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I’ve decided to revise this story. And I am working on the rest and towards the ending of the story.
Title: Mace Windu returns
author:Masterjedi343
genre:action/AU
key words: Mace Windu, Anakin Skywalker,Obiwan,Yoda,Sidious.
summary: what if Mace Windu on that long fall hadn’t died? What if he had fallen hurt onto a passing car, and just had gotten hurt? This is the fanfic if mace went to face Palpetine again in the senate arena, and Vader as normal goes to mustafar, but both obi wan and Yoda follow him. What comes of this?
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a/n: hope you all like this. The fight scene is a little altered
Chapter one
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The clash of Maces purple clashed against The Evil Sith Lords. He yelled and turned and blocked the attack. Mace couldn’t hold back a smile. This guy is a pushover. He thought to himself. Or maybe its because im so deep into Vaapad.Whatever it is the Sith will not rise. He swung at Sidious who ducked and he hit the window instead which immediately smashed. The night howled angrily at them, and sent a chill down his back. Something in the back of his mind, which was the force was telling him to look into the dark shadows, but he ignored it and continued to deflect Sidious's attacks.
"You call yourself a Sith Lord?" Spat Windu backing away laughing as he sent a chair at him which was sliced in half. The Sith lord tripped and fell and scooted backwards. Mace had barley broken a sweat. He breathed slowly focusing on stabbing that blade into his throat. Oh what it would be to end the Sith’s oppression right here and now.
"You are under arrest, my lord!" Mace said calmly the buzz of the lightsaber humming slowly at Palpetine’s throat.
Then Palpetine saw someone past Windu himself, he could feel it as well, young Skywalker had come back. Damn him! I told him not to interfere!
"Anakin!" The old man breathed, winded. "I told you it would come to this. I was right. The Jedi are taking over!!"
He looked over at Anakin who was confused, but enraged at the same time. Mace moved closer gripping his saber tighter.
"You old fool. The oppression of the Sith will never return. Your plot to regain control of the Republic is over . . . you have lost . . . " Palpetine suddenly raised his voice as it became dark and evil.
Palpetine yelled suddenly. "No! No! You will die!" He raised his hands and lighting shot out at once. Mace caught off guard blocked it quickly, and Palpetine slid back a little. Palpetine yelled again out of desperation. "He is a traitor, Anakin!!"
Mace Windu looked at Anakin, he needed Anakin’s help to kill this menace. "He’s the traitor. Stop him!"
"Come to your senses boy!" He spat at Anakin, who was looking from Mace to Palpetine and back. "The Jedi are in revolt. They will betray you, just as they betrayed me! You must Kill him!"
Mace yelled enraged now."Aarrrggghhh!" Palpetine yelled looking up at Anakin and yelled to him in a commanding way. "You are not one of them, Anakin. Don't let him kill me! Pleasee helllp meee!" He continued to shoot bolts from his hands at Mace who was yelling as the bolts were increased in power. "I am your pathway to power. I have the power to save the one you love! You must choose!! You must stop him. Kill him!"
"Don’t listen to him, Anakin."
But now the Sith Lord was getting weaker, slowly but surely.
He coughed looking at Mace with raging fire in his eyes, but he could care less.
Palpetine was getting even weaker as he began to beg now. "Help me! Don't let him kill me. I can't hold on any longer. Ahhhhhhh . . . Ahhhhhhh . . . Ahhhhhhh . ."
Mace Windu smirked, and pushed Sidious out onto the outer ledge. The wind blew onto Maces cloak, and it flapped hard in the breeze. Mace pushed the saber back at Palpetine, and he yelled as his face became distorted and ugly. His eyes turned yellow, his face sunk in to create hundreds of wrinkles. And he yelled out one more time.
"I can't ... I give up. Help me. I am weak ... I am too weak. Don't kill me. I give up. I'm dying. I can't hold on any longer..."
Mace smiled to himself again. "You Sith disease. I am going to end this once and for all. I am going to kill you."
Anakin stepped forward. "You can't kill him, Master. He must stand trial!!"
Mace looked at Skywalker. Was he serious!? He wanted this Evil pathetic Sith lord to stand trial!!! That wasn’t gonna happen. "He has too much control of the Senate and the Courts. He is too dangerous to be kept alive."
Palpetine moaned from the floor breathing hard. "I'm too weak. Don't kill me. Please." But Mace barley heard him.
The force told him to be careful of Skywalker. He kept him in his line of sight in the corner of his eye.
Anakin stepped forward again closer. "It is not the Jedi way..."
Mace raised his saber to make the plunge. Anakin yelled. "He must live..." And again the Jedi master ignored him about to kill Sidious. One strike to the head, heart or even chest would end his life forever. But what would Anakin do? Would he turn on Mace, so that he had to defend himself? Surely not..
He stepped closer.
He was feet from him.
"He must live..."
"Please. Please don’t..." The chancellor begged again.
Mace was going to do it, but just as he did Skywalker yelled. "NOOOOO!!!" and attacked Mace, who turned to meet his blue blade. The sabers sparked.
"What are you doing?!" Skywalker yelled.
"He’s a traitor to the republic! letting him live is too dangerous!"
"Letting you kill him is against the Jedi beliefs. I wont allow it." He pushed forward, and Mace pushed back.
"Anakin!!" Mace yelled trying to get through to him. "Come to your senses!!" But the reply was a shove with the force, and he was thrown backwards onto the floor, got up halfway and was thrown back again into another room across the hall. He looked up. "So be it...then." He sighed as he watched Anakin remerge into the room.
Anakin attacked high, and Mace blocked. "This is crazy Anakin!!! How can you protect that monster?!"
"Your the monster. How can you just kill him like that?"
"Anakin!" He yelled again ducking a slash to the chest. "You don’t get it do you?!" He swirled around and swiped at Anakin who parried it again like it was nothing. It was time to end this. He shoved Anakin back with the force, who stumbled and yelled releasing a large surge of Lighting, which by the look on Anakin’s face, he was shocked and pleased because Mace was sent out of the window and down to the eighth floor where a moment later, Anakin landed ready to continue.
"Dammnit Anakin! If you don’t stop this i will kill you!!"
"So...it is true!! You are planning on betraying the republic!!"
"Betray?! Anakin the Jedi are peaceful! Palpetine is the one that is EVIL!"
He blocked attack after brutal attack from Skywalker and ducked a headshot twice, then jumped over his head, and went for His arms but Windu saw this and blocked that as well. This...is getting tiresome...i need to end this now or kill him... He thought to himself breathing hard. Then a idea came to him. He saw a electrical box, and while Anakin was focused on Mace, he shoved Anakin back with the force into the box, it burst open at once and shocked him, and he then fell down smoking slightly.
Deactivating his lightsaber, he looked up, and saw the window through which was broken, and leaped into it. There was the Chancellor, or Former one now who was still laying there muttering to himself. When he looked up he yelled.
