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jmsbndgrl Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 12/18/06 2:49pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	I hate ice and snow to begin with, so I know this avalanche is not good at all. Covers eyes, but peeks through fingers to read the rest. Can't wait for more! -----signature----- "Even accountants have imagination." - Vesper Lynd - Casino Royale Angel #3 - An Obi-Wan fan lost in a world of Anakin fangirls! Blondes may have more fun, but Edward prefers brunettes!
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VA_Parky Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 12/18/06 4:40pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	Just when I thought it was safe to take a breath, you go and throw an avalanche at us! Yikes! Good thing I gulped in a deep breath because I have a feeling I'm going to be holding it for awhile! Amazing post, as always! And we may get a chapter tomorrow too? Awesome! I can't wait! I don't want this story to end!! -----signature----- Currently on hiatus Awash in Broken Promises (RotS AU): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23913704/p1/ Our 1st - Matthew - arrived 1/1/08
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FitJedi Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/18/06 5:44pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	Absolutely spectacular once again Anakin_Heartbreaker... purely magnificent and full of action. Please keep me on the pm list, this is just getting too good.
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Amidala66 Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/18/06 6:59pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	You are definately going out of here with a bang!!! I am very tempted to bite my nails from the tension but want to look good for Christmas. Great update my friend but I would expect nothing less from you. -----signature----- I am Angel #2 of "Anakin's Angels" The Practical One It's baseball season: time for all good Jedi to use a bat and not a saber
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Darth_Drachonus Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 12/18/06 7:56pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	To the update list, add me you will hmm? Many thanks in return I will give yes. -----signature----- Don't **** with a Jedi Master son-Luke Skywalker
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 12/18/06 10:53pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	peeks through fingers Whew, I held my breath the entire time...almost. Alright A_H I trust you, keep me safe . -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 12/19/06 11:59am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/18/06
	Hi everyone - I will be updating the fic tomorrow, and it will be the final post. The raging climax of the most brutal full contact fight of all...and trust me, you're not going to believe how it ends!!!! I'm going out all guns blazing!!!!!!! See you all tomorrow!!!!
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Anakin_Heartbreaker Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 12/20/06 10:07am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact 12/20/06 - Date Edited: 12/20/06 10:36am (6 edits total) Edited By: Anakin_Heartbreaker
	Ascal_Elessar - Thanks for the wonderful words!!! randomangel22 - There's too much violence, but it only gets worse. Thanks for the kind words!!! Gina - Shall I raise the intensity, as only I can? Star_Angel - The post is here!!! jmsbndgrl - I love snow, its so soft!!! LOL!!! VA_Parky - You always say the sweetest things!!! FitJedi - Thank you so much for the inspiring words!!! Amidala66 - I wanted to go out all guns blazing!!! Your support has been incredible. Darth_Drachonus - Thanks my friend! HandmaideVeme - I'll always keep you safe. Hi everyone - This is my FINAL post on the boards!!! I really hope you like it. No Holds Barred Chapter Five The malignantly cataclysmic amplification of pain, voraciously ruptured the impregnable barrier sheathing his subjugated spinal cord, and avariciously desecrated his statuesque latissmus dorsi, as he proficiently ascended towards the heavens. Anakin ephemerally sanitized his insuperable cerulean orbs, of the copious inundation of blood from the atrocious laceration over his brow, whilst his indestructible prosthetic appendage, indefatigably excavated the precariously tremulous wall to find a way up. The thunderously rambunctious sounds of the icy debris, gravitating towards the rocky theatre, and inexorably assaulting the exploited terrain with a torrential barrage of bombs, reverberated throughout the incarnated vicinity, as seismic eruptions dispersed the acidic water into the cold ambience. The victorious Rancor, triumphantly exposed its grotesque mandibles, allowing several congregated gelatinous bodies of saliva to fall upon its fallen nemesis, as it gluttonously stared up at Anakin. A nauseatingly indubitable yellow, monstrously eclipsed Obi-Wan contemptuous eyes; the aggravatingly pain, irritably segregated over his medial brachial muscle and fragmented ulna, was substantially debilitating his perpendicular acceleration. The boisterous aggregation of the scintillatingly amethyst light, insatiably fed upon Kenobi’s abhorrence, and perceptibly caressed his flesh with its therapeutic attributes…indeed the dark side was powerful. Obi-Wan calculatingly disregarded the animalistic roars of the rancor in the milieu, and utilized the debauched personification of the Force; to search for Anakin past the gargantuan pieces of ice cascading to the floor…it was obligatory that he incapacitate his former protégés incomparable athletic exuberance by any possible means. The Negotiator vehemently expulsed the incessant burgeoning of blood in his orifice, consequential of his mutilated tongue, and sadistically pointed the trajectory of his taut fingers towards his