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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 11/12/06 12:41pm Subject: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE - Date Edited: 12/20/06 10:08am (7 edits total) Edited By: Anakin_Heartbreaker
	Title - Anakin Skywalker v Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred Author - Anakin_Heartbreaker Genre - AU, Action, Full Contact Timeframe - PT, ROTS Characters - Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi Keywords - AU, Anakin, Obi-Wan, Full Contact, Action Disclaimer - Lucas owns everything, I'm just a fan with a story to tell. Hi everyone - As I promised, this is the full version of the Anakin V Obi-Wan fight that I wanted to share with you. As you'll know I'm leaving the boards this Christmas, so I was unable to complete The Game of Death. But I am glad that AnakinsFavorite will continue it for all of you. The dialogue in the fight had to be modified, because it is now longer part of The Game of Death, but that does not mean it can't be a stand alone. You have been strongly cautioned, this is FULL CONTACT!!!!!!! I've kept it from an R rating, if there are any R rated chapters I will let you know. Anakin Skywalker Vs Obi-Wan Kenobi – No Holds Barred Chapter One The indefatigable vehemence, boisterously illuminating Anakin’s indestructible cerulean orbs, epitomized his incontrovertible resolve to save his true love, whilst he indomitably walked through a cavernous tunnel. His pristinely sculpted physique, gluttonously devoured the seditious swirls of rage, perilously swirling around him; their intoxicating aroma insatiably aroused The Chosen One’s senses, as his unquenchable tendons replenished their thirst. A chillingly powerful gust of wind, caressed his lean features, and unsettled his roguish golden mane; the repugnant stench of his formidable adversary assailed his cerebellum. Anakin could feel the irresistible venom, ferociously amalgamate with the oxygen in his alveoli, and poison his body…he was getting closer. Skywalker instantaneously halted his movement, as the convoluted passage terminated into a gargantuan cave. He flawlessly regulated his rhythmic breathing, the expulsed deleterious air precipitated into the cold ambience, whilst his astute blue eyes, meticulously scrutinized the intimidating vicinity. The elaborate ice formations, parasitically protruding from the rocky walls, and erected sporadically over the precarious surface, accentuated the icy chill that avalanched down his vertebrae. Anakin narrowed his stare upon the discernible figure; motionlessly standing in a shallow reservoir of water, as snow from an opening high above, fell delicately upon it. “Obi-Wan…” Anakin gritted his canines, his sandy blonde hair sinuously fluttered over his tenacious eyes, whilst he defiantly approached his Master. Obi-Wan repudiated to reciprocate, his impassive face, immaculately shielded the pulsating fury coursing through his intricately vascularized torso. The Negotiator patiently observed his former Padawan, and felt his prestigious aura radiate from him. “Where is Padme?!” Anakin questioned aggressively, the sinewy lateral tendons in his biceps had become saturated with unadulterated power, as he involuntarily clenched his fists. An unnerving silence encapsulated the vicinity, and aggravated The Chosen One. “Answer me Obi-Wan!!!!!” “You have begun to fulfill your destiny my Padawan.” Obi-Wan stated. “I can feel your power.” “Where is my wife?” Anakin asked. Each passing moment was having a depredating affect upon his serenely composed his demeanor. His throbbing heart twisted viciously, as he visualized Padme’s incorruptible orbs pierce through his pectorals. “Don’t be so pathetic.” Obi-Wan chastised. “We’re warriors, you and I. The best. Do not throw it away for some mediocre wench.” “Obi-Wan!!!!” Anakin walked forwards into the shallow pool, but immediately cringed in pain. The Force whispered harmoniously into his ear, the water was acidified, and each excruciating moment standing in it only exacerbated it further. Skywalker gazed at Obi-Wan, who appeared seemingly impervious to the corrosive liquid, even the deceptive snow falling on his Master deltoids was acidic. Anakin curled his upper lip into a snarl, the tumultuous fury ignited within, incinerated the atrocious burning in his calves. Its therapeutic influence had incapacitated the nervous tissue around his gastrocenmius muscles. “Your hate is making you powerful Anakin.” Obi-Wan said, as he acknowledged his former protégé’s proficient aptitude to acclimatize to the hazardous situations. “Love had made you weak, made you accept something less than what you deserve. Now you must understand your importance to the galaxy. We are not what we choose to be…but we are what we are chosen to be.” Anakin smirked in disgust, whilst he extended his arm adjacently to his right, and allowed the cylindrical hilt hanging from his utility belt, to