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The Five People You Meet in the Force (Anakin POV on Afterlife) ~Best Drama~ FOMD Spoiler!!!!
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Title: The Five People You Meet in the Force
Author: AnakinsFavorite
Era: Post ROTJ
Characters: Anakin Skywalker, five mystery characters (all prequels/trilogy)
Summary: This work is based off of my favorite author Mitch Albom’s book, The Five People You Meet in Heaven. In the original book, the main character is a lonely old man who is haunted by a wound he suffered during World War Two, the loss of the love of his life, and his seemingly servitude to his father’s former job- a serviceman at an amusement park. One day, while doing his daily rounds, he saves a little girl’s life at the cost of his own. In heaven, he meets five very different people- five people who somehow impacted his life whether he knew it or not. Through the course of these five meetings, the main character gets to experience what had been lost and to know the truth behind his existence.
Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or the fabulous book, The Five People You Meet in Heaven- this solely belongs to Mitch Albom. If you have not read this book yet, go out and read it or give it to a loved one for the holidays- it is sad but will bring many hugs.
Author Notes: This is a gift for all of those who have touched my life. Thank you very much.
 The Beginning of the End
On the day that the Empire died and justice was brought back to the Galaxy, Darth Vader, Lord of the Sith, lost his life.
With just ten hours to live, the bitter man stepped out of bed, not knowing that each painful movement that wracked his ruined body was bringing him closer to his destiny… and the Force. Batting away the numerous medical droids that were eagerly trying to assist their master in the very activities that he’d once taken for granted, Vader prepared for his death.
Had he known that he was going to die in nine hours, Vader would have not spent the time in his shuttle to Endor musing over his mission but instead over any of the important things a man thinks of as time slowly slips away. Fate being what it was, the Sith loomed over his captain, barking orders to all who came within a short distance of him.
Two hours later and a few moments closer to his unforseen demise and rebirth, the Dark Lord was reunited with his son. Death has a way of either bringing loved ones closer or thrusting them further apart, but he committed the deepest grievance against his last remaining relation- betrayal. As the door slid shut with Luke being transported to the Emperor, Vader was left wondering how it had come to this.
Like always, the answer was the same…
Kenobi.
There were more beings who belonged on the list, but all of his energy seemed to have slipped away as he boarded his own ship, stinging with yet another regret.
She would be ashamed of me.
Three hours to live.
It was truly unnerving to watch the same process that had stolen Vader's own soul happening to his only son, but the Force granted no answers, no respite for the dark deeds which lead only into suffering. With the same fist that had nearly- killed his pregnant wife and had risen against his best friend, Vader fought his son, all the while praying that his offspring would not become like his sire.
A most miserable fate…
Only two hours remained yet death’s dour shadows were not felt, no hinting at what awaited around the invisible corner. Father battled against son, a test of not only love but also strength.
The Light was always stronger.
When but a hour remained, time seemed to sift by more quickly, testament to all that was being lost as the darkness continued its dark seduction, pretending that respite did not rest around the corner.
Then, it came- the moment of truth. It was a hour… no, a lifetime that seemed to pass by as the Sith watched the one thing he feared most happen- the loss of his son. Every inch of his destroyed body ached as the volleys of lightning consumed the boy who looked so much like his perfect mother, forever destroying the last remnant of the noble man Anakin Skywalker had once been.
He prevailed and triumphed in the end.
Without having even realized he’d moved, Vader not only rescued his son from imminent death but also destroyed the being who had only brought him suffering.
Ten minutes.
Fate has a way with death- a secret contract- and time seems to pass by swifter when the last precious moments are revealed. The glorious Force, not the grip of death, awaited him, and Anakin Skywalker reached out to it with open arms…
And lost his son in the process.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Everyone has their own definition of what eternal peace is but, for Anakin Skywalker, it meant no more suffering, no more pain. As if in fear that the laborious breathing would return, he laid unmoving in the bright light.
Where was he? There had been the feeling of Luke’s shaking and untarnished hands in his and then… nothingness.
Panic began to well up in the tormented man as he began to fear once more- had his son perished despite his gift? Had it all been for nothing?