target. Anakin gratifyingly allowed the rejuvenating traits of the Force to assist him in the unremitting homogenizing, of his rhythmic breathing; it was critical that his muscular physique could endure the rigorous climb. Skywalker gasped, as The Force melodiously serenaded his articulate senses… Force lightening of an incalculable magnitude, obliterated the falling ice, whilst it impeccable trajectory obdurately headed towards the aesthetically endowed warrior, and raucously illuminating his passionate orbs with its splendiferous blue and white aura. Anakin instantaneously released his unswervingly tenacious hand; the mystical ally strengthened the sinewy striations in his deltoid and bicep, as he launched towards a protrusion on his adjacent right. The forked lightning maliciously hit the susceptible wall, as more rock and ice exploded into the inhospitable atmosphere. The bloodthirsty Rancor homicidally destroyed the final remnants of the deceased Rancor’s jugular, and lethargically walked through the tumultuous barrage of ice to the combatants scaling the astronomical heights of the cavernous vicinity. “Not good…” Anakin whispered over his breath, he knew Obi-Wan’s relentless attack knew no boundaries. The avalanche continued to exacerbate, and it was only a matter of time before they were buried alive. Kenobi heinously examined his younger adversary’s resiliency, and devilishly pressurized the abysmal lacerations across his face, as a result of the acerbic wire; there was no way Anakin was going to survive. “What good will her love be…when your heart dies?” Obi-Wan rolled his maniacal eyes back, and insatiably utilized the Force to unleash his most devastating attack yet. The Chosen One screamed, and impulsively clutched his pectorals, as a horrendous pain pierced through his throbbing heart; the charismatic Jedi’s lean face contorted under excruciating pain, as an abundant flow of the viscous red fluid inundated his features. Anakin could judiciously sense the malevolent restriction of oxygen, and essential nutrients to his heart, as a coronary thrombosis, from the meticulous constriction began to emaciate his cardiac muscle. Skywalker vigorously forced the air into his esophagus, and alveoli to prevent the ischemia from deteriorating his resistance…it was the first time ever that anyone had experienced a Force heart attack. Kenobi smirked at his major tactical triumph, Skywalker was vulnerable, as he perilously hung by his prosthetic appendage, and now was the ideal time to eradicate his flame for perpetuity. Obi-Wan utilized the capriciously despicable iniquity, sickeningly blossoming over his bloodied muscular torso, whilst he launched through the hazardous icy air, straight onto his former friend. The Negotiator reverentially admired the sinister gifts the dark side had given him, as Anakin’s acquiescent state intoxicated his besmirched soul. Obi-Wan aggressively wrapped his free hand around Skywalker’s jugular, his fingers pressed into the ruptured epidermis around his nemesis’ larynx, whilst he insurmountably administered the pressure around the frail carotid arteries. “Are we having fun yet?” Obi-Wan chastised, as the Rancor menacingly climbed up over the increasing pile of fragmented ice. Anakin could feel the affects of the angina, ravage his statuesque physique, and weaken the grip he had upon the rocky formations, intricately convoluting up towards the only sanctuary accessible. Obi-Wan bludgeoned the Chosen One with an emphatic knee into his intercostals and serratus muscles, causing him to vanquish his hold upon the wall. Anakin fell down, but instinctively grabbed hold of Obi-Wan’s ankle…causing him to release his hold as well. The Force called out to Anakin, he immediately felt the alleviation of the Force heart attack, as Kenobi’s immaculate concentration fell upon regaining his traction. The legendary duo utilized their incomparable repertoire of athletic exuberance, and held onto a sharp protuberance; they deltoids and trapezius majestically absorbed the ramifications of being violently jerked in the icy ambience. Obi-Wan sinuously rotated back in front of Anakin, and pointed the exposed lightsaber hilt over his lacerated abdominals…The Force harmoniously whispered to the Chosen One; he immediately grabbed the hilt and changed the trajectory of the cylindrical weapon, and watched as the shimmering scarlet blade impaled the rock inches to the left of his chiseled midsection. “There’s something in your eye…” Anakin said, and pulverized Obi-Wan across his broken nose with a sensational reverse elbow. Obi-Wan involuntarily allowed the Chosen One, the maneuverability he desperately yearned for. Anakin gracefully jumped pass the titanic pieces of falling ice, and onto the adjacent wall. Kenobi snarled in repugnance, and immediately attempted to follow his opponent. Anakin patiently waited for Kenobi to get within striking range, he eloquently thrust his right leg into the air, and kicked Obi-Wan in mid-flight, straight into the larynx. “ANAKIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Kenobi plummeted with the ice, back towards the salivating orifice of the hideous Rancor. Anakin repudiated to reciprocate the atrocious devastation Obi-Wan had unsympathetically inflicted upon him, and began to tenaciously ascend towards to the opening at the summit. Kenobi liberated his shimmering crimson blade, and using all the aggressive turbulence, saturating his imperishable frame, rotated around, and moved towards the Rancor’s voracious mouth. The Negotiator lithely landed upon the behemoth’s head, and swiftly impaled its primitive cerebellum with his elegant sword. The Rancor was silenced. His blood left a nauseating trail of blood in the snowy precipitation, accumulated upon the ground, as Anakin courageously crawled across the desolate, icy surroundings. The blustery cold conditions, accentuated the icy chill, which avalanched down his cervical vertebrae…as he rigorously fought