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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 8/12/07 12:53am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story - ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs - Update 8/6!
	Great chapter! I was surprised that P had not introduced Luke to the Force. I'm guessing V's figured out the connection and is now furthering his own agenda. And P has figured out about Leia. This is not going to be pretty... Keep it up! -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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Jaded_Rose Registered: Nov '06	Date Posted: 8/15/07 5:26pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – Update 8/6!
	These were absolutely wonderful! Palpy is wrong - the most fun things are updates! J_Ro -----signature----- The pen is mightier than the sword, if it has been sharpened to a fine point, dipped in deadly poison and thrown from ten feet away. But really, you're better off with a sword. -America, The Book
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 8/16/07 3:53pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – Update 8/6!
	Hi, Furry: Best wishes on your venture into college. I hope you don't get swamped and ... disappear. We'd miss you too much!! -----signature----- E-sib to Mira_Jade, whose yummies inspire & gooify !! We Squee! in tandem Our Nyota/Spock love knows no bounds--we have superb taste in soulmates Have a bucket Cheesecake Squggles!
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darth_eowyn Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 8/17/07 7:14pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – Update 8/6!
	Creepy-ful. Could you add me to the PM list please? -----signature----- Reality is just a pretty name for lack of imagination.
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furrylittlebantha Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 10/6/07 9:43am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Lukeâ€™s Story â€“ ANH AU â€“ Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs â€“ Update 8/6!
	A very, very wise man once said: "There's always a bigger fish." This I have found to be true...to my sorrow. College and everything that goes along with it is a bigger fish than any fish I've ever faced off before and college has swallowed me up. I apologize for my two month lapse. Please don't worry that IPS will be abandoned, because it's already nearly finished. However, after it's done, I'm afraid that I won't be around for a while. If anyone hears of any fish-wrestling gear priced appropriately for a poor college student, let me know. PadawanMom5610: Very nice update. Thank you. how does Palpy know of the 3rd skywalker? RedGold: woot, update... and things are getting a lot more sticky about the palace now... Sticky would just about sum it up. Thanks for reading! Jade_Pilot: Wow! Outstanding update, furry! happy So much going on and Luke...can he possibly hold out agaisnt so much sithliness???? Does Vader know that Luke's his son? Hmmmm... So many possibilities. My lips are sealed. I had to go back and read that part twice it was so funny! Superb writing and wonderful, wonderful characterizations! Thanks! And for the wishes...it's been fun so far! divapilot: Thanks so much for work on this chapter. It really needed it. ItÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s interesting how Vader has taken on the role that Obi-Wan filled in A New Hope. In fact, VaderÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s advice: If you wish to have a chance, do as I say. Let go of your conscious mind. Trust your feelings. Do not plan; react. echoes what Obi-Wan tells Luke in the trench run. Again, during a dogfight. But Luke trusts no one. He has never had anyone really trust him. Will he be able to let go? Hoping to work more of that parallelism in; it makes for some fun deja vu. And I agree with your assesment of Luke. He really isn't the same guy. Just like Anakin in the poster for The Phantom Menace. Luke is shadowed by the dark. [i] It makes me all warm'nfuzzy that you pointed that one out! ginchy: [i]I'm thinking this is going to haunt my dreams, as well. Hopefully no nightmares! This is all spiraling further and further into blackness. Luke was the Light... Is there any Light with him now? Lovely way of phrasing it--how true! Hope you like the next bit. MsLanna: Wonderful update. And I'm giggling with Mara over the image of Vader and cakes. or stormies and cakes. He won't belive Vader anymore? Hmm, so the 'I am your father' line won't work? imagines Luke raising a bow 'says who?' LOL!!! I like it. I just wonder how (and if? shock ) you are going to resolve all this sticky mess. Oh, I will...just not necessarily in the way one