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JEDIFLYSWATTER Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 12/28/07 8:07pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	I am surprized that Palpatine let Vader get that far into the story before showing up. If it is him. Yet Luke thinks that Vader is his uncle and if Palpatine needs a trump card to really push Luke over the edge, he can though out the fact that Vader is his father. The question will be how would Luke responsed to Palpatine's manipulation. Plus how would Vader responed to the truth about his son. Just thinking and yes I could be so far off base. Mara. Well I bet she does not really know what the hell is going on. I do think that she realizes that she really cares about Luke if not loves him at this point and has complete faith in him. Boy am I going off on my own ideas! Now only two more chapters and STILL have not figured out who or what palace is. So palace picked out Luke to be a strong ruler. Some building. Great job and if I do not hear from you before New Years, have a safe and fun one. Thanks. -----signature----- New Orleans will rise from the ashes! You knew it was a rattlesnke when you picked it up. Kitty cats do not lie about love.
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Mystic665 Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 12/29/07 12:28am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	furrylittlebantha posted: Mystic665: You're welcome to the cookies. Have some holiday cheesecake, too. Thanks for delurking! Delurkers make my day. Hope you continue to enjoy this story. ~takes cheese cake~ I suppose I should do it more often then. I can't give good constructive criticism (because my own writing is atrocious) so I don't post that much. Not sure which is more delicious; your cooking or this plot! :3
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 12/29/07 3:05am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Stellar update! Fascinating stories each of them heard--so Luke thinks Vader's his uncle? Time just ran out. Oops! Update please again soon -----signature----- "There was love all around, But I never heard it singing. No I never heard it at all, Till there was you."--Beatles Of & for my angel sweeties--Spock/Nyota, of course E-sib to Mira_Jade, aka Mira_Pilot Cheesecake Squggles!
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dancing_star Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 12/29/07 7:30am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Luke’s stomach suddenly flipped completely over. Coppery fear rushed into his mouth, paralyzed his limbs, tingled in his fingers and toes. “You’re going to need my help sooner than you thought…Uncle,” he whispered. Just below them, a presence unveiled itself. Luke could hear the cackle of glee in his mind. The trapdoor rattled. Time had just run out. What a cliffie! Wonderful, awesome update though, furry! More soon please!! -----signature----- God bless America and our troops. "The LORD gives strength to his people. The LORD blesses his people with peace." Ps 29:11 ~~~ "Darkest Hours, Brightest Hope" (fic below) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29811085/p1/
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Jade_Pilot Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 12/29/07 4:04pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Wow! What an outstanding update! I was absolutely riveted to my puter screen to the very end. Great plotting, furry and you know how much I love your characterizations! Bravo! -----signature----- I'm so adjective I verb noun.
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MagicToo Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 12/29/07 9:55pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	I love the ending! It was a incredible cliff-hanger. Luke and Vader are in a bad situation. Does Luke even have his lightsaber? I seem to remember that he doesn't. He might be able to escape if Vader holds Palpantine up. And Vader might do that if he discovers his true relation with Luke. Which the Emperor might know... If the alliance new that the Emperor was fighting Luke or Vader they might try to help. And the castle might help too... if that is in it's benefit... Looking forward to the next chapter, Magic Too
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 12/30/07 5:31am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	You know what? This is a brilliant story. The plotting, the pacing, the very 3dimensional characterizations of both the major and the transitory players. Thank you for the PM (it worked well) and for a lovely holiday gift with this chapter. -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/30/07 2:14pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	WOW - that was an amazing update. I loved the pacing and so many dirty little secrets revealed at last. Time had just run out. evil, evil cliffie Great update -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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ginchy Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 12/30/07 5:52pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Oh, my. I'm shuddering at the moment--how freaky! I'm not sure I'm strong enough for this. LOL Excellent update, lady--I have a feeling I'll need to be holding on to a stuffed teddy bear or something for the next one! -----signature----- Something wonderful has happened... EDD: April 25, 2010
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 12/30/07 6:15pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	My favorite post yet and that's saying something! Luke chuckled stiffly. “Come now, my Lord. Why would they build such an elaborate conspiracy just to keep me from knowing about a relative?” “I am beginning to wonder,” Vader rumbled, “precisely that.” Loved that! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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MsLanna Title: CR GSFF Central = Offizieller Burger Brater Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/31/07 7:12am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Oho so much to be revealed. I wonder who did that 'textbook murder'. “I know because my wife was your mother’s sister. I married Padmé Naberrie.” I am not sure that this is 100% correct. More secrets. “I was a member of the Rebel Alliance from the time I was ten years old. My father never could keep his ‘other work’ hidden from me, and after a few years of rebuffing my attempts to join in he gave up. I loved Father, and I loved what we did. The Empire was a festering disease destroying the galaxy. We were the cure.” “A little pompous, don’t you think?” Mara asked dryly. And now... Palpatine crashes the father/son moment. evil cliffie right there. Can't wait to see how you'll resolve this mess. -----signature----- I give up. Fett is great. "What would you have me do?" "Endure." Cuyir adate jate, bal droten ori'dush Proud Master and buir'ika of Commander_Ducky. My New Title: Lords and Ladies of the Empire
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JediVegeta Registered: Dec '00	Date Posted: 12/31/07 10:11am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Well, everyone else took what I would have written! But nice to see that you are keeping up with writing this story. Everyone is believable and in character. Although I really hope Luke finds /and Vader? about how they are really related. Creepy Palpatine and his body possessing ideas. Gah! If I read that right, he is considering doing that to Luke since he could not get Vader's "dead" child, right? I think I got that. Don't know how your ending is going to be but... I am looking forward to what you have up next no matter is someone dies, is possessed, or lives happily ever after! -----signature----- JOIN THE MUFFIN SIDE DEXTER!!!! Igiari!!!! That's the playful side of Torgo. He's the clown that makes the dark side fun.
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Ocelotl_Nesto Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 1/3/08 9:14am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Reality will definitely cloud Vaders plans.... YIPES!
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Independence1776 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 1/20/08 12:41pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	Oh, wow. The way you merged the two storytelling sessions was stupendous. I never suspected Halla of being a Hand. But why, oh why, didn't Vader tell Luke he was his father? Until the next update! -----signature----- "Independence forever." John Adams Padawan to Luna_Nightshade Fics in bio Mostly lurking at the moment
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 4/17/08 12:44pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story -- ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs -- Update 12/28!
	I finally caught up on this and am begging on my hands and knees with cookies baked for you to continue this! -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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