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Kenobism Registered: May '02	Date Posted: 9/27/08 1:13am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Siriwan. Drama. Humor. Update 090208 All is revealed, ready to move on
	Hi! I can honestly say that this story is leaving me speechless (in a positive way ) - and that despite the fact that I'm only slowly working my way through it. Now please excuse my lack of coherency as I'm not too capable of putting my thoughts into words here but I absolutely love the way you show Obi-Wan's inner strength and at the same time his vulnerability and don't even get me started on all the other characters (i.e. the discreet and not so discreet hints of Anakin's character which are there but aren't judgmental). Overall I just wanted to say that I'm amazed and thank you for sharing this gem with us -----signature----- She had always entertained the opinion that the combination of Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, skilled as they doubtlessly were, was like a silent invitation for trouble. You Can't Go Home Again: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29223384/p1/?4
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Veloz Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 9/28/08 4:41pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	Fantastic ending, simply fantastic For me, this said it all: No dramatic pause or triumphal swell of the Force marked the end of his story. It ended simply, with Obi-Wan rubbing his eyes and slumping back in his seat as Siri’s arm tightened around him. For a moment no one spoke. What words, really, were appropriate? The silence was finally broken, by Obi-Wan himself. He straightened up and looked at each in turn, ending with Siri. He gazed at her, savoring the moment to come. He had found the words that the others could not. Two words, deceptively simple yet with a wealth of meaning, punctuated by a smile. “I’m free.” The worst was behind him – and the future beckoned. I serioualy loved this story... thanks so much for sticking with it and finishing for us, and u betcha i'm gonna head on over to ur other story cant wait to see what u have in store for us there!! and thanks a lot for the pm, because i hadnt had a chance to check the boards much the last few days, and i hadnt realized u had posted it -----signature----- "Hello there!" "Remember the Force will be with you..always" - Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH "Who's the more foolish...the fool or the fool who follows him?"- Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 9/29/08 7:31pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	Absolutely gorgeous! I don't know what else to say. -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 10/8/08 12:37am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	Gkilkenny: Congratulations on a terrific story Thanks. earlybird-obi-wan: Again, , thanks. Raptor517: Simple and to the point, but loaded with meaning and feeling. That's what I was aiming for - thanks. Kenobism: thank you for sharing this gem with us ... thank you for coming by. I am definitely partial to Obi-Wan, but I think Anakin's flaw is that he has flaws that a Jedi can't afford. In a "normal" person they would have less potential for harm. Veloz: It seemed fitting to end on a soft note - peace has come at last. The triumphant horns and all have their place - but Obi-Wan's story isn't over. It's just the end of one chapter of his life - as much as one can say a chapter is over, for the events in one's life have repercussions well into the future. VaderLVR64: You don't need to say anything - just knowing you are enjoying it is enough. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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ObiWans_Gurl86 Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 10/18/08 7:56pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	Fantastic Ending to a Fantastic Story, Looking forward to the sequel very much. -----signature----- ObiWans_Gurl86 Obi Wan is the best Jedi Ever!!!! "The meaning of life is change."-Obi Wan Kenobi "Do or do not there is no try."-Yoda "Patience exists to be tested."- Count Dooku
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p_stotts Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 11/22/08 7:32am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	I just finished this wonderful tale, Valairy. I love how you depicted Obi-Wan's recovery and how he fought so hard for his sanity. Very realistic... or at least what I would imagine to be real. Great job! Thanks so much for sharing this. -----signature----- How many of you believe in psycho-kinesis? Raise my hand. - Larry the Cable Guy Proud master to Gkilkenny! Stories in my bio.
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 11/22/08 3:48pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	So Valairy... Whats next. I am looking forward to your next adventure into the world of Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. Please let me know when you begin. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 12/1/08 12:27am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi, Ani, Siri - drama, humor, comfort. Complete as of 090208.
	Obiwans_gurl86: I'm glad you liked it. The sequel is already up. p_stotts: I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was tough to write sometimes. Gkilkenny: Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon, eh? Well, I do want to finish two ancient stories that got up to 2 chapters and mysteriously vanished, but I seem to be concentrating on the sequel to this story instead. The sequel is Truths of the Heart which is overall much lighter in tone and will develop the romance more. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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