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erikawr05 Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 3/21/07 6:49pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	Great post , its good that obi-wan was able to catch up on what happened.
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ObiWans_Gurl86 Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 3/21/07 9:16pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	Oh wow I just caught up, wow I love this story its so sad but I love the great things said about Obiwan, He clearly deserves it, your doin a great job with this story, Can I be added to the PM list? I can't wait to read more excellent job!!! -----signature----- ObiWans_Gurl86 Obi Wan is the best Jedi Ever!!!! "The meaning of life is change."-Obi Wan Kenobi "Do or do not there is no try."-Yoda "Patience exists to be tested."- Count Dooku
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/22/07 1:01pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	Fantastic update, the description of the prison was so horribly vivid. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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Luna_Nightshade Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 3/22/07 10:01pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	First of all, my apologies for taking so long, V_S. I could give you the detailed description but let's just say that life gets angry if I turn my back for one second. I think I've successfully rescued myself and am back on track again. Beautiful treatment of the prison sequence in all its graphic, gory wonderfulness. I really liked Obi-Wan's musings on what lies beneath... Anakin being the street urchin, and then trying to find the good in Asajj. I only wish he had clung to that belief harder with his padawan... but alas. Alpha and Obi-Wan's interactions are heartbreaking as always, especially with the connection Alpha has made with the general. Oh, and this made me laugh out loud. “I think she doesn’t like you, for some reason.” Ah, I love understatements and sweet irony. Much , VS. Absolutely beautiful as always, and again, my apologies for taking so long. I need a Superman cape--it would make my entrances far more exciting when they're delayed. Here I am to save the day! ...or something. -----signature----- It’s dark now and I am very tired. I love you, always. Time is nothing.
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aabbccdd Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 3/23/07 4:38pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	nice update! i loved obi-wan's slow realization of his predicament. can't wait to see how you update this.
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Nimloth Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 4/3/07 6:56am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	What about a nice update, Valairy? I´m anxious for more reading!
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/4/07 2:07am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch8 posted 032007 Life takes a turn for the worst
	Nimloth: I love lurkers who come out of lurkdom! This one is absolutely wonderful and heartwrenching and I´m loving every word of it. – Thanks, in some ways, I think the second part is the best part. Gkilkenny: Funny you mentioned that “prison description” because I have actually avoided describing it so far, because I contradict myself and haven’t resolved that issue yet. We’ll find out the “atmosphere” is not all Ventress. Fifilla: Perhaps the clones are not all the same, they rather show individuality! I’m far from an expert on clones and the clone wars, but my understanding is that the ARC Troopers are more “individuals” than the “regular clones” and that’s the basis for my characterization. J_RO: the worse it gets, the more Obi-Wan will try to hang on to his sense of humor, at least until it’s beaten out of him. (oh, oh, reveal?) JediMasterJessica: I’ve set up the torture arc, now Ventress returns to wreck her evil on our heroes. VaderLVR64: You know how to make an author beam! Since you know the Jabiim arc, you know the reason (at least partially) why Ventress is what she is – not an excuse, as such, but certainly an explanation. I’d love to go into the sequel of Obi tracking her down, but if I do, that’ll have to be a sequel, since this story was supposed to be a Siriwan and I want to keep that emphasis. Dianethx: Oh, I admit I can write – it’s the story/plotting that I’m weak at. I'm always envious of your obvious skill at painting a scene and making me feel the emotions of the characters. I very much look forward to every chapter. – Thanks, I love exploring the inner self of the characters and how it affects their actions. This chapter was no different. I loved the buildup of the way Obi-Wan was becoming more aware of the situation and yet they were still trapped in that hellhole of Ventress's. Loved the last sentence! - Funny how my last minute additions often turn out the best – inspired by tiredness, I guess. Veloz: Yeah, humor in torture…that’s our Obi-Wan. He’ll do his best to maintain it, but the point will come…well, let’s say he’s one unhappy Jedi who fears he might be heading for the darkside of the Force. It isn’t easy to forgive someone who tortures you, and worse, others. Earlybird-Obi-Wan: The author is thinking “concentration camps” when painting the atmosphere, and yes, I’ve been to one (Dachau). Noelie: I would