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Laine_Snowtrekker Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 1/29/07 3:49pm Subject: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/12 - Date Edited: 2/12/07 7:16pm (8 edits total) Edited By: Laine_Snowtrekker
	Challenge: Seven Dwarfs and Obi-Wan Title: Mission Complete Author: Laine_Snowtrekker Characters: Obi-Wan, Anakin (mostly) Genre: Not quite sure Timeframe: The Saga Notes: Not my sandbox, not my toys--but fun to play with NOtes2: Obi-Wan sneezes, snores, and is happy. I hope this counts. Mission Complete Obi-Wan opened his eyes and the first thing he saw was the familiar ceiling of the Healers' Ward. He groaned softly and turned his head. For that movement, he was rewarded with a wave of pain and the second sight he saw: his Padawan, curled lankily in the plastichair next to the bed. "Anakin," he said quietly. Anakin instantly awoke, unfolding himself from the chair. "You're awake!" "It would be appear so," Obi-Wan said. He took in a deep breath, winced, and coughed. Then he sneezed. "That's like the ten millionth time you've made some noise," Anakin said. "That's impossible, Padawan. I have not sneezed that many times," Obi-Wan said. He looked at Anakin quizzically. "Have I?" "I counted coughs and snores as well, Master," Anakin said patiently. "The Healers say that you're their noisiest patient." One of Obi-Wan's eyebrows arched. "I've heard that certain apprentices are in the running for that particular title," he said. A slight blush tinged the teen's cheeks and his eyes grew defiant. "I do not whine, Master! I just don't like shots!" Obi-Wan sneezed again. "Did you speak to the Council?" Anakin nodded. "Yes, Master, while you were unconscious. The mission was a success--you know, peace kept, evil held at bay. You have been quite pleased if you had been awake to know it." "What do the Healers say?" "The main healer said you'd be fine in a few days," Anakin said. He flashed one of his wicked grins. "The giggly apprentice healers want to keep you longer. I don't know why they'd want to keep you, Master. I'm a lot less trouble." "No, Anakin. You're a different type of trouble," Obi-Wan quipped. He looked at Anakin closely. The Padawan was still wearing the robes he'd worn on the mission, which by now had been stained, ripped, and slept-in. "You haven't slept, Anakin," Obi-Wan said. "Couldn't sleep with all the noise you make," Anakin teased cheerily. But his eyes belied his having another feeling altogether. Obi-Wan frowned slightly before sneezing again. "You should shower and rest," he said, coughing. "Not while you're in here," Anakin said, shifting uneasily in his chair. "And don't be so grumpy, Master! You do the exact same thing when we've switched places." "Anakin, it wasn't your fault," Obi-Wan said gently. "Yes, it was," the teen protested. "I didn't get there fast enough--all that water, and it was so cold." He pulled his cloak tighter around his shoulders. "And there was so many of them--I can hardly believe that we got out." "But the point is that we did get out," Obi-Wan said. "And we got out together." He reached over and put a hand on his Padawan's shoulder. "The mission isn't over until we're back together and safe, Anakin, and now we are both." He sneezed again, then tried to smile. "Did you save the speeder?" Anakin's lips quirked into a smile. "Mostly." "Now do you understand why I hate flying?" Obi-Wan joked, looking at Anakin to ensure the boy wasn't upset over what he'd said. He wasn't; he was now grinning. "Together?" Anakin asked. "As a team?" "Always," Obi-Wan said, and coughed again. * Obi-Wan watched silently as his old friend opened his eyes; he was frightened, nervous, happy at this first meeting between friends and former enemies. "Obi-Wan?" Anakin asked. He looked down at himself, a look of shock on his face. He glanced at Obi-Wan. "I have all my limbs," he said, a note of suprise in his voice. Obi-Wan walked over to his former apprentice and wrapped him in a hug. "I'm so sorry," he said softly as he let go. "Master, it wasn't your fault," Anakin started. "Yes, it was," Obi-Wan protested. "I chose to not see. I let you fall so far! I..." Anakin held out a hand to stop Obi-Wan's words. "Obi-Wan," he said, and the name sounded good coming from him, to both sets of ears, "don't be grumpy!" He flashed one of his formerly famous grins. "It was my choice, not your training. If not for you, I wouldn't have known what the Light was like. The point is, Obi-Wan, that we're together and safe." The man who was once Vader sobered, regarding Obi-Wan with solemn blue eyes. "I'm the one who's sorry," he said. Both were silent for a moment, remembering the past. Obi-Wan's lips twitched into a