Author Topic: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - A/P romance, AU - updated 9/3
randomangel22  1223 posts
Registered: Feb '06
43871_Stormtrooper Loser
Date Posted: 6/8/07 8:37am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
Loved how Anakin and Padme talked all night so sweet love .

And yes Anakin you will pay for that stunt when Shmi sees you again laugh .

I wonder why Padme left politics thinking ?

Great post!

 

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Mirik  146 posts
Registered: Dec '05
20887_Concept Padmé
Date Posted: 6/8/07 9:10am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
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I love the mushy part! so romantic and yet pure
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Can I become a part of PM receiving lucky ones? rose

 

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karebear214  1002 posts
Registered: Sep '02
47822_Cade and Deliah
Date Posted: 6/8/07 9:24am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
“You’re more than you seem, Anakin,” she whispered and he felt the warmth of her breath on his face.

“Aren’t we all?” he asked softly.


I liked this line a lot. I'm not quite sure why.

Very nicely done. Normally I'm not a fan of romance, but you write it very well.

 

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dianethx  14888 posts
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Date Posted: 6/8/07 9:31am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
He;s going to pay for that later, hanging up on his mom. Of course, she'll be wild with curiosity in the meantime.

This was sweet. I wonder why Padme left politics. Sounds like it was something that she doesn't want to talk about and yet it bothers her still.

Good job. Looking forward to more.

 

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emerald54  136 posts
Registered: Apr '07
49310_Zayne Carrik (91209)
Date Posted: 6/8/07 3:58pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
Humm... I wonder who betrayed Padme... actually, wait, no, I don't...

Lovely post, and I echo Dianethx, looking forward to more!

Sorry I don't have time to properly review, as I'm carving out bits of my schedule.

Hope you post soon!

 

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michaellover  919 posts
Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 6/8/07 6:22pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
I like youe non jedi Anakin, seems a lot less stressed tongue and cute as a bottom, can you add me to your Pm list if you have one?

 

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BrightFeather  704 posts
Registered: Nov '05
23560_Qui-Gon and Anakin
Date Posted: 6/8/07 7:20pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
Can't help but wonder what's happening in the rest of the galaxy...

 

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HandmaidenVeme  2285 posts
Registered: Jun '04
23998_Anakin
Date Posted: 6/8/07 7:29pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
An Anakin who isn't tortured by his demons... what a breath of freash air happy .

Oh don't get me wrong, I love an angst filled Anakin just like the rest of us but it's nice to see him so happy and carefree.

 

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ROTSFan  2757 posts
Registered: Jul '06
23540_Anakin
Date Posted: 6/8/07 8:04pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
VaderLVR64 posted:


“I suppose we are.” He could see the rapid beat of her pulse in her throat and had to deny the urge to place his lips there and see if it tasted as sweet as he suspected it would. “What about you?” he asked in an effort to distract his mind from his desire. “No longer in politics?”




drooling Have I ever told you that you write romance really well? I love how you get into Anakins/Padmes thoughts like that.



He grinned widely. “Oh, I met Padmé again.”

Then he turned off the screen.

He would pay for that little stunt later, he knew. But it had been worth it to see his mother’s expression.


applause That's great...and so cute the way him and his mother interact. Anakin and Shmi really got along well, had a functional and loving parent/child relationship and it shows. Too bad it could never come to fruition in canon. cry

Very sweet interactions

 

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Jedi_Master_Cazz  1317 posts
Registered: Sep '05
39874_Vader
Date Posted: 6/9/07 2:45am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
Oh Anakin, you spunk! Cloud Nine, dear boy! I think he's quite pleased with himself!

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FitJedi  1886 posts
Registered: Jan '06
24173_Padme
Date Posted: 6/9/07 10:13pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
CUTE... that's all I can say is cute, loved it!

 

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MoAngel  275 posts
Registered: Jul '05
Date Posted: 6/9/07 10:50pm Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
What a lovely change of pace...an A/P AU where there's no angst, no darkside this and darkside that. I'm really treasuring a near normal Anakin with a mature head on his shoulders and now I can't wait for more. Can I please be on your PM list?

 

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DragonLotus  256 posts
Registered: Apr '06
22675_Padme
Date Posted: 6/10/07 3:23am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
“Anakin Skywalker,” she warned. “Don’t you dare cut me off without telling me what you’re talking about.”

He grinned widely. “Oh, I met Padmé again.”

Then he turned off the screen.

He would pay for that little stunt later, he knew. But it had been worth it to see his mother’s expression.



laugh Oh yeah, Shmi will certainly not let her son get away with that!

Um, I didn't get a PM from you for this and the previous update. sad But anyway, the last two chapters were wonderfully romantic.... love love

More soon and please continue to PM me!




 

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Leia_Sith_Lady 
Registered: Nov '06
17769_Leia Concept
Date Posted: 6/10/07 7:54am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
I love this story. You capture all of the characters perfectly.

The banter between Anakin and Shmi was great, I laughed out loud during it.

[singsong_voice] Anakin's in trouble. [/singsong_voice] tongue

PM me, I can't wait for more.

 

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KELIA  10939 posts
Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 6/11/07 3:33am Subject: RE: A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - Anakin Skywalker AU - updated 6/8
Ani, Ani, Ani. It's not nice to drop a bombshell on your mother like that and run off!

shame_on_you shame_on_you shame_on_you

I loved Shmi's motherly nagging love

Anakin and Padme's romantic walk and kiss was the perfect way for them to become reacquainted.

love love love

Great update

applause applause applause applause

 

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