might expect... VaderLVR64: Thanks! I appreciate your saying so. satanat_solo: Okay, okay! The Palace...is Qui-Gon Jinn. Muhahahhahahah. And if you believe that, I've got some lovely beach front property on Tattooine I'd like to sell you...:D JEDIFLYWATTER: I wonder if Vader is figuring out that Luke is his son. He seemed to want to know who his mother was so I must think he feels something. He does feel something, but how much and in what detail is up in the air for now. I just can not figure out the voice Luke is hearing unless it is the Force itself. He really is a lost soul. Like he always has been. LOL, so true! Thanks for reading. Independence1776: and the strange thing is, I can picture this! Eep! He said that to Vader?! Erm..yeah. Thanks for your reply! I enjoyed reading your thoughts on the different parts. Knight_Aragorn: Just found this story - love the scenario, and the characterisations are brilliant. Thanks! They're so AU as to almost border on OOC in my opinion, but I'm glad you think they work. Luke's loyalties are being twisted every which way at the moment, so it will be interesting to see which direction he ends up taking. He could take any, at the moment. Palpatine obviously thinks he's in control, but I'm not so sure, especially with Vader now back in the mix... Thanks for reading! leia_naberrie: Great chapter! I was surprised that P had not introduced Luke to the Force. Yes, it wasn't something he would have done thirty years ago, but life had taught him some lessons on how to deal with Skywalkers. If they were good enough is another story... I'm guessing V's figured out the connection and is now furthering his own agenda. And P has figured out about Leia. So it would appear. Thanks for reading! J_Ro: Aww! Thank you! Hope this one is just as much fun. Jade_eyes: I appreciate that. I am swamped, but I won't disappear just yet. darth_eowyn: I'm flattered. Added to the PM list. -------------- The PM list is as follows. If anyone wishes to be taken off, donÃ¢â‚¬â„¢t hesitate to let me know. ginchy JediVegeta BrentusofGath Jade_eyes MsLanna Darth_Vaderette David_Skywalker01 cooldamien KELIA Jade_Pilot MirandaFair VaderLVR64 RedGold divapilot G_Anakin JEDIFLYSWATTER SITHTIFF leia_naberrie tasujad petra_delling PadawanMom5601 Jaded_Rose jade_angel Independence1776 Kyana-Morgaine satanat_solo Layren Kelli_LB Obi-Zahn Kenobi Gabri_Jade Motion_Wright Ocelotl_Nesto darth_eowyn -----signature----- Master of tjace and bi0nic. In mourning for the one year, nine months, and five days it has been since The Souls of Demons was updated. sob
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furrylittlebantha Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 10/6/07 10:04am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story - ANH AU -- Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 8/6! - Date Edited: 10/6/07 1:26pm (2 edits total) Edited By: furrylittlebantha
	============= Chapter Nine ============= They talked as often as they dared. He needed training, that was certain. "He hid the Force from you," the dark lord repeated more than once. "Yes," Luke agreed each time. Obviously it was all part of the plan. Whether Palpatine intended Luke to learn later or not at all was now irrelevant. "It was a foolish maneuver," Vader commented. "Perhaps not," Luke countered. "Has it occurred to you that even now we might be playing into his schemes?" "That is not likely. Undoubtedly my Master has created contingencies for such an occurrence, but he creates contingencies for all occurrences. He would prefer to believe them all unnecessary." Luke was not convinced. They could not agree on how and when to train Luke. Vader proposed elaborate secrecy. Luke scoffed at that. "Diplomacy 101," he said, rubbing his eyes wearily. "The best way to hide something is in plain sight." "This is not diplomacy. This is...a war, of sorts." "Absolutely the same thing. Lobbyists are guerilla fighters with blackmail instead of blasters. Lord Vader, there is obviously a vast quantity of information you know that I don't. That's why we're having this conversation. However, I've been under Palpatine's tutelage for over six months, now. Planned or not, I know a little bit about how his mind works. Trust me on this one." The empty sockets of the helmet focused intently on him for a long moment. "Perhaps you do not know him as well as you believe." There was history in those words, many deep, stratified layers of past. Luke brushed it aside and pressed forward with his argument. In the end, the plan was as simple as he could have hoped. When Vader was present, they would train. On his next visit, he would provide Luke with a set of pre-recorded lessons to be viewed upon first opportunity. They would have to get by with this