be tempted to call Alpha Ventress' pet she is treating him so well, at least in comparison to Obi-Wan. – Oh, – well, she doesn’t hate him. She hates Obi-Wan. If are not familiar with the comics, you probably don’t know why and you’ll find out. She’s really mean to those she hates. I hope that someone gets a clue soon. Too must Obi-torture is not a nice thing to contemplate. – No, I agree, but as I keep saying, the torture is not the point, the dehumanizing effects of it are. General_Kenobi_66: Really great to read this, for the descriptions of the more tortureous scenes are not in such detail-- more vague. That totally works for me. Me, too, I hate to think of what one could actually do to another person…and afraid what it would reveal about me if I could come up with some truly horrific things. So I won’t go there. Barriss31: never knew that in the canon stories Obi was captured by Ventress. Still though, it makes his character much more genuine and believable because he has been literally "through hell". Some of the most endearing facets of characters that become almost real are the fact that life has dealt them a really hard blow and they have survived and become stronger for it. – I agree, and that’s why the comics fall a bit short – they can’t get into character exploration. Truly, in the comics, Obi-Wan is truly fine, back to himself once he’s reunited with Anakin, though later on he gets obsessed with finding Ventress. Well, I’m sorry, I don’t think even a Jedi goes, “it’s over, let it go into the Force, hey, let’s go out and join the next battle.” ObsesssedwithSW: liked you diveregence following Obi's muings of how good and evil coinside. I envy writers that give you those side journeys. They are so insightful. – thanks. I sometimes wonder if I get carried away with those “side journeys.” erikawr05: Yeah, he catches up…and then he’ll be “beat up” so to speak. ObiWans_Gurl86: wow I love this story its so sad but I love the great things said about Obiwan, He clearly deserves it, your doin a great job with this story, - thanks. Can I be added to the PM list? Of course. Ascal_Elessar: Fantastic update, the description of the prison was so horribly vivid. Glad you liked it. Luna: Ah, I love understatements and sweet irony. Don’t we all! Aabbccdd: I guess you will just have to read to find out. Nimloth: Well, I don’t know about a nice update, but here you go. I’m still struggling a bit with the next few chapters and work has gotten busy enough that I have to – gasp – work when I’m at work. I’m going to try to post at least another chapter or two before I’m gone mid-April – I will have my laptop but I doubt I’ll have internet access. Chapter 9. The Calm Before the Storm With a shudder of revulsion and pity for those who came before and, in a sense, had never left, Obi-Wan drew a deep breath and blocked his awareness of his predecessors torment completely. As Qui-Gon Jinn would always say, focus on the here and now, and the pain of the past was just that – the past. He needed to focus on the present if he was to have a future. A Jedi did not sit around waiting to be rescued if there was any possibility of saving himself. Rescues were greatly appreciated, of course, but his first thought as always was how to save himself and Alpha. He rotated his head to stretch taut shoulder muscles, held too long in one position. The binders clasped his hands together behind his back, palms facing. He wiggled his hands experimentally, took a deep breath and tried to break them open with the Force. He wasn’t surprised to fail. No doubt they were Force-resistant, but there were other means of exit. The locks, however, were also Force-shielded. For the time being, at least, he gave up; turning his attention inward to take stock of his physical condition, for Force strength was at least partially dependent on the body’s strength. Pain, injury and exhaustion weakened the connection, which he decided more than explained his inability to do much in his current circumstances. Now that he gave attention to his physical well being, he realized he ached all over, not just in his shoulders and arms. Perhaps standing and moving around would loosen him up, so he slowly pulled himself to his feet, a bit surprised at how unsteady he felt. “Good to see you up on your feet, general.” “Good to be standing,” Obi-Wan returned, tentatively shifting weight onto and off his injured leg. “Painful, but good.” To his surprise, his clothing stiffly resisted the small movements, the usually comfortable and supple material feeling like a shell encasing him, almost like another layer of chains made of a thin coat of duracrete troweled over his entire body. He suddenly understood, shaking his head. It seemed that they had brought a fair amount of Jabiim with them, or more accurately, stuck on them. Perhaps like his padawan’s complaints that it had taken months to rid himself of the dust and sand of Tatooine upon leaving that planet, it might take nearly as long as rid oneself of Jabiim’s equally obnoxious surface. “I feel plastered in mud. You?” “No, not especially,” Alpha admitted. He had been wearing armor when on Jabiim; now he wasn’t. “Hmm. I have rarely been so dirty; my clothing crackles. I blame you, Alpha, for putting me in this body cast.” He shifted and tried to look himself over, sniffing in disgust though more at what he felt than what he smelled. “Blame accepted, general,” Alpha answered tolerantly. “I landed on top of you, whether