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Author	Topic: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Completed April 1
Mira_Jade Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 2/19 11:25am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	Ooh, it's so great to see this updated!! I do love this story. Did I ask for PMs before? If not, may I ask now? ~MJ -----signature----- I couldn't . . . I shouldn't . . . but I will! "The Drabble Drop" http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=29101933&brd=10477 Force help us all.
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PadawanMom5610 Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 2/19 7:47pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	I love this update. Great job. Thank you for describing the hive construction. I loved this: There was something in his expression, something she recognized that rang an answering bell in her own mind - the pure pleasure of doing something he loved. It was the same feeling she saw on his face that she felt when she healed someone else. It was the joy of knowing you were in your element, of wallowing in something in which you were unmatched. Just another proof that Bariss gets Anakin like noone else.
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Kevin_Solo Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 2/20 1:50am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08 - Date Edited: 2/20 1:53am (2 edits total) Edited By: Kevin_Solo
	Great to see a new update here! A nice description of Anakin's piloting abilities: Luminara and Barriss returned to the cockpit to find Anakin maneuvering through an asteroid belt above the planet of Geonosis. He didn't spare either of them a look as he threw the ship around the obstacles with deceptive ease. Anakin was renowned, even in the Jedi order, for his abilities as a pilot, but watching him was breath taking. Barriss remained standing in the doorway to the cockpit, unable to tear her gaze from Anakin's face as he flew. There was something in his expression, something she recognized that rang an answering bell in her own mind - the pure pleasure of doing something he loved. It was the same feeling she saw on his face that she felt when she healed someone else. It was the joy of knowing you were in your element, of wallowing in something in which you were unmatched. You've got it really bad, girl! And it appears that Luminara senses and sees this too: Luminara's none too subtle Force push propelled Barriss from the doorway and back towards her seat. She managed not to flush at the pointed, cautionary look her Master sent her way as she strapped back into her crash webbing. I can certainly see Anakin saying this: Barriss frowned and then gasped as the ship suddenly tilted and Anakin sent it hurtling towards the ground. Her stomach hit her boots before they leveled out close to the surface, the terrain speeding by on all sides. The words popped out before she could stop them. "We're not in a pod racer!" Anakin's laugh was full of delighted mischief. "Nope; we're in something better! Relax, you're in good hands." In 'good hands' is it? I'm afraid that I'm reading things into what are genuinely innocent phrases, particularly when I read this scene: Anakin, already free of his crash webbing, moved to stand next to Barriss before crouching beside her chair and quickly assisting her with the buckles of her own restraints. Their fingers brushed, freezing for a moment over the same buckle before Barriss pulled back as if burned. Anakin's lips thinned into a tight line and a moment later all of the remaining buckles sprang free, releasing her from the confines of the chair. He stepped back, rising to his full height once more as he gave her room to get free. A good idea, Anakin! If only other couples could deal with such awkward touching that way! He and Barriss finally talk about what Luminara said to the latter: She took a steadying breath and then smiled faintly. "Master Luminara spoke mostly of her own... indiscretions as a Jedi." "Her own?" He echoed the words, his surprise clear, though his tone encouraged her to proceed. Barriss nodded. "She's noticed how close you and I are getting and wanted to... to curb any kind of emotional attachment that might hinder our development as Jedi." "What did you tell her?" "Nothing." "Nothing." He sounded like he didn't believe her. Anakin stepped closer, one eye on the hatchway, his senses casting outward even as he lifted his hands to Barriss' shoulders. "What is it exactly she wants to curb, Barriss? What does she think she can do? This... whatever this is, is between you and I, isn’t something easily controlled." "I know that." Her hands came up to light encircle his wrists. "Don't you think I know that? I know what I saw when I was healing - you and I are entwined in our destinies. We're meant to help one another, I just don't know how yet." "You ground me." His hands shifted, caressing her cloth covered shoulders as they slowly slid towards her neck. "You... you make me feel whole, invincible, Barriss. How can I give that - give you - up?" She stared at him mutely as his hands gently cupped her face, his thumbs brushing over her cheeks. His azure eyes were solemn, conflicted, as if he fought an inner battle she couldn't see or feel. Yet the evidence was there. His fingers shook as they caressed her skin. "I couldn't bear the thought