bolt magnetically into his strong hand. “You’re wrong my Master. I choose her.” “I will vanquish anyone who threatens the existence of the Chosen One, even if it is the Chosen One himself.” Kenobi growled, as he ignited his scintillating red blade. Anakin reverentially admired the beguilingly, splendiferous energy that flawlessly encapsulated Kenobi’s lightsaber, as its distinguishing sound reverberated throughout the incarcerated vicinity. He liberated his own sapphire blade; its magnanimous cobalt light reflected off his bronzed flesh, as he efficiently realigned to a more aggressive posture. “You will try…” The Force ostensibly avalanched through Anakin’s athletic frame, and vigorously reinforced the striated tendons in his quadriceps, and hamstrings, whilst he launched vertically into the air. Obi-Wan’s impeachable eyes, shrewdly watched his younger foe descend upon him; he tactically twisted the majestic scarlet sword horizontally over his clavicle, and allowed his stabilizer muscles to prepare for the inevitable. The aesthetically endowed warrior vociferously brought the blade down in a mesmeric blue arc upon Kenobi. Their elegant weapons savagely collided, causing a thunderous reverberation, to cascade down the convoluted tunnels, as Anakin domineeringly forced Obi-Wan into a defensive position. Turbulent swirls of unmitigated fury, rapaciously infiltrated The Chosen One’s highly vascularized physique, and inundated every cell with a renewed vigor, as he stared into the perfidious eyes of his Master. Kenobi allowed the sinister traits of the dark side to augment his muscles endurance, and impeccable concentration, whilst he lithely thwarted the pristinely calculated strikes of his accomplished adversary. An indubitable yellow monstrously eclipsed his eyes, as he created an impregnable shield of oppressive light in front of himself. Anakin adroitly alternated his trajectory, and executed a plethora of sensational strikes to Kenobi’s jugular and lower appendages. His tenacious assault incessantly pushed his former master…The two gladiators synchronously twisted out of dangerous dance, and rotated back in to nullify each other’s incomparable maneuverability. Violent sparks dissipated to each venomous collision of their swords, as Obi-Wan applied more power into his reactive movements. The dark side aided the Negotiator in extraditing his style for a more aggressive one; he attacked Anakin with unorthodox stabs to the rectus abdominals, and external obliques. The Chosen One gasped in irritation, the sadistic modification in the orientation of the crimson sword was to impale him. Obi-Wan smirked internally at his minor tactical triumph, and refused to relinquish his advantage. Anakin majestically somersaulted backwards over a large ice formation, and cringed momentarily, as his lower ankles were once again submerged in the acidic water. Sweat poured profusely into his eyes; partially obscuring his vision, as Kenobi immediately followed with an effortless somersault of his own. Obi-Wan sustained his rancorous attack on his younger opponent, and irresistibly pushed Anakin against the unforgiving icy walls. The Chosen One sidestepped to escape the unenviable predicament, but felt the air forced out of his respiratory organs, as Obi-Wan intercepted him in the abdominals with a homicidal knee. Skywalker coughed uncontrollably, whilst he instinctively pressurized his bruised midsection, in a courageous attempt to segregate the pain. Obi-Wan gratifyingly welcomed the wondrous spectacle…watching a man who chose love over power, deserved what was coming to him. Anakin seized advantage of Obi-Wan’s temporary lapse in concentration; he regained his vertical posture, and bludgeoned his Master with an imperious standing crescent kick across the face. Kenobi’s putrefying yellow orbs dilated, as he felt his jaw nearly succumb to the scintillating athleticism of his former padawan. His vice like grip on his cylindrical hilt weakened, and caused him to drop it into the acidic pool. The aesthetically gifted Jedi swung at Kenobi, but gasped, as his enemy grabbed his wrist in his left hand. It happened before Anakin could sense it. Obi-Wan pulverized Anakin’s chiseled midsection with his right forearm. “AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Skywalker felt an uncontrollable wave of reprehensible pain, inundate his upper torso, and caused him to drop his lightsaber into the water. Anakin’s face was masked with excruciating agony, as he stumbled back. The Jedi Knight’s eyes trembled, whilst looked down to examine the catastrophic attack…his tunic was ripped, and a nauseating amount of blood was copiously pouring out of the multiple lacerations that had mutilated his stomach. Kenobi aggressively pulled back his sleeve, and exposed the caustic steel wire, which he had promiscuously wrapped around his muscular forearm. The dark side coursed sickeningly through his veins, his formidable rival was