you remember it or not. You were the one face down in the puddle.” “Yes, so that dent in my head reminds me.” Dry as the words were, Obi-Wan knew Alpha wouldn’t take offense. They had served together before and Alpha was well aware of his general’s dry humor and took it within his stride. “By the way – thank you for saving my life. Being encased in mud, as unpleasant as it is, is preferable to being scattered in tiny, extremely soggy pieces. I suppose I would have dried out eventually on my pyre, if there was enough left of me to burn – assuming, of course, it is even possible to light a funeral pyre on Jabiim.” “I foresaw that possibility of your death and wished to forestall it. I do not wish to see you die, general, if I can in any way prevent it. Flattening you into the mud was far preferable to seeing you in the midst of an explosion. Really sir, you take too many risks. That’s what we clones are for.” “You know my feelings on that.” “Sir.” It was an old argument, and one that could be made without any words uttered after all this time. Clones lived; clones fought; clones died were how Alpha saw it. Clones were still living beings and not mere pawns on a board according to the Jedi. In the end, the argument was academic, clones or not, sentient beings died in battle. “Well, we’re together now, probably equally miserable. Right now I wouldn’t mind standing in the middle of a downpour and getting washed clean of all this – filth. It must be worse for you if you’re still in your armor. I suppose you’re chained, too.” Obi-Wan’s attention was only half on the conversation, so he wasn’t looking at Alpha. “I’m not in my armor, sir, and yes, I am chained as are you. Besides the manacles, a chain acts as a leash so we can’t do much more than stand up or sit down.” As he had been speaking, the Jedi had been focused on his body’s signals, and his body wanted him to get off his feet. Carefully he lowered himself to the hard stone and sat with his legs drawn up to his chest to take the weight off his protesting leg. It was healing, but it was still painful to stand on for any length of time. That was the only demand he could satisfy. As to the physical discomfort, he could do nothing about the clothing coated in dried Jabiim mud and bodily wastes, a regrettable but unavoidable consequence of being chained with arms behind one’s back. As for mental discomfort: Obi-Wan was perfectly capable of avoiding any thoughts of what might and probably would come. Whether a clone had enough imagination to fear what was to come was uncertain. He would deal with Ventress when she came, not dwell on the possibilities and probabilities ahead of time. His focus now needed to be on a means of escape. His first action, perhaps, should be reaching for Anakin through the bond, for his padawan could then inform the Council of his and Alpha’s fate. The more plans for their rescue, the better, with Anakin serving as relay. Padawan? He stretched out, but there was nothing there. Anakin? He again reached out, but was again unsuccessful. He frowned, but he wasn’t worried. The bond was quiet…but quiet only, not severed. That was one comfort; he knew Anakin was unharmed. Obi-Wan was merely too far away or his access to the Force too weak to make a connection. It was disconcerting, and certainly not helpful, but not something to be worried about. He would try later. In the meantime…he could divert his attention, and Alpha’s, away from what awaited them. The dead had already warned him: unpleasantness lay ahead. Surely the dead would not object to the next victims finding diversion through humor. Pursing his lips, Obi-Wan said meditatively, “Filthy clothing such as I am wearing puts me in violation of the Jedi rulebook. I see no way to comply with Section 15 regarding proper dress for our, ah, upcoming negotiations with Ventress.” “Proper dress? Negotiations, sir?” Alpha was too polite to ask if Obi-Wan still felt feverish. “Subsection One of Section 15 of the Jedi manual: Personal Grooming. A Jedi shall strive to present a neat and orderly appearance at all times when dealing with sentients outside of the Order. I fear I am in serious violation of this rule.” The silence dragged on. Clones were not known for a sense of humor; for that matter, his padawan and a few others said the same for him. Alpha had shown a spark of two of appreciation at times; would he understand? Obi-Wan’s smile widened as Alpha finally responded. “Is there no exception for circumstances?” “Alpha – you do have a sense of humor. I suspected as much.” “Close association with you, General. It was inevitable.” “My padawan fails to understand my humor even after years of close association,” Obi-Wan noted, allowing a note of sadness into his inflection. “I have been known to totally throw Anakin by reciting some obscure piece of Jedi ‘rules’ at him. I have half-convinced him that this rulebook truly exists, yet he swears I have no sense of humor. I promised I would give him a copy at his knighting.” “Which section covers the requirement that a Jedi is to attempt to divert attention away from unpleasantness by joking when in danger? “Which section covers – what?” Obi-Wan was taken by surprise, then he suddenly chuckled. “Oh, that is Section One, I believe. A Jedi shall be solemn and attentive to duty at all times. A Jedi does not publicly display open joy, fear or mirth. A sense of humor is allowed only if kept concealed or when in captivity for the sole purpose