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Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Completed April 1
VaderLVR64
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Date Posted:
7/17/07 6:53am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Amazing! So glad to see this one updated. It made my day!
It was as if she was wrapped in protective layers of power. Power she'd pulled inwards, focusing on herself to prevent and diminish her injuries. It was an impressive display for Anakin as he felt the effeciency from the outside. Her enegies were focus so completely that if something or someone had hurt her physically, she'd have never reacted. Her body simply would have absorbed the impact and, providing the injuries weren't fatal, continued to heal.
Anakin drew back, leaving her in the protective embrace of the Force, and opened his eyes as he cast his senses once more outward toward the perimeter of their camp. Barriss' condition concerned him, mostly because he was terrified down to his toes that he'd caused her more harm than good by giving her the means to sustain herself through the battle. That it had been necessary to effect their escape successfully did little to comfort him.
He sighed, pulling his hand away from her and letting her hair fall loosely back to the furs. Barriss would need time and space to heal and it was his fault. There should have been a way to pull off rescue without putting either her or his mother in danger. He settled back, his gaze moving to the fire, and listened to the wind whipping over top the canyon walls, wailing its way through the desert.
A part of him empathized; he wanted to scream with frustration too.
Wonderful.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Whew! Things are finally looking better for our heroes! Shmi made it out of there alive, and Bariss looks like she'll make it around alright. Ironically, it is Anakin who has me worried- what will be the snapping point for him!
Great post, and don't you dare take me off this PM List!
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
im so happy you updated =D
and I'm glad to see that Anakin is learning lessons from his experiences with Padme and Barriss
I can't wait to see how they interact when she wakes up!
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7/20/07 5:23am
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
*bump*
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Oh, I love it.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
I'm so glad they're safe...loved the part where Anakin was talking to Barriss.
Nice work
looking forward to more!
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Another great update, but I am going to have to respectfully disagree with some of the other readers. I believe he is still very arrogant, and it is all in his thought of being more powerful than even Yoda. Yes he is learning but there is still the arrogance and greed. This Anakin is becoming a lot wiser than the one we have seen, but is still showing signs of a fall. I think Barriss could possibly help him through this because she understand better how those feelings could hurt him than Padme ever could have. If/when Barriss pulls through this it will be intresting to see how his path progresses. I just hope he doesn't bring Barriss down with him. Please keep me on the list.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Author's Note - from her friendly neighborhood sock
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7/29/07 6:36pm
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
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dianethx
– For the moment being the key. While Shmi is out of danger, I don’t think Anakin quite yet realizes the thrashing he’s in for when he returns to Naboo and their Masters with the Force-hibernating Barriss...
KELIA
– I wouldn’t say Anakin’s accepting his role, or taking responsibility for his actions, more like letting the guilt talk. Responsibility and acceptance come later
Luminara_Kenobi
– Certainly
Jek_Windu
Thank you!
LuminaraFan4Evr
– Thanks
emerald54
– DRL has a way of doing that, doesn’t he? Thanks for reading!
Raptor517
– Thank you
Anakin’s pain is very much guilt at this moment, which could be turned in a lot of different ways – but it’s going from where he is now to where he wants to be that’s going to be interesting.
EverydayAngel
– You think Barriss heard him, eh? I guess we’ll all just have to wait and see when Barriss wakes up. Which is coming soon, but not just yet. There’s a couple of other things that have to be done first.
obsessedwithSW
- *laughs*
No worries!
AngelQueen
– Welcome, welcome
I love the A/P pairing as much as the next person, but A/B has so much potential!
I love how Barriss has been an almost stabling influence on Anakin. He's still got that Skywalker recklessness, but he's fast learning some lessons that he didn't learn in canon until it was far too late.
That’s the idea. Barriss is trying to do the right thing and because she’s also a Padawan, it helps that she can relate in certain ways to what he’s thinking and feeling. A lot more than Padmé was ever able to – and in some ways better than she was. Anakin’s kind of “transferred” his feelings to Barriss – but is starting to realize how special she is on her own. It’s pretty fun to do an “exploration” fic
Love how she's drawn closer and closer to Anakin, even as she keeps reminding herself of the rules about Jedi and attachments. *g* But she's right, it's too late.
*laughs* That is probably my absolute favorite part of this whole fic. Barriss’ struggle while Anakin tries to convince her otherwise – it makes things interesting.