combination until... "Until what?" Luke questioned. "Until you are ready," was all Vader would say. Surprisingly, it appeared to work. Darth Vader remained on Coruscant for only three days before leaving to finish off the Rebel fleet. By that time, Luke could enter into a clumsy meditation, block a blaster bolt now and then, and most importantly, raise an impressive mental shield. The shields were his priority, Vader stressed over and over again. No other skill bore such significance. Without instant proficiency they would both die slow and messy deaths. Hence, Luke figured out how to shield. It wasn't actually very hard. He'd already learned mental discipline. What he hadn't learned--what had been kept from him--was mental strength. With the foundation in place, subtlety already present, power slid into its natural groove with gratifying ease. Luke opened up to the Force, and the Force opened up to him. The months passed with little variance. There were a few tense moments when he almost let something slip, when he imagined a suspicious glint in those tired, red eyes or knowing in that raspy voice. But nothing ever came of those moments. On the whole, his life passed with structured satisfaction, if not actual joy. He found himself...content, to grow in the Force and learn more from the Emperor every day. Happiness was all well and good, but power came with its own fulfillment. He would have been content for many more months to come had it not been for a chance meeting one spring day. As a general rule, Mara Jade kept out of Luke's way and Luke kept out of Mara Jade's way. He still wasn't quite sure what she did. Training, of course, but in what, precisely? Palpatine never volunteered the information. So far, her only specialties he knew of were courtly manners and a mean roundhouse. A special agent, then. But how special? Was she Force-sensitive? Did her training include that skill? The Emperor had implied that she was to function in a role similar to Darth Vader's. But Luke began to doubt that. Palpatine had not given Luke all the essential facets of Emperor-hood, so it followed that he had not made Mara Jade a full Sith. What, then, was she? On that warm day in spring he found answers to some of his questions. Unfortunately, new questions resulted that were infinitely more puzzling. ----------------------------------- Vader had presented him with a lightsaber only two months before. Of all the abilities he developed in the Force, swordplay came the most naturally to him. It had been frustrating at first. Never once had he beaten Darth Vader, and it took the taciturn Sith a month to admit no one had beaten him in nearly twenty years. Still, Luke had no way of knowing how good he was quantitatively. It was a day made for adventure. His favorite sparring room was closed for renovations, so Luke went wandering in search of another one. The trick was finding one that the Imperial Inquisitors frequented so he could use his lightsaber without excessive notice. He thanked the Force often that his features were so utterly unremarkable; even after a year in the Palace, scarcely anyone recognized him on sight. He found the perfect place after three hours of searching. It was small, tucked into an obscure corner of a largely deserted floor, and best of all falling into disarray. No one would scrutinize him here. Or so he thought. With a bit of fiddling, Luke activated the outdated sentinel droid. It seemed to be in order. He took up the proper stance, dipped into the Force... And froze. He was not alone. "Come out," he ordered sharply. "I know you're here." "I wasn't hiding." A slim, red-haired girl walked out of the shadows in the other side of the room. She glared at him, arms crossed. "This is my sparring room. Hasn't the Emperor dumped enough on you?" So she didn't know. He decided to play it cool. "Maybe. I think I like this one, though." What of it? challenged his tone. Her green eyes narrowed to slits. She shifted, and for the first time he noticed the silver cylinder dangling on her hip. "Get out, you wretch," she snarled. Oh, he liked this girl. Palpatine was mildly revolting. Vader was distant and impersonal. Everyone else either tiptoed around him or ignored his existence. This Jade--she was something else. He grinned wickedly at her and ignited his lightsaber. With her years of training to his two months, she'd beat him for sure. Who cared? "Make me." Sparks leapt up in her eyes. With a snap-hiss, the cylinder flew to her hand and sprouted a violet blade. She charged at him with a precise, lighting-fast stroke. He blocked it clumsily. The battle was drawn. What began as entertainment for Luke quickly degenerated into something far more potent. She fought much differently than Vader, for one