of losing you, Barriss. The very idea..." he paused, as if searching for the right words. "It hurts. I can't breathe. When I think about living a life without you... life seems pointless. You're in everything I see and everything I touch." "I don't-" That was the best part of this update! Things are certainly progressing with those two; but, as has already been said, not to fast or too slow. Well done, Jade_Max! I liked their reaction when they thought Luminara had seen them together, and Anakin's initial belief that she was in danger: "Barriss. Anakin." They jumped apart as if burned when Luminara's voice drifted in from the hatchway, but she didn't appear as expected. The Padawans looked towards the entry way, nervously exchanging a strained look as they silently wondered what the Master might have seen and heard, but Luminara didn't show herself. "Master?" "Come here." Barriss moved forward but Anakin's hand shot out to grasp her arm. He shook his head once, imperceptibly, his lightsaber already in hand, before stepping forward cautiously. He motioned her to one side of the hatchway, mindful of the Master's comments about Geonosians, and took up position. Peeking out, he encountered Luminara's amused - but approving - gaze. Luminara beckoned with one hand before turning away, crouching low and disappearing from sight. "Really, Anakin," Barriss scolded with a grin, "don't you think I'd know if my Master was in any danger?" His smile was sheepish. "Sorry; habit." If the earlier bit wasn't enough, we have Barriss wondering about herself and Anakin: Whatever was happening between her and Anakin, it was like wild fire. The more time they spent together, the larger it grew and she knew no matter what her Master tried, curbing it would be next to impossible. And a part of her, a very secret part, didn't want to curb it - she wanted to see what would happen if it was given free rein to grow. Hmmmm! Luminara's explanation of Geonosian society was very good, and explained that part of Episode II for me: "How many Geonosians live in a hive?" "Several thousand, possibly tens of thousands, depending on the size of the hive. The cluster we're facing is likely to house several hundred thousand - possibly over a million." Anakin and Barriss exchanged looks and Barriss spoke before he could. "And we're supposed to pass through undetected?" Luminara's answering smile was faint. "Not completely. Geonosians are pacifists by nature. They engaged in combat only when threatened and tend to use swarm tactics. Don't misunderstand me," the look she pinned on them was deadly serious. "They will kill you if you make it necessary. They will also, likely, choose to capture you for their games rather than kill you so you can entertain the entire colony and not just themselves. They are society oriented, almost fanatically so, and will sacrifice themselves for the greater good." "Sounds like a weakness." Anakin snapped his jaw shut as Luminara turned glittering eyes his way, her hood casting her feature in shadow and lending her a more dangerous appearance than usual. "It is, but it is also their strength. They think nothing of their own lives, Padawan Skywalker. I'm trusting you to obtain the information the council needs and to send it off before doing something rash." Good. Anakin is perfectly in character with his mention of secondary meeting points: "And our secondary meeting point." "You say that as if you often use a secondary meeting point, Anakin." He shrugged with a half-smile. "Master Obi-Wan and I often find our primary point of exit is... obstructed." Good to see that Luminara knows what she's doing, with a proper plan: "Geonosians are space worthy, correct?" Luminara shook her head. "They are not. They do travel with others and are advanced enough to encourage trade. Their hangar bays should be here-" she touched a part of the map almost on the other side of the complex from where she figured them to be. "Of course, if I'm right, Obi-Wan will be here." Another finger touched the map and both Padawans winced. They'd landed almost in the middle. Luminara would need to backtrack with Obi-Wan to get to the landing pad if they couldn't reach the Nabooian ship. "Would you like a diversion, Master?" Anakin's eyes glittered. "I'm certain we could arrange something." "If you haven't heard from me in thirty minutes, I'll take you up on that." Luminara slapped her hand against the dirt, obliterating her crude drawing. "Questions?" Both Padawans shook their heads and Luminara nodded once. "Then may the Force be with you." Good to see that she's a proper leader! And good to see that Barriss made clear that while she would certainly talk with Anakin about what's happening between them, it would have to wait till after the mission: They shared a look and Anakin opened his mouth to speak - to continue their earlier conversation. Barriss placed her hand over his mouth. "Not here. Not now. You and I both know the cost of traveling the road you’re asking me to take. When this mission is over, once Master Kenobi is rescued, you can try and convince me to give up my dreams - or to alter them." His eyes flared as if she'd struck him, but her words held a wisdom Obi-Wan usually voiced. Reluctantly acquiescing, Anakin nodded and forced himself to sweep his wayward emotions into the back of his mind. Barriss turned away as Anakin composed himself, struggling against the hurt her words had