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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/3/07 11:53am Subject: Diary of an exile , completed dec 28 memories and a last entry - Date Edited: 12/28/07 9:25am (56 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
	Diary of an exile Title: Diary of an exile Author: Earlybird-obi-wan Timeframe: after ROTS before and during ROTJ Characters: healer Master Aaqu Genre: Keywords: Summary: Disclaimer: Star Wars = George Lucas. Entry 1 evening. It is 4 years since I left the Jeditemple with in my possession a key to a cabin in the countryside on my homeplanet. The cabin belonged to a friend of mine, long dead. This entry I will write in his remembrance. I first met him when he was a week old and an initiate. His mother was from my homeplanet and of my race. He visited me numerous times as an initiate. One day he came to my office proudly telling me he had been apprenticed to Qui-Gon Jinn. Over the years they came many times to the healers ward to be treated for injuries. They saved many lives. They were like father and son. On a fateful day he came back without Qui-Gon with a blond-haired boy in tow. He introduced me to his Padawan. He was always complaining when he was treated for an injury. He was the best master for his padawan, teaching him the Jedi way. During a long recovery from a mission I helped him and he told me of a disturbing dream. He showed me a secret compartment in his trunk. He always prefered talking over fighting. When I felt a deep disturbance in the force I collected the key and fled to my homeplanet. I heard the news of the rise of the empire and the Jedi-purge. Today I mourn my friend; master Obi-Wan Kenobi. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 1/3/07 12:52pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Very good start! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/3/07 1:46pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	this is interesting is it continuing if so can you PM me with updates. Your stories are great. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/4/07 9:36am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile - Date Edited: 7/2/07 9:10pm (2 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
	First VaderLVR64 and Gkilkenny, thank you for the reviews Next here is the exiles second entry in his diary. They will be short/long and span some 19 years of history. Entry 2 It is four years and a month since I left the Jeditemple Yesterday I returned from a trip to my family. The Dunai still live in the wilderness but have modern comfort in their homes. My oldest brother celebrated his 136th birthday and is still in good health. When I left them he gave me an old holoviewer. . Today I watched the holonet. The G.E.N.(Galactic Empire News) was celebrating 4 years of a united empire. A history newsreel was showing the extermination of the Jedi through Order 66. Aayla Secura on Felucia, Luminara Unduli on Kashyyyk, Quinlan Vos on Bozz Pity and on and on it went and I remembered them all. I had treated everyone of them over the years when they were initiates, padawans and masters. At the end of this history the taking of the Jeditemple itself was shown. Clonetroopers blasting Jediknights, padawans and initiates, lead by a dark figure. A close-up revealed him and I cried. How could he! He was the chosen one. He would save the Jedi. He destroyed them. He was Anakin Skywalker. No He is Darth Vader. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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sherazade Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 1/5/07 1:27am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Please PM me!!!! this is very good! -----signature----- "Do what thy will, but shall harm none" http://groups.yahoo.com/group/DarkLuke/
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/6/07 12:25pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Wow 136 years thats a long life! -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/9/07 1:25pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Entry 3 It is more than seven years ago since the day master Fay died I will remember her today by writing in my diary She saved my best friend Obi-Wan when she died on Queyta. Later I discovered she was born on this planet being from the Dunai elder race, that is even more longlived than the Dunai. An elder of 800 years is not uncommon. She was discovered by Master Yoda 400 years ago as a 2 year old, having lost both her parents to a disastrous earthquake. She was raised in the temple and apprentice to master Junaari. She was an exceptionally gifted padawan. At 20 years of age she became a knight, one of the youngest knights in the history of the temple. The day she died, she was on a mission with Nico Diath, Jon Antilles, Knol Ven’nari and Obi-Wan to recover the anti-dote for the swamp-gas first used on Ohma-D'un. Little was known of her missions but the fact that she never used a lightsabre. Maybe she didn’t even have one. She became a nomadic Jedi since her knightingday and saved thousands of lives. But by giving the lifeforce to Obi-Wan Kenobi she saved millions, the day she died. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/10/07 1:29am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile - Date Edited: 1/10/07 1:29am (1 edits total) Edited By: Gkilkenny
