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Darth_Father-in-law Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/11/06 9:43am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	Oh God! I have to apologize that I've missed this. DRL has been pain lately. This is like...awesome. Truly awesome! You got my heart thumping really fast! Oh dear...I'm starting to get worried. I am a good, self-controlled girl, and I'm reading story like this! And I'm actually more excited than ever before! I love this! The way you write action is so thrilling and so unique - it's like rude and civilized at the same time. Great - no, excellent work, my dear. Could you PM me when you update, because I am really trying to find time for this. BTW, What does the R-rated mean? Is it the same as ultimate - only for adults? I'm kind of stupid here, but I've never understood those ratings in US. -----signature----- “Waiting is painful. Forgetting is painful. But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering.” - Paulo Coelho
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Star_Angel Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/11/06 10:38am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	You know, now that I think about it, you have let everyone in the PT turned to the dark side at least once. And before I read “When we were lovers” I never thought that it was possible for Padmé to turn. Oh well, btt. This update was incredible , it really feels like you’ve been sucked into the story. Anakin adroitly launched his legs parallel into the cold ambience, and spun around in mid air, hitting Obi-Wan across the left side of his cranium with a belligerent kick. Kenobi’s pupils dilated from the staggering potency of the extravagant assault, his masculine jaw nearly succumbed to its irresistible trajectory, and made him lose his grip on his lightsaber hilt, allowing his formidable adversary to seize the initiative. Ouch. That’s gotta hurt. Thanks for the pm and I can’t wait until this weekend so that I get to see how things will go. -----signature----- “It’s not our abilities that shows us what we truly are, it is our choices” – Albus Dumbledor (CoS) <- fanfics/fanart + a funny video in bio SWEDEN HOCKEY forever
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VA_Parky Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 12/11/06 10:40am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	Aughhhhhhhhhh!! This is so nervewracking... puts hands over eyes but peeks through fingers I'm just dying to know what's going to happen next. Seriously, I'm on the very edge of my seat over here! I would say you're going to owe me a manicure when all this is over - but I don't seem to have any fingernails left after the latest post! Brilliant job as always! My stomach is all fluttery! Whew! Thanks for the PM! -----signature----- Currently on hiatus Awash in Broken Promises (RotS AU): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23913704/p1/ Our 1st - Matthew - arrived 1/1/08
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 12/11/06 12:48pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	I'm running out of superlatives here, fantastic action sequences as always. Can't wait for more. Thanks for the PM. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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jmsbndgrl Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 12/11/06 7:42pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	Very brutal, but also very good. The uncut version of the previous chapter was also excellent. It made me cringe, but just shows how dtrong of a writer you are. Great job. -----signature----- "Even accountants have imagination." - Vesper Lynd - Casino Royale Angel #3 - An Obi-Wan fan lost in a world of Anakin fangirls! Blondes may have more fun, but Edward prefers brunettes!
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 12/11/06 11:17pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	And I thought the movie "The Hills Have Eyes" was pretty grusome! That gore was nothing compared to this!!! Barbed wire is never a good thing. Just looking at it gives me chills and I think I've rubbed my neck red due to Anakin's injuries. I don't know if this will gross anyone out or not but when I was younger I had major surgury on my neck as well as a trach. The scar, which runs from left to right jaw, is only visible if I'm looking straight up with my head tilted back. I guess you can say that since I literally have had my neck cut open this isolated attack on Anakin with the barbed wire creeps me out alot more than it should. Now let's get to that other safe place you were telling me about! -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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randomangel22 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 12/12/06 3:35pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	WHOA I must say barbed wire and getting bludgeoned repeatedly in the face is not a good thing . And then there are the rancors...well that can't be good now can it, eh ?? But mindblowing once again and can't wait for the next update !! -----signature----- I think the worst time to have a heart attack is during a game of charades...or a game of fake heart attack. --Demetri Martin Yeah that would suck now wouldn't it?