thing. Faster. More improvisation, greater fluidity. Additionally, she genuinely wanted to kill him. Only his raw strength kept him from being skewered early on. But it wasn't just the thrusts and parries themselves. As the duel wore on, he began to feel it. Intensity. Her hatred. The anger and confusion and misery that lay between them both. At first the emotions were only hers; Luke kept himself locked beyond all sight. He wasn't used to this level of concentration, however. Soon enough the friction ground his shields to a brittle shell, and all that he hid from throbbed close, so close to the surface, and stars, it hurt. Cold wind hit the void in Luke's heart, now gaping open to memory. He gritted his teeth. A thin sheen of sweat broke out over his forehead and his lightsaber crashed furiously. Now he remembered why he avoided this girl. Even when they passed in the hall, he felt it. Just a nudge. The delicate flaking away of his defenses... The pain of his past tore at him, and he hated her for it. She was taken off guard by his sudden frenzy. Under other circumstances, he probably would have lost. But not this time. "You're not going to win," he said between clenched teeth. "Want to bet?" she panted. He didn't answer. Instead, he came at her with a complicated series of thrusts and while she dealt with those, very neatly reached out with the Force and tripped her. She dropped hard, but not before routing his fancy sword work and twisting the saber out of his grasp. Hers flew from her grasp as she fell. He was on top of her in a second, using all of his weight to pin her down. The sudden silence was deafening. Luke studied her throat. Her face, those eyes, those intense, soul-raking eyes he could not take right now. She had pale skin; under the surface he could see indigo veins and the pulse at her jaw, rising and falling. He smelled her--mostly sweat and human body, but fragrance, too; it was an earthy smell, not precisely pleasant, but magnetic all the same. "I'm not in control," he hissed, and heard desperation in his voice, desperation and savagery and a strange sort of wanting buried beneath them both. "You make me...lose myself." Her face was so close to his that Luke could distinguish the individual beads of sweat glistening above her lips. "I'm not in control," he repeated. "I always have to--to be--you can't do this to me. I won't let you." "And how do you think I feel about it?" she growled back. He flinched in surprise. "Always, you've kept me off balance. Taken my place. Maybe I like you where you are." The double-meaning of the statement struck them at the same time, and suddenly, they weren't scheming warriors locked in a power struggle. They were teenagers, and were...just locked. Luke and Mara blushed at the same time and rolled away from each other. He sat on the mat for a moment, legs sprawled awkwardly. She darted up immediately, extinguished her lightsaber, swiped her hair away from her face, turned away. He examined her profile as she stood above and a little apart from him. Slender...rigidly vertical, as if in pain or terror...angular lines splitting the sunlight...softened, here and there, hints of future curves... ...beautiful... The thought slashed deep in his mind like cold iron. Splitting his defenses, the way her white shoulder split the light... "I have a class." The words came out haltingly and he heard the lie. "I have to go." She could have just left. She didn't have to make an excuse. They both knew it. This time, though, neither of them blushed. She took a half-step; stopped; turned to him, brushed a lock of shorter hair behind her ear in a quick, slanting motion. "We could spar again. It would help both of us." He was mildly surprised to discover the voice was his. More surprising was the way it sounded: jerky, shy--did it crack? His voice changed a year ago. Most surprising of all, however, was Mara's face. She wouldn't meet his eyes. She was chewing on her lip. Once more, the flick of fingers at her hair, even though it was already tucked securely, and then-- "Sure." That was all. One word. He might have heard incorrectly, and there wasn't a chance of finding out; she was gone before her mouth closed. The steady thrum of his lightsaber was suddenly loud, white noise no longer. He flicked it off with the Force. Varewe? A questing tendril pressed into his thoughts. Before answering, he sucked in a deep breath, cool air rushing down his throat; held it; allowed himself to tremble; wondered why he burned from inside out; wondered... And let go of the breath. Everything's fine, Vader. Everything is fine. Just fine. They did spar again. Not often. Not with any regularity. But they knew, each time. They knew it would happen again. The events of that first time were never repeated. The