I’d be happy to send a PM your way when I update – expect one soon.
PadawanMom5610
– Welcome, welcome – I’d be happy to PM you when I update!
MoAngel
– Certainly, most certainly
Kevin_Solo
– Barriss makes a good alternative to Padmé – and there are still certain key elements to AotC that haven’t been met yet, so there’s quite a few more posts to go
Thank you for reading – this is probably one of the most rewarding fics I’ve written in a long time.
sdhfs
– I’d be happy to – does that mean you’d like a PM when I update?
Jedi Trace
- *laughs* Glad I could oblige – and if Barriss doesn’t want him, you have first dibs!
:Þ
Anakin’s got a lot of inherent qualities that are twisted and warped from the beginning of TPM to the end of RotS, so it’s interesting to play with some of those fundamentals before something happens to him. Of course, he’s not quite learned to take responsibility for his actions yet – mostly he’s letting his guilt talk and fester; which will be interesting when he has to explain his actions
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I appreciate it, but I understand how life gets. If you read your PM, I’ll assume you’re reading
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– Thank you.
VaderLVR64
– I couldn’t very well let this one slide for too much longer – it’s begging to be finished
AnakinsFavorite
– You’re right you know, this is a snapping point for Anakin – it’s just a matter of which way he’ll go...
Vivid_Scripts
- *grin* I promise I won’t abandon this one even if the updates are a ways between one another
And Anakin is a slow learner – remember? It might take him a touch longer but he’ll learn eventually...
Handmaiden_Azul
– thanks!
little_miss_jedi
- *grin* Anakin needs to talk to her, but more when she’s awake I think.
CodyMonKenobi
– You’re right, you know. Anakin’s still arrogant and greedy, but he’s also feeling guilty as all hell which is just as dangerous. I think this has the potential for Anakin to get over protective of her since he knows he’s stronger – which could be dangerous next time they end up in a fight
The end result could be bringing Barriss down with him but my muse hasn’t decided which way to take it yet – but that just gave me a wicked plot bunny! Thanks!
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Cleigg enveloped Shmi in a hug the second her feet touched the ground as she climbed down from the speeder. The affectionate, proprietary gesture left Anakin with no doubt his mother was in good hands. Cleigg was a gruff man, but it was plain fro the tears in his eyes that he loved Shmi. Any doubts Anakin might have had about his mother's current situation would have been washed away then - if any had remained.
Anakin nodded to Beru where the soft spoken woman stood off to the side, waiting patiently for Owen to park completely. Anakin lifted a still unconscious Barriss from the speeder before Owen headed for the garage to park it.
Barriss seemed lighter daily. The more he carried her, the more concerned Anakin was becoming as her weight seemed to be dropping as her body fed on reserves to keep her alive without outside sustenance. Soon, very soon, he felt it would be necessary to wake her if for no other reason than to eat. Not that she was emaciated or atrophying yet, but he wasn't going to let her get to that point before acting. She was suffering because he'd brought her here, because of his Force visions, and it was his responsibility to see her safe.
Arm in arm, Shmi and Cleigg led the way into the homestead as Anakin trailed behind. He politely declined sitting with his mother and her husband, instead opted to take Barriss back to the bed she'd been generously given until their stay was over.
Anakin lay her gently down, brushing her hair back from her forehead even as he carefully arranged her in a comfortable looking position. She still didn’t stir, and he was starting to wonder if she’d traveled so far into the Force that she wouldn’t be able to make it back. Or if it was possible she'd been so gravely injured by his interference she didn't
want
to come back.
"There's little you can do for her."
"I know."
Shmi stepped into the room, watching her son with his young woman. "What are you going to do, Ani?"
He brushed his fingers over Barriss' hand, torn. She needed medical attention and likely the help of her master, and he wanted to stay and spend time with his mother - an opportunity not likely to come again. He swallowed hard. It was only because of Barriss he
had
his mother and he knew his choice was really no choice at all. "I have to take her back to Naboo. Her Master is there and can probably help; she's a fully trained Jedi Healer."
"Then you shouldn't waste any time." Shmi placed her hand on Anakin's shoulder and squeezed. "Promise me."
Anakin reached up to squeeze her fingers. "Anything, mom."
"Promise me you'll send word when she recovers. Even if it's simply to say that she'll be fine."
He smiled, nodding. "I promise. If I don't, I'll make sure Barriss writes you herself."
