Author Topic: Dawn of a New Age:An AU of ROTS-if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - updated 10/27
Star_Angel 
Registered: Jan '06
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Date Posted: 2/2/07 8:52am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 1/30
They were right, this is very disturbing.

Another amazing update Milteck and thanks for the pm.

 

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Raptor517 
Registered: Sep '06
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Date Posted: 2/2/07 10:45am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 1/30
Black Clones with lightsabers who can annihilate the jedi order? Sweet thought, even though it's evil. Sounds kinda like the Cortosis armored Reborn from Jedi Outcast 2. Looking forward to the next post!

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
42103_Admiral Thrawn
Date Posted: 2/2/07 11:32am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 1/30
Star_Angel wrote:

They were right, this is very disturbing.

Another amazing update Milteck and thanks for the pm.

peace peace peace peace

Glad you enjoyed Star:)

Milteck

 

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
42103_Admiral Thrawn
Date Posted: 2/2/07 6:02pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 1/30
Raptor wrote:

Black Clones with lightsabers who can annihilate the jedi order? Sweet thought, even though it's evil. Sounds kinda like the Cortosis armored Reborn from Jedi Outcast 2. Looking forward to the next post!

cool cool cool cool

I did not use the cortosis armor, but I did get the dark clone idea from Jedi Outcast 2.
I wanted to give the Jedi a chance to defeat this force and having them with the cortosis armor would have doomed them all certainly.

Milteck

 

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The_Slilent_One 
Registered: Sep '04
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Date Posted: 2/2/07 7:02pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
excellent post. meessa want more!!! angel

 

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
42103_Admiral Thrawn
Date Posted: 2/3/07 4:02am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
I have just posted a new story on the forum titled Star Wars: Remnants.

It will be another epic story that will be expanding on, taking place five years after the Jedi Purges and will be written as close as Canon as possible.

Hope you enjoy

Milteck

 

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Darth_Kripp 
Registered: Oct '05
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Date Posted: 2/3/07 4:37am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
Mutual trust is the first step towards victory. However, the Jedi are not ready yet. They have much to learn.

 

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
42103_Admiral Thrawn
Date Posted: 2/3/07 2:41pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
Darth_kripp

Mutual trust is the first step towards victory. However, the Jedi are not ready yet. They have much to learn.

skull skull skull skull

They Jedi have a daunting challenge facing them, but unlike what happened in ROTS the strength of the Order will be present to defend their temple.

Milteck

 

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
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Date Posted: 2/3/07 11:26pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
Rise Post, I command you

Milteck

 

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
42103_Admiral Thrawn
Date Posted: 2/4/07 2:30pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
Luke: I cannot lift the post, its too big...

Yoda: Always review what cannot be done, do you hear nothing I say?

Luke: Lifting stones is one thing Master, posts are another

Yoda: No no different, only different in youd mind!!!!

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Darth_Drachonus 
Registered: Oct '05
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Date Posted: 2/4/07 11:55pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
Add me to the update list please

 

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VaderLVR64 
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Registered: Feb '04
20251_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 2/5/07 5:57am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
Great post, very intense!


Mace Windu was beginning to calm himself down a little bit as he replied to Master Yoda with a tone of disappointment in his voice, “Still, this is something you should not have kept from me.”

Master Yoda took this opportunity to address both of them saying, “An easy decision to hide this information from you and the council it was not. Believe it right I do to keep the death of Skywalker’s mother a secret. Qui-Gon Jinn believed Anakin Skywalker the chosen one he did as do I now believe the chosen one he is.”

Mace Windu heard Yoda’s words and accepted them as he confirmed with what he said as he omitted, “As do I now believe Anakin Skywalker is the chosen one.”


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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
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Date Posted: 2/5/07 5:56pm Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/2
VaderLVR64 wrote:

Great post, very intense!


Mace Windu was beginning to calm himself down a little bit as he replied to Master Yoda with a tone of disappointment in his voice, “Still, this is something you should not have kept from me.”

Master Yoda took this opportunity to address both of them saying, “An easy decision to hide this information from you and the council it was not. Believe it right I do to keep the death of Skywalker’s mother a secret. Qui-Gon Jinn believed Anakin Skywalker the chosen one he did as do I now believe the chosen one he is.”

Mace Windu heard Yoda’s words and accepted them as he confirmed with what he said as he omitted, “As do I now believe Anakin Skywalker is the chosen one.”

grin grin grin grin

I am overjoyed you enjoyed the updated Vader, and makes me feel like I succeeded in conveying the intensity that the special session between Yoda, Mace, and Anakin represents for the story.

This is also just beginning; the real suspense is still to come!!!

Glad you enjoyed

Milteck

 

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Milteck 
Registered: Jul '06
42103_Admiral Thrawn
Date Posted: 2/5/07 11:56pm Subject: Chapter 4 - Date Edited: 2/6/07 12:09am (1 edits total) Edited By: Milteck
The cloaked ship of Darth Maul came out of hyperspace and quickly approached the planet of Coruscant. The Sith line of ship was the same he had used before he had been slain on Naboo and Darth Sidious ensured that after a time it was returned to Kamino to be used by him once again. Darth Maul felt as if he was returning home as he knew the planet well while in the service of Palpatine. He had once been one with the darkness that had spread over the planet during his master’s reign. Darth Sidious had taught him how to mask his presence within the darkness and together they had dreams of covering the entire universe with the darkness that they embodied. To no longer lurk in the shadows, but to walk in the light openly after they had toppled the Jedi and replaced their archaic order with their own.