partially dehabilitated by his previous attack…it was time to finish him off. The Negotiator unwrapped the barbaric wire, and threw one end at Anakin. Skywalker screamed in agony; the sadistic wire wrapped itself around his jugular, causing several puncture wounds on the back of his neck, and around his carotid artery, as Obi-Wan pulled tightly on the taut wire to strangle him further. Anakin rebelliously stared at his heartless foe, and forced his fingers in between the wire and his larynx, whilst the unremitting loss of blood around his abdominals desecrated his stamina. Kenobi snarled in repugnance at Anakin’s incredible determination, but he was not going to be denied. The metal incisions continued to rupture Skywalker’s epidermis, his threshold was threatening to be breached, and it was only a matter of time. Anakin closed his eyes; he could feel Padme’s love all around him, its protective shield was strengthening his essence, and eradicating the pain. “Padme…” Anakin opened his eyes, and utilizing every fiber in his being, began to walk backwards out of the acidic pool, and onto the dry surface. The Force surged ferociously through his sculpted physique, and reinvigorated the sinewy tendons in his anterior deltoids and biceps. Skywalker pulled aggressively onto the wire, and consequentially pulled Obi-Wan towards him, he sidestepped and nearly decapitated Kenobi with a thunderous clothesline. Obi-Wan felt a cataclysmic surge of pain ravage his latissmus dorsi, and trapezius muscles, as his back brutally plummeted into the rocky terrain. Anakin vigorously fought against the virtually unassailable pain that threatened to damage his esophagus and respiratory tract, whilst he gallantly tried to take the caustic wire off from around his jugular. He instantaneously felt the oxygen flushed out of his alveoli, as Obi-Wan belligerently kicked him in the sternum. The Chosen One’s back smashed into a large icy formation, erected in the middle of their battle ground, and broke it in half. Anakin’s face contorted under the agony, his pectorals continuously convulsed from the venomous attack. Obi-Wan narrowed his putrefying yellow orbs, and utilized the Force to lift a fragment piece of ice off the floor, as he accelerated towards his fallen antagonist. Obi-Wan smashed his knee through the ice, and straight into Anakin’s lean face, the devastating move stunned the Jedi knight, but it only fuelled Kenobi’s blood lust. Obi-Wan turned Anakin around and repeatedly rammed Anakin’s head into remaining ice structure. Anakin’s disorientated eyes caught a glimpse of a viscous crimson fluid, seeping into the porous ice, before he felt something unusually warm copiously blind his eye…his blood. Kenobi’s unrelenting attack was beginning to transcend demonic proportions. “This game is just beginning.” The Negotiator wrapped the other side of the acerbic wire around his fist, and unmercifully punched Anakin in his lower lumber region, and vulnerable kidneys. “AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Anakin’s body inhumanely torqued, the piercing incisions around his neck, and the horrendously taut wire had incapacitated his defense. Obi-Wan ruptured the spinal erector muscles, and focused his malicious intent of destroying Skywalker’s spinal cord. A darker pool of blood, was began to congregate around the center of Anakin’s vertebrae, the horrific loss of the life bearing fluid to the parasitic assault had reached a critical point. Tumultuous swirls of raw power voraciously encapsulated Anakin’s muscular body; he could feel his fury, his hatred amalgamated into a deadly poison, which pleaded to extinguish his pain. His eyes flashed yellow. Anakin reached back and bludgeoned Obi-Wan’s across the bridge of his nose with the point of his mechanical elbow. The staggering potency of the blow forced Kenobi to relinquish his hold upon his former padawan, as pulsating waves of stinging pain assailed his cerebellum. Skywalker disregarded the reprehensible pain, and the abundance of blood trickling down his handsome face; he walked towards Obi-Wan with murderous intentions, and nothing was going to stop him. This new power felt exhilarating, intoxicating and justified. Anakin wrapped his arms around Obi-Wan’s neck, and ravaged his intercostals and serratus muscles, with alternating immaculate knee strikes, each one inflicting maximum damage. The Negotiator felt a tear in his diaphragm, and coughed out blood. Skywalker fed off the impetus and head butted Kenobi’s nose, causing it shatter under the weighted blow. The dark side continued to feed his thirst, as he wrapped his arms around his Master’s sculpted waist, and smashed him spine first into the fragmented ice. A huge metallic door echoed loudly as it opened, and the unambiguous sound of something extremely large approaching caught Anakin’s attention. The Chosen One just realized where they fighting…in the middle of a Rancor pit. “This is where the fun begins.”