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Amidala66 Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/12/06 6:49pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	Boy this is one intense chapter, barbed wire,blood and rancors.... you sure know how to mix it up -----signature----- I am Angel #2 of "Anakin's Angels" The Practical One It's baseball season: time for all good Jedi to use a bat and not a saber
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 12/14/06 3:37pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	You know, one day I'm going to end up passing out reading this story because I always seem to end up holding my breath the entire time I'm reading your updates. Seriously, though, amazing! You reached new heights with the intensity, and to see two former allies locked in combat like this...heartbreaking. Excellent!! -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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AnakinLuver Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 12/16/06 9:01pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/11/06
	Rachel Rose -----signature----- e-sister to Dee and Crystal and Alley! Star Wars, Twilight, and Superheros - Trio of my Life Proud Cheesehead & Movie Fanatic** Edward: "Do you want me to sing to you? I'll sing all night if it will keep the bad dreams away."
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 12/18/06 1:07pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06 - Date Edited: 12/18/06 2:56pm (3 edits total) Edited By: Anakin_Heartbreaker
	AnakinsFavorite - Its a war!!! Darth_Father-in-law - Hey dear friend, you don't know how excited I am that your reading this. I'm glad you like it, more to come. R-rated means only for adults. Star_Angel - LOL!!! Yes, I've turned everyone into a bad guy at some point, I know its bad. VA_Parky - I'm sorry about your fingernails...please forgive me. Ascal_Elessar - Thanks my friend!! jmsbndgrl - It made me cringe too! LOL HandmaidenVeme - I'm sorry to hear about your unfortunate incident. Know this, if you stay with me, it would happen to me first, before I let anything happen to you. You're my good luck charm, you know. randomangel22 - The whole thing is crazy, which is why it is NO HOLDS BARRED Amidala66 - Shall we mix it up a bit more? Gina - AWWWWWW!!!!!!! Your compliments always make my day! AnakinLuver - Thanks!!!! Hi everyone - How about another post tomorrow? No Holds Barred Chapter Four His statuesque physique, avariciously devoured the tempestuous swirls of vehemence, which ubiquitously aggregated over his soul, and allowed it to insatiably replenish his resilience, whilst his unconquerable cerulean orbs, were sporadically bathed in his warm, viscous blood. The taut striated tendons in his vascularized biceps, undulated with irrefutable ascendancy, as he liberated the beguilingly sapphire blade; Anakin appeared impervious to the nauseating rupturing of the epidermis around his larynx, and the abysmal puncture wounds, mutilating his abdominals…he was ready for war. The dark side rapaciously infiltrated his sinewy muscles, and inundated his indomitably muscular torso with an indescribable vigor; Obi-Wan repugnantly curled his bloodied upper lip, as he ignited the shimmering scarlet sword. It’s magnanimously splendiferous aura, bathed the Negotiator’s body with its ambience. Kenobi cultivated the imperceptible abhorrence, boisterously accumulating within his veins, and sadistically twisted humming red blade at his aggressor. “It ends…” He cursed irritably, as the rambunctious sounds of the two Rancors, animalistically attacking each other in the milieu, reverberated across the incarcerated theatre. “I don’t care if I die.” Anakin announced; his anterior deltoids sinuously accentuated the constriction of his grip on the metallic hilt. “But you’re coming to Hell with me.” “You’re finally sounding like a true warrior, Anakin.” Kenobi smirked, and he fervently ejaculated the blood from his orifice. “It’s a shame you’ve had to throw away your life so recklessly…for a wench!” “No…!” Anakin retaliated, as he gritted his canines. “It’s a shame you did.” The perversely parasitic traits of the hatred, tumultuously reinforced his quadriceps and hamstrings, as Obi-Wan vociferously accelerated towards his charismatic rival. Anakin homogenized his rhythmic breathing, nourishing his emaciated alveoli, whilst he rotated his majestic weapon horizontally over his clavicle, and adroitly prepared for the inevitable