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Author	Topic: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - PAUSED - explanatory A/N 1.08.07
Ani-maniac Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 8/21/06 2:22am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	Obi-Wan wasn’t ready yet to face her, nor could he act like Anakin in front of her. What if she … wanted to kiss him? falls over laughing Oh, that would be awkward. No, Anakin, it wasn’t a dream, Obi-Wan thought sadly. You saw your future. I love that Anakin can't remeber. It adds so much, and this line is so eerie. This is such an original idea! “Anakin, please…don’t shave off the beard,” Obi-Wan muttered, already at the door step. A familiar bubbling laughter was the only response to his request. Obi-Wan had a very bad feeling about it… Oh dear, he shouldn't have given him ideas. Incredible work, my apprentice! Ani-maniac -----signature----- "I can't exactly use, 'Well, I was locked up in a secret government facility,' as my alibi." -- Alec, Dark Angel. "There is no better place to be than in God's will, unless it's in His presence." -- Last Flight Out Jesus is Lord.
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Ocelotl_Nesto Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 8/21/06 9:39am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	THis is a fun story-- please add me to the PM list
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Veloz Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 8/21/06 10:23am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	this was a fantastic update It's quite funny to see them in each other's body instead of their own .. now Anakin is the "old" one and Obi is supossed to be the more reckless one.... oh dear I get the feeling that Obi's beard might dissapear soon... Tnx a lot for the pm, and i cant wait for the next update! -----signature----- "Hello there!" "Remember the Force will be with you..always" - Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH "Who's the more foolish...the fool or the fool who follows him?"- Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH
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bibphile Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 8/21/06 5:04pm Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	I like Obi-Wan leaving before Padme can wake up. It was probably the smart thing to do. I wonder if Padme will be surprised that Anakin isn't there when she wakes up? Obi-Wan, get out of my body! I love that reaction. I never would have thought of it. You woke up next to her. You should have figured out that we are more than just friends. I love that line. Waking up next to her only hours ago was another insight into their relationship, a more vivid one than Obi-Wan would have wanted. But he could have never expected that the two of them were involved so seriously. Marriage was a sacred bond; it was a tie that connected two people for all eternity, something that went against all principles of the Code. I really like the wording here. (Am I getting repetative? ) I like the word vivid. Was it really hours ago though? Didn't Obi-Wan come here directly from her apartment? I also love the description of marriage as sacred and as against the principles of the Code. I also like how the news makes Obi-Wan think of when Anakin was a child. And I like that Obi-Wan had no idea they were married. Obi-Wan said earnestly, springing to his feet. Despite the dire situation, he felt his body surging with adrenaline so violently that Obi-Wan was afraid that he would burst. This has me curious. Why such a strong surge of adrenaline?
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Darth_Father-in-law Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 8/22/06 11:02am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	Obi-Wan had lost only his sanity, but Anakin had lost everything – his love, his child, his body and his soul. And it was his fault. So true - a beautiful, summing up description of Obi's and Vaderkin's destinies after RotS. What if she...wanted to kiss him? Obi! That's not the worst she would want to do... “Anakin, please…don’t shave off the beard,” Obi-Wan muttered, already at the door step. No, just go ahead! Obi looks more handsome without his beard. A wonderful, funny and most interesting update, my friend. Lovable work. -----signature----- “Waiting is painful. Forgetting is painful. But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering.” - Paulo Coelho
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Peagis Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 8/22/06 11:42am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	Cool story if you have a PM list please add me to it! -----signature----- "life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." - George Carlin
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Exxaciel Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 8/22/06 3:48pm Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	Looking good. PM with updates? -----signature----- I didn't do it, you can't prove it, the only witness was the Wookie and I'm not translating! "The Amplifier Amplifies" @ http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24611049&brd=10476&start=24762943 Adopter of Obi-4
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aden Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 8/22/06 4:18pm Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	I love this idea! Great job so far. Can you add me to your pm list? -----signature----- Padawan to Aya-Na_Bashu http://s9.invisionfree.com/Jello_Anarchy/index.php?showforum=37
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MarcusDade Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 8/22/06 7:04pm Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	very good. add me to the PM list. -----signature----- Gosei and Senator of The Templars of Twilight Order of The Sword and Skull
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JediArym Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/22/06 9:20pm Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	I'm lovin' your fic already CrazyAni!! Are Obi-Wan and Anakin going to tell Padme what happened? Or are they keeping it a secret for awhile? What ever they decide, I'm sure it will be interesting. Great update! -----signature----- The Pad-Ani Fanfic Archive - home of completed A/P, V/P, Vader, Anakin, and Padmé fanfiction http://www.padanifanfic.com/ Welcome to NY Johnny... Where winning happens more than every 86 years!
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Exxaciel Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 8/23/06 11:53am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	bounces in seat waiting for update I saw "Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies" at the top and I immediately went for it- these are rare scenarios, hard to do, and some of my absolute favorites. CrazyAni gets brownie points for tackling it! -----signature----- I didn't do it, you can't prove it, the only witness was the Wookie and I'm not translating! "The Amplifier Amplifies" @ http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24611049&brd=10476&start=24762943 Adopter of Obi-4
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 8/23/06 1:15pm Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	This story is certainly different. Can't wait for the next episode. Thanks for the PM. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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LovedAnakin Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 8/24/06 7:00am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	You've done it again, crazyani! This story is hot. I love it! pm me please!!! -----signature----- Anakin/Hayden is my big daddy! ROTS AU - in year 2000 New York?! http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21948525&replies=0 Seinfeld crossover http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10
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Anakins_Kiss Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 8/24/06 7:04am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	Powerful. This looks like its going to be another of my favorites. -----signature----- Learn to HATE Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27568604/p1/?1 STAR WARS MUSIC VIDEOS http://www.youtube.com/user/luckiwondr
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MasterTywalker Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 8/24/06 9:27am Subject: RE: Underneath - RotS AU - Anakin and Obi-Wan switch bodies - Updated 21.08!!
	This is great, don't keep me hanging for weeks, please. Obiwan should just expose the chanceller and cut him down before Palps has a chance to figure out something has changed. I know that would make for a short story, but.....he should do it!
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