"Now...as i was saying! Say good Bye My lord your day has ended!!" The dark figure of Anakin appeared, and before he could do anything sliced Windu’s hand off, along with his saber and flipped over him and kicked him out the window into the dark Coroscant night.
~~~~~~~end chapter 1~~~~
what do you guys think so far. The fight scene i got off the game
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~~~CHAPTER TWO~~~~~
Windu...fell...fell. It felt like it was ages. He couldn’t move, so he continued to fall. Then quite suddenly he landed on something with a sickening Crunnnch The alien who was driving was yelling, and the one who was in the passengers was dead, its head against the dashboard, The alien who uncovered its long eyes saw Windu and yelled again. "Mash bach' mess tisba tisa!!" It said over and over again as it tapped Maces face. He groaned. Then he felt the car land somewhere but couldn’t tell where he was due to the fact that he was staring into the sky. But someone did grab him, and lift him off the car onto a stretcher. A Mans face appeared in his vision. "M...Master Windu!?!" The man said shocked. "This is Master Windu!! Contact master Yoda!" There were footsteps and someone standing beside Mace was gone.
"Don’t worry Master. Everything will be ok!" A nurse kept saying as they rolled him into the E.R. All Mace could mutter was "Palpetine...Sidious..." Over and over, and "Anakin...why...why Anakin?" The Dr came in a few minutes later and came into his sights again. "Lets put him out for awhile. Then when he wakes up he'll feel a lot better." A mask was put over his face, and mist swept into the tube, and into Maces nose. He slowly fell asleep.
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He opened his eyes, how long was he asleep? he didn’t know. He blinked a couple times and sat up fast. But he couldn’t move. "Maybe Master Windu." Said a voice. "You should try hitting this button." The nurse hit a button and Mace could now move. He sat up, looked around. "Where...Where am i?"
"On the other side of Coroscant. Where its Safe." Windu looked at the nurse. She was human, with dark brown eyes, A green suit with her hair falling to her shoulders. She looked at him, and Mace sat up looking around. "Why am i around the other side of Coroscant?" Windu stuttered.
"Because...you were attacked…don’t you remember? Your over on this side to be protected. Get it?" He shook his head.
"No i don’t get it. I was just attacked by a fellow Jedi Knight! Anakin Skywalker to be precise!" He was breathing hard again. "And...Sidious all this time was Palpetine!! Alll this time! You have to arrest him! " The nurse pushed him down. "No. No what are you talking about?" She brought a small machine over to him, and rested a helmet over his head. "What the hell is that?" Mace said pointing to the helmet on his head.
"Well, this is a device that tests the Brain Waves, and shows a picture of Memories. We call it Memory movies, or MM. Now we have to put you to sleep, so your memories flow normally, otherwise you’ll hide them." Mace tried to say something but the IV in his arm was making him sleep again.
He waved his hand. "Y..o...u…will..n…no….not.." And right before he fell asleep the nurse smiled, her face was smeary now. "Yoda taught us how to block that." And with that, once again he fell asleep.
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The memories appeared up on a hologram. And the Dr hit a button for sound, and scanned through the recent memories and stopped on one with Mace talking to a woman.
"Mace...how much longer can we hide this? If i am pregnant everyone will see it soon."
"Shhh its ok." Mace Windu said smiling. "Don’t worry. The Jedi wont find out. I know how to hide secrets from Yoda. Our secret is very safe." Both embraced, and kissed. The nurse coughed and the DR. frowned.
"DR! Your not suppose to be looking at personal memories...your suppose to get right to the subject as assigned!!" She smacked him in the face, and walked away. The Dr sighed and kept searching through memories. And finally found what he wanted. Evidence of what Mace said was right. Palpetine was Sidious all this time. Cursing to himself he stood up, and walked to the nurse. "Nurse...i have found evidence of what our patient said was true. He was attacked by Anakin Skywalker, and Palpetine.." The nurse stood up. "What did you say?"
The DR sighed. "Look ill show you, c’mon!" He gripped her hand and pulled her into the study room where Mace was standing watching his own image. "What the hell is this?!" He yelled pointing at the image of himself fighting Palpetine. "This is how you take your studies? Do you watch private moments too??"
"No." The nurse started. "Those are automatically blocked out. The ones of Love Making…and personal hygiene etc. All we want is the Info the patient tells us. Like what you told us about Palpetine being Sidious-"
"Grrr! You idiots i already told you! Now let me outta here!" He then turned around and ran through the open doors. Both Dr, and nurse ran after him. The nurse grabbed Mace. "Where do you think your going?"
"Out of here." Stated Windu placidly, and with that he marched out of the hospital.
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~~~~CHAPTER THREE~~~~~~~
Had this planet gone completely nuts? First he finds out that Palpetine is Sidious,then Anakin attacks him,and finnally the hospital tried to read his private thoughts..what next was gonna happen."
"Hey dude watch it!!!" A man yelled as Mace walked into the street, the guy swerved and hit a wall.Cursing he stepped out of his car, kicked it once and walked over to Mace. Great now this guy is gonna try to attack a Jedi...I am not in the mood for idiots. he thought to himself.
"Yo man! Are you nuts?! You walked right out in the middle of the streets! And not even paying attention."
"I did nothing of the sort." Said Windu bordly as he waved his hand over the guys head.
"You did nothing of the sort..." Was the mans reply.
"It was a trolly cart that you saw,and there was noone else in the street."
"It was a trolly cart i saw and noone else in the street."
"Good now get of my way." Mace Windu said as he shoved the guy and kept walking, and eventually came upon the elevator that went up to the normal streets of Coroscant. He pressed the button continually, and then he just noticed something about his hand. It was completely gone, and replaced by a metal one.
Similar to the one Anakin Skywalker had before he destroyed it, but the tips of his fingers were black, and the rest of the arm was golden, it sparkled in the dim light that hung over the elevator.
The elevator came with a TING and opened up to reveal a dirty smelly room with a few twelik's inside.
"Me wunna wunna wongga." The first Twelik said to Mace. "Im going up." Mace replied, and the Twelik spoke in basic. "OK sir, that will be five republic credits."
"Your asking a Jedi Master to give you money!?" Mace demanded enraged.
"I don’t see no Jedi Master man." The second Twelik cut in. "Only a poor man with a fake golden hand that could be worth a lot if we got a hold of it." Both laughed and Mace sighed again. "How can this get any worse?" He sighed and walked into the elevator. "Level twenty - two please guys."
The first Twelik nodded and pressed a button and the doors closed causing the elevator to shoot upwards. The force whispered a warning to him, and Mace stayed cautious the whole way up.
Then about level twelve the elevator suddenly stopped, and the wires outside screeched to a halt so all three men were flung to the side.
"What the hell?!" Both Twelik’s yelled as the top shook. Mace had a bad feeling and went to feel for his lightsaber, but it was gone. Now he remembered it was cut along with his hand. So unless they cleaned Palpetine’s office his hand was still sitting there with the saber in it. I'll have to improvise then. he told himself, looked around and saw a rusted pole and grabbed it. The roof shook again and two dark Jedi with cloaks over their face fell through, their yellow teeth and glinting eyes shining maliciously.
