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FIC: Anthitesis - One post - Darth Vader/Luke Skylwalker
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sherazade
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Date Posted:
12/22/06 9:17pm
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FIC: Anthitesis - One post - Darth Vader/Luke Skylwalker
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This is a one shot story; it came to my mind to write this….
I apologize for the mistakes; my beta is not available at this time…
The Dark Lord was meditating…surrounded by the darkness that shrouded
his soul.
The Death Star was destroyed…
A force user pilot…untrained but very strong…
He felt his strength while pursuing him…
"Cursed be that freighter! How dared he foil his plan"
He had to explain to his master how he failed to destroy his enemy
and he was very displeased…he ordered him to find this unknown
padawan learner…he would not fail again…
Failure was not acceptable.
His mind was in turmoil…
The untamed strength of the pilot was rather…disturbing…How could
exist another being in the galaxy able to tap into the Force? This
should be the right of only his master and himself…he felt envy…
hatred…
He remembered well the disturbance he felt in the force…the Light
invading his darkness…
A young voice echoed within his mind…
Master Skywalker, there are too many of them…what are we going to
do?
A youngling…surrounded by light that he extinguished with the swift
movement of his light saber…
He would have to do this again…once he found that pilot…
He still remembered the strength of his rage in which he destroyed
the Jedi…and the victory of this young pilot against him made his
dark feelings of hatred to take over and
the respirator could barely keep up with the owner's demand for air…
It's been a month since he started to relive the nightmares…
Millions of Lives destroyed….
Alderaan….
Death Star
Their screams echoed within his mind…the young recruits that had just
started their duty working for the Empire…
The youngling pilot was an instrument of destruction, then his mind
started to flow a different thought…What if this pilot could be
trained…turned into the dark side?
Then he would be the master…
A title he had been denied long ago…
This is outrageous! How could one be in the Council and not be a
master!
Vader pushed away that memory…He was not a Jedi…
He stepped out his hyperbaric chamber and went to the bridge and he
could feel fear.
He stared at the stars…..
"I will find you, young one!"
ooooOOOooooo
Meanwhile….in the other side of the galaxy….
Luke stirred on his sleep…
Obi-Wan…his master was gone…he was alone with the Force…untrained…
He hungered to learn the ways of the Force…and become a Jedi, like
his father before him…
"I wish I had known him…"
He felt a disturbance…his dream sent him to a flashback….
He could still feel the Dark Lord chasing him…
The anger….
The hatred….
The hunger for revenge…
The Force was there and it was touching him…calming him in the midst
of the turmoil…
When the one who sought his destruction was about to strike again…
He could feel him near…and yet he surrendered to the Force…and it
surrounded him giving him strength…
"The Force will be with you always."
Serenity…
Balance…
He woke up startled as if an unknown force touched him…
Oppressive…
Dark…
**"I will find you..."**A voice echoed within his mind…
He got up and walked to ease the sadness from the nightmare…
ooooOOOooooo
Vader continued to observe the stars…
Admiral Piett approached, straightened his shoulders.
"My lord, this is the information found about the pilot…" He gave a
data disk…
Vader picked up the information and walked away.
He had to concentrate not to crush the disk with all the hatred he
felt…
"He had him now with his known identity he would find that pilot and
finally destroy the Jedi…"
He placed the disk into the computer…
A wave of dark feelings came crushing the dark lord…sparkled by a
name…
Luke Skywalker from Tatooine…
Betrayal…
Deceits…
Something wonderful happened…Ani, I am pregnant.."
A youngling…strong with the Force….
Luke
[i]Light
A son
A grown up son…[/i]
Son of an Angel…
Son of a Sith Lord…
Son of Light
Sired by Darkness
"In your anger…you killed her…" his master's voice echoed in his
mind.
He had no time to lose…he ordered thousands of probes to search for
young Skywalker…
His son…
He would find him…
And bring order to the galaxy….
And then he would be…
complete…
THE END…
Reviews appreciated....
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VaderLVR64
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
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Date Posted:
12/23/06 5:46am
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RE: FIC: Anthitesis - One post - Darth Vader/Luke Skylwalker
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Wow! Simply incredible! 
A youngling…surrounded by light that he extinguished with the swift
movement of his light saber…
He would have to do this again…once he found that pilot…
He still remembered the strength of his rage in which he destroyed
the Jedi…and the victory of this young pilot against him made his
dark feelings of hatred to take over and
the respirator could barely keep up with the owner's demand for air…
It's been a month since he started to relive the nightmares…
Millions of Lives destroyed….
And those closing lines were perfect! 
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General_Kenobi_66
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Date Posted:
12/23/06 8:51am
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RE: FIC: Anthitesis - One post - Darth Vader/Luke Skylwalker
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Very nice job
I also loved the ending lines
You captured both Luke and Vader's personalities very well
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sherazade
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Date Posted:
12/26/06 10:36pm
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RE: FIC: Anthitesis - One post - Darth Vader/Luke Skylwalker
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Thank you for your kind reply...I am happy you like the story.
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Qui-GonSolo
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Date Posted:
12/27/06 8:10am
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Very cool.
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KELIA
Title: Fan Fiction Moderator
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Date Posted:
12/27/06 11:03am
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Oooohhh very chilling.
You really captured the darkness of Vader's soul.
How creepy Luke was able to hear his vow to find him in his dream.
Great job on this
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