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jacen200015 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 5/31/07 12:50pm Subject: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 9/7) - Date Edited: 9/7 4:53pm (7 edits total) Edited By: jacen200015
	Title: My Father Author: jacen200015 Timeframe: Characters: Jamie, Anakin and Obi-Wan Genre: AU, Short story Keywords: Anakin Summary: Sequel to My Master Notes: I'm back with a sequel to My Master. In this sequel we will be visiting the thoughts of Obi-Wan's son, Ximun-Tae Cevin Kenobi aka Jamie. This fic starts off near where My Master left off. I have been considering having Anakin's thoughts included as well, but i am not sure yet. If you all want to hear Anakin's thoughts then tell me in your review and i'll do so. I might even have Obi-Wan's thoughts added too if anyone is interested. Yes, Obi-Wan is alive I'm looking forward to your responses. Enjoy -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It's that time of year again. My Master gets so quiet and withdrawn during this time. Sometimes he leaves without warning for a couple of days to search for my father. My father is dead, why can't my Master see that? Even if my Master did find my father, I’m not sure if I would want to see him. My Master warns me about my anger and bitterness, but I can't help it, it just can't seem to go away. I kick at my bedroom wall and then look out of the window into the dark night. I sense my Master leave the planet and shake my head. It's been about eleven years since my father disappeared. He's not coming back. I sit down on my bed and run a hand through my reddish brown hair. I should go to bed, I have classes in the morning, but I don't think I can sleep. The door opens a crack and a tiny hand reaches up to switch on the light before coming inside. The light momentarily blinds me, but I know who it is. I sigh in annoyance and flop down on my bed. I tell Cera to leave, but she sits down on my bed beside me instead. Cera is my Master's eight-year