"We have been ordered by Lord Sidious to Kill you." And with that both Sith activated their crimson lightsabers. Mace cursed and blocked one attack but the rusty pipe was cut clean and he shoved one of them into the back wall and grabbed his lightsaber with the force, and immediately cut off the arm of one of them, then turned around and was blocked by the second Sith, who leaped into the hole and landed on the roof.
Mace followed.
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Both landed on the top and the elevator shuddered. With one swift movement of the hand, the elevator shot up again and Mace attacked the Sith. He blocked as Mace through every blow at him, and then he increased the attacks and the aggression in his attacks. "Never attack a Master at Vappad!!" Spat Windu picking up his speed and cutting both hands off the second Sith, and stabbing him. "Its dangerous." The elevator stopped and the door opened, and after jumping down into it, walked out.
He called a taxi over to him, putting the Sith’s saber in his clip until he made another lightsaber.The driver looked at him, then the lightsaber. "Want a free ride do you?" The driver asked smiling. "Anywhere you want yes yes!!"
Mace smirked, and got in. "Ok then take me to the Jedi temple on the other side of this Planet."
The driver nodded, started the engine and took off. Mace slid sideways in his seat and yelled. "AH!!" He sat upright and strapped the belt on him as the cab shot forward into oncoming traffic.
Mace Windu was vividly reminded of riding with Anakin the time that he had gotton lost and called someone for five straight hours, and finally Anakin answered. He was the only Padawan around at the time that could drive, and sadly Mace had gotton into that car with him. Which wasn’t a fun day at all because Skywalker had almost caused five accidents just swerving in and out of traffic yelling "WHOOOO RULLLLEEESSS" at the top of his voice.
When he finally got out of that hellhole a few hours later, Yoda, and all the other Jedi masters were standing waiting for him laughing. He hoped that wasn’t the case this time.
When he got finally at the Jedi Temple Noone was waiting for him. Good sign. He got out, paid the driver and walked inside.
"Master Windu. Heard of your fight with Palpetine we did. And Anakin Skywalker. OK are you?"
Mace nodded. "Yes Master Yoda.I am well thankyou for asking,but if you excuse me i must retire, I had a long day."
Yoda nodded and smiled. "Understand i do,Talk abou this tommorow we will if you wish." Mace nodded,and headed out of the room.Down the hall,and opened the door to his appartment,and someone was waiting for him.The figure turned on the light,and took off the hood. "Victor-!" Mace started but she covered his mouth with her hand. "Shhh Mace we have to talk...Sit down...Please i have some information."
~~~~~END chapter three~~~
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I am sorry no one has commented on your story. I had given this idea of thought to someone else a few months ago (but a different story), so I like seeing your take on this. Thanks for writing it.
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no problem. i knew someone would read it. i actually posted this along time ago and stopped because everyone stopped commenting on it. but i will continue posting this time even if noone reads it. But good to know that someone is  thanks for commenting
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~~~~~CHAPTER FOUR~~~~~~
"My Master." Anakin asked as he rose from a kneel. "Was killing Mace Windu really right?"
"Yes of course m'boy...Mace didn’t see clearly at all. He was corrupted by the Jedi, he wanted to kill me and end everything. But thanks to you that will never happen again. And soon i will execute order Sixty Six...which will Purge all of the Jedi." Anakin nodded agreeing. "What about my old master, Obi-Wan?"
"Hmmm. Sidious said rubbing his chin. "We shall let order sixty-six take care of him. Now go and get some rest my new apprentice. Tomorrow shall be great.
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"Victoria..." Mace said smiling. "What...what are you doing here?"
"I had to find you...we have to talk."
"About what Victoria? What’s wrong?? Are you OK?"
Victoria nodded. "Yes, yes im ok... but I am pregnant i just found out before you came home.." She rubbed her stomach smiling slightly and looked up. "What are we gonna do. Yoda will find out....he knows everything!"
Mace embraced her, and looked at her keeping his face calm. "Don’t worry about that, OK? We cant worry about that at the moment." He took off his robes. "We need to talk about Palpetine."
Victoria looked up, obviously she didn’t what had happened. So he preceded to tell her everything. About the fight, and about Anakin. Victoria was shocked she held her hands over her mouth the entire time. "Oh...how is your hand?!" She said looking at his hand. He smiled looking at her.
"Yes...yes im ok." Then when glancing at the wall clock quickly stood up. " I have a meeting in a few hours with Yoda." Victoria frowned and pulled away, and looked away. "Oh...OK...well...i know how close you and Master Yoda are." She sighed and went into the other room, and closed it.
Sighing Mace turned around and marched out of the apartment. OK...clear your mind Mace. Clear your mind of all emotion. Don’t remember anything, I have a blank board for a mind." He closed his eyes and opened them again, all memories of that even in the back of his mind and hidden as he walked towards the council room.
He fixed his Jedi robes and walks into the room where Yoda sat, the blinds drawn slowly meditating as he breathed in and out, opened his eyes and smiled. "Ah Master Windu! Yes come in you must." He walked in and sat down in the seat next to him.
"Now... troubling this matter is about Palpetine...The Dark Lord he is...Sidious that we have been looking for along time. When did you find this out?"
"Skywalker." Mace said turning to face the old Jedi master. "He came to me, and told me that Palpetine revealed himself to be the Sith Lord. Then I brought some Jedi masters to confront him...and they didn’t make it. He cut them down in one slice Master Yoda...Do you think he’s really that powerful?"
Yoda nodded. "Powerful I think he is…Fed on the darkside all these years." He shook his head sadly.
"What should we do about it?"
"Confront him, one of us must. Preferably Myself, and you Master Windu will go after Anakin. You will find out why he attacked you. But be careful you must, sense a plot i do."
"I agree. Something isn’t right."
"This fight Sidious fought well?"
Windu nodded. "Yes he fought fairly well, but Skywalker was more of a challenge."
"Disturbing this is...Skywalker turned to the darkside he has. Or getting closer to ever darkness he is."
Mace Windu nodded. "He can still be saved though. Obi-Wan will see to that."
"Onto a different matter we must go...The matter of the Wookies being attacked by the Sepritists. Go to Kashyyyk I will, and then confront Sidious." He nodded and Mace smiled. "You are very wise Master Yoda, every time i learn something else."
"Never finished learning about the force we are. Continuously learning we are." He stood up, and tapped his gimmer stick on the floor. "Dismissed this meeting is. Contact Obi-Wan you can now."
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Anakin stood up in his room and looked around. It wasn’t lit well, all that was in there was a bed, a small room which was the bathroom with a shower and small walls that made the room smaller then it was. He sighed, and sat down on his bed thinking about Padme, and what would happen if she heard he had killed a Jedi Master? Would she leave him? Would she forgive him, and comfort him?