truly happy smile. "Let's tell Luke that the mission's over," he said. "I was thinking the same thing," Anakin said. "Great minds think alike, then," Obi-Wan said. "How about you and Master Yoda go first? He'll be expecting the both of you to be there." Obi-Wan shook his head. "We'll go first, Anakin. But I think he's expecting you, too." * They watched as Luke turned, leaned against a tree, and looked off into the forest. Obi-Wan and Yoda appeared first, and glimmering in the darkness of the early night, smiled at Luke. Obi-Wan's smile grew wider as another man joined them--a Jedi, a father of a hero, a man named Anakin Skywalker. They all nodded at Luke, grinning like they'd landed half a ship again, and watched as Leia came, slung her arm over her brother's shoulder, and took him back to the victory celebration. Anakin turned to Obi-Wan. "We're a team again," Anakin said. "Right?" "Always," Obi-Wan replied. ________________ What do you think? -----signature----- Stealth and subtlety work well, but for making lasting impressions, a blaster does just fine. -Han Room full of gold and jewels, and Dr. Daniel Jackson finds the one book. -Cam Palso's #1 Fan JO: RS1, Admiral, SC Fanfics are linked to in my bio
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corellian-jedi Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 1/29/07 4:34pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Somewhere between TPM and AOTC
	"The giggly apprentice healers want to keep you longer. I don't know why they'd want to keep you, Master. I'm a lot less trouble." Awww ... these two are awesome. I loved the ending - very sweet. -----signature----- In hatred as in love, we grow like the thing we brood upon. What we loathe, we graft into our very soul.
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 1/29/07 4:52pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Somewhere between TPM and AOTC
	Oh,I like that...the continuity especially. Anakin held out a hand to stop Obi-Wan's words. "Obi-Wan," he said, and the name sounded good coming from him, to both sets of ears, "don't be grumpy!" He flashed one of his formerly famous grins. "It was my choice, not your training. If not for you, I wouldn't have known what the Light was like. The point is, Obi-Wan, that we're together and safe." The man who was once Vader sobered, regarding Obi-Wan with solemn blue eyes. "I'm the one who's sorry," he said. Both were silent for a moment, remembering the past. Obi-Wan's lips twitched into a truly happy smile. "Let's tell Luke that the mission's over," he said. "I was thinking the same thing," Anakin said. "Great minds think alike, then," Obi-Wan said. The team, always together. Wonderful. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 1/29/07 7:15pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Somewhere between TPM and AOTC
	What a lovely vignette! The ending was especially beautiful, but I admit that I loved this section: "That's like the ten millionth time you've made some noise," Anakin said. "That's impossible, Padawan. I have not sneezed that many times," Obi-Wan said. He looked at Anakin quizzically. "Have I?" "I counted coughs and snores as well, Master," Anakin said patiently. "The Healers say that you're their noisiest patient." One of Obi-Wan's eyebrows arched. "I've heard that certain apprentices are in the running for that particular title," he said. A slight blush tinged the teen's cheeks and his eyes grew defiant. "I do not whine, Master! I just don't like shots!" -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 1/30/07 8:50am Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette
	Nice one about the healers. I know of at least one noisy healer. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Laine_Snowtrekker Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 1/31/07 4:22am Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette
	corellian-jedi: They are awesome, aren't they? Thanks for coming by. Valairy_Scot: Yes, it seems that continuity is a big thing for me. I like having it tie together. Thanks! VaderLVR64: Well, Luke had to get it from somewhere! earlybird-obi-wan: Yeah, those patients can get you. Thanks for stopping in. -----signature----- Stealth and subtlety work well, but for making lasting impressions, a blaster does just fine. -Han Room full of gold and jewels, and Dr. Daniel Jackson finds the one book. -Cam Palso's #1 Fan JO: RS1, Admiral, SC Fanfics are linked to in my bio
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/1/07 4:09am Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 1/31