of keeping one’s spirits up. A Jedi never loves or hates, remains courteous at all times, and is never an aggressor in a fight.” “Ah, I see. So what is the penalty for being inappropriately attired, sir?” “Subsection 12 Exception One does grant a Jedi permission to disregard personal grooming in a hazardous or hostile situation, so I believe no penalty will apply. Of course, as a Council member, I can override any of the rules when deemed necessary.” “Quite reasonable,” Alpha agreed. “Speaking of which,” Obi-Wan sniffed and wrinkled his nose. “I don’t suppose there’s any hope of Ventress letting us clean up, is there? Which of us smells worse? Our clothes positively stink, no surprise there since we’ve been all but living in them for some time. They do say sometimes the best offense is a good defense; I am sure the reverse must also be true, and we are pretty offensive. I find the touch of my clothing positively distasteful: I would rather be without.” He would shortly get his wish. ** In between bouts of conversation with Alpha, Obi-Wan tried to call to his padawan, but the bond remained silent, a pathway fading into mists and fog, a clear indication of great distance between master and apprentice. He remembered a time, early in his apprenticeship, when Qui-Gon had left on some solitary mission, he having been too young a padawan to accompany him. No one had thought to warn him how distance could mute the bond; he had nearly panicked until one of the Jedi masters had seen his growing anxiety and explained what was going on. He had calmed down until his master had next checked in, and then the unreasoning anxiety had rushed back. “Master,” he had stammered, his heart pounding when the comcall came through. “You’re okay – I was…,” he was worried, but a Jedi was supposed to control his emotions, so he had trailed off uncertainly. “Obi-Wan?” Qui-Gon had questioned, then seemed to realize. “Padawan, I am sorry. I never meant to worry you. I should have thought to tell you before I left.” “I wasn’t…,” great, now he was both lying to his master, and as good as telling him he didn’t miss him. “I was…I didn’t…” He flushed. “It was disconcerting for me, also, Padawan. I shall return shortly.” His master’s reassurance had allowed him to relax and get his focus back on his studies. Obi-Wan tried to remember if he and his padawan had ever been so spatially separated that the same had happened with them. Whether or not it had, he did remember speaking to Anakin about such a possibility during the first few years together when the Council occasionally sent him on a solitary mission. No, Anakin had never had cause to be anxious, only upset at being left behind, but he had been far too inexperienced those first few years to be allowed on missions. With that means of communication inaccessible, Obi-Wan figured it was in both their interests to keep their minds occupied with mundane things. Finding conversational subjects proved difficult, however. Alpha had little interest in galactic politics, the latest Holonet sensation or any other of the one or thousand miscellaneous subjects Obi-Wan tried to occupy the silence with. At first, Alpha thought the Jedi needed to talk, and he was perfectly willing to indulge his commander. A clonetrooper, especially an ARC Trooper was self-sufficient, neither needing not desiring another’s companionship, while perfectly accepting of the same, a result of being nurtured and grown as one among many. His commander, now, obviously felt a sense of companionship with his fellow captive. Alpha accepted that, and attempted to reciprocate the Jedi’s attempts at conversation. It didn’t dawn on him for a while that his general was more than capable of diverting his own thoughts; it was an attempt to keep his mind off their coming trial. Alpha thought about interrupting and saying that clones had no imagination and he, in fact, wasn’t anticipating or worrying about the future, but kept his mouth shut. The conversation was pretty much one-sided, with Alpha’s contributions simple, until they finally hit on a topic they could share. The Jedi and the ARC Trooper conversed on battle tactics and training to keep their minds occupied during the short time that Asajj continued to leave the two alone, no doubt expecting them to tremble and stew over what was ahead for them. Instead, Obi-Wan and Alpha occupied themselves with the “here and now,” not the sure-to-be-painful “what might come.” “What was to come,” came not long after. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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Fifilla Registered: Mar '06	Date Posted: 4/4/07 3:07am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	Yeah, an update! I loved the banter between Obi-Wan and Alpha - very nice! And a cute flashback to Obi-Wan's youth. Great chapter! ... but I have a bad feeling of “what might come” -----signature----- "There's always a bigger fish." Fear Of Failure - young Qui-Gon (WIP) > http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27642896 Padawan to Valairy_Scot
