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Jade_Pilot Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 6/16/07 11:58am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Ack! Evil cliffie!!! Fantastic update, furry! This fic just keeps getting better and better. I'm totally addicted! I love how you write Luke. Just wonderful this characterization of him in this highly creative AU. Love it! I'm wondering about Mara, if she'll be lured to the light side while Palpatine is doing his best to lure Luke to the dark. Bravo, my dear! -----signature----- BOO!
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leia_naberrie Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 6/16/07 2:21pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke's Story - ANH AU - Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs - short story--Update 6/16
	I have such a bad feeling about this... -----signature----- http://io9.com/5111680/avatar-casting-makes-fans-see-white Upset about the casting for the Last Airbender movies? Write to Paramount about it. http://aang-aint-white.livejournal.com/1007.html
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ginchy Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 6/16/07 3:16pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Hoo, boy. You are NOT kidding with this story. How raw and ... man, I can't even begin to think of words to describe this update. I feel like I'm watching a movie that started in color and now that color is slowly leeching out into shades of rusty brown. Will that continue into black and white? Wonderful, wonderful update! (And the cover art is lovely.) -----signature----- Positivity. ** Okay, seriously. It’s a Rebel Alliance t-shirt. It is NOT a fleur-de-lis.
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 6/16/07 4:07pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	So Mara would rather be disobedient and constructive than uselessly loyal. Ugh!! Luke's really fallen into it now--deep poodoo nekc high. Fantab update. -----signature----- Spock/Nyota, woven forever together in gorgeous bonds of Nyota's "Cherished Moments" diary's gonna be hawt, hawt, melty! Squggles! [face_melting into 10 buckets!]
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Kelli_LB Registered: Jun '06	Date Posted: 6/16/07 6:41pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Wow, this story is absolutely amazing, and so very different than any other fanfic I've read. I am very impressed! Could you please add me to the PM list? -----signature----- Winner of the 2007 Saga Fanfic Awards for Best Villain. The Legacy: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/248894 "I'm babbling on about galactic prostitution...and that's not why you're here! You're here for battle." --The Knudson Menace
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DarthIshtar Title: Former CR Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 6/16/07 6:55pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Wow... THis is starting to echo absolutely creepifyingly of the prequel trilogy and I love the subtle tapestry of manipulations going on so far. I liked Mara's vision and the rationalization of it being a textbook success. -----signature----- "I feel like a more down-to-earth Pink 5 when I'm writing Leah. Same attitude, less lip gloss." ~Me on how to get in the right mindset for Twilight fanfic.
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JEDIFLYSWATTER Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 6/16/07 9:28pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Poor Luke. He does not understand what is going on. Palpatine has just about totally removed everyone, but himself, that Luke could possibly turn to for guideness and compassion. Beginning to brainwash the child he is. Mara is really feeling like a forgotten child all of a sudden. I bet she will be abit jeleous of Luke once she finds out that he has taken her place as Palpatine's pet project. Surprized me that Bail Organa's daughter was the young lady Luke debated against. Think I need to go back as remember where Leia is living. Wonderful post and can not wait for the next one! Thanks. -----signature----- New Orleans will rise from the ashes! You knew it was a rattlesnke when you picked it up. Kitty cats do not lie about love.
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Obi-Zahn Kenobi Registered: Aug '99	Date Posted: 6/17/07 1:54am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Brilliant! Put me on the PM list. If I don't ever post in this thread again, I'm still reading. I'm an evil lurker. -----signature----- "Perhaps Darth Guy will breed some sort of albino shouting gorilla." - Master_Jacen
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Klimt_Of_Tornesdal Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 6/17/07 4:37am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Here's the part that really got to me: Vaguely, he realized his face was buried in the Emperor’s waist, his hands were clutching the Emperor’s robes, the Emperor’s hand was stroking his hair. It was a foreign experience to him; Mother had never been demonstrative that way. It was an experience he had longed for his entire life. To be hugged. To be given the one thing you have always wanted, and recieve it from the one person who can use it to cause the most damage... oy vey. I hope Luke can find his way back before he goes to far down that road. -----signature----- "It's not, 'Oh, they killed Anakin Solo and I always loved that character,' it's 'Oh, they broke a story engine that could have told a thousand stories in order to publish a single 'important' one.'"
