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Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Completed April 1
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EverydayAngel
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4/6/07 8:47pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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Great chapter
I can picture what you describe very well
Poor Barriss is in pain! That made me so sad.
Where is Beru?
I hope Anakin doesn't slip and massacre the entire camp.
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HandmaidenVeme
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4/6/07 9:49pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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I hope the saying of "good things come to those who wait" holds true...
Great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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He’d save that as part of his surprise. He was content to watch and wait as he evaluated the formation of the Tusken Raiders and reluctantly surmised that there was little he could do to penetrate the circle undetected. The cage holding Barriss and his mother was off to the side and they appeared to be moving, which brought instant relief. Both of them seemed to be alright.
He settled himself in for a long night, his gaze rarely leaving the cage, as he began to formulate a plan for their rescue. It wasn’t going to be easy, but if he could reach them – and obtain Barriss’ lightsaber – the odds of success would increase by a thousand fold. Now he just had to be certain his pieces all fell into place.
This situaton is already sounding more promising! Anakin is thinking and waiting patiently. Barriss was able to heal his mother so she is not currently on her deathbed. Is that a forcebond that Barriss and Aakin share that he is so aware of her?
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Mira_Jade
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4/7/07 5:05am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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Good! Anakin's thinking with his head, not his heart. I'm rather relieved.
I loved the part when Barriss first woke up. I could fell her pain, and when she healed shmi it brought a small smile to my face.
Another great update! 
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4/7/07 5:32am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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Great job with Bariss fighting to save Shmi and keeping her own pain at bay. It's a good thing that she's there, letting Anakin track the pair more easily. And Anakin is thinking with his head and that can only be to the good.
Wonderful. Looking forward to more.
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4/7/07 5:37am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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Incredible! I loved it. 
He watched, evaluating their circle as night stole over the desert, the temperature plunging down to below freezing as the fire from the Tusken Radiers’ camp light up the area inside the Bantha’s circle. Anakin waited, forcing himself to be patient as he observed, feeling Barriss’ exhausting as if it were his own. He didn’t dare connect with her, to let her know he was nearby.
Not yet.
He’d save that as part of his surprise. He was content to watch and wait as he evaluated the formation of the Tusken Raiders and reluctantly surmised that there was little he could do to penetrate the circle undetected. The cage holding Barriss and his mother was off to the side and they appeared to be moving, which brought instant relief. Both of them seemed to be alright.
He settled himself in for a long night, his gaze rarely leaving the cage, as he began to formulate a plan for their rescue. It wasn’t going to be easy, but if he could reach them – and obtain Barriss’ lightsaber – the odds of success would increase by a thousand fold. Now he just had to be certain his pieces all fell into place.
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4/7/07 8:30am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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ooooo.... anakin is being reasonable! and shmi and barriss are alive! Yay!  oh but now what?
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4/7/07 2:18pm
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I am very glad Anakin is taking the time to think things out before rushing in blindly and slaughtering people. Not that he might slip, or anything. 
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4/7/07 4:19pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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I loved it. The scene was very well described, I could almost see it. I am a little concerned for Barriss. I hope that in neglecting her own injuries, she didn't condemn herself to his mothers fate. I am sure that Anakin couldn't bare lossing her. I think he is doing things the right way so far, but with his and Barriss' love blooming, it would be hard for him to lose her too. Great job. Thanks for the PM.
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4/7/07 8:10pm
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More! Now!
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Handmaiden_Azul
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4/8/07 9:49am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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*still concerned*
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4/8/07 2:40pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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How wonderful to see Anakin control his emotions instead of charging right into the Tusken's hands.
I loved Barriss taking care of Shmi without even thinking of herself. I just hope she doesn't pay the ultimate price it.
Great update
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4/9/07 1:12pm
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Well done on this. I could mentally feel what Barriss was going through. Great job! Now I just hope we can have Anakin pull off the rescue without going to the dark side.
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AnakinsFavorite
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4/9/07 1:30pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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Hello! I'm back for more confession time 
I have been lurking along with this story for quite some time and would love to be added to your PM List!
Once more, I love the idea of a Bariss/Anakin crackship. It is so refreshing and unique!
Concerning the last post... having Bariss be kidnapped along with Beru and Shmi was interesting. That was clever how she healed Shmi... but I am worried about Anakin at this point- will he be able to circumvent what happens in AOTC?
Great story!
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4/14/07 11:00pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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Wow... o.0
if anakin loses Barriss AND Shmi... o.0
great chapter! looking forward to more...
...please don't stop PM-ing me. I don't get on nearly as often as I used to...
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