second time was slightly uncomfortable, but only slightly. The third time, not at all. They pushed each other, gave no ground, fought dirty when they had to and cleanly when convenient. Vader confronted him about it one day. "You compromise yourself with this association," he warned. "Jade is his tool. She cannot be trusted." Luke gave a lopsided smile. "Whoever said anything about trusting her?" After a long, measuring stare, the dark lord nodded curtly and talked of other things. She was not a friend. He didn't even really like her. But for some reason, as uncomfortable as she made him, as infuriating and annoying and impertinent as she could be, Luke wanted Mara Jade in his life. ---------------------------------- The wind is loud today. There is a low, electric rumble to the every-day howling, which means that yet another dust storm approaches. Obi-Wan Kenobi grunts with displeasure and goes around sealing every crack in the hut with scraps of fabric. He does not want sand in his bedding again. Also, he expects a transmission today. An important transmission. Obi-Wan flings open a shutter and glares at the darkening sky. "Don't you dare," he instructs it sternly. "There are matters of galactic import to be discussed." Behind him, a small beep sounds. He shuts the window securely, latching it behind him, and draws a deep breath. Straightening his shoulders, he kneels down to reach the awkwardly placed comm receiver. And flips it on. A wrinkled, impossibly old face fills his vision. "We have a new enemy," the hoarse voice informs him without preamble. Obi-Wan nods. "Luke Skywalker." "The son of Skywalker must not become a Sith. Another Vader, the galaxy does not require." "I fear it to be worse. He may be another Palpatine." "Destroyed, he must be. Wait until it is too late we must not." "If he could be turned, he would be a great asset." "Yes...yes." Yoda taps his gimmer stick against an unseen ground thoughtfully. "Can it be done?" "He will join us or die," the Jedi says calmly. Yoda scrutinizes him with a narrow gaze. Obi-Wan keeps his face still. The words he spoke were the truth, though the mask of serenity was not. Yoda will find no fault in his purity of purpose. "Allow yourself attachment, you must not," the ancient Master cautions at last. "Danger lies in that path. Already too close you are to the girl-child." "It cannot be helped." Yoda nods at the inevitability of his apprentice's voice. "Done, that is, and undone it cannot be. Train her we must not unless no other hope remains. But your own heart examine, Master Kenobi. If unable to detach yourself from the son of Skywalker you are, complete his training I must." "I have Leia." Kenobi sighs and looks away, past the boarded window to a place only he can see. "I have no need of Luke. I will train him, Master Yoda, and I will not fail this time. He will be my student and nothing more." "Remains to be seen, that does." Yoda's voice is grim and more than a little skeptical. "Remains to be seen." The transmission flickers out. Outside, the wind begins to pick up. Obi-Wan closes his eyes and listens. It offers no comfort. ----------------------------------- Spring glided into summer. One day Luke paused in a conversation with Palpatine and smiled slightly. "What is it, boy?" "Oh, nothing. It's just one year today since I came to Coruscant." His class would be graduating as full-fledged senators now. Garmonsaw Fortee crossed his mind. He wondered if their paths would cross. The wondering lasted only a fractional second. Luke swept the entire affair away and concentrated on more relevant matters. A year might have passed for Gartee. A lifetime had passed for Luke. ------------------------------------------ "Ben." The old man draws deeply on the Force before he looks up. He knows that tone. Knows it only too well, despite having heard it only once before and ten years in the past. On that occasion, a barely-seven year old Leia had carefully shredded all of Beru's heirloom linens in order to have bandages for her toys. He still remembers the terror in her eyes when she ran to him. Remembers all the more vividly because the same terror lies in them now. "What is it, child?" "Not so much of a child now." Her voice carries sad wisdom just barely edged with hysteria. "Ben, I'm in trouble." ----------------------- -----signature----- Master of tjace and bi0nic. In mourning for the one year, nine months, and five days it has been since The Souls of Demons was updated. sob
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Jade_Pilot Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 10/6/07 10:53am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Lukeâ€™s Story â€“ ANH AU â€“ Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs â€“ Update 10/6!