Darth Maul did not waste anytime as he opened communications and punched in the code to contact Darth Sidious’s contact on the planet. Darth Maul had to pause for a moment to think about how much things had changed. Now that Lord Sidious had been exposed, he was having to invade enemy territory to complete his mission. There was no place he could find sanctuary on this world any longer as the Jedi had taken back control of Coruscant, thus the Republic’s destiny was now once again under their control.

It disgusted Darth Maul how the Jedi justified their power and influence over billions due to a point of view. There was once a time when the Sith and the Jedi Order had coexisted as one, learning the secrets of the force to their own advantage. When the Republic was originally forged, a major shift happened where the Sith believed that they should possesses unlimited power to rule the Republic. The Jedi, however, believed that it was not their right to rule but to use their abilities to influence and protect the Republic. Before the Sith had been able to gain control of the Old Republic, much of their ranks were destroyed with the few remaining survivors becoming outcasts in the Republic. From that day on, the Sith prepared for the day when they would take back what was rightfully theirs and rule the galaxy with the greater power and understanding that force conveyed upon them.

Darth Sidious had understood this destiny and that men were meant to be governed by those who could wield unlimited power against them. What the Jedi would never understand is that their powers made them just as feared as the Sith to the common man, and that such power comes with the responsibility of using it to evoke their compliance. The Jedi’s refusal to accept this will forever make them vulnerable to the Sith as the Republic governs itself on the inadequacies of men who have only their positions in life to enforce its laws upon its citizens. Darth Maul understood that only through fear could a person truly be moved to be loyal to an ideal with the knowledge of any attempt to resist that ideal would result in their destruction. Someday the Jedi Order would meet their destruction at the hands of his master, or inevitably, by another Sith Lord who finally teach them the truth before toppling them into oblivion. Darth Maul only hoped that he would still be alive to see that day and stand by his Master’s side as he ushered in a new era of peace throughout the galaxy.

But the Jedi had prevailed against the Sith by destroying his Master before he could firmly gain complete control of the Republic. Darth Sidious had his hands around the Republic’s throat when Master Windu and Master Skywalker had used their skills as Jedi to destroy him. Feelings of revenge against the Jedi were now very strong inside Darth Maul, who wanted not only to avenge what the Jedi had done to the Sith all those thousands of years ago by hunting down and destroying them, but also to avenge both Darth Sidious’s and his own destruction. It was those feelings of revenge that marked his face with his dark, yet vibrant Sith tattoos that openly conveyed to those who gazed his image for his hatred of all things associated with the Jedi. The coldness inside him had been produced from the years of Sith training designed to take away all that he feared to lose, until now only the desire to consume everything with darkness was the only thing that fueled him to continue on. The ten years he had spent in seclusion on Kamino had reinforced his core beliefs in the Sith and his hatred of all things associated with the Republic.
The only true desire he had for himself personally, was that he hoped that the Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi would once again cross his path so he could have his revenge upon the lowly Jedi that had defeated him in battle. The humiliation of that defeat still haunted his dreams and brought unending chastisement from his master.

Once Darth Maul reached the orbit of Coruscant, he received an incoming transition from Darth Sidious’s agent Ysanne Isard as her pale and eerie face appeared on the view panel. Darth Maul requested the information from her saying, “Lord Sidious has instructed me to take care of his former assistants Mas Amedda and Sly Moore. I need all the information you have on them including where the likeliest place I might be able to find them.”

“Just a moment.” She replied as she pulled the information up on her consol. She decided to make some small talk with this assassin as the information was compiling, “You should be able to find these aids easily as the galaxy believes Chancellor Palpatine has been killed.”

Darth Maul ignored her comment regarding the lack of difficulty as there was always something to make these missions challenging especially if the Jedi became involved. His attention then turned to what was most on his mind as he asked, “Has Xio Jade contacted you yet about this mission?”

Ysanne Isard took notice to the question as she had not expected two assassins to be dispatched by Palpatine as this convinced her that he put great value on their lives. She raised an eyebrow to the question as she replied, “No she has not.” She then paused as all the information he required was now up. “I am transmitting the information you requested now.”

Darth Maul double checked his computer to confirm he was indeed receiving the required information he needed. Several seconds went by before the computer alerted him that he was receiving data with file names belonging to his quarry. He was thorough as he viewed parts of the files as they downloaded which was complete with addresses, maps, and pictures of what they looked like. He was very impressed with how complete the intelligence was and explained why Darth Sidious valued Ysanne Isard as one of his most trusted servants.

“Transmission received and verified.” He replied to her as he redirected his attention back to the view screen. “When Xio Jade contacts you, give her only the information for Sly Moore as I will personally take care of Mas Amedda.”

“Understood.” Ysanne Isard replied dryly followed by ceasing the transmission. Whomever that assassin was that Palpatine had sent was a cold man and with his facial tattoos and horns looked very intimidating. She wondered who that mysterious assassin true identity was and how he served Palpatine. There was one thing Isard knew for a fact was that Xio Jade was being set up and she would not survive whatever plans Palpatine had for her.

 

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Darth_Kripp 
Registered: Oct '05
23578_Darth Sidious
Date Posted: 2/6/07 1:32am Subject: RE: Dawn of a New Age: An AU of ROTS, if Anakin allowed Mace to kill Sidious - Updated 2/6
Good transition. I wonder what the Jedi will do: Anakin, who has made some connections with the Dark Side, will sense something, will he not?

 

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