Shmi squeezed his shoulder again and then stepped back, out of his reach. "Then you'd best be going before she makes herself worse."
Anakin took a deep breath before rising to his feet. He turned, opening his arms, and Shmi stepped in to hug him firmly. Anakin ducked his head close to hers, inhaling her scent; that familiar, loving scent he would never forget, and squeezed carefully. Shmi's hug was just as fierce.
"Be well, Ani. I love you."
"I love you too, mom. Be happy with Cleigg."
"I am." Shmi stepped back. "Go. Barriss needs your help now."
He did as instructed, collecting Barriss in his arms once more, before leaving the room and climbing back towards the sandy surface. He made his way back to the Nabooian craft and laid Barriss at the Medical station before leaving briefly to say his goodbyes.
The Larses and Beru understood the necessity of his quick departure. Anakin offered to take his mother too, giving her the chance to meet his mentor as well as soak in a bacta tank to heal the last of her injuries, but she declined. Cleigg assured Anakin she was in good hands, as Beru and Shmi both knew something of healing and she'd be fine. Reluctant to take the man's advice, but finding little recourse, Anakin simply thanked them for their hospitality and re-boarded the ship.
Waiting for him, to his surprise, was C3P0, hunched over Barriss' unconscious form and hooking her into a nutrient stream. Thankful for the help, Anakin simply clapped the droid on the shoulder before heading to the cockpit to begin his pre-flight check.
Barely minutes later, the engines having been kept at a decent temperature thanks to the sandy world's daily highs, he was angling the speedy little craft upwards and out of the atmosphere. Setting his course for Naboo, he punched the hyper drive and prayed the delay hadn't hurt Barriss beyond repair.
Anakin brought the ship to land in the same location where they'd "borrowed" it from. He unhooked Barriss from the nutrient drip and collected her once more, despite 3P0's protests that Mistress Offee needed to remain stationary.
Anakin palmed open the ramp at the controls and began striding down it before it had opened all the way. The sight that greeted him wasn't one he was expecting.
Luminara stood silently, a lone figure in the hangar bay, with a stretcher beside her. She motioned for him to come closer and Anakin did, placing Barriss on the stretcher as he did. He looked at his friend's mentor with apprehension, but Luminara simply bent to her Padawan and began a quick examination. She made a small noise that might have been approval before finally straightening again.
"I expect a full report on what happened to Barriss, Padawan Skywalker."
"Yes, Master." He glanced at Barriss. "Would you like it now?"
"Later. Once she's been placed in the bacta tank. Come."
Anakin fell into step behind Luminara as the Jedi hurried the repulsor-stretcher through the bay and out into the hallways. They were deserted, eerily so, as they headed for the medical lab.
Anakin felt a prickly, uneasy sensation eating its way through his gut. "Master?"
Luminara tilted her head, but didn't say anything.
"Where is everyone?"
Luminara stopped for a half second, meeting his gaze. "At Senator Amidala's funeral and commemoration ceremony - as you should be."
Anakin flushed. He'd almost forgotten, with everything that had happened in the last week, that today was the day of Padmé's funeral. A funeral for a young woman who likely hadn't cared one way or the other if he attended. "Should I go?"
"Your presence is not necessary, Padawan Skywalker." Luminara resumed their quick pace, unerringly leading him straight into a deserted med bay. "I, however, will require your help. The bacta tank will need to be prepped for several minutes before Barriss can be placed within. Have you ever done so?"
"No Master."
"Then it is time you learn."
Anakin didn't argue. He simply followed her instructions as he considered his options for telling the story of their disappearance and Barriss' injuries. He didn't notice Luminara watching him speculatively, nor of the way the Jedi Master lifted Barriss' injured arm and took careful note of the charm which had somehow stayed connected through their adventure. He didn't notice anything but his own thoughts until Luminara submerged herself in the Force and the ripple brought his head up.
Luminara's eyes were closed, her fingers splayed across Barriss' cranium as she sought to communicate with her Padawan. Barriss remained still, even as Anakin silently willed her to move.
Then, suddenly, one hand twitched and Barriss let out a mournful sound of pain like Anakin had never before heard.
He fled, darting from the room like a terrified child as the sound of Barriss' pain reverberated inside him like, cutting like a knife. He stopped in the hallway, leaning against the wall as he sucked in deep breaths of air, trying to banish the sound from his soul. He banged the back of his head against the wall, silently raging at himself for his careless stupidity.