	Wow! Wow! Wow! Outstanding update, Furry! So much to these scenes, I loved the battle between L/M and the familiar words exchanged between Ben and Yoda, only in the original it was Vader and Palpy--very clever! Bravo! -----signature----- I'm so adjective I verb noun.
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divapilot Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 10/6/07 10:54am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Lukeâ€™s Story â€“ ANH AU â€“ Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs â€“ Update 10/6!
	YES!!! Furry's back! I love this story. You have such wonderful characters here, familiar yet unique. This is Luke, but not Luke at the same time. He is cynical, sad, and Machiavellian. And yet, I still recognize him. Your fight scene between Luke and Mara is fantastic. I loved the double meaning that their fight had, not just in the sparring room but between them for the attention at court. Furry, it's when you write lines like this: With the foundation in place, subtlety already present, power slid into its natural groove with gratifying ease. that I realize how much I miss it when I don't get to read your work. Wonderfully done, my friend! -----signature----- Never tell me the odds. UConn: Huskies forever! RIP Jasper Howard, #6 "Focus on what matters. It's about the GAME, not each other. Dumb humans."
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Independence1776 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 10/6/07 6:41pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	Oh, wow. Luke and Mara met and dueled. Vader is keeping a deadly secret from his Master, as is Luke. And I love, absolutely love, how you switched that fateful line: "The son of Skywalker must not become a Jedi." It's creepy coming from Yoda and Obi-Wan. Very creepy. Wonderful update! -----signature----- "Independence forever." John Adams Padawan to Luna_Nightshade Fics in bio Mostly lurking at the moment
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ginchy Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 10/6/07 8:51pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	Wow! Very intense post. Don't worry about taking too long... RL certainly comes first, but we will always be here and ready for great fanfiction! Excellent update--thanks for the PM! -----signature----- Something wonderful has happened... EDD: April 25, 2010
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 10/7/07 12:13am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	She shred her mom's heirloom linens for doll bandages! I don't know why but this just struck me as amazingly funny. -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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PadawanMom5610 Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 10/7/07 9:03am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	Truly excellent post. I loved it. No pressure, but I do hope you will be able to update again soon. I'm curious about Ben's attachment to Leia, even though he hasn't been in contact with her much. And I agree, the reversed conversation between Yoda and Ben was creepy, especially, "He will join us or he will die." Whew!
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 10/7/07 1:50pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	"Ben, I'm in trouble." Uh oh. I hope Ben is able to get to her in time. I loved the sparring between Luke and Mara. -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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RedGold Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 10/8/07 1:41pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	awesome update... love the chemstry with Luke and Mara... and good OT line usage with Ben and Yoda... -----signature----- Legend... Recluse... Forgotten... Will one day return... http://www.starwarsfanfic.com
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JEDIFLYSWATTER Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 10/8/07 8:45pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 10/6!
	Very interesting post. Loved the way you swifted the the lines from the Shith to the Jedi. So Vader is aleady working out a plan against Palpatine. Even before he knows Luke's true identity. Also loved the L/M dueling scenes. Always did concider it a kind of foreplay between the too. Thanks and wecome back. -----signature----- New Orleans will rise from the ashes! You knew it was a rattlesnke when you picked it up. Kitty cats do not lie about love.
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