	Master Fay sounded like a very nice Jedi Nice excerpt from her diary. Thanks for the PM -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/18/07 10:04pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Next entry ties in with my fic Ohma-D'un Entry 4 Yesterday one of the Dunai elders visited me. He told me to come with him as soon as possible. I packed my meagre gear and the old holoviewer from my brother and stowed them on one of the pack-husans of the Dunai. We had a long trip through the wilderness until we came to a ravine. We descended into the ravine on a narrow path and came in a wooded area. Shielded in these woods, was a home of the Dunai elder. I was welcomed by the master of this home and he said that he was Master Ere-Dun and that he was the brother of master Fay, who had warned him and told him to protect a Jedi-Healer. He said to me that I could stay in his house as long as I liked. That evening we watched the holoviewer. Darth Vader was telling an audience that he had killed the last Jedi-healer on Moniron. He had destroyed the little cabin of his old master Obi-Wan by setting it on fire and preventing the healer to escape it. As the planet of Moniron was of no importance to the Empire and was poor in resources no garrison of stormtroopers would be posted there. Master Ere-Dun said that members of the Dunai elder were hidden in the woods surrounding the cabin when Darth Vader and his troops set fire to the cabin. They had influenced his mind so that he thought that I was in the cabin. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/19/07 12:49am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Ha, Stupid Darth Vader. Dunai elder were hidden in the woods surrounding the cabin when Darth Vader and his troops set fire to the cabin. They had influenced his mind so that he thought that I was in the cabin. I knew he wasn't as smart and strong like he should be, if he was the Chosen one. No one could influence his mind. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 1/19/07 10:54am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Interesting update, looking forward to more! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/25/07 8:03am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Entry 5 I was sitting with master Ere-Dun on the balcony overlooking the gardens. Birds were singing and the splashing sound of the waterfall could be heard in the distance. It was a relaxing mixture of sounds. Master Ere-Dun told me that he had lost his parents due to an earthquake when he was ten years old. He was away on a hunting-trip with his uncle who had been the one who had told my parents of my great destiny as a healer. His sister Master Fay had been rescued by a Jedi and as she was Force-sensitive she was brought to the temple. I told him about my first teacher. Master Yoda. He found me and saw my Force powers. Yoda was my first master when I was an initiate. He had been a Jedi for over 700 years. I became a member of the Bear-clan and was trained by Yoda. I remember him as a very gentle being, always giving good advice. He was always patient with us. He was always friendly. The only thing I disliked was his ‘famous’ stew. Yoda trained me until I was twelve years old and became an apprentice. I was apprenticed to master healer Gli-Ra-Ond. He said I had the hands of a healer. He had recognised my potential as a mind-reader and helped me developing it. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/25/07 1:58pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	The only thing I disliked was his ‘famous’ stew. If it was made with ingredients from Dagabah No wonder!! -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/31/07 12:05pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Entry 6 We were sitting in the gardens and I told Master Ere-Dun of my Padawan-years. I told him of my first real lightsaber and how I constructed it in the caves of Ilum. I was in a dreamlike state and saw some dark disturbances in the far future and a luminous human being helping a young man. A dark shadow left a dieing being and he turned back to the light side. When I awoke I found my lightsaber ready and its blade was actinic white, the colour of healing. Master Yoda was my instructor for Lightsaber combat and as a padawan healer I went for the defensive Soresu form. I showed master Ere-Dun my lightsaber. It was still in a pristine state as it was never used for real combat. I told him of the trainings in the healers ward and how my potential as a mind-reader was developed. When I was 15 I could read the mind of all my patients after their permission. When I was 16 years old we were visiting my home planet Moniron and we discovered a Force-sensitive Dunai elder of only two year old wandering alone in the wilderness. He had lost his parents and when we went searching for them, we found them killed by villains. We brought the child to the temple and on a medallion around his neck was written his name: Kaagi Adin. Kaagi Adin became a therapist and was knighted when he was 27 years old. He was always cheerful and had a smile and a present for al his patients. When I mentioned Kaagi Adin Master Ere-Dun interrupted me and said that Kaagi Adin’s family was still alive and living in a cottage a days ride away by a husan. Master Ere-Din said that we could go to them next week. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 1/31/07 1:47pm Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	nice -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/1/07 5:47am Subject: RE: Diary of an exile
	Nice update! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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