Sliding to the floor as the starch in his knees gave out, he didn't realize he was crying until he covered his face with his hands and they came away wet.
"Anakin?"
His head snapped up.
Luminara stood in the doorway. Gone was the stern, disapproving mentor and in her place was a concerned healer. "Are you alright?"
Anakin laughed harshly. "Alright? Alright, Master? I did that to her.
Me
! I made her injuries worse. I forced her to hibernate to maintain her life force and now... now..." his voice cracked on a sob. "How can I face her when I know I hurt her?"
"Did you know what your actions would do, Anakin? Did you intend to cause her injury?"
"What does that have to do with anything?"
"Everything." Luminara crouched beside him. "Our intentions dictate how the Force is used. If you intended to hurt Barriss, I would have serious concerns to address with your Master. By your reaction, I suspect this is not the case. I suspect you did whatever it was you did to try and help her, and
inadvertently
caused her harm."
Anakin looked away. "It doesn't matter, Master."
Her fingers dug into his chin as she grabbed it and dragged it back so they were looking eye to eye. "Obi-Wan must have the patience of a saint to deal with you, Padawan Skywalker. Barriss has come to no lasting harm; she will recover fully."
"Thank the Force!"
Luminara arched an eyebrow, releasing his chin. "Indeed. The Force is sometimes a double edged blade. It can both hurt and heal - as you have seen - even with the best of intentions."
"I swear I didn't mean to, Master. I would never... could never..."
Luminara pushed to her feet. "Barriss will be in the tank for the rest of the day; there is little more either you or I can do for her until she finishes the cycle. Come; we should inform your Master that you have returned."
He stared at her in silence for a moment, not quite believing his ears. "Just like that?"
"Sometimes, Padawan Skywalker, it is easiest to speak with someone immediately than wait for the wounds to fester."
He winced. Ouch. That hit a little too close to home with his newfound knowledge as to
why
he believed Obi-Wan did as he did. Especially after his mother's gentle reprimand. He acquiesced, hanging his head for a moment as he drew on his strength. He felt drained, worn to the bone after the last week, and emotionally bruised and battered in the way Barriss had been physically.
And he had one more fight to go before he could rest. One? He mentally shook himself. Two. First he'd face Obi-Wan and Luminara to explain why they'd gone to Tatooine. Then he'd have to face Barriss when she was allowed out of the bacta tank. Somehow, he knew the second meeting would be harder than the first.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Poor Anakin, feeling so remorseful about his actions. I can see already that he is turning out different than in canon, and I like it. I hope Obi-wan will be understanding and helpful, not lecturing and stern. I agree, I think the confrontation with Bariss is not going to be pleasant. Great job, and thank you.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
I liked that he took Barriss back to her master, not lingering over his mother once she was safe. He got to see her at least and that would have to be enough.
I loved this.
Her fingers dug into his chin as she grabbed it and dragged it back so they were looking eye to eye. "Obi-Wan must have the patience of a saint to deal with you, Padawan Skywalker. Barriss has come to no lasting harm; she will recover fully."
I know this is a serious story but it made me laugh. Saint, indeed.
Good job.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
I loved the interaction between them.
"Sometimes, Padawan Skywalker, it is easiest to speak with someone immediately than wait for the wounds to fester."
He winced. Ouch. That hit a little too close to home with his newfound knowledge as to why he believed Obi-Wan did as he did. Especially after his mother's gentle reprimand. He acquiesced, hanging his head for a moment as he drew on his strength. He felt drained, worn to the bone after the last week, and emotionally bruised and battered in the way Barriss had been physically.
And he had one more fight to go before he could rest. One? He mentally shook himself. Two. First he'd face Obi-Wan and Luminara to explain why they'd gone to Tatooine. Then he'd have to face Barriss when she was allowed out of the bacta tank. Somehow, he knew the second meeting would be harder than the first.
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Bummer. "There and back again, a Jedi's tale by Anakin Skywalker." Ah, well. I bet he gets back to see his mum, and Bariss will probably be with him. Loved it when Luminara grabbed Anakin by the chin.
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RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU. (Short Story, possibly epic)
Great update. I really liked how he had forgotten about the funeral and was upset over missing it. It really shows how much he has moved on in the little time. His bond with Barriss is kind of scary. Like the others said I hope Obi Wan is a little understanding, but I don't imagine he will be.
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