Author Topic: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 3/13 Chapter 11
cibbler 
Registered: Aug '06
Date Posted: 11/4/06 3:08am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
awesome chapter..again.

Leia could not explain what happened next, but it was as if someone was literally tearing her apart. That death itself had taken hold of her and the screams and cries of those on the planet bellow surrounded her. It was the most agonizing experience of her life and as it subsided her focus came back to monitor. Alderaan was gone.

This must have been worse for Leia then in the original movie. Did Vader catch her reaction and will he ponder more about her force abilities?
How will the princess react to Han the next time? Both the younger and the ghost.

You've got me hooked on this story.

 

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Jade_Max 
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 11/5/06 12:31am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
shock Holy smokes! The emotion at the end of that post was just so... vivid!

Wow, I'm speechless.

I adored Qui-Gon's intervention, Han stepping through Vader and seeing the images and thoughts of his past - he now knows Padmé's name wink ooo, makes me wonder how that one is going to affect the future - of it Han will keep his peace.

The interrogation and the dream sequences were wonderfully done, but I think your use of the Canon moment at the end and the meaning and worth, the emotion, you packed into it eclipsed everything. Explaining Leia's bravado as actual gumption due to the knowledge that she wasn't going to die was brilliant.

I loved this post... and yes, I know I said speechless, but hey, my fingers can move wink

 

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brodiew 
Registered: Oct '05
6593_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 11/10/06 7:50am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Wow! What a powerful chapter. I can't believe Qui-Gon desperately appeared to Vader(Anakin). That was a shocker, but needed if Leia was to live.

Alderaan is gone. Vader's identity revealed to Han. Another secret for him to keep. That's gotta be hard.

You've definitely got an engaging story going here. You have the Han-Leia relationship progressing in the dream world, even if they cannot touch in reality. I'm a still wondering what will happen when the real(younger) Han shows up?

Also, what of our mystery? When do we get another clue to our assassin's identity?

Hook me up Irish!

 

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Pairx2 
Registered: Dec '03
23527_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 11/14/06 11:41am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
More please! LOVE THIS STORY!

Pairx2

 

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Lola64 
Registered: Mar '05
23699_ANH Title
Date Posted: 11/17/06 2:42pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
I-I will – oh,” she gasped at his kisses and felt his hand release her wrist only to brush down the side of her exposed ribs, tickling her in the process.

Suddenly, he walked away leaving her in a state of total frustration as all of her senses were heightened and prepared for a kiss. She opened her eyes and looked down the street to see him nonchalantly strolling along.

“You’re mean,” she shouted out, giving herself another moment to cool off before catching up to him.

Of course, he had a devilish grin on his face once he saw she was next to him. “Just warming you up, Sweetheart.”

“Watch it, hot shot, or you might overcook your welcome,” she said sternly before allowing a smile to appear.


laugh laugh Fabulous exchange. I just love them together. Always have, always will.

Go Qui Gon Go!! I didn't think he was gonna do anything. That was a pleasant surprise.

Now that Han knows I wonder what's going to happen when this is all over and he's waking up in Jabba's palace? When he goes back into his body does the hybernation sickness take away his memory that Anakin is Vader? thinking

Oh and by the way, I'm still saying this story is canon and that all of this really happened. You'll never make me believe otherwise, I'm just saying. [face-grin]

 

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star_writer24 
Registered: Aug '06
19058_Tahiri
Date Posted: 11/21/06 4:47pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8 - Date Edited: 11/21/06 4:49pm (1 edits total) Edited By: star_writer24
UP!
All I want for Christmas is a post-y please
A post-y please
A post-y please
Gee I could only have a post-y please.
Then I could wish you merry Christmas.

 

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kimmi 
Registered: Mar '04
42932_Han Solo
Date Posted: 11/24/06 4:24pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
haven't been around much lately but i'm catching up and this is SUPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it coming

 

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Jaded_Rose 
Registered: Nov '06
41230_Leia Organa
Date Posted: 11/24/06 4:36pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Oh no! Alderaan! cry . And Leia is going to be very mad at Han. I hope she won't be angry with his younger self, when the whole gang shows up. If you keep a PM list for this fic, could I be added?

J_Ro

 

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RogueSticks 
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Registered: Feb '03
40090_Han Solo<br>WANTED
Date Posted: 11/25/06 2:17pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
delurking just for you. again.

because we need a new post (or four).

please don't make me start arming up again. it's really a pain in the rear to have to haul all the flamethrowers and bombs and whatnot here.

 

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star_writer24 
Registered: Aug '06
19058_Tahiri
Date Posted: 12/4/06 6:56pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Uppers! whistling

 

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Zonoma 
Registered: Jun '05
7280_Dagobah
Date Posted: 12/8/06 7:47pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8 - Date Edited: 12/15/06 2:35am (1 edits total) Edited By: Zonoma
Wow. I hadn’t even thought about her increased Force sensitivity and how it would affect her during the destruction of Alderaan! Good call, Leah. Now the cat is definitely out of the bag with Vader, though, I’m afraid. *frowns* That can not be a good thing.

Even less a good thing is the confrontation that Leia and Han have before them. And meeting him as his younger not so wise self might be really, really tough. Will he still get to be near her as a ghost after she ‘meets’ him? And will Luke be able to see him or just on occasion? Can’t wait to see where you take this!

More soon? batting

 

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HerHighness33 
Registered: Sep '04
6577_Princess Leia
Date Posted: 12/13/06 6:45am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
I've been lurking... but now I'm DE-lurking just to tell you how much I love this story! It's my absolute favorite story right now!! I love the interaction between Han and Leia. I'm dying to find out what happens when Leia talks to Han after what happened with Alderaan! Pleeeeeease update soon! praying

 

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Pairx2 
Registered: Dec '03
23527_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 12/14/06 7:49pm Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
UPPERS! PLEASE!

 

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star_writer24 
Registered: Aug '06
19058_Tahiri
Date Posted: 12/19/06 9:48am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8 - Date Edited: 12/19/06 9:48am (1 edits total) Edited By: star_writer24
SW_24's Christmas List

1. A Pony
2. Kyp grin
3. A post on this really really great story. praying

I've been a VERY GOOD GIRL this year. batting

up up up

 

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BigFatty 
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 12/26/06 7:06am Subject: RE: Ghost -- ESB AU (Han/Leia/Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Luke) UPDATE 11/01 Chapter 8
Someone needs to put down the Wii and pick up a keyboard and type. shame_on_you tongue

 

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