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RedGold Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 6/17/07 6:22am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	LOL, Force, what force? heheheh and damn is Palpy good! -----signature----- Legend... Recluse... Forgotten... Will one day return... http://www.starwarsfanfic.com
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Layren Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 6/17/07 10:51am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Vaguely, he realized his face was buried in the Emperor’s waist, his hands were clutching the Emperor’s robes, the Emperor’s hand was stroking his hair. It was a foreign experience to him; Mother had never been demonstrative that way. It was an experience he had longed for his entire life. To be hugged. “She never…” he choked in voice ravaged by unshed tears. “I never…” “Hush, hush. I am here, Luke. I see your worth. I will never let you down. Shh…” Follow your destiny, and your heart will never break again. He did not know if it was the palace or Palpatine who whispered into his ear. He did not care. In the horrible emptiness of his grief, Luke heard and believed utterly. Absolutely horrible place to end, you evil author, poor Luke being manipulated by Palpatine and sad that the one place he got love is from one so wicked -----signature----- Proud Master to Ara-gon The Triad Chronicles http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25934993/p1/?177 (OC's) Into Another Day http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27926050/p1/?0 2008 Dear Diary Challenge I am Jinngerbread.
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BrentusofGath Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 6/17/07 8:23pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke¡¯s Story ¨C ANH AU ¨C Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs ¨C short story--Update
	"It¡¯s perfume. Senator Griselr doused my jacket with it on the sly. But it's okay?" His voice turned anxious. "Not too girly? Nah, not at all. silently snickers at sissy boy the perfume wearer "Looooove, is in zee air...Garmonsaw has girly perfume in his hair..." LOL! Did he have a really deep voice when he sang that? "Somebody who hates your guts." Inexplicably, a pair of green eyes flashed in Luke's mind. Uh-huh, I think I know who that's going to be. Vichae Organa, his opposition in the debate finals. I knew, but I didn't know all at the same time! Sneaky, furry, very sneaky. "No. But I-I knew your-your aunt very well." Dumbstruck Senator Organa? LOL!! He knew his mother quite well too. Why? Why not tell Twansa the truth? Why keep up the games? Because she can cause far more problems with the truth than with lies, though I'm sure Melgida knew already. "Hush, hush. I am here, Luke. I see your worth. I will never let you down. Shh..." Palpy? Comforting Luke? Twisted. In the horrible emptiness of his grief, Luke heard and believed utterly. I knew he would. I have foreseen it. Marvelous! Luke plunges ever further toward the end that awaits him and the rebirth that awaits the Emperor! -----signature----- In time or so I'm told, I'm just another soul for sale, oh well Feel it in my bones when you break my back, break it just to watch me bend Why'd you have to go and Let it Die? -Foo Fighters http://conscienceoftheking.blogspot.com/
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SITHTIFF Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 6/17/07 9:19pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Wow! That was kinda creepy to imagine the Emporer hugging anyone! Sigh, so it begins. I loved that bit about Luke's friend getting ready to meet "his girl." lol Anyway, thanks for the post..enjoyed it greatly. I would like to add another "prediction" if I may....Vader WILL be in the next post. -----signature----- A Smith is a Sith in hiding.
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 6/18/07 9:11am Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	WOW Very intense update. I loved it! -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 11,018
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MotionWright Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 6/18/07 5:42pm Subject: RE: In Plain Sight: Luke’s Story – ANH AU – Luke/Vader/Palpatine/Mara/OCs – short story--Update 6/16
	Intriguing as ever. I sort of expected this to happen, since Luke confessed he wanted his "mother" to love him. Which was tragic in itself, considering she wasn't really his mother but an aunt who disliked him. So of course his desire to gain her love was a weakness ... Is Luke going to be Dark in this story? -----signature----- About Fathers http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/27051840
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