Author Topic: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch 10!!! 5/13/08
earlybird-obi-wan  3119 posts
Registered: Aug '06
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Date Posted: 9/22/07 10:16am Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
Great update and succes with your apartment. And a job of 45 hours a week Whew!

Your story is very enjoyable.

 

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Valairy_Scot  2533 posts
Registered: Sep '05
7900_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 9/22/07 12:08pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
"I don't want to lie to him." Padme responded, looking at him seriously.

Obi-Wan considering this a moment, before speaking again. "Then tell him that I asked for both of you to be careful. It is the truth, from a certain point of view."

"In other words, it's not a lie." Padme said dryly, earning a slightly mischievous smile in response.

"Exactly, milady."

"Don't 'milady' me." Padme said, shaking her head in amusement before sighing softly, and looking back at him. "Alright, I agree to your 'certain point of view', on one condition."

"Which would be...?" Obi-Wan asked, becoming serious again as well.

"Don't get yourself killed." Padme said flatly. "I mean it."

"Don't worry, milady." Obi-Wan told her. "I don't intend on it."


Don't just INTEND - DO! Survive.

Hmm, Ventress got distracted - was she listening in? Heard Dooku? Is she jealous that Obi-Wan had a - gasp - "a woman!" in his room?!


Won't hound you for updates, but do love to see them. Best of luck with the job and moving.

 

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JediMaster_Jen  1695 posts
Registered: Jun '02
42083_Anakin Solo
Date Posted: 9/22/07 1:38pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
The plot thickens. worried Can't wait to see what happens next.


Good work. applause Can you PM me when you update this?

 

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Ascal_Elessar  778 posts
Registered: Feb '04
23580_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 9/23/07 3:33am Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
Great post, looking forward to more.

Good luck with the new job.

 

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geno  218 posts
Registered: Jul '07
15594_Dark Leia
Date Posted: 9/25/07 11:44pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
very interesting story you have here, I look forward to more and if you have a pm list please add me

 

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Fifilla  584 posts
Registered: Mar '06
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Date Posted: 9/26/07 3:13am Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
applause Very nice chapter - I really love this story!

"That, and Qui-Gon told me you tended to get yourself into trouble." Dooku added, this time earning a glance back from the Jedi.

"Oh, did he?" Obi-Wan asked lightly, tone almost amused.

"Yes; not that he was a particularly well-behaved Padawan all the time himself." Dooku responded. "It wasn't as though he actively attempted to cause problems, but he seemed to attract them, as you do."

"A trait that you and Anakin share in abundance as well." Obi-Wan commented, the console beeping happily at him as he began compiling the code.

"Indeed." Dooku agreed.

Dooku and Obi-Wan together are just great! grin

 

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epithree  395 posts
Registered: Aug '06
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Date Posted: 9/27/07 11:20pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
Hey hi there.

The wonderful updates you've been offering up are totally worth the wait.

Once again, the interaction between Obi and Dooku is splendid. It really takes hold of the reader and makes us want more.

Well done!

~epithree

 

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ClaudiaR  191 posts
Registered: Jun '07
24113_Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan
Date Posted: 10/21/07 8:08am Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
I finally found the time to read this!!
all my favorite elements are still present!
how lovely!!!!
The bantering is still my favorite thins and I loved the
rewiring of the comm and the conversation it sparked!
Bored initiates are dangerous then, and a bored Obi-wan
more so!
my favorite line was: Getting to stalk around importantly was quickly becoming the best part of pretending to be a Sith.

His lines of though are great! Hopefully Padme will be able
to keep and eye on Ani, I loved how Obi knew what went on between them
as Ani's master he would have to have been very thick not to realize this!

 

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Kynstar  8978 posts
Registered: Mar '04
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Date Posted: 10/25/07 11:22am Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
Loved that about who better to foil a Sith's plan than a Sith. laugh

Great update indeed! Glad Obi and Dooku somewhat got on an even ground there happy Perhaps they can truly work together now.

 

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Cole_Kenobi  343 posts
Registered: Aug '05
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Date Posted: 10/25/07 8:05pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
Oh, I have the vague feeling Obi-wan is quite out of his league and over his head. But it worries me that he is so comfortable around Dooku, and is so easily sent into episodes of moodiness which seems so uncharacteristic of himself.

I am extremly happy that I found this story and decided to read it! I've just caught up, and I've got to say that I love it! Wonderful job. I can't wait to read more! PM list please. Thanks.

 

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Amrita_Glittersong  196 posts
Registered: Jan '07
15579_Padme
Date Posted: 10/28/07 10:36am Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21!
G__Anakin - Thanks! happy

earlybird-obi-wan - Thank you! happy

Valairy_Scot - Ventress is certainly sneaky and more than a little sttrange, so who knows what's going on in her head. tongue Thanks! happy

JediMaster_Jen - Thank you. happy Yes, I'll add you to the list right away.

Ascal_Elessar - Thanks!

geno - Thank you, and you're now added!

Fifilla - Thanks! They're so much fun to write together.

epithree - Thank you! I'm glad to hear the interaction is still fun to read. happy

ClaudiaR - Thank you! Hehe, I like to think Jedi are kept busy so often just s they don't tear up the Temple in an attempt to find something to do. tongue Glad you liked that line; it was one of my favorites so far. Thanks! happy

Kynstar - Glad to see you back! happy Yeah, Obi and Dooku are in a better place to work together now; hopefully it'll help them take on Palpy.

Cole_Kenobi - Yeah, I think that would be a safe assessment. tongue Glad you like it! You're added, and thanks.

 

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Amrita_Glittersong  196 posts
Registered: Jan '07
15579_Padme
Date Posted: 12/1/07 7:13pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21, replies 10/28!
So... Status report! Since it's been, what, two months since I updated? hypnotized

I do have part of the chapter written, though it's only about a third of what's going to be a short chapter anyway. Yes, I know, not great. blush But I'm working on it! I hope to have the chapter done in another week, two at the most. I hope. tongue

Thanks for sticking with this fic even with the delays, everyone. You're awesome. happy

 

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geno  218 posts
Registered: Jul '07
15594_Dark Leia
Date Posted: 12/1/07 8:01pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21, status report 12/01 - Date Edited: 12/1/07 8:02pm (1 edits total) Edited By: geno
As long as you finish it at some point I'm willing to wait. Also the quality you want is important as well.

Look forward to a update whenever and thanks for the status update

 

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EGKenobi  484 posts
Registered: Apr '05
18921_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 12/10/07 4:10pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21, status report 12/01
awesome fic, please pm me when you update this grin grin

EG

 

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ClaudiaR  191 posts
Registered: Jun '07
24113_Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan
Date Posted: 1/3 9:25pm Subject: RE: Deceptions -- (AU, Epic -- Obi, Dooku, Sidious, and more) -- Ch9 9/21, status report 12/01
Obi-Wan asked, raising an eyebrow and sweeping past her. Getting to stalk around importantly was quickly becoming the best part of pretending to be a Sith.


I love that line too much... can I please use it in my sig?

 

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