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jmsbndgrl Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 11/12/06 1:27pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	Oh dear, this is going to be messy, to say the least. I brought Obi-Wan's towels to clean up the mess, I think the other two Angels have Anakin's, if they aren't fighting over them. Very intense, but I expected nothing less. When Obi-Wan goes dark, he is not one to mess with. Great job! -----signature----- "Even accountants have imagination." - Vesper Lynd - Casino Royale Angel #3 - An Obi-Wan fan lost in a world of Anakin fangirls! Blondes may have more fun, but Edward prefers brunettes!
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AnakinLuver Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 11/12/06 5:19pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	Rachel Rose -----signature----- e-sister to Dee and Crystal and Alley! Star Wars, Twilight, and Superheros - Trio of my Life Proud Cheesehead & Movie Fanatic** Edward: "Do you want me to sing to you? I'll sing all night if it will keep the bad dreams away."
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Amidala66 Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 11/12/06 6:45pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	Angel 2 here with a month's supply of towels... he is going to need him. this is definately NO HOLDS BARRED right now. I must say that I enjoy evil Obi Wan. There is something sexy about him being so good and then being bad. fabulous start -----signature----- I am Angel #2 of "Anakin's Angels" The Practical One It's baseball season: time for all good Jedi to use a bat and not a saber
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FitJedi Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 11/12/06 6:54pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	Wow you weren't kidding, this is definitely no holds barred for this one... great job! Very exciting.
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 11/12/06 7:48pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	standing in the middle of the room clutching a stack of towels while holding her hand over her eyes I'm here with my towels! I think we'e going to need a lot more though -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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Star_Angel Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 11/13/06 10:48am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	Like it? I love it, shivering yet amazing. Anakin_Heartbreaker action is the best and I can tell that you’ve worked hard with this and I’m so glad that we got to read it. Please keep those pm’s coming. Although, I don’t know if those towels is going to help very much, they will need some bacta with that. And by they I mean Anakin. Keep up the amazing work and I’m looking forward to read more. -----signature----- “It’s not our abilities that shows us what we truly are, it is our choices” – Albus Dumbledor (CoS) <- fanfics/fanart + a funny video in bio SWEDEN HOCKEY forever
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AnakinsFavorite Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 11/13/06 10:54am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact - Date Edited: 11/13/06 10:57am (1 edits total) Edited By: AnakinsFavorite
	Bursts into the thread with a stretcher "Out of my way please- I'm a trained professional!" Points at Sig Dumps Anakin on stretcher and begins massage “Love had made you weak, made you accept something less than what you deserve. Now you must understand your importance to the galaxy. We are not what we choose to be…but we are what we are chosen to be.” Anakin smirked in disgust, whilst he extended his arm adjacently to his right, and allowed the cylindrical hilt hanging from his utility belt, to bolt magnetically into his strong hand. “You’re wrong my Master. I choose her.” That was pure evil! A huge metallic door echoed loudly as it opened, and the unambiguous sound of something extremely large approaching caught Anakin’s attention. The Chosen One just realized where they fighting…in the middle of a Rancor pit. “This is where the fun begins.” I must admit I laughed at it- the part in ROTS was much more lighthearted but this quote was used to for a totally different purpose and emotion that truly makes it haunting! If there is to be more, I definetly wish to be contacted! -----signature----- Supreme Mugwump of ACWDBTTCAOT "Gotta pay your dues if you wanna sing the blues, And you know it don't come easy. You don't have to shout or leap about You can even play them easy."
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anakin_luver Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 11/13/06 11:19am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	oh wow. messy messy messy...but lovely lovely lovely. add me to the PM list! -----signature----- PRISON BREAK mrs. s <scofield> <sparrow> <skywalker> COME ON CANADA! YOU CAN DO IT!
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randomangel22 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 11/13/06 12:11pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	OMG that was so intense !! I have a bad feeling about this whole fighting in the rancor pit ... But excellent job I wouldn't expect anything but the best from you !!! Anxiously awaiting how this turns out ... -----signature----- I think the worst time to have a heart attack is during a game of charades...or a game of fake heart attack. --Demetri Martin Yeah that would suck now wouldn't it?