Around him, the glowing light faded into darkness, and it took Anakin a full few minutes to realize that it was not the shadows that clouded his vision but that of something very familiar…
Confused, he could only wonder- how could the Force be so cruel as to bring him back to the very place he’d begun that very day? Why, out of all the horrible jokes was he forced to reside in the very hell that had greeted him every morning?
It is said that, in every dark spot, there is a piece of silver lining which adds hope to every dour situation, lifting one up from a point of unbearable suffering.
Hot tears filled Anakin’s eyes as he could only struggle to breathe, unable to think of adequate words to express what he saw.
“Hush, my child- you shall regain your abilities. Stand up for you have much awaiting you,” came a gentle voice accompanied by a hand that had once been soft but had endure many years of hard work.
The water droplets coursed down his face and, upon wiping them away, Anakin found that gone was the ruined skin that had haunted his reflection- in its place was the handsome countenance which had once been enough to unsteady any feminine heart.
No words were spoken, but he soon realized that none were needed...
Mother.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
To be continued...
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A stellar beginning! 
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A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force.
She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave.
- Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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That was beautiful.
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wow... ::hushed voice::
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I love it AF, unfortunately, I haven’t read the book but now I really want to. Great start and I’m looking forward to more so if you have a pm list then please add me to it, thanks fy friend.
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I've heard of that book and now I might go check it out  !!
Please add me to your PM list I wanna see what happens  !!
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You already know how much I love this, right?  And wow - what wonderful timing for a story like this with the beginning of the holiday season upon us. I am anxiously awaiting the next part. That was quite an evil cliffie, you know?
As tradition dictates, I simply must be at the top of the PM list for this one. Way to go! I am so proud of you and the easy way you balance all of your fics! I only have one going and I go WEEKS in between posts!! Yikes!
Great job, my dear!
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I must admit that I have never read Five People You Meet in Heaven. *Shields self from angry glare*
Beautiful, my master. I only hope that one day I am a great a writer as you are. May I be added to the PM list?
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Wow! Incredible! 
On the day that the Empire died and justice was brought back to the Galaxy, Darth Vader, Lord of the Sith, lost his life.
With just ten hours to live, the bitter man stepped out of bed, not knowing that each painful movement that wracked his ruined body was bringing him closer to his destiny… and the Force. Batting away the numerous medical droids that were eagerly trying to assist their master in the very activities that he’d once taken for granted, Vader prepared for his death.
Had he known that he was going to die in nine hours, Vader would have not spent the time in his shuttle to Endor musing over his mission but instead over any of the important things a man thinks of as time slowly slips away. Fate being what it was, the Sith loomed over his captain, barking orders to all who came within a short distance of him.
Loved it! Please PM when you update.
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Absolutely beautiful beginning, I can't wait to read the rest. Please put me on your PM list.
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Wonderful start!  I too read and enjoyed The Five People You Meet In Heaven, and I think this story is a poignant tribute to both SW and Mitch Albom's book.
Could I please have a PM when this is updated?
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You write such wonderful fics!!
Please add me to your PM!!!!
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Oh so sweet, I was close to crying a couple of times. Please add me to your PM list
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A wonderful beggining! Please PM me when you update!
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Wow, I wasn't expecting such a great turnout from all of you wondeful readers!  Thank you very much!
Gina posted:
A stellar beginning!
Thank you! I got bitten late Sunday night and was scribbling down ideas instead of sleeping so, if I get cranky, forgive me 
Ascal_Elessar posted:
That beautiful.
Thank you!  I decided to move away from the horror stuff for a little!
leia_naberrie posted:
wow... ::hushed voice::
I'm glad you enjoyed this little inspiration!
Star_Angel posted:
I love it AF, unfortunately, I haven’t read the book but now I really want to. Great start and I’m looking forward to more so if you have a pm list then please add me to it, thanks fy friend.
Honestly, go to the nearest bookstore and get it- it costs only fourteen dollars hardback (don't know about paper). It is an awsome book. My mum had me read it before I could touch Half Blood Prince (I was very distraught!) but got excited trying to figure out the mystery behind each guest! At the end, I totally broke down crying, ran upstairs, and cried on my mum's shoulders. It's one of those books that can really change how you view life. I will definetly add you to my list
randomangel22 posted:
I've heard of that book and now I might go check it out !!