Just as he walked out of his room, he saw clones walking to him. "Sir Your Master wants to see you." Anakin nodded, and walked towards Sidious's Chambers. He sat in his chair, his face covered by a black hood. He spun around to face him. "Ah Anakin, yes come in."
"I was thinking before you talk sir...That i want to go back with Padme, and you should come back to your office. Noone knows about you being the Dark Lord."
"Well first of all there are people who know about that. you are one of those people. And Mace is alive. You fool!! You didn’t Kill him!!"
"How was i suppose to know!?" Spat back Anakin raising his voice. He was getting tired of Palpetine’s commanding tones. He had ordered Anakin to flee with him when he kicked Mace out of the window. He had said that he would have been thrown out of the Order Immediately and possibly killed. But now he didn’t care, he wanted to go home. He missed his Padme.
Sidious stood up, and took off his hood. "Very Well Anakin. You may go...I have important business to attend to anyway."
And smiling, Anakin turned and walked out.
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"Master Kenobi." Mace smiled at him as he stood on the platform to talk over the Commlink, his arms across his chest. "Master Windu, how are you my friend?"
"Yes." Mace said nodding. "Any news about General Grievous?"
"Yes…that’s why i contacted you Master. He isn’t on Utopah..." Obi-Wan said sadly shaking his head. "But we have his exact coordinates this time. He was fleeing towards the very outer rim, near the uncharted Territory. Im not sure if we should follow, they might have a surprise waiting for us...and you know how i love surprises."
He laughed and Mace Windu chuckled then straightened his face. "Kenobi you are doing a very fine job. You need to follow Grievous, once he is killed. This war will become a lot easier."
Obi-Wan nodded. "Ok Master then i will need about..." He stopped and turned his head. "Cody! How many reinforcements do we need?"
"About Twenty-Five Thousand Sir! We only have Eighteen thousand now, we lost a lot at Utopah." Kenobi nodded and turned back to Windu who was lost in thought. [i]Wow...he lost fifteen thousand at Utopah....that’s quite a lot...The Sepritists must of come out of nowhere. This is troubling. I sense danger."
'"..Master Windu!..."
He suddenly looked up. "Im sorry Master Kenobi. That’s my fault i was lost in thought. Anyway stay where you are, I will come with you with the reinforcements, you wouldn’t mind another Master by your side would ya?" Both laughed.
"Actually Master Windu I wanted to know if Anakin could come as well as you."
There was a silence.
"I...haven’t seen him around Master Kenobi… but if i see him i will let him know." Obi-Wan nodded. "I must go now, see you soon."
Windu nodded and turned off the comm link.
Something was very wrong in the force, something was going to happen, and Mace was going to be there to stop it.
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~~~~~CHAPTER FIVE~~~~~~~
Mace was mediating in his room on the ship, The Emberator on its way to meet with Obi-Wan. Breathing in and out he let the lightside flow through him. He took a deep breath and imagined himself as a deep jar, and every inch of himself filling with the lightside, cool water.
The darkside on the other hand, filled you like poison or steroids. It made you feel good for awhile, and absorbing more and more power, and one day when your sitting alone in a large space station. You wonder where the hell has all my power gone and why am i still a virgin when im one hundred and twenty seven?
After all that being alone and a Dark Emperor Of The Sith doesn’t seem so fun. So Windu breathed in and drank from the lightside water. “There is no Emotion, there is peace. There is no Ignorance, there is Knowledge...There is no passion, there is Serenity, There is no Death, there is the force..." Mace whispered over and over again in his head, and then whispered them out loud. Once or twice a few clones looked down at him as if he were crazy. But he ignored them.
"General Windu, we have one battle ship on our sensors, what do we do?"
"Send a fleet to intercept them so we can slip by." Mace smiled, and the clone nodded.
"Yes Sir, will do." He turned around and went to send a fleet out. Mace watched as the ARC Fighters flew out, opened their wings and began to engage the Trade Federation Droid Control center. Small bursts of light began to sparkle around the ship as General Malo walked to Mace Windu. "Sir Obi-Wan is on his way to the landing bay. The enemy is distracted by our sudden bombardment so he will be here in a matter of minutes."
Mace smiled. "OK thank you commander, I will be waiting in the landing bay soon." And with that he marched towards the bay to meet Kenobi. "Hmmm." Windu thought to himself. "What if…Their sending us on a wild Goose Chase, and Grievous isn’t here at all?! Something really isn’t right...I will discuss it with Kenobi at least first."
When Kenobi's ship landed. He jumped out, and as usual shook Mace’s hand smiling broadly. "Master Windu! What a pleasant surprise. I see you brought more partiers. Sad to say that you are just three hours too late, there’s no cake left." Mace laughed. "Good to see your sense of humor isn’t effected. Anyway what is the situation on Grievous?"
"Well..." Obi-Wan started. "We now have confirmation about his location...They have headed to a planet on the very far outer rim....why? Im not completely one-hundred percent sure. Bu-" Mace cut through him.
"Do you know which planet it is Kenobi?" Mace said looking at him crossing his arms.
Kenobi nodded. "Yes Master Windu actually i do." He grabbed a info comm near by, and pressed the center. A planet appeared, completely black because it was in the very darkness of space. "This planet sir...Its inhabited by the Kunnurks…no idea what they are though. Do-"
Mace nodded. "Yes i do. They are twelve feet tall, with razor sharp claws three feet in length and three inches thick. To top all that fun stuff their stares are fatal and their completely body armored body will repel anything thrown at them. Unless it is thermo-detonators. And then even more unpleasantness, their spit is acid. And that’s about all." Obi-Wan grinned.
"They don’t expand their chest and roar at us so we all die?"
Both Jedi Masters laughed for about five minutes, and then Mace shook his head No. "No Master Kenobi...they don’t and that’s a good thing...Now how about Anakin have you contacted him?"
Obi-Wan nodded. "Yes i did...and for some reason he didn’t want to come, he said he had personal matters with the Chancellor...."
"What?!" Mace blurted out. "He’s been meeting with the Chancellor again? For how long?"
"Maybe for the past Week? But the absence of Master Kit Fitso is weird. Or Kai-Adi-Mundai..."
"Master Kenobi you don’t know?" Obi Wan shook his head no. "Master Kenobi...I took some Jedi Masters down to Palpetine’s Office...and.." He told Obi-Wan the whole story. How could he NOT know? It was all over the holonet. On the other hand he was away on Utopah all this time so there was Maces answer. Obi-Wan’s mouth dropped when he heard about Anakin. "Anakin?! Annnakin did that?" He grabbed Maces arm as if he thought he was lying, and looked at it and sighed. "That boy is getting out of control."
"I have been assigned to go to Anakin after this Battle, and ask him the basics. Why he did this? Why he thought it was right. Did Palpetine have anything to do with this?"
"That question Master Windu, I can answer. I would say that Palpetine, or Sidious we might as well call him now...in one of their private sessions talked about attacking you. Or something else...Im not sure." A Clone walked to them, and saluted them. "Sir there are no reports of any enemies in the area..."