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VA_Parky Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 11/13/06 12:21pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! Yeah, I think that about sums it up. Oh, AH, you've got to PM me for this one. I have been looking forward to this knock-down, drag-out fight since you first posted "Game of Death." Bring it on! In your capable hands, I know it's going to be breathtaking. Amazing work - this part literally gave me goosebumps: “I will vanquish anyone who threatens the existence of the Chosen One, even if it is the Chosen One himself.” Kenobi growled, as he ignited his scintillating red blade. Oh my gosh! How eerie! -----signature----- Currently on hiatus Awash in Broken Promises (RotS AU): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23913704/p1/ Our 1st - Matthew - arrived 1/1/08
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 11/13/06 12:36pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact - Date Edited: 11/13/06 12:37pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Ascal_Elessar
	Wow, that was brutal. When you sid it was 'no holds barred', you wern't joking. Great stuff, looking forward to the next update. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 11/14/06 1:08pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	jmsbndgrl - They're just warming up, wait until you see what is going to happen next!!!! Yes, when Obi-Wan goes dark, he's not one to mess with, and he is going to push things over the edge in way its never been done. Thanks for the kind words. AnakinLuver - That was my look when I designed the fight. LOL Amidala66 - I'm afraid towels might not be enough, these guys are not planning on stopping any time soon. The next chapter is going to give a whole meaning to NO HOLD BARRED, I promise. Obi-Wan has a unique style, that is for sure. Your words never fail to touch my heart. HandmaidenVeme - I strongly suggest that you stay with me, and away from these two at the moment. The adrenaline pumping in their bodies is about to make everything explode. This is not going to be pretty. Star_Angel - I'm glad to have you on the rollercoaster my friend!!!! Anakin has alot of stamina, as Obi-Wan is going to find out first hand. AnakinsFavorite - I don't blame you for laughing, their sadistic tone in their voice, and you're going see a side of them which has never been seen before. You're on the list!!!! anakin_luver - I'm thrilled to have you along for the adrenaline pumping ride!!! You're on the list. randomangel22 - Go with your feelings, seriously bad things are about to happen. Your inspirational words always lift my spirit!!! VA_Parky - Yes, I know alot of my friends here have been waiting for this, and I'm not going leave without showing it. I am honored as always to have you along my good friend. You're on the list!!!! Ascal_Elessar - Thanks for the awesome words, more is coming very soon!!!! Hi everyone - I am thrilled to have you all along for this final adrenaline rush. I'm not going to hold back on anything, which means there are sequences in the next chapter that are extremely graphic in nature, you have been strongly cautioned!!!!! This is the only place where you're going to get FULL CONTACT, and Anakin and Obi-Wan are going to take it over the edge!!!!!
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 11/14/06 2:01pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	Whew!! I'm exhausted! There was so much tension and drama in this. INTENSE doesn't even begin to cover it!!! We are not what we choose to be…but we are what we are chosen to be.” Wow! It is so deliciously eerie to imagine Obi-Wan from this point of view, the evil Obi. Skywalker felt an uncontrollable wave of reprehensible pain, inundate his upper torso, and caused him to drop his lightsaber into the water. Anakin’s face was masked with excruciating agony, as he stumbled back. The Jedi Knight’s eyes trembled, whilst looked down to examine the catastrophic attack…his tunic was ripped, and a nauseating amount of blood was copiously pouring out of the multiple lacerations that had mutilated his stomach. Kenobi aggressively pulled back his sleeve, and exposed the caustic steel wire, which he had promiscuously wrapped around his muscular forearm. The dark side coursed sickeningly through his veins, his formidable rival was partially dehabilitated by his previous attack…it was time to finish him off. The Negotiator unwrapped the barbaric wire, and threw one end at Anakin. Skywalker screamed in agony; the sadistic wire wrapped itself around his jugular, causing several puncture wounds on the back of his neck, and around his carotid artery, as Obi-Wan pulled tightly on the taut wire to strangle him further. Anakin rebelliously stared at his heartless foe, and forced his fingers in between the wire and his larynx, whilst the unremitting loss of blood around his abdominals desecrated his stamina. Kenobi snarled in repugnance at Anakin’s incredible determination, but he was not going to be denied. Noooo!! Poor Anakin!! I can't watch. covers eyes A huge metallic door echoed loudly as it opened, and the unambiguous sound of something extremely large approaching caught Anakin’s attention. The Chosen One just realized where they fighting…in the middle of a Rancor pit. Whoa! I didn't see that coming. This adds a whole new level!! “This is where the fun begins.” Loved seeing this line echoed here, but in an entirely different context. Oh, and if you have a PM list for this, I'd better be on it or else you'll have a lot of explaining to do. -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 11/15/06 1:32pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact - Date Edited: 11/15/06 1:32pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Anakin_Heartbreaker
	Gina - Hangs head in shame I'm sorry I forgot to PM you, please forgive me. Pleeeeeeassssseeee!!!!! You're on the list!!!! LETS ROCK THIS PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anakins_Queen Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 11/15/06 5:21pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact
	One word: Wow. I'm speechless but in a good way. Can I please be added to the PM list? -----signature----- Sept. 11, 2001 Proud Padawan to Alley_Skywalker
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