released. He couldn't afford to be distracted and while having this discussion now would have helped him, he knew why Barriss didn't want to get into it right then. And, more importantly he respected it. Well done, Barriss! I'm really getting to like that character here. This is far, far better than Anakin and Padme in Episode II! Anakin was in character with his comments about the droid manufacturing plant: "You sound like you've seen one of these before." "Close enough." Anakin's smile was grim as he waved one hand at the scene below them. "It's like the slave markets back on Tatooine. Different process, but same goal. Automatons that will follow orders and come to their Master's call." "They don't make slaves the same way; I don't-" "Don't they?" He pinned her with a cool look. "You don't know, Barriss. You'll never know what it was like. No one should. Slavery is wrong - the republic is right about that. You're standing here gawking at this creation process with the same look - minus the covetous nature and I thank you for that - with which I was faced every day of my life until Master Qui-Gon rescued me." "Anakin-" He held up his hand and sighed. "You didn't deserve that, I'm sorry." She blinked, surprised, but Anakin turned away. He said he was sorry. You're growing up, Ani! Good to see how clever Barriss is, she detecting a possible ambush for the Jedi: "What if they're just loading them onto the droid control ships we saw when we came in?" "Do you remember how many there were?" "Over a dozen." Barriss' eyes widened in sudden shock. "Anakin, what if this is a trap? With so many droid control ships, the army they control will be enormous and Jedi are mortal - no matter how much the council preaches otherwise." "I doubt they caught Master Obi-Wan simply to lure the Jedi in." "But what if they did?" "Then we're all in trouble. Come on - we'd better find high ground and report our findings - and your hunch." Good for her! The question now is whether she and Anakin can warn the Jedi in time...
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KELIA Title: Host: 20 Ques Bet Your Knowledge PT Rewrite Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/20 3:46am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08 - Date Edited: 2/20 3:47am (1 edits total) Edited By: KELIA
	"I doubt they caught Master Obi-Wan simply to lure the Jedi in." So certain are you? Never "assume" Anakin. Especially when the Sith are involved. once Master Kenobi is rescued, you can try and convince me to give up my dreams - or to alter them. Uh oh. Barriss has issued a challenge...and we all know how Anakin responds to a challenge! I hope his growing desire doesn't interfere with the mission at hand. Great update -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 Undue Circumstances: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28530583/p1/?10
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 2/20 4:12am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	Loved the description of the hive. Loved that Barriss didn't fall onto the conveyer belt but leapt across. The difference between a Jedi and not. Loved too that Barriss recognizes the dangers in their relationship. Anakin is so intense, as always. Great job. Looking forward to more! -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 6/28/08 Fragments of Illusion- http://boards.theforce.net/bts/b10475/28456473 updated 8/16/08 Freeze frame - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b10476/27820434 Master to jedidas3 Impeach Bush!
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VaderLVR64 Title: Fan Fic Manager Digging out from Fay Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/21 6:22am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	I agree with your other readers, a great description of the hive! Another superb chapter! -----signature----- If you have to choose between tears and laughter, remember that laughter burns more calories. They call me NANA Vader. At least she doesn't lack confidence...
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LuminaraFan4Evr Registered: Sep '06	Date Posted: 2/22 7:57pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	I like the characterization here, and the description of the hive is great, as well. Thanks for the PM! -----signature----- Proud Member Of The Lumi Fan Club I'm a Lumi/Wan shipper. If you are too, PM me! "If God had meant for you to have just one cookie, you wouldn't have two hands." - My Grandpa
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HandmaidenVeme Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 2/25 7:27pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	Loved the update. I agree with all your other readers, you brought the hive off of the monitor and into the room... -----signature----- Angel #1 the "Mischievous" one "Anakin Skywalker's Towel Girl" Team Edward!
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EverydayAngel Registered: Sep '06	Date Posted: 2/25 8:52pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	Brilliant I really like how the story is moving along. Barriss hunch about the Jedi trap; them putting aside their feelings, for now, to get the job done; the discussion & touching on the ship before Luminara called. Love it. I also liked this line: "It was the joy of knowing you were in your element, of wallowing in something in which you were unmatched." I like when Anakin flies.