"Be careful when you come out of hyperspace Three Three - Seven they might be in cloak mode waiting to spring a trap."
"Or sir…could it be that this new area is blocking our signals?"
Obi-Wan nodded. "Very good three three seven! I would never thought of that. Prepare to go to battle at a moments notice, make sure everything is ready." Three three seven nodded and walked off, as a announcement came over the intercom system. "All crew we are now coming out of Hyper-Space. All fighters be ready to man stations. All fighters be ready to man your stations."
And so both Masters walked down the length of the ship at a quick pace, and had just turned down the corridor to the ARC bay when the ship pulled out of hyperspace and the ship was suddenly engulfed in blackness. Nothing was seen it was total darkness. Bull crap! DAMN he thought to himself as he activated his lightsaber.
The purple light shone onto the floor pushing back the blackness which seemed thicker and more dense then normal darkness. Obi-Wan activated his blue blade, and as it hummed to life the blue blade cast a shadow over the floor, and into the bay. The lights flickered and the backups came on, but very dim. Then they suddenly grew bright.
"This is a give away hazard!!" Obi-Wan yelled as he grabbed his comm there was a BOOM that shook the ship and then thousands of laser blasts, accompanied by the sounds of the drone of droids flew over head.
Mace cursed again and flicked his hand at the emergency signal and it went off like a fog horn, the red and green lights spinning very fast as the lights flashed onto the clones as they raced to their fighters. Both masters followed.
"How the hell are we gonna find Grievous on this planet?!" Obi-Wan muttered to himself as he jumped into his Jedi star fighter.
"Use the force Master Kenobi...let it guide you through this battle. Relax, and may the force be with you."
"And you master."
Then as the shield opened both flew into the dark battle.
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~~~~~CHAPTER SIX~~~~~~
"Open up into attack formation T..." Mace said over the intercom, and the clones obeyed then twirled into the T formation. "I've got your back Master Windu." A clone officer said over the com as all fighters headed into the head on battle. Explosions dotted the blackness of space as Mace blasted the enemies out of his way, he grabbed the com and spoke to Kenobi.
"Kenobi you there?"
"Yes im here...for the moment anyway."
"Good, what i need you to do is come and meet me wherever you are. We’re gonna take a capital ship, and make it ours."
"So your saying for us to attack a capital ship straight head on with all those blasters firing?"
"Use the force Master Kenobi, let it guide your actions. Listen to its wisdom and follow its instructions." Mace shot back sounding a little annoyed now as he twirled his Star Fighter blasting several droids to bits. Obi-Wan did as he was told and flew over their own command ship they just left, and headed for Maces purple star fighter that flashed in the battle.
"OK. This is how it will go down." He started. "We will separate into three sections. Obi-Wan take the left flank I will take the middle and Three Three Seven will take the right. We will attack the enemy command ship, board it and capture it hoping that the general is inside and isn’t on that awful planet below. Let us begin and may the force be with us all."
Obi-Wan nodded and shot off to the left with around two hundred fighters following him. Mace picked up his speed as the enemy surrounded his flank. At one time a hellfire droid wouldn’t get off him, and he had to call for help. "I need some help over here!!" He yelled as he twirled over and over through the battle as groups of droids followed clones, destroying them and the opposite.
The good thing about clones was; They always worked together in groups, So if one group was under heavy fire by the enemy, another group would swing around blowing the hell out of the guns or whatever was attacking them. Kenobi came over the intercom. "Sir were gonna have to take out those tower gun torrents first we wont get in, and if we do we definitely wont get out."
"I agree Master Kenobi...we’ll let Three three seven handle that." There was a "Copy that Sir." From Three three, and his spun away up towards the gun towers and began to impale it with heavy fire. One of the turrets exploded catching several droids on fire and sending them into oblivion.
Kenobi decided to try to contact Anakin while in battle to have some sense of the past. Flying with Master Mace Windu wasn’t exactly fun. He was the "Get it done at all costs, no fooling around." Kind of guy…Which was good because most of the time Anakin was foolhardy rushing into things too fast.
But just as he touched the comm it beeped. And low and behold, who should it be?
"Master!! It has been too long!" Came Anakin’s voice over the comm. Obi-Wan had to hide a smile which was wiped off his face as he saw a clones cockpit open and the pilot was sucked out, and began to expand. First his legs burst then followed by his midsection and finally head. Distracted again by Anakin’s familiar voice he was almost hit with a direct hit. His clone officer came on. "Be careful Sir!!" He flew left and was turned into a ball of fire by the shield cannons now firing rapidly in all directions at the ARC fighters.
"Master?"
"Sorry Anakin, im in the middle of saving my ass. Give me a second."
Anakin burst into laughter. It was so hard to imagine Anakin had attacked Mace....But then again he did a lot of crazy things.
"Anakin I was just about to contact you...We have to AHHH!" Obi-Wan’s cockpit shook, and Anakin yelled. "What Happened Master?!"
"Just a little scare is all..." Replied Kenobi smoothly, and looked to his astromech droid. "You ok there Artoo-dee three?" The little droid beeped a response that meant it was OK.
"Anyway Anakin…Mace told me you attacked him. Why?"
"Because Master! He was going to execute Palpetine!! And without even a trial too! I couldn’t allow him to do that. And he’s alive??" He added shocked. "I..."
"Yes yes kicked him out of a ten story window. He feel on a car and was OK…But that isn’t the point! First of all why would he attack Palpetine without a reason?"
"Well he had a reason...because Palpetine is Sidious...the dark lord we've been looking for."
"What?!!" Spat Obi-Wan narrowly avoiding a missile. "Palpetine...all this time is Sidious!?!? We could have let him rot on that ship! We risked our lives for that old fossil! Grrr." He was so annoyed and distracted he didn’t realize Mace contacting him.
"Master Kenobi do you copy?! I’ve been saying that for the last five minutes. The turrets are down on the ship. We can start our run."
"Obi-Wan your in a battle right now and your talking to me?" Anakin said amused smiling.
"Yes i am, but you contacted me!" Obi-Wan laughed back. Ahhh just like old times...My apprentice and i talking to each other freely. So wonderful.." He thought to himself as he contacted a clone. "Clone turn to point Point Seven Three there’s a fighter coming in at you full speed, ill drop back and take him out, then well head for the hanger."
"Why didn’t you tell me about this master?" Anakin said after Five minutes after Obi-Wan destroyed the incoming fighter.
"Because we tried to contact you Anakin, and you said you had other stuff to attend to..."
"Ah...yes…that.." He coughed. "Well if you’ll excuse me Master i must go. May the force be with you."
"And you Anakin...and you..."
Mace came back over the comm once again. 'Time to land Kenobi…Prepare the landing cycle."
