait for the next one!

 

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