Please add me to your PM list I wanna see what happens !!
I've only cried when reading three times: Eric (about a guy who suffered from leukemia (sp), this book (I cry every time), and Gone With the Wind. I will absolutely add you to my list!
VA_Parky posted:
You already know how much I love this, right? And wow - what wonderful timing for a story like this with the beginning of the holiday season upon us. I am anxiously awaiting the next part. That was quite an evil cliffie, you know?
As tradition dictates, I simply must be at the top of the PM list for this one. Way to go! I am so proud of you and the easy way you balance all of your fics! I only have one going and I go WEEKS in between posts!! Yikes!
Great job, my dear!
I was in the mood for a holiday-ish piece (it really isn't but creates that fuzzy feeling). I intend to slam you all with cliffies  like the ones I had to endure in the book! I actually gasped aloud while reading it... every page! Oh, and I suppoe you can be at the top of the list  You know how stressed I am, though- this is very hard to balance!
queenberuthiel posted:
I must admit that I have never read Five People You Meet in Heaven. *Shields self from angry glare*
Beautiful, my master. I only hope that one day I am a great a writer as you are. May I be added to the PM list?
Well, considering the fact that I procrastinated- and in truth didn't want- to read it, I really can't say much here  . GO READ IT! Don't worry- I have high hopes for you! I'll add you to my list!
VaderLVR64 posted:
Wow! Incredible!
On the day that the Empire died and justice was brought back to the Galaxy, Darth Vader, Lord of the Sith, lost his life.
With just ten hours to live, the bitter man stepped out of bed, not knowing that each painful movement that wracked his ruined body was bringing him closer to his destiny… and the Force. Batting away the numerous medical droids that were eagerly trying to assist their master in the very activities that he’d once taken for granted, Vader prepared for his death.
Had he known that he was going to die in nine hours, Vader would have not spent the time in his shuttle to Endor musing over his mission but instead over any of the important things a man thinks of as time slowly slips away. Fate being what it was, the Sith loomed over his captain, barking orders to all who came within a short distance of him.
Loved it! Please PM when you update.
Thank you! I'm pleased that this worked out so well- I typed it up in about ten minutes   Why do inspirations come and go so quickly- and without warning?  I'll absolutely PM you!
Kelli_LB posted:
Absolutely beautiful beginning, I can't wait to read the rest. Please put me on your PM list.
Thank you! The rest of the posts will be more emotional, considering all the people Anakin is going to meet... the last three are going to be positively dreadful.  I'll add you!
Cael-Fenton posted:
Wonderful start! I too read and enjoyed The Five People You Meet In Heaven, and I think this story is a poignant tribute to both SW and Mitch Albom's book.
Could I please have a PM when this is updated?
See! I told you all it was awsome!  It is one of my favorite books. I got mum his new book (title?!) and shall do a crossover sometime in the future... if the inspiration hits Thanks for reading, and I shall add you!
HandmaidenVeme posted:
You write such wonderful fics!!
Please add me to your PM!!!!
Thank you, but methinks I have too much time on my hands I'll add you, friend!
ROTSFan posted:
Oh so sweet, I was close to crying a couple of times. Please add me to your PM list
Well, I'm warning you in advance- the last part of the book leaves me sobbing. Don't let that scare you off! I'll add you...
Alley_Skywalker posted:
A wonderful beggining! Please PM me when you update!
Thank you! I will absolutely add you to my list!
PM List- if you ever want to be added/removed, just let me know (reply preferably- my faithful readers know how prone I am to losing PM's I'll horribly disorganized and use my PM machine like a text messenger.)
VA_Parky, queenberuthiel, Star_Angel, randomangel22, VaderLVR64, Kelli_LB, Cael-Fenton, HandmaidenVeme, ROTSFan, Alley_Skywalker, Luna_Nightshade
I've got the next post typed up- I just have to beta it . It will be up here today... hopefully! There will be more space in between posts after this- this first post just sort of led into this one!
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Mmmm.... a wonderful Anakin afterlife story is taking shape. I can't wait for more! I hope he gets to meet Padme and Obi-Wan too... and maybe Bail. *excited* Much , AF! Please pm me.
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