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Yoda was on his way to Kashyyyk on the giant war ship titled The Banner because Yoda couldn’t think of a name for it as the ship was brand new. These giant ships oddly called "Star Destroyers." were nothing of the sort. Sure this thing could devastate a planet. But no republic mission was to destroy a planet, therefore the name was meaningless and Yoda had given it the name The Banner. which was the first word that came to him when he saw it for some reason.
And even a ship that’s six miles long is even bigger to a two foot Master like Yoda. "Have to walk i do." Yoda said one night sounding not to happy. "Three miles across this ship to use the bathroom." Everyone around in the facinity burst into laughter, and He was reassigned to a bedroom cot right across the nearest bathroom.
He was staying with a clone named "Sharp." who was most likely named after he had killed over one hundred and fifty droids. Or maybe it was due because he was a assassin clone sent on special missions with which he was equipped with a two inch blade, and lighting fast reflexes which might give the regular Jedi a workout, whereas when they trained with Yoda they couldn’t touch him at all.
"Too slow you are Sharp." Yoda had said one day after practicing in the armory. He called his saber to him with the force and reattached to his belt.
"Yes Master Yoda. I will keep training so one day i may actually hit you."
"End the galaxy will when A clone touches me." He chuckled and limped off using his Gimmer stick for support.
When he walked to the front of the command ship, the command officer turned and saluted Yoda. "Sir we are a hour away from Kashyyyk. We have a greeting message from the leader. Tarful i think his name is.
Yoda nodded. "Play the message, Yes."
Sharp pushed the button and a wookie with his hair tied in brads around his shoulders appeared. He growled low, then let out a series of short grunts. Yoda nodded, and smiled a bit after the greeting ended.
"He says he will be very happy to accept help. Holding the enemy off the Wookies are. Stopped the attack they have. Planning the enemy is. But the darkside is clouding the outcome of this battle.." He shook his head. "And also a lot of causalities suffered they have, but holding their position they are."
*******
Both Jedi Star-Fighters glided into the enemy capital ship and slid across the floor, then both landed slowly. Obi-Wan opened his cockpit and jumped out. "Lets hope this ship stays in once piece ...unlike the last time Anakin isn’t here to fly half a ship...Anyway ready to go Master Windu?"
He nodded as he jumped out of his ship, and put his hood over his head. Obi-Wan did the same.
******
"General Grievous." A droid said walking to him "We have a breech in the hanger bay."
Grievous hacked for a minute then said. "Get all the droids to the hanger bay, and prepare more for battle. He coughed again.
"Yes, Sir." Replied the droid as he pressed a button and two battalion of droids, or about two hundred droids mixed with super battle droids activated just as Mace and Obi-Wan walked into the second room of the hanger bay. Kenobi glanced at Windu. "So much for the surprise eh? Guess this means the surprise party for Grievous is ruined."
Mace nodded smiling a little. That Obi-Wan...man...What a Jedi. Qui-Gon trained him well.
Both Jedi activated their lightsabers.
~~~~~~~END CHAPTER SIX~~~~~~~
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~~~~~CHAPTER SEVEN~~~~~
The commanding officer of The Banner walked to Yoda.
"Sir, we are Only Ten minutes away from Kashyyyk What would you like to do?"
"Pull out of hyperspace, and send out clones to check damage on the planet we must. Help out with the damage is our first priority."
The commander nodded, and pressed his com link. "General."
"Yes sir?"
"Begin your run to the planet. There are no enemies in space but there are on the planet.
The clone commander nodded, then added. “Oh! And your ship is ready for departure.” He nodded then headed back to the front of the ship.
Yoda grabbed his gimmer stick, and with a grunt headed off again towards his destination. Ten minutes later however he had barley gotton down the corridor when he decided it was much much faster to force run. So calling upon the force and soaked himself in it, and launched forward towards the end of the ship to where the hanger bay lie.
He walked onto the smaller ship that was the size of Padme’s personal ship.( The Nubion) The officer onboard greeted Yoda who nodded back. “Let us go then.”
And the small smooth ship took off into the great black coldness of space.
******
“Master Kenobi.” Windu said as he looked to his left. “Looks like were unwelcome .”
Obi-Wan nodded smiling slightly. “Shall we show these droids who’s boss?”
Both Masters activated their lightsabers, and attacked the droids head on. Cutting through the metal junk was meaningless. Mace cut them down with much ease. He swished his hand and all the droids around them flew back into floor, which sparked.
"Waste of my time..." Mace muttered as both continued forward.
Kenobi opened the door, and stepped into the door way, Obi-Wan leading when both Jedi were suddenly cut off from each other as a purple force field.
"Damn, well have to split up and go around to meet each other on the other side. Good luck Master Kenobi. See you in a few."
"And may the force be with you Master." Kenobi turned around and headed north, while Mace Windu headed west.
Mace's corridor was empty as he held his lightsaber loosely in his hand calling upon the force to guide him safely. No danger so far.
Obi-Wan’s was clear too. Until he came to a split five way fork. He grabbed his com, and contacted Mace.
"Mace Windu here."
"Master, there is a split end corridor and the darkside has-"
"Kenobi! I wont lecture you here. But you must see past the darkside. Dip into the force as much as you can go. And you will eventually see a solution to the problem at hand. Now lets get back to work." And with that he switched off the comm. Damn.,.why cant Kenobi figure that out by himself? He is a Jedi master...but i didn’t suggest it. Although i have respect for him now." Suddenly he realized he was talking to himself and stopped.
Obi-Wan sighed and turned off the comm link. He tried to sink himself in the force. He imagined himself in a pool, then saw himself duck under and sink all the way to the bottom. The water was the force.
He looked around, the force wasn’t working. There seemed to be a fog over his sense of the force. Which was the darkside clouding it. So he tried some improve. He thought about the fight with Maul, how he had killed his Master so ruthlessly. How he had laughed at him. Then he saw himself explode out of that generator attacking the Sith head on. He felt the anger in his chest rise. It was like a warm sensation slowly burning the inside of him. He let it up slowly, and tried to focus again.
Before he made his decision however, he sensed something else to the far left end, then began marching purposefully towards down the end of the corridor. Suddenly his mind exploded into the biggest headache he had ever had. He couldn’t walk, he stumbled and grabbed onto the wall, then slowly slid down it gripping his head yelling with intense pain. His head pulsed with pain and he collapsed to the ground.
Then the pain ceased at once. It suddenly went from being too horrible to bare, to like nothing had happened. He stood up shaking his head, and turned around seeing a large droid standing there. The arms were covered in shields with small knives protruding out of it. The top of the head was round with what looked like a sonic senor which was probly the reason Obi-Wan suddenly collapsed.
The droids rose its arm, and a gun popped up and suddenly began firing. But Obi-Wan was ready. He blocked the blasts so they bounced back, but they were absorbed by the armor. The droid continued to fire on Kenobi who kept deflecting the blasts, but now the droids was closing in. Obi-Wan got ready for close combat, twirled his saber once and brought it into a defense.
The droids arm opened and a green blade ignited. Did this droid have a Lightsaber ?!