collision. Kenobi contemptuously brought the mesmeric ruby arc down upon his aesthetically endowed antagonist, instigating a malicious barrage of pristinely calculated strikes to his mythological torso. The Chosen One’s proficient aptitude to acclimatize to the torrential bludgeoning, exuberantly augmented his superlative maneuverability, whilst he tenaciously thwarted the malicious blows. Their legendary blades cut through the icy ambience with pristine exquisiteness, amalgamating the turbulent swirls of rage, encapsulating their prestigious auras, as their athletic bodies synchronously danced with majestic splendor. The gargantuan Rancors ravenously brutalized each other in their battle for supremacy, as they dangerously eradicated the distance between them and the ultimate warriors, locked in mortal combat on the precariously rocky terrain. A black, gelatinous fluid unremittingly seeped out the ruptured eye of the debilitated rancor, as it savagely smacked its monstrous talons at his hideous enemy. The nemesis violently retaliated; it indefatigably sunk its grotesque mandibles into his adversary’s reptilian arm, and utilizing its impetus, obdurately smashed the incapacitated monster’s ugly features into the elaborate icy structures, protruding around the cavernous facility. An irrepressibly thunderous sound, indubitably cascaded around the confined theatre; numerous more domineering cracks fractured the intricate ice, as several minute fragmented pieces gravitated towards the acidic pool. Anakin dexterously reversed his immaculate grip upon the metallic hilt, imperceptibly rotating it around his latissmus dorsi, and lithely into his left hand. Kenobi fleetingly praised the tactical assault, as he elegantly spun away from the tyrannically oppressive light obscuring his vision, and assault the younger combatant with an unorthodox flurry of stabs and alternating strikes to the torso. Their incontrovertible orbs, obstinately stared at each other, whilst their majestic blades danced with deadly precision, and venomous accuracy…neither could infiltrate the impregnable barrier erected by the other. Obi-Wan cringed momentarily; the tunic, sheathing his broken ulna was deteriorating, a discernibly dark crimson fluid began seeping out from the medial antibrachial muscle, as it disparaging hung for the elbow flexor. The amethyst light aggregated once again around his sinewy tendons, and vaporized the aggravating discomfort burgeoning around his arm. Anakin rigorously blinked his passionate blue eyes, the copious blood continued to paralyze his vision…if he did not act fast, the consequences could be fatal. Anakin athletically rotated on his heel, efficiently blocking a malevolent attack to his gastrocenmius, and ACL ligaments, before dexterously returning to his original position, and articulately parrying the powerful blows of his deltoids. Kenobi instantaneously released his vulnerable right hand, and tensed the sculpted fibers, and pulverized Skywalker across his lean face. Large beads of blood and sweat dispersed from his sticky golden mane, as The Chosen One’s neck violently snapped to his right, causing him to release the blade. Kenobi gluttonously fed of his unadulterated fury; he emphatically swung another raucous punch at his injured foe. Anakin adeptly ducked under the blow, and simultaneously punched Obi-Wan in the solar plexus and lower rectus abdominals…the Negotiator felt the reprehensible pain augmented around his ruptured diaphragm, and intercostals. Obi-Wan gasped; he released his lightsaber and succumbed to the insurmountable damage, as his battered physique arc over. The young protégé aggressively wrapped his hands around his former master’s jugular; the tumultuous swirls of untamable rage inundated the vascularized tissue in his muscular biceps and triceps, whilst he lifted Kenobi vertically into the air. The Rancors continuously battled for supremacy, as the second monster vociferously ripped the mutilated reptilian appendage of his debilitated rival. Another seismic wave cracked the titanic ice structures, causing several slightly larger pieces to plummet into the acidic pool. Kenobi could feel the vasoconstriction of his carotid arteries, and esophagus, under the callous administration of pressure applied by the Chosen One’s prosthetic arm. The oxygen deprivation was rapidly having a cataclysmic affect upon his thoughts…he looked down into the murderous eyes of his former disciple; he was going to show no mercy. Kenobi’s eye became