to regulate his heart back into normality. The Chosen One’s naked upper torso felt the calamitous gusts of wind, encapsulate his every essence, whilst he fought back to a vertical posture…he needed to find sanctuary, despite the conditions not being intolerable, it was beneficial to find a safe refuge, and then save his Padme. The Force called out to him… Skywalker turned on his heel, and instantaneously felt the oxygen emphatically forced out of his respiratory tract, as Obi-Wan speared him with his muscular deltoid into the snow. The two combatants rolled across the white terrain, tarnishing it with horrendous trails of blood, until Kenobi managed to mount his adversary. “You will pay for your lack of vision.” The Negotiator cursed, as he repeatedly bludgeoned the Chosen One’s face lean face, with alternating fists, and forearms across the jaw. A tyrannically oppressive white light obscured Anakin’s vision, he was rapidly losing his irrefutable resolve…he retaliated with a pristine punch into the exposed side of his former master’s ribs, causing him to relinquish his impetus. The younger protégé, strengthened his hip flexors, and rotated into the dominant position, before returning the favor to his opponent. “I swear…I’ll kill you, if it’s the last thing I do!” Anakin growled, as he angrily grinded his canines, whilst he brutalized Obi-Wan’s impeachable defenses. Kenobi proficiently segregated the pain, and snapped his cranium upwards, intercepting Anakin’s attack with a scintillating head butt across his horrific laceration. Skywalker’s blue orbs dilated from the phenomenal potency of the move, and forced him to release his hold. “You got to do better than that!!!” Kenobi liberated his lightsaber, and menacingly approached his partially debilitated rival. Anakin utilized every ounce of energy, frenetically surging through his veins, and delivered a round house kick, across the mutilated features of his assailant. Kenobi lost his grip on his blade, which deactivated as it fell into the tarnished snow…Skywalker fed upon the momentum, and launched towards Obi-Wan, smashing his knee straight into his sternum, and ruptured diaphragm. The Chosen One opened his palm, and allowed the hilt to magnetically bolt into his prosthetic appendage. Anakin walked towards to Kenobi to finish him off. Kenobi shrewdly waited for his charismatic enemy to approach; with unprecedented promptness, the Negotiator did a split in front of Skywalker, and punched him directly in the groin. Anakin gasped, and released the hilt, allowing it to fall into Obi-Wan twitching palm. He ignited the beguiling scarlet blade, and impaled his foe through his chest. Kenobi adeptly pulled the blade out, before callously impaling Anakin again through the solar plexus. Obi-Wan adroitly returned to his vertical posture, and impassively watched his former friend fall back into the snow. He had won. Kenobi incarcerated the glistening, majestic blade, and turned to walk away from his conquered foe. He had become the ultimate warrior, something which he always knew he was. Anakin imperceptibly clung on, as he expressionlessly stared at the heavens; his cauterized wounds were slowly beginning to become unassailable, as the notorious clouds of darkness, devilishly crept over his soul. The only thing he could think of, was Padme…he had to protect her somehow, he could not allow Obi-Wan to walk away. She was all that mattered now. The intriguing amethyst light, capriciously entwined itself around the fallen warrior’s torso, allowing him the power he needed to finish what he started. For Padme…His eyes feverishly burned yellow, as he harnessed his fury to jump back to a vertical posture. Kenobi spun around in amazement. “Game over…” Anakin stated, and utilized the most forbidden move of all, the Death Strike. The Chosen One imperiously glided across the snow, and grappled his stunned adversary. Within an instant, he used the Force to internally rip Kenobi’s heart out of his ribcage, and made it implode in his esophagus. Obi-Wan’s lifeless body fell back into the snow…moments later; Anakin’s plummeted to his death. “Padme…” Anakin gasped and sat up in his bed, his heart pounded unremittingly within his sculpted torso, as sweat poured profusely down his handsome face. His questioning eyes frenetically excavated the vicinity…he was in his chambers in the Jedi Temple. The door opened, and his Master walked in. “Anakin, are you okay?” Obi-Wan questioned, as he sat beside his friend. “It…was nothing Obi-Wan.” Anakin replied. “I heard you say someone’s name, I think it was Padme.” Obi-Wan stated. “It was just a dream Obi-Wan.” Anakin said relieved. “Do you want to tell me about it?” Obi-Wan offered. “Maybe someday I will.” Anakin smiled. “Have you sparred this morning?” “I was waiting for you.” Kenobi replied. “Shall we?” Anakin got out of bed. “Let’s play…” Hi everyone – That’s it!!!! My final post on the boards, and I could not have thought of a better sequence than this. For those who are waiting for the ULTIMATE version of Nobody wants to be lonely, I will PM it you tomorrow. I’m sure you can understand, how difficult it is to go from one extreme to the next, but now this is done, I can work on that. I’m am glad that you guys got to see this unprecedented fight sequence, I had to push the boundaries, as this was my last piece of fiction…and as I am recognized by my peers as the number one action author, I had to make sure they got nothing but the best. I turned it into a dream, as it had become a stand alone, and it worked better this way. LOL!!! I want to thank everyone who read my work through the years; I will be sending all my friends a personal message via PM in the next few days, before I depart. But, seriously, thank you for everything…I leave with no regrets. I will never forget this experience, and I will NEVER forget any of you. HandmaidenVeme – Another one to add to your list!!!! LOL!!!! May the Force be with you all...always!!!!!!