How... Obi -Wan thought to himself. How…can the Sepritists get a hold of lightsaber crystals!!? He backed up blocking the hits and force pushed it. The droid slid back but as he attacked the droid blocked with precise accuracy. "Damn droids! Their getting really smart! AH!" He ducked as the droid cut across the top of him, but he avoided it.
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Yoda rode the ship onto the wooden landing bay, where several wookie warriors were standing ready. Yoda slowly walked down the ramp as the Wookie’s transport arrived. He walked on, and the giant dragonfly driven by a wookie took off into the air the drone of the wings in Yoda’s ear.
About twenty minutes later he landed at the command center, a round hut filled with clones. The battlefield which some was on water, was full of bodies brown ones, and clones both scattered along with the cut down scrap of the droids which was slowly pileing up. A steady stream of dark smoke rose into the air from several destroyed ATT Tanks. Yoda walked to Tarful who was standing next to his son Chewbacca.
"Hello Chewbacca, Hello Tarful."
Both growled a reply.
"What is the situation?"
Tarful growled low, and told Yoda that the Sepritists were pushed back to their line as of now. But they may be getting reinforcements together to re-attack them full force.
Yoda nodded, and smiled. "About to change that will now that in command i am." Tarful bent down and shook his hand and roared a thank you.
"Pleasure of mine, it is." He bowed.
*****
Mace continued to walk down his boring stretch of corridor until he heard the twirl of electro staffs. The general guards had found Mace. He turned around ,and activated his lightsaber.
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Obi-Wan dodged the low blow, and stabbed the droid in the leg, which finally caused it to collapse. The arm opened up revealing a lightsaber which rolled to Kenobi’s foot. It had the odd distinction of Qui-Gon’s lightsaber, which was of course now a design for training sabers. But this one. This one felt real. How could Grievous get his rusty hands on this?
He started to walk forward again, when three of Grievous Body Guards popped out from the ceiling and began swinging their staffs.
"Oh...woooonderful.." Obi-wan said frowning. "Just what i need now." And with that he activated the green saber along with his blue one and attacked the guards.
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~~~~CHAPTER EIGHT~~~~~~~
The guards twirled their staffs and Obi-Wan blocked them as fast as he could. He backed up and jumped up so both his legs went and stuck to the wall, and then he stabbed one in the back of the head. It sparked and fell flat on its back. The other two however weren’t giving up one of them followed Kenobi by running up the side of the wall. Obi-wan used the force, and leaped off the wall.
Unfortunately the guard blocked the attack and pushed him back so the other one had time to close in. The second one which was behind him swung his staff forward, Kenobi ducked which caused the impalement of the first guard. Suddenly It turned around nailing Obi-wan right in the face sending both sabers flying, and rolling. Kenobi called the staff to him which sprang to life as he twirled it.
"Damn droids!!" He said to himself as he blocked the raining attacks of the guard. He backed up, looked around and saw a rail on the side of a staircase, He used the force and picked a piece off that, then sent it flying at the droid who was too slow and was thrown against the wall by it. Kenobi tossed the staff to the floor and called both sabers to him. Hooked the green one on his clip and kept his blue one out.
Suddenly from a side wall, a hole was burned in it. The faint glow burning through plaster as it sank away it sent the strong smell of paint in the air. Mace burst through fighting four guards at a time, then Kenobi seeing the trouble ran over to help.
Mace kicked a guard in the head and tossed his saber at him keeping the droid in place as he was cut in half. "Got him!" And using Vappad he called upon both the light, and dark force threw one of the guards out the window which was a bad idea, because it caused a vacuum so fast that Mace barley had anytime to grab Obi-wan and drag him behind the wall which was now a door.
"Where did all those come from?" Kenobi asked Mace looking at him stunned.
"They just kept coming, and after i had killed about two, more came! It was crazy...but i think their all gone now."
Kenobi nodded and pointed at a staircase which was spiraling up to the top of the ship.
Both began to ascend the staircase slowly, and met nothing on the way. So far So good. Mace thought to himself as both arrived on the next landing which was one way forward leading up a slight incline. They followed the incline until it arrived into a gigantic floor, covered in tiles. The roof was like a cathedral reaching up to the top, and descending from the top was a hanging chandelier, containing about four-hundred lights and what looked like wings curving from the top all the way down the design.
If that wasn’t enough fit for a queen, this would; There were velvet carpeting leading up a staircase and around the second floor of the room along with several paintings of large battles which showed several people being impaled in the head by a primitive Sith.
"That...picture is Exar Kun..." Mace said stunned looking at the picture.
Obi-wan looked up at the picture and shrugged. "And that means what?"
"That means..." Another voice said behind them, and then coughed. "You are all doomed!!" Mace and Kenobi turned around on the spot to see Grievous standing there and for once not running.
"Ah...General Grievous how is that chest?" Mace commented laughing slightly.
"Shut Up you foolish Jedi! I will make you pay for what you did to me!" The side doors opened which neither Jedi saw, and in came two guards. Obi-wan knew what exactly they were for.
"Mace...what Grievous is gonna do is-"
"Yes yes i know." Windu said angrily. He glared at Grievous ,and Kenobi was watching him so intently he didn’t see both guards attack him.
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Mace leapt into battle, and Grievous activated two lightsabers. He swung a yellow one over Maces head which he blocked and moved up the stair case with the General backing away. He leapt up his hands now his feet as he tossed the saber in the air fighting with both his feet and hands. Mace was having fun though, not too much of a challenge as long as he stayed in concentration. And slowly stole from the darkside. Maces power quickly increased.
Grievous was quickly backing away using everything he could to stay ahead of Mace. He twirled around throwing sabers in the air, catching them with his foot, but The Jedi Master had had enough. He tossed one of the sabers with the force and caught it.
"Tell me one thing first General.." Taunted Mace. 'How did you get a hold of Qui-Gon’s Saber?"
The general smiled. "Well first of all when we kidnapped Palpetine, I also broke into the Jedi vault in the back of the temple. And since all the Jedi were concentrated on the attack on Coruscant there were hardly any Jedi around. Soooo i just broke in there, grabbed Quigon’s, and left a fake one. Are you ready to die now Jedi?!"
"Lets see what you can do then."
"AHAHAHA…Watch this Jedi!!" Then his arms spread into four arms. But Mace wasn’t impressed. The general is so predictable he thought to himself as he blocked the attacks and force crushed one of Grevious's arms. It crumbled into a heap and stuck to the side not moving. Grabbing two more sabers from the inside of his cloak, he threw them at Mace but they were stopped and just cluttered to the ground.
"AHHHHH!" And with one yell and a swipe, the Jedi master had stabbed the so called Great General Grievous through the metal plate which protected his lungs and heart, and causing a leak of blood he gripped his plate trying to fix it, but the blood was pouring out. Making one more move Windu squeezed the lungs of his enemy which burst suddenly and died right there.
Breathing hard Mace deactivated his lightsaber and fell to the floor to regain his composure.