eclipsed by an indubitable yellow; he wrapped his legs around Skywalker’s arms, and using his weight, sinuously rotated over, breaking the hold and smashing the Chosen One into the acidic pool. Anakin screamed and instantaneously torqued his body, as the corrosive water rapaciously tried to devour his bronzed flesh. “Get up!!!!” Kenobi chastised. Anakin courageously fought back to a vertical posture, but was bludgeoned with a knee of incalculable magnitude into his chiseled obliques, and serratus muscles…causing his stabilizers muscles to desperately regain their traction. Obi-Wan tried for another, but the Chosen One had anticipated the trajectory of the scandalous assault, and realigned his sculpted torso to avoid impact, before returning the favor. The Force called out to both warriors… A colossal body of ice accelerated down towards them; Anakin and Obi-wan somersaulted backwards as the ice thunderously smashed into the acidic pool, and caused a seismic undulation of corrosive water to be dispersed into the cold ambience. Several abysmal noises serenaded around the incarcerated theatre, as more and more fragmented pieces of ice succumbed to the exertion of gravity. Anakin frantically excavated all possible routes out…they had been extinguished. The only way out was to climb up and out the opening at the top of cave, before being buried alive. Kenobi opportunistically realized the vacillating state of his younger foe, as a torrential barrage of ice plummeted onto the precariously rocky terrain, he was vulnerable. The dark side sinisterly called out to Obi-Wan, he gratifyingly replenished the abhorrence coursing through his veins; he majestically somersaulted vertically into the air, and over the corpse of the blinded Rancor, as it rocketed towards him. “Avalanche…” The Chosen One whispered. Anakin rapidly assessed the situation, and began to climb up the side of a mountainous wall; the Force called out to him…Kenobi was climbing up the wall adjacent to him.
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 12/18/06 1:21pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	“Avalanche…” The Chosen One whispered. Uh oh, not good. You really know how to rack up the tension. Awsome update, as always. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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randomangel22 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 12/18/06 1:21pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	Covers eyes too much violence . Did I ever mention how much I love how you write this action scenes it seems so real !! I'm gonna guess that the fight is gonna last for a bit longer eh ?? -----signature----- I think the worst time to have a heart attack is during a game of charades...or a game of fake heart attack. --Demetri Martin Yeah that would suck now wouldn't it?
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 12/18/06 1:31pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	Kenobi’s eye became eclipsed by an indubitable yellow; he wrapped his legs around Skywalker’s arms, and using his weight, sinuously rotated over, breaking the hold and smashing the Chosen One into the acidic pool. Anakin screamed and instantaneously torqued his body, as the corrosive water rapaciously tried to devour his bronzed flesh. Noooo!! I'm serious! I can't look anymore! “Avalanche…” The Chosen One whispered. Anakin rapidly assessed the situation, and began to climb up the side of a mountainous wall; the Force called out to him…Kenobi was climbing up the wall adjacent to him. So an acidic pool, rancors...that wasn't enough. Let's add this to the mix, as well. Whew!! Talk about tension. You're killing me!! Loved it! -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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Star_Angel Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/18/06 1:37pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	Awesome AH, as always. “I don’t care if I die.” Anakin announced; his anterior deltoids sinuously accentuated the constriction of his grip on the metallic hilt. “But you’re coming to Hell with me.” “You’re finally sounding like a true warrior, Anakin.” Kenobi smirked, Perfect. Thanks for the pm and did you say another post tomorrow? I can’t wait. -----signature----- “It’s not our abilities that shows us what we truly are, it is our choices” – Albus Dumbledor (CoS) <- fanfics/fanart + a funny video in bio SWEDEN HOCKEY forever
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