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Jedi Trace Title: • SouthEast RSA • Fan Fiction Manager Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 3/4 11:32pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08
	Barriss placed her hand over his mouth. "Not here. Not now. You and I both know the cost of traveling the road you’re asking me to take. When this mission is over, once Master Kenobi is rescued, you can try and convince me to give up my dreams - or to alter them." Smart girl. Although she might regret putting that particular ball in Anakin's court. Excellent update! I can't wait to see how this mission plays out between them. -----signature----- Captain of the Cade Brigade: "Always bringing up his rear" “In this world, you must be oh so smart or oh so pleasant. Well, for years I was smart. I recommend pleasant.” ~ Elwood P. Dowd
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Jade_Max Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 3/12 10:29pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08 - Date Edited: 3/12 10:41pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jade_Max
	Raptor517 – I admit it, I made up most of my description of the hive based on what I saw in the movies - but I’m glad it fit Alkibiades –Keeping them progressing without stalling – but without going too fast, is indeed the hardest part of this. I’m glad you feel the pacing is just right! Ocelotl_Nesto – Indeed, a stronger partner; though it doesn’t appear that they’re intent on being captured – not just yet anyway. And it helps that Barriss has a lightsaber too laughs Mira_Jade – I can certainly PM you when I update grin glad you’re enjoying it! PadawanMom5610 – You’re most welcome. The hive was a fun part of this update, though mostly made up based on what I’ve seen in the movies. Kevin_Solo – Glad you’re enjoying it! Luminara’s perception is certainly one of the things I intend to play on in this quite a bit. I'm afraid that I'm reading things into what are genuinely innocent phrases LOL! No worries. Some of them are supposed to be misinterpreted That was the best part of this update! Things are certainly progressing with those two; but, as has already been said, not to fast or too slow. Anakin’s trying to push, but Barriss is certainly level headed enough, and wary enough, of the whole deal to slow him down. Though things might get a shove one way or the other before this is through I liked their reaction when they thought Luminara had seen them together, and Anakin's initial belief that she was in danger Thanks! Luminara's explanation of Geonosian society was very good, and explained that part of Episode II for me Thanks! Good to see that she's a proper leader! And good to see that Barriss made clear that while she would certainly talk with Anakin about what's happening between them, it would have to wait till after the mission Ah, but did she? arches an eyebrow Well done, Barriss! I'm really getting to like that character here. This is far, far better than Anakin and Padme in Episode II! bursts out laughing I wouldn’t dare compare my work to George’s - but I am flattered you think so. Barriss is certainly becoming one of my most favorite characters. Not to say that I don’t like Padmé, but I have a soft spot for Barriss in this KELIA - They make a lot of assumptions, don’t they? Especially Anakin, but then, he’s still young – he’ll learn Uh oh. Barriss has issued a challenge...and we all know how Anakin responds to a challenge! I wondered if anyone would catch onto that Someone should put Barriss on notice lol! dianethx – There are many differences between Jedi and non-Jedi and this story allows me to showcase them. Barriss jumping across the conveyor is something Padmé would never have been able to do, but in a way even if she’d dropped down onto it, things would have been different – the Geonosians aren’t exactly hunting the Jedi - just yet. VaderLVR64 – Thank you! LuminaraFan4Evr – Thanks! HandmaidenVeme – Thank you EverydayAngel – Everything has a time and a place, and Barriss is certain that the time and place for her discussion with Anakin isn’t now But then, that could change as things progress. "It was the joy of knowing you were in your element, of wallowing in something in which you were unmatched." I like when Anakin flies. Thanks! Jedi Trace – LOL! Indeed, I agree that Barriss is going to regret putting the ball in Anakin’s court – but then, what would I know, I’m just the author laughs Alright, on the hive thing… Believe it or not, I took what I saw in Episode II and turned it into Luminara’s explanation. The truth is that the Geonosians are a war-like society and they’re space faring. I just twisted it for my own use chuckle If you look it up in the Wiki I’ve taken George’s creation and twisted it. Not that it’s a bad thing, but I’m glad everyone enjoyed it! -----signature----- First Love, Last Love - http://boards.theforce.net/Fan_Fiction_Resource/b10304/20496232/?28 Don't think, write. And have faith that your subconscious mind is smarter than you.- lazy RIP my little Nibbler
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Jade_Max Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 3/12 10:30pm Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated Feb 19/08 - Date Edited: 3/13 6:11am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jade_Max