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Star_Angel Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/20/06 10:52am Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE - Date Edited: 12/21/06 8:40am (1 edits total) Edited By: Star_Angel
	It was a dream, or maybe I should say a nightmare? Wow, I did not see that one coming but I must say that with everything that I felt while reading this fic, that it was a great ending. This fic, like all of your earlier work, have been so amazing AH. I will miss seeing you around but I’ll still have your fanfics and I will read them again. The best of luck in the future with everything -----signature----- “It’s not our abilities that shows us what we truly are, it is our choices” – Albus Dumbledor (CoS) <- fanfics/fanart + a funny video in bio SWEDEN HOCKEY forever
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randomangel22 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 12/20/06 2:03pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE
	I actually got that part with the heart attack and all the terms because I just learned that in school !! But man I was cringing when Obi-Wan impaled Anakin I seriously was ready to scream NOOOOO !! But then that was so good when Anakin woke up and it was all a bad nightmare whew . I must say that since this was your last post it was a blast and more and I've enjoyed reading your work as its amazing (duh you already know that )!! I wish you good luck friend and thanks for letting me join in on the fun !! -----signature----- I think the worst time to have a heart attack is during a game of charades...or a game of fake heart attack. --Demetri Martin Yeah that would suck now wouldn't it?
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 12/20/06 6:14pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE
	It was a nightmare!!!! Excellent ending, quite the unexpected twist. And the post itself, WOW! During your time here, you have written such a wide range of stories, touching on scores of emotions. Everything from romance, drama to, of course, action. You've never failed to deliver suspense, keeping your readers on a wild, wonderful roller coaster, and I feel privileged to have been along for the ride. I'll miss you! -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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jmsbndgrl Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 12/20/06 6:16pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE
	Whew! it was only a dream and everyone is ok. That was intense and I've now discovered several Force techniques I'm glad Darth Vader did not use in the movies. An excellent finsih to your writing on the boards. I know I've said it countless times, but I wish you the best of luck in everything you do. -----signature----- "Even accountants have imagination." - Vesper Lynd - Casino Royale Angel #3 - An Obi-Wan fan lost in a world of Anakin fangirls! Blondes may have more fun, but Edward prefers brunettes!
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FitJedi Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/20/06 8:13pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE
	Hook, line and sinker.. you had me reeled in. I seriously thought Obi-Wan had killed Anakin..wow, what a complete 360 with it being just a dream. Absolutely brilliance, Bravo!
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 12/20/06 11:17pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE
	OMG,you so had me there! I think my heart stopped when Anakin was impaled! Thank the force it was only a dream ! What a perfect way to end the rollercoaster ride! Yes, one more to add! Now, if only I can remember how to do it-LOL!!!! Take care of yourself and best of luck in everything you do! -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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maderic Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 12/20/06 11:53pm Subject: RE: Anakin Skywalker V Obi-Wan Kenobi - No Holds Barred, AU, Action, Full Contact COMPLETE - Date Edited: 12/21/06 2:47pm (2 edits total) Edited By: maderic
	I enjoy this a great deal, but I can't help myself from thinking it's painfully over-written. Shift-F7 is not always your friend (unless that was the intent?). I will admit that I'm no fan of the "it was a dream" ending, but you managed to genuinely surprise me here. All in all, I'd say very well done. -----signature----- "The Star Wars story is really the tragedy of Darth Vader. That is the story. Once Vader dies, he doesn't come back to life, The Emperor doesn't get cloned and Luke doesn't get married," George Lucas. I'm a proud hater of 98% of the Expanded Universe.
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