*****
Obi-wan on the other hand had to flip backwards over a table and continued fighting. He sliced the staff of the guard he was fighting in half, which caused It to pause and gave him the chance to cut off the head.
The door burst open that Mace and Obi-wan had come through, and Clones stormed in firing at the guards. "And the Calvary arrives!" Obi-wan yelled happily watching the enemy fall. He glanced up expecting to see Mace looking down smiling, but there was no Mace smiling.He was staring blankly ahead muttering to himself.
"Master Windu!!"
That seemed to snap him out of it. He nodded and leaped over the staircase, and landed. "Im sorry Master Kenobi...i was lost in thought. That never happens."
"Don’t worry about it Mace." Said Kenobi grinning patting him on the back. "But i did sense something i haven’t before…what was it?"
"Oh…not to worry Obi-wan, it was just my intense fighting in Vappad. You sensed the darkside rise in me didn’t you?"
He nodded. '"Yes i did...and it wasn’t a nice feeling."
"Im sorry Master Obi-wan. Yoda says i have to really understand both sides of the force to use Vappad, or else i would have fallen Years ago. Im glad i didn’t."
"I agree. Anyone would want a ass kicking Master Jedi who has Mastered Vappad. And is one hell of a strategist." He punched him in the shoulder.
"Well thank you Master Kenobi. Im glad we accepted you onto the council."
A clone walked to the Jedi masters. "Sirs, the battle is dying down, What should we do?"
"Go to the front of the ship, and well head back to Coruscant." Mace said turning to the clone.
The clone nodded, then turned around and headed off. Mace turned back to Obi Wan. "I sense something amiss on Coruscant...something is going to happen."
Ten minutes later the ship creaked, and then lurched into Hyper-Space.
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On Kashyyyk Yoda was waiting patiently. His eyes were closed, but he felt a disturbance in the force but before he could go into it further he sensed a clone near him. "Sir their penetrating our outer forces. We are ready for them back here."
Yoda nodded, a little annoyed that he was disturbed but got up all the same and walked to where Tarful was mounting the cannon that was resting near the center of the hut, But was facing outwards. The beach was very well armed. A defense gun sat every five feet. He was ready for one of the greatest fights that he had ever been in.
But little did he know that at that moment both Sidious and his new apprentice were planning when to make their move and strike out like a snake from their hiding place in the darkness, waiting to strike at the right moment and make the killing move.
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RE: Mace Windu Returns..and becomes a Sith Lord?! updated 6/23/07 Please Read
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thank you. I got this idea and ive been interested in it awhile. its 100+ pages on my microsoft word  . glad you liked it. ill pm you with the next update
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masterjedi343
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6/25/07 2:53pm
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RE: Mace Windu Returns..and becomes a Sith Lord?! updated 6/23/07 Please Read
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6/30/07 5:22pm (2 edits total)
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~~~~CHAPTER NINE~~~~~~~
Jedi Master Cin Drallig couldn’t sense anything. He looked at his apprentice , Serra. "Serra can you feel anything in the force?"
She shook her head no. "No Master i cant....Why is that?"
Her Master shook his head. "Im not sure...But something dark, something dark is going to happen. I can feel it."
The Jedi knight felt it too. "I feel it also, but im not sure what it is.." She tried to concentrate but there was something like a barrier holding her back. The harder she pushed, the more it pushed back. Cin suddenly stood up, and walked out of the training area, and crossed over to another section where several Jedi and padawans were studying.
They all greeted him as he walked in. "Yes yes hello." He said smiling faintly. "I wanted to know if any of you could sense anything farther then a disturbance in the force."
"We haven’t tried that yet Master. Would you like us to?"
Cin nodded.
All Five Jedi, and the two padawans sitting around the table closed their eyes concentrating. A small Padawan shook his head looking up. "Nothing Master Cin. Im sorry."
"Its ok Xin. I feel something but i have no idea what it is."
"Its like a wall is blocking my mind Master.. " One of the younglings spoke up looking at Cin frowning.
Serra looked to her Master. " Master Cin...what if the darkside is clouding our vision because something is about to happen?
Cin nodded looking grave. "Keep a eye out everyone. Be mindful something is amiss.
Then Cin turned around, and walked away towards the front of the temple, and library
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"Fifteen minutes until we come out of Hyperspace Sir."
Mace nodded. "Good. I sense a disturbance in the force, Do you feel it Obi Wan?" He nodded looking a little uneasy.
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"Lord Vader, It is now time for you to cleanse the Jedi Temple. I want you to head towards the temple, and wipe out every single Jedi. Leave Noone alive. Do not hesitate. Show no mercy. Then after that you are to set fire to it, and finally go to Mustafar and kill all the leaders of the Sepritists. Then we will have peace.
"I understand my master." Vader said in a drone, bowing his head still. "I will not return until the task is completed."
"Good, my apprentice you are very Ambitious, that’s very good in a Sith. Rise my new friend and together we will bring peace, and save the galaxy...Nooow go."
Vader nodded, got up on both legs and walked away. Damn Sidious making me get down on one knee...Getting my new suit all dirty. His office is Filthy… He shook his head and walked to the compound where all the clones were gathered, and talked until they were needed for battle.
"Listen up 501st legion!" Vader yelled into the hall which rang around the room. "Were going on a special mission to the Jedi temple. Get ready to kill some Jedi. Leave Noone alive. Do not take prisoners kill everyone, and everything you see. Load up and follow me."
There was in one tremendous roar of a voice. "Yes Sir!!" Then the clones departed from the mass to grab their helmets ,and guns.
What a truly wonderful day. He thought to himself I get my wife saved, and get to kill some Jedi scum for my new empire...and possibly feel the pleasure of my blade sinking into my old master. He smirked, his eyes turning from blue to a darker blue with a mix of yellow. He fed on more power feeling his power rise more and more. And yet he suddenly felt weaker. There was a blur in his eyes for a moment, and something swirled around his eyes. A premonition.
…I don't know you anymore. Anakin, you're breaking my heart. I'll never stop loving you, but you are going down a path I
can't follow..." stuttered Padme on the verge of tears.
"Because of Obi-wan?!" Shot back Vader. Anger was rushing through his veins, like adrenaline. He was so angry but he didn’t want to hurt his angel.
Padme choked, and held her mouth then tried to continue. "Because of what you've done . . . what you plan to do. Stop, stop now. Come back! I love you!"
Then Vader spotted Obi-wan. "Liar!!" Suddenly the vision ended, and Vader stumbled. A clone caught him. "You ok sir?" He wrenched his arm away.
"Yes i am. Now get back to work."
The clone nodded, turned around and walked away. He walked to the front of the Platoon, activated his saber and began marching towards his enemy, then glancing at the Temple which would be the last time it would be standing.
~~~~~~~ END CHAPTER NINE~~~~~~~~
A/N: If anyone knows the real batallion that went with vader to the temple i can fix it to the right one in this scene thanks
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