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 4/4/07 4:49am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	Loved the fake rules. That Obi-Wan was teasing Anakin about them and the kid didn't realize it is hilarious and incredibly sad, all at the same time. I liked that Alpha was sort-of joking right back at him. Certainly made the conversation much more lively. As for the clothing, I would imagine it would be smelly and uncomfortable. Plus how did they go to the bathroom if they couldn't get their clothes off and their hands were tied? Ewww. Loved the little backstory as well. Obi-Wan was so adorable. Looking forward to more even though I can imagine what will come. Great job so far! -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 11/2/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 4/4/07 6:23am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	A great update, but I expect NO less! “Is there no exception for circumstances?” “Alpha – you do have a sense of humor. I suspected as much.” “Close association with you, General. It was inevitable.” “My padawan fails to understand my humor even after years of close association,” Obi-Wan noted, allowing a note of sadness into his inflection. “I have been known to totally throw Anakin by reciting some obscure piece of Jedi ‘rules’ at him. I have half-convinced him that this rulebook truly exists, yet he swears I have no sense of humor. I promised I would give him a copy at his knighting.” “Which section covers the requirement that a Jedi is to attempt to divert attention away from unpleasantness by joking when in danger? “Which section covers – what?” Obi-Wan was taken by surprise, then he suddenly chuckled. “Oh, that is Section One, I believe. A Jedi shall be solemn and attentive to duty at all times. A Jedi does not publicly display open joy, fear or mirth. A sense of humor is allowed only if kept concealed or when in captivity for the sole purpose of keeping one’s spirits up. A Jedi never loves or hates, remains courteous at all times, and is never an aggressor in a fight.” “Ah, I see. So what is the penalty for being inappropriately attired, sir?” “Subsection 12 Exception One does grant a Jedi permission to disregard personal grooming in a hazardous or hostile situation, so I believe no penalty will apply. Of course, as a Council member, I can override any of the rules when deemed necessary.” “Quite reasonable,” Alpha agreed. I've always LOVED Obi-Wan's sense of humor! And your portrayal of him is spot on. As always! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 4/4/07 7:26am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	Obi-Wan is trying to keep calm I think he is worried about What is to come. At least he as Alpha to talk too. There would be nothing worse that waiting to be tortured on your own. Great update. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 4/4/07 9:03am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	yes, a great update again and I am glad he has an Arc trooper to help him -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Veloz Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 4/4/07 11:23am Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	Yay an update I loved how u wrote the interaction between Obi and Alpha... it's great to see Obi's sense of humor show, even in the most dangerous circumstances Wonderful chapter... i'm afraid to think what comes next Tnx a lot for the pm -----signature----- "Hello there!" "Remember the Force will be with you..always" - Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH "Who's the more foolish...the fool or the fool who follows him?"- Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH
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ObiWans_Gurl86 Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 4/4/07 3:59pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	YAY!! wonderful update, I am so happy Obiwan and Alpha are tryign to be positive even tough the "what to come" may not be very good at all. extremley godo chapter I love this story so much!!! I can't wait for another update. -----signature----- ObiWans_Gurl86 Obi Wan is the best Jedi Ever!!!! "The meaning of life is change."-Obi Wan Kenobi "Do or do not there is no try."-Yoda "Patience exists to be tested."- Count Dooku
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/4/07 5:07pm Subject: RE: What the Heart Hides. Obi-Ani, Siriwan. Ch9 posted 040507 Yes, an update!
	As Qui-Gon Jinn would always say, focus on the here and now, and the pain of the past was just that – the past. I wise man, Qui-Gon Jinn was “My padawan fails to understand my humor even after years of close association,” Obi-Wan noted, allowing a note of sadness into his inflection. “I have been known to totally throw Anakin by reciting some obscure piece of Jedi ‘rules’ at him. I have half-convinced him that this rulebook truly exists, Well I really don’t blame Anakin whatsoever. Not only because Obi-Wan is obsessively meticulous about the rules but also ‘cause well…Obi-Wan’s sense of humor can be really hard to understand a lot of times. I hate it when people sdo that ‘cause I’m always unsure if it’s safe to take it as a joke just in case they’rebeing serious. “Obi-Wan?” Qui-Gon had questioned, then seemed to realize. “Padawan, I am sorry. I never meant to worry you. I should have thought to tell you before I left.” You’re so naughty Qui “I wasn’t…,” great, now he was both lying to his master, and as good as telling him he didn’t miss him. “I was…I didn’t…” He flushed. See Obi-Wan? This is what happens when you try too hard to be the “perfect” Jedi. “What was to come,” came not long after. waits in gleeful anticipation that she realizes is nether nice nor very befitting of a Jedi Great update -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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