	That was wonderful. I don't know why I enjoy poor Obi at the healers so much . I loved the "always a team" theme throughout the story. Very nice job on this -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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Laine_Snowtrekker Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/2/07 11:32am Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 1/31
	KELIA: Oh, we enjoy Obi-Wan at the healers because we want to comfort him! Thanks for coming by and commenting. -----signature----- Stealth and subtlety work well, but for making lasting impressions, a blaster does just fine. -Han Room full of gold and jewels, and Dr. Daniel Jackson finds the one book. -Cam Palso's #1 Fan JO: RS1, Admiral, SC Fanfics are linked to in my bio
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Veloz Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 2/2/07 12:17pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/2
	This was very beautiful, specially how u tied it with the end of ROTJ I enjoyed the bits of humor there aswell... my favorite part was this one: One of Obi-Wan's eyebrows arched. "I've heard that certain apprentices are in the running for that particular title," he said. A slight blush tinged the teen's cheeks and his eyes grew defiant. "I do not whine, Master! I just don't like shots!" Great job with this one -----signature----- "Hello there!" "Remember the Force will be with you..always" - Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH "Who's the more foolish...the fool or the fool who follows him?"- Obi Wan Kenobi, ANH
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Ascal_Elessar Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 2/2/07 12:35pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/2
	Wonderful piece of writing, especially loved the ending. -----signature----- "HELLO THERE!" Member of the Obi-Wan Kenobi Fan Club "He's like fire and ice and rage. He's like the night and the storm and the heart of the sun. He's ancient and forever, he burns at the centre of time and he can see the turn of the universe."
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Laine_Snowtrekker Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/3/07 7:48pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/2
	Veloz: Thanks! I like putting the humor in there! Ascal_Elessar: Thanks! -----signature----- Stealth and subtlety work well, but for making lasting impressions, a blaster does just fine. -Han Room full of gold and jewels, and Dr. Daniel Jackson finds the one book. -Cam Palso's #1 Fan JO: RS1, Admiral, SC Fanfics are linked to in my bio
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 2/4/07 10:02pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/3
	"The giggly apprentice healers want to keep you longer. I don't know why they'd want to keep you, Master. I'm a lot less trouble." Perhaps because you're a lot less available? -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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Laine_Snowtrekker Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/5/07 11:31am Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/3
	leia_naberrie: Ah, but this is pre-AoTC. Anakin is wondering why they giggle over his Master more than over him. Typical teenage guyness, I was thinking. Thanks for coming and having a good laugh! -----signature----- Stealth and subtlety work well, but for making lasting impressions, a blaster does just fine. -Han Room full of gold and jewels, and Dr. Daniel Jackson finds the one book. -Cam Palso's #1 Fan JO: RS1, Admiral, SC Fanfics are linked to in my bio
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Lank_Pavail Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 2/7/07 6:27pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/5
	Very nice, Laine. The ending really gets you. -----signature----- High Keeper of stuffed EwokWJFC New holiday fic! http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29552605/p1/ http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=14345682&brd=10477&replies=8 Admiral, JO
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Laine_Snowtrekker Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/8/07 10:08am Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/5
	Lank_Pavail: Thanks, Lank. -----signature----- Stealth and subtlety work well, but for making lasting impressions, a blaster does just fine. -Han Room full of gold and jewels, and Dr. Daniel Jackson finds the one book. -Cam Palso's #1 Fan JO: RS1, Admiral, SC Fanfics are linked to in my bio
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 2/11/07 12:57pm Subject: RE: Mission Complete --Obi-Wan, Anakin --Sometime before AOTC Vignette Author Replies 2/5
	Awww! I love t5hese two together! They're so cute! -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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