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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/6/07 6:16am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	That was one of my favorite storylines in the comics! It had taken only moments to remove all signs of Obi-Wan’s presence, and that’s when reality punched Anakin in the gut. Obi-Wan was gone. Not dead. He would argue that Obi-Wan was alive to his dying day. Obi-Wan was missing, and considering no one believed that fact, he was likely to remain missing until he was truly gone, truly dead. Anakin could do nothing, boxed in by hard realities and painful awareness of his choices. That was really powerful, mostly because it's so true. It's that cleaning out of belongings that often makes the loss hit home. Poor Anakin! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 3/6/07 8:38am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Poor Anakin: just like in your other story "Never look back", alone again without his master -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/6/07 9:18am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Loved the rollercoaster ride of emotions from frustration to grief to anger. All over the map, just as it would be. I loved, too, the memory of Obi-Wan not thinking he should make a holocron, that he had no wisdom that he hadn't learned from Yoda or Qui-Gon. Oh, modest man to be so blind to his own greatness. I also loved that he kept that small case from Qui-Gon. How like him to be deeply committed to another person's memory but not outwardly showy about it. This was wonderful. You are such a good writer. Loved it. -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Veloz Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 3/6/07 12:37pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Oooh this was a very nice update I liked the way u described Anakin's struggle here, and of course i loved Anakin's memories of Obi Wan... these two truly were brothers by te time we see them in ROTS... so much was lost between them in Mustafar I hpe Obi Wan gets rescued soon, cause i cant take this torture Tnx alot for the pm -----signature----- "Hello there!" "Remember the Force will be with you..always" - Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH "Who's the more foolish...the fool or the fool who follows him?"- Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 3/6/07 12:46pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan - Date Edited: 3/7/07 12:03am (1 edits total) Edited By: Alley_Skywalker
	Ah, one of my face updates in this fic. You do a very nice job describing emotions. Anakin is so...lost...poor kid I liked Ani's convo with Aubrie as well. I think I've heard the name before but IDK. Is she an OC? Great update EDIT: I just noticed something. I think the prob I PMed you about isn't a coding problem but rather the result of me being listed twice on the PM list -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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Fifilla Registered: Mar '06	Date Posted: 3/6/07 1:24pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Another great update! Very nice description of Anakin's feeling. I think it must be extremely difficult for him hearing all the other people talk of Obi-Wan's death when he is so sure that his Master is still alive! (...)he teased, pleased with the answering sparkle in his master’s eyes, and quickly ducked away so that the descending hand could not tweak his padawan braid. How he hated that tug and how he now missed it. He missed the hand dropped onto his shoulder with the little squeeze that always followed. He missed the tight grin when they were about to spring a trap, or the queasy look in Obi-Wan’s eyes when Anakin was piloting. I love how Anakin remembers these little "unimportant" things about Obi-Wan! ... but you are mean, ending the previous chapter with such a cliffhanger and not telling us what happened to Obi-Wan! -----signature----- "There's always a bigger fish." Fear Of Failure - young Qui-Gon (WIP) > http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27642896 Padawan to Valairy_Scot
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JediMasterJessica Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/6/07 1:32pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	I feel so bad for Anakin, someone sounds desperate to save him. Great Chapter and thanks for the PM -----signature----- Proud lover of A/P, Siriwan, L/M, & TK/J Yo mamma is so stupid, she thought Jar Jar came with Pickles Pickles
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Jaded_Rose Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 3/6/07 2:15pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Somebody is lashing out here! However, Anakin's emotions are very realized, and understandable. His pain is also very apparant - I hope someone believes him before it is too late for Obi-Wan -----signature----- The pen is mightier than the sword, if it has been sharpened to a fine point, dipped in deadly poison and thrown from ten feet away. But really, you're better off with a sword. -America, The Book