	Across the hive, in an almost completely opposite direction, Luminara crouched in the shadows of the archway leading into the prison complex. She'd masked her Force signature with difficulty, feeling the presence of an individual she had thought long dead - and now knew to be so. His presence was disturbing as his signature was twisted and tainted. Count Dooku. Lurking, gathering intelligence, she forced herself to breathe evenly as she watched the guards. Ever thirty seconds they roamed in front of three cells, rotating through their patrols in rather pathetically predictable patterns. One cell in particular was veered away from, as if they didn't dare approach to a close enough distance to see who was inside. Luminara already knew. She'd felt the pull of Kenobi's pure presence from the ship well before they'd landed. Their friendship had been built and forged in difficulties, both physical and mental, through which they had supported one another. What she hadn't told her Padawan was that the relationship she and Obi-Wan had formed was one that still continued to this day - and was done without the approval or knowledge of the council. It was one reason she had no problems tracking him - or he her. It was an unacknowledged and denied part of their relationship. It was something better ignored, controlled and regarded as non-existent - except in times of adversity. One of those times was now. Cloaked in shadow, Luminara carefully drew the Force around her. She was careful to do so slowly, to prevent the ripples she knew Count Dooku would feel. Once she had enough power for her needs, that power was harnessed into her own body. With a careful flip, she threw herself into a roll as the guards passed beyond sight for several moments. When they reappeared, she was inside the holding area several meters from the holding cell in which Obi-Wan was being held. She moved as the sentry turned away, distracted by something one of its companions had said - or rather it thought its companion had said. Luminara didn't have Obi-Wan's affinity for making other people believe what he wanted them to believe; for affecting their minds. She did however have other skills at her disposal and she used them now. Channeling the Force through her body, she called upon it to leap into the shadowy overhang of Obi-Wan's prison. Flattening herself against the dome, she slid partway back until she was positive she was completely cloaked in darkness. Geonosians weren't known for their observation skills - it was something she was counting on. Placing her palms flat against the rocky substance making up Obi-Wan's cage, she pushed, focusing on the tiny grains of material between them. The granules rotated in a small, silent circle, gathering momentum before Luminara carefully directed them down. The grains acted like a boring tool, digging into the surface quickly and without a sound. Several minutes of intense concentration later, they were through and she had a peep hole. A less disciplined Jedi would have gasped at the sight she beheld. As it was she remained silently stoic, listening as the words filtered to her ears. Sometime during her boring project, Count Dooku had appeared in Obi-Wan's cell and, if she heard him right, the older Jedi now Sith, was trying to bring Obi-Wan to his side. "-would never join you." Obi-Wan's even words made her smile, even though she hadn't caught the whole of what was being said. Obi-Wan was an idealist, a man who believed in the system so completely that the dark would never tempt him. There was nothing in him to tempt. Dooku's next words were muffled, distorted by the small hole and unclear. She listened, amplifying her hearing with the Force and the words began to come through clearly. Alarmingly so. “- knew all about the corruption in the Senate, but he would never have gone along with it if he had known the truth as I have.” Not Obi-Wan then. Who had they been talking about? “The truth?” "The truth. What if I told you that the Republic was now under the control of the Dark Lords of the Sith?" "No, that's not possible. The Jedi would be aware of it." “The dark side of the Force has clouded their vision, my friend. Hundreds of Senators are now under the influence of a Sith Lord called Darth Sidious.” What Dooku was saying began to penetrate beyond simple listening and a chill stole over her. What if he was right? What if he wasn't lying? There was something in his speech that rang true - despite the fact that his very presence seemed tainted with darkness. Sith were master manipulators, but could they make a falsehood ring as true sounding as this? She didn't know and a part of her denied the possibility. But the alternative, that Dooku really was telling the truth, was almost as horrific to contemplate. Below her, Obi-Wan turned on in the invisible cell, his restraints crackling at his wrists and ankles. “I don’t believe you.” “The Viceroy of the Trade Federation was once in league with this Darth Sidious. But he was betrayed ten years ago by the Dark Lord. He came to me for help. He told me everything. The Jedi Council would not believe him. I tried many times to warn them but they wouldn't listen to me. Once they sensed the Dark Lord's presence, it would then be too late. You must join me, Obi-Wan, and together we will destroy the Sith.” Luminara’s eyebrows drew together in silent contemplation as Obi-Wan denounced Dooku and the Count turned to leave. She didn’t focus on his words - they were likely some parting shot anyway - and instead turned over the conversation in her mind. If what Dooku said was true - despite how unlikely it could be - than they were all in greater danger than they’d supposed. Risking detection, Luminara stretched out to Barriss through their Master and Padawan link and focused on a single image. The council, one way or another, had to be warned. A hand darted out, catching Anakin's shoulder as Barriss clutched him for sudden support. He turned, catching her around the waist, and he eased her against one of the nearby pillars. Her hand was on her forehead, her expression pained. "What is it?" "My Master." Barriss flinched. "Something is wrong. Something is very wrong." Anakin cast a glance down the alternative hallways. "Would that diversion we talked about help now?" Barriss shook her head. "Not yet. This is something else. Something closer to home - something about Coruscant." Anakin watched as she struggled to understand what her Master was trying to tell her. "Can I help?" "Keep watch." "But if I-" "Anakin-" He was already shaking his head before she voiced her objection. He didn't speak, simply lifted his hand to cover hers... and lights exploded behind her eyes. Unconsciously, she controlled the exposure to the raw Force that Anakin channeled and directed it to where it needed to go. Anakin's presence was strong beside hers, supportive as it hadn't been before and didn't struggle against her control. A measure of his new awareness and what it had done to her the last time. The image her Master was trying to send her burst into sharp focus - only it was accompanied with words; something she'd never before experienced. The Senate may be under the direct influence of a Sith Lord. Warn the Council. Trap! Anakin's presence faded in her conscious mind and the message went with it, a if he'd grasped it and pulled it from the very fabric of the Force itself. Her vision returned and she found herself wrapped securely in Anakin's arms, pressed up against the pillar. His face was close, tilted towards hers, his eyes closed. His color was also ashen. "Anakin?" "I have to warn the Chancellor." Her grip on his twitched and he opened conflicted eyes to meet hers. "I have to warn them all!" Barriss balled her hands into fists, gripping a part of his tunic, and shook with every muscle, rattling Anakin's composure as she jerked him slightly off his feet and back to them with a hard wack. "Snap out of it! If the Senate's under the control of a Sith, than that Sith is a person of power." The facts added together quickly in her mind - and she didn't like the conclusion one bit. "Only the Chancellor has that kind of sway right now, Anakin!" "But he's not... he couldn't be..." Anakin shook his head, disoriented and reeling by her sudden attack. He wasn't really seeing her - but he didn't let go. Barriss shifted her grip, finding enough room to maneuver her arms between their bodies so she could grip him by the lapels. It was an interesting exercise when he had the height advantage on her, but somehow she managed to do it and jerked his face down and forward. Their foreheads connected forcefully with a dull sounding thud and Barriss hung on as Anakin's eyes almost crossed before righting themselves. "What'd you-" "Snap out of it!" The order was harsher for her low tone. "If the Chacellor is a Sith, he's fooled everyone - not only you. The Council could be in greater danger than you think." "Master Luminara said may be under the sway." Anakin seemed to be grasping at straws, but Barriss could tell his panic was subsided, his control returning even as she watched. "We can't be sure." "We have to tell them anyway." Barriss shook him lightly by the lapels. "We're almost at transmitting height. If My Master is right then this whole set up, including Obi-Wan's, capture is a trap for the Jedi; a way to lure us into a slaughter. They need to be warned!" "She just said trap, you can't know the context." Barriss searched his gaze. "Anakin, you saw the same images I did. The same cell, the same Sith who's holding Obi-Wan captive." "I don't know him." "Neither do I, but my Master did. I know it, I feel it - and she's worried, Anakin. If you'd look beyond your own self-centered outlook, you'd feel it too." "I'm not self centered!" "Then don't act like it." She released his lapels, her hands sliding down to rest lightly on his collar bone for lack of a better place - and no space to drop them further. "This is bigger than you or I, Anakin. Bigger and more dangerous." "Are you sure about that?" Barriss sucked in a sharp breath, her eyes widening when his head suddenly came down. She tried, in that split second to avoid his kiss, but she didn't move fast enough and Anakin was determined to make his point. She resisted him, attempting to fight both his insistent mouth and the zing that arced through her system with the touch of his lips. This wasn't what she'd been speaking of when she'd considered dangers, but maybe she should have been. The volatile chemistry between them exploded as she gave in, unable to escape pinned as she was against the pillar. Not that she wanted to escape. The force of the kiss, the urgency of it, coupled with the intimate press of their bodies fired the blood and spiraled her thoughts into oblivion. Despite the very danger of their situation, Barriss was lost in seconds to an embrace she hadn't expected or prepared herself for. The Force sang at the contact, igniting a fire within her that had nothing to do with physical yearning. She reached for Anakin unconsciously, embracing him with both physical and mental arms, and pulling him that bit closer. Anakin somehow tore himself away before the pounding of the blood in his ears carried him beyond the edge of sanity. Barriss clung to him, her breathing ragged against the bare skin of his throat as he was sure his was against hers. There was unfinished business between them, uncertainties, unknowns and the very real possibility of expulsion of the Jedi Order. But it didn't matter. Without words, the Force had made Anakin's case for him. Whatever it was that lay between he and Barriss, the urgings of the Force couldn't be denied. It wanted them together. It needed them together. And in a fashion neither quite understood, but their instincts seemed to grasp. What Anakin wanted to know was why the Force seemed to need this so desperately - not that he objected. If Barriss would simply agree and put him - and the Force - out of their misery the subtle insistences would stop. Or so he believed. Holding Barriss in his arms, he sneaked a look around. Their interlude hadn't been caught, they still hadn't been spotted, but the Force - closer than ever when Barriss was in his arms - had alerted him to both of their Masters anxiousness. But it wasn't something immediate and neither was in danger. It was like the Force was determined to prove him right. Something - the darkside in him - made him speak. "Still think that's more dangerous?" Her burst of laughter was muffled against his neck before she pulled back, her expression solemn despite the dancing of her eyes. "I don't know what's more dangerous." The mirth in her eyes faded into wariness. "We shouldn't be doing this Anakin." He eased his grip on her, allowing her to step off the toes of his boots and back to the floor once more. He cocked an eyebrow. "You're an eager participant for something we shouldn't be doing." Barriss flushed and dropped her arms from around his neck. "I... I can't seem to help myself." "Then you know how it feels." "Anakin-" "I know. Bad timing." He sighed and stepped back, scanning the area beyond her. Something - anything - to keep his gaze off her flushed face. "This thing between us isn't going to go away, Barriss. Each time I touch you it's like I can't stop - I don't want to stop. And with the Force..." he stopped. "I know." Her whispered acceptance was painful. "But we have a mission to complete before anything else." "Then let's send that message and collect our Masters before this place comes down around our ears." Barriss offered no protests as Anakin led the way towards the upper levels once more. There was nothing to say that wouldn't make things worse and in her most private of places where even her Master couldn't penetrate, she silently admitted that Anakin was right. Fighting whatever was between them seemed silly - pointless - with how volatile it was. But there lay the source of her caution. Would she be able pull away if she gave in and allowed nature to take its course? Could she do so and still remain instact, her heart free from entanglements? She knew nothing of love - not the way Anakin did - but what little she did know forced her to err on the side of caution. Something told her that a fling with Anakin Skywalker - an indiscretion as her Master had so delicately put it - wasn't something she'd be able walk away from with herself intact. So the question remained now as it had before; was it worth the risk? Luminara checked discreetly for guards before angling her lightsaber to the side and just above where Obi-Wan's cell was connected to the wall of the hive. Using the lowest setting possible on the hilt, she drew an outline of the hole she'd need to cut. The outline was then increased, the lightsaber blade cutting in just shy of all the way through as she made the entry point. Checking one last time for guards - and ensuring those outside the cell were occupied - and deactivated her lightsaber. A shift and a roll later, she lay just to the right of the outlined hole and pulled. The Force lent strength to her muscles as the hole cover gave way, coming out in her hands. Cut like a plug, it would fit nicely back into place once she and Obi-Wan had used it for escape. Placing the plug to the side, she peered into the hole. Obi-Wan still turned slowly in place, the binders on his wrists and ankles also Force Inhibitors; the shielded cage a final touch. His eyes were closed, his breathing even, and Luminara knew just by looking that he was meditating, centering himself for the hours to come. A smile crossed her lips fleetingly. He didn't yet know how those next hours would differ from what he imagined. The room was empty, no guards left on the inside after Dooku's visit, except for the video feeds that would be to a central location. Using a trick she hadn't needed to use for a long time, she momentarily blinded them. With the cameras disabled, even for a short time, Obi-Wan's escape would be noted more quickly, but there was no help for it. Dooku didn't need to know he was now facing two Jedi Masters - and their exceptionally strong Padawans. Luminara pulled herself through the hole head-first, lightsaber in hand, neatly tucking into a half summersault in mid-aid before she landed in a crouch. Perfect balance allowed her to make little sound and she used it here to her advantage. Bending to the base of the console, examining the controls and her lips thinned. She knew about Geonosians, but she didn't read their language. The green lights she guessed meant that Obi-Wan's restraints and force cage were still active. There was no help for it - she had no time to fiddle with the controls before they sent someone to check on the video feed. Obi-Wan's eyes flew open at the telltale snap-hiss of a lightsaber's activation. "Miss me?" "Ara! How-" "Later." Luminara told him sharply and thrust the blade into the control panel for Obi-Wan's cage. The lights flickered and abruptly died, releasing the trapped Jedi and eliminating the Force restriction. Obi-Wan landing on the balls of his feet inside the containment unit. He stepped out, and Luminara didn't give him the chance to ask questions. She turned, gesturing to the roof, and then leapt. Shooting through the hole, she rolled gracefully once out and spun, catching herself on the lip with one hand. Obi-Wan was right behind her, understanding without words the urgent need for speed. The moment he was through, the plug went back into the roof - not that it would matter. Only a lightsaber could do the damage she'd done to his cage controls. Luminara nodded back the way she'd come, opening herself to the link she and Obi-Wan had once shared. Using it - for she felt his acceptance of the necessity in the circumstance - she sent images of where they were headed, and the impression of absolute secrecy. An image of Anakin and Barriss came next followed by a transmitter. His nod of understanding was all she needed before she moved off. Following her earlier tactics, she distracted the already bored guards and led the way back towards the tunnel where she'd entered. Obi-Wan stuck close, almost on her hip, and watched her back. They had just entered the tunnel exit when an alarm sounded. -----signature----- First Love, Last Love - http://boards.theforce.net/Fan_Fiction_Resource/b10304/20496232/?28 Don't think, write. And have faith that your subconscious mind is smarter than you.- lazy RIP my little Nibbler
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VaderLVR64 Title: Fan Fic Manager Digging out from Fay Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/13 7:58am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated March 12
	Loved this: "-would never join you." Obi-Wan's even words made her smile, even though she hadn't caught the whole of what was being said. Obi-Wan was an idealist, a man who believed in the system so completely that the dark would never tempt him. There was nothing in him to tempt. Dooku's next words were muffled, distorted by the small hole and unclear. She listened, amplifying her hearing with the Force and the words began to come through clearly. Alarmingly so. “- knew all about the corruption in the Senate, but he would never have gone along with it if he had known the truth as I have.” Not Obi-Wan then. Who had they been talking about? “The truth?” "The truth. What if I told you that the Republic was now under the control of the Dark Lords of the Sith?" "No, that's not possible. The Jedi would be aware of it." “The dark side of the Force has clouded their vision, my friend. Hundreds of Senators are now under the influence of a Sith Lord called Darth Sidious.” What Dooku was saying began to penetrate beyond simple listening and a chill stole over her. What if he was right? What if he wasn't lying? There was something in his speech that rang true - despite the fact that his very presence seemed tainted with darkness. Sith were master manipulators, but could they make a falsehood ring as true sounding as this? She didn't know and a part of her denied the possibility. But the alternative, that Dooku really was telling the truth, was almost as horrific to contemplate. And then an evil cliffie at the end of the post! -----signature----- If you have to choose between tears and laughter, remember that laughter burns more calories. They call me NANA Vader. At least she doesn't lack confidence...
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 3/13 8:02am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated March 12
	What a thrilling and wonderful update! So the Force wants Barriss and Anakin together? How interesting. Luminara and Obi-Wan together - that is great, though unexpected (not totally so, but still). -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. I'm a writer, not a storyteller.
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PadawanMom5610 Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 3/13 9:00am Subject: RE: Tragedy on the Landing Pad - Anakin/Barriss, AotC AU - Updated March 12
	Great update. I loved it. I'm really curious about why the Force is so insistant on Anakin and Bariss being together. Will it be just as insistant about Obi-Wan and Luminara?
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