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Nobody Wants To Be Lonely - A/P wedding, end of AOTC, Romance, *COMPLETED*
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FitJedi
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10/9/06 7:04pm
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RE: Nobody Wants To Be Lonely - A/P wedding, end of AOTC, Romance, 09/28/06
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You are most welcome for the compliment, I look forward to the update and I will also take the ultimate version as well. Yes I am of legal age.
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Anakin_Heartbreaker
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10/14/06 3:07pm
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ehopepower - I'm sorry, you're on the list!!!! I hope you're okay, just know my best wishes are with you.
little_miss_jedi - WOW!!!!! Thank you!!!
FitJedi - Thank you once again, I'm blushing!!!
Hi everyone - I am sorry for the delay, this post should have been up a few days, and I'm furious with myself for not posting when I said I would. But DRL can do the strangest things to you.
Nobody wants to be Lonely
Chapter Three
Anakin gratifyingly sanctioned the unequivocal therapeutic aura of the Force, to rejuvenate his bludgeoned resolve, and caress his vulnerable essence, whilst he adroitly manoeuvred through the convoluted corridors of 500 Republica. His tenacious cerulean orbs, rebelliously defied the desecrating onslaught of never having the happiness of true love, as the torturous inevitability of losing Padme, massacred his incorruptible heart. The Chosen One internally chastised himself; regardless of how vigorously he fought, his aptitude to vanquish the perilous emotions was inadequate. Padme was in his very soul…haunting him.
Anakin abruptly halted his movement, whilst his perceptive blue eyes, meticulously scrutinized a small inanimate object, on the floor. The aesthetically gifted Jedi, progressively kneeled before it; his amorous eyes were inundated with perpetual love, as he recognized the craftsmanship.
“I don’t believe it…” Skywalker tenderly picked the Jappor snippet that he had made a decade ago, and returned to his vertical posture.
A smile grew on Anakin’s lean face, whilst he delicately fingered the impeccably intricate carving. His heart vivaciously danced within his sculpted pectorals, its influence was not seeing the skilful exuberance from his childhood, but the incredible love that had encapsulated it for the last ten years. The Chosen One could distinctly feel the love that Padme had given to it.
His throbbing heart twisted violently…he could also feel her loneliness of the years gone by.
“Padme…”
Padme Naberrie gazed at the splendiferous rambunctious night sky of Coruscant, as she entered the sophisticated transport vessel. The beautiful senator silently pondered how many of Coruscant’s civilians were fortunate to have their true love with them…for the first time she felt envious. R2-D2 and C-3PO, who had been patiently awaiting the arrival of the former queen, approached her.
“Miss Padme.” 3PO said pleasantly. “We will be leaving shortly; it will be good to leave this chaotic place. R2 was telling me that Naboo is quite a tranquil planet, unlike our current residence.”
“I’m sure you will like it 3PO.” Padme smiled reassuringly. “And with R2 to keep you company, you’ll never feel lonely.”
Padme courageously battled to extinguish the sadness that had aggressively taken her into its embrace.
“Yes, I think I will be quite alright. R2 circuits have been overexcited too.” 3PO replied delightfully, as he remained completely oblivious to the discernible anguish in Padme’s delicate voice. “Miss Padme, you must be looking forward to reuniting with your family as well.”
“They’ve been very supportive me 3PO, and I’m grateful for them being there.” Padme stated honestly.
Dorme approached the heartbroken lover.
“My’ Lady, all of our personal belongings are now on board. Once Anakin arrives, we can leave for the designated spaceport.”
Padme gasped, and frantically looked in all directions. The loyal handmaiden was bewildered by the unorthodox behavior of the noble Senator.
“My Lady, is something troubling you?” Dorme questioned apprehensively, whilst she methodically examined the abrupt wave of anxiety, avalanche over the diminutive beauty.
Padme hesitantly looked back at her good friend.
“I…I think I left something back at the apartment. I need to go and get it.”
Before Dorme could respond to the dilemma, Padme ran back into the building.
The unenviable precariousness of her benevolent heart, mercilessly constricted her soul, as ferocious, pulsating waves of excruciating pain assaulted her astute senses. Her immaculate rhythmic breathing disintegrated, as irregular air flow into her lungs, deteriorated the brave diplomatic face she had gallantly put on. Padme’s chocolate orbs were obscured by tears, instigated by the atrocious images of losing the one thing that been with her whenever she was alone…the Jappor snippet.
Padme wanted to cry out loud, the lover within her would not be able to cope.
Her heart teetered upon seizure, as she saw Anakin standing solitarily in the illustrious hallways. She tentatively approached him, and forced down the lump in her throat.
“Padme, where are you are going? What’s troubling you?” Anakin questioned inquisitively.
Padme pointed past the handsome warrior, as she struggled to say something coherent under the strenuous conditions.
“Anakin, I…left something…behind.” Padme wiped away her tears.
The charismatic Jedi extended his mechanical appendage, and opened his fist to reveal the Jappor snippet.
“Was it this?”
Padme’s eyes widened in disbelief, her adoring eyes stared deeply in her lover’s, as she gently took back her most precious possession. Anakin dotingly stroked her flushed cheek, his heart skipped a beat as she purred, and reciprocated by nuzzling against his strong hand.
Padme distantly gazed at a magnificent red nebula in space, whilst she sat alone in her private chambers on board the spacecraft, on her journey to Naboo. The senator rigorously tried to engage herself in thought regarding the future of her people, of Naboo, of the Republic, but each one ended with thinking of living out of fear with Anakin. Anakin…her heart was as intricately carved with his name, as was the Jappor snippet.
“Padme…”
His melodious voice instantaneously attracted her attention, as she sinuously spun on her heel to see him standing in her room. Her heart began to race dangerously out of control, as Anakin lovingly walked towards her, his magnanimous baby blue eyes, ablaze with passion. She could feel herself melting before him.
“Padme, I want you.” Anakin said huskily, and proceeded to savor the aching milky flesh on her elegant neck, as she capitulated to his needs.
Her diminutive body was on fire, as her shallow breathing, reverberated throughout the enclosed vicinity.
“Oh Anakin…” Her soft hands instinctively stroked his golden hair, whilst his seductive kisses traveled feverishly towards her moist, crimson lips.
Anakin pulled back, and fleetingly relished the incomparable beauty of his love, before picking her up into his muscular arms. Their pulsating hearts synchronized with perpetual harmony, neither blinked as they lost themselves in each others eyes. The Chosen One walked towards the luxurious bed, and gently placed her onto it, before gracefully moving on top of her.
“You’re all that matters to me Padme, and nothing feels more right than being with you.” Anakin amorously moved the stray chocolate curls from her adorable face, and mercifully eradicated the distance between their wet lips.
Padme opened her eyes, and realized that she was alone in her chamber, on board the spaceship. She quickly regained her composure after the disappointment of knowing it was only a dream, and walked out to find Anakin.
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jmsbndgrl
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10/14/06 3:25pm
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You know, I was originally going to saw... Awww! 
But then I realized you were teasing me.  I was certain Anakin was there.
Oh well, I'll just have to be patient. Great update.
I enjoyed Padme's frantic search for the Jappor snippet and Anakin's reaction to finding it. I could see them acting like that. I would think someone sho loses their wedding ring would go through the same thing.
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Star_Angel
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10/14/06 4:06pm
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Awww!!! I really needed this now when the time is exactly 1.00am, I’m so tired  but I still can’t help the smile  .
I must admit that I can’t blame Padmé for having dreams like that   .
I loved this update and thanks for the pm  .
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CrazyAni
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10/14/06 5:04pm
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Oh, poor Padme! It must have been brutal waking up from such an adorable dream!
I really, really like this little story so far - just the right amount and degree of mush for me on a rainy October day. As always, I love how you write the characters, and my heart goes to them knowing what a horrible end their love will have. And, of course, your language is simply flawless. (a little too flawless for me )
Could you please PM me with updates when DRL lets you? Thanks so much in advance!
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randomangel22
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10/14/06 5:22pm
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I seriously thought Anakin was there...until Padme woke up !!
I can't blame her for having dreams about Anakin I mean if I were her I'd probably do the same  !!
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VA_Parky
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10/14/06 5:30pm
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Ooooooh, how romantic!!
The emotions in this are so heartfelt, I just can't tell you how much I am enjoying it. The Padme / Anakin relationship is depicted so well in all of your tales and this is certainly no exception. I love it!
Great update! I don't mind waiting - I know how DRL can be. I'm just glad you're sticking with us - believe me, we really appreciate it!
I just have the nicest case of the warm fuzzies right now!!!
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michaellover
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10/14/06 6:15pm
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bet she wanted to remain sleep forever eh? those two need just a small push in the small direction...
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Amidala66
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10/14/06 6:45pm
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rats...that was only a dream.
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EquestrianJedi07
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10/14/06 7:08pm
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Awww... I thought it was gonna be real. Soon enough, you two... soon
I loved that so much! Sooo romantic I can't wait for more!
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10/14/06 7:28pm
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Great chapter! I love this story.
Poor Padme is only dreaming about Anakin. Can't wait to what happens next.
Could you put me on your pm list? Also if you do any ultimate chapter list?
Thanks!
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anakin_luver
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10/14/06 8:08pm
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i thought Anakin was really there as well! you tricked us all.
wonderful update nevertheless. i loved the idea you had with the snippet.
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10/14/06 8:27pm
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Ya know, when that bedroom secene was going on, I was thinking it must be a dream, but then it continued and I was thinking...wow, this is way out of character! I like that it was only a dream. And I love how the jappor snippet showed up, very cute.
Great job
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10/14/06 9:37pm
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Padme opened her eyes, and realized that she was alone in her chamber, on board the spaceship. She quickly regained her composure after the disappointment of knowing it was only a dream, and walked out to find Anakin.
After a dream like that will she be able to face Anakin without jumping his bones?
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HandmaidenVeme posted:
After a dream like that will she be able to face Anakin without jumping his bones?
 Maybe some cold water and a couple fluffy towels will help.
Ok, maybe not, but it could be fun!
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