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erikawr05 Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 3/6/07 5:40pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	great post Poor anakin. I loved the way you described his emotions and how he missed obi-wan. He remembered the amusement in his master’s voice as he had said, “I have no particular wisdom to leave for those who follow us. What I leave behind me as my legacy to future Jedi is you, my padawan, the Chosen One. If I am remembered at all, it will be for having been the one to train the best amongst us – assuming we both survive each other until the day you come into your own.” I loved this part great work
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obsessedwithSW Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 3/6/07 10:51pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Anakin was startled from his thoughts and he frowned. Obi-Wan had laughed at the idea. He remembered the amusement in his master’s voice as he had said, “I have no particular wisdom to leave for those who follow us. What I leave behind me as my legacy to future Jedi is you, my padawan, the Chosen One. If I am remembered at all, it will be for having been the one to train the best amongst us – assuming we both survive each other until the day you come into your own.” The words, as well as the warmth behind them, had stunned Anakin into stammering praises of his master’s wisdom. In typical Obi-Wan fashion, the Jedi had brushed them off. “What wisdom you hear from me is wisdom I learned from Yoda and my own master; I take no credit for they have taught me all that I know and it is their teachings I pass on to you.” “Yes, you are little more than a droid spouting platitudes and Jedi wisdom learned at its master’s knees,” he teased, pleased with the answering sparkle in his master’s eyes, and quickly ducked away so that the descending hand could not tweak his padawan braid. I loved the rememberances from Anakin and Obi's convo. very in character! -----signature----- Yes Darth Maul -bring sexy back! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JW8kOYvwVng Avid SiriWaner ! Stories in Bio
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son-of-kenobi Registered: Jul '04	Date Posted: 3/7/07 1:11am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	this is an awesome fic... -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/17494741/?0 http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/19281949/?12 Legion of Light : http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/29212634/p1/?8
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/7/07 12:16pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan - Date Edited: 3/7/07 12:18pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Ascal_Elessar
	Fantastic chapter, great job on getting inside Anakin's head. I actually feel sorry for him (which is highly unusual for me). Can't wait for the next update. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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General_Kenobi_66 Registered: Oct '06	Date Posted: 3/7/07 2:37pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Sorry it took me so long to reply Wonderful update-- I could really feel Anakin's emotios; you did a great job of getting into his head. VERY in-character for him. I anxiously await more, and Thanks for the PM -----signature----- Everybody has a photographic memory. Some don't have film.
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Luna_Nightshade Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 3/9/07 10:28pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	Beautiful as always, VS. I really liked how Anakin's first show of grief was missing someone by him when he slept. His commitment to Obi-Wan, even with everyone around him disbelieving, is beautiful and wonderfully Anakin-like. I really liked how the tidbits that made him Vader still exist here in his mourning for Obi-Wan. The poor boy loses so much so often. You write his anguish ridiculously well. Much , VS. My apologies for taking so long. It has been a rough couple days and I'm sloooooooow. I adored it as always. -----signature----- It’s dark now and I am very tired. I love you, always. Time is nothing.
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barriss31 Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 3/10/07 7:57am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Drama. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch7 posted 030607 The Tide of Battle is chan
	This was a great chapter. It almost makes me feel some sympathy for the little pipsqueak. The heartache and emptiness Anakin feels are almost palpable (not in an emperor-like way). You have a rare talent for making a reader feel the intensity and depth of a character's emotions. Also, I like how Anakin's bond and love for his Master begin to show his possesiveness and insecurity. He will not let Obi-wan go; Obi-wan can only be dead if he allows him to be by letting go. Certainly, the words of a grieving soul, but, ultimately, the words of a selfish child. And then we get into the final rant, "You lied to me. You said you'd be here and you're not. I want you and you are not here." How dare you, Obi-wan? How dare you be human and be hurt or captured when the Great One needs his ego stroked and his fears soothed. Yes, yes, I like very much. I hope your muse feels better soon so that it can begin to cooperate. Give it some chicken soup and two aspirins so that it can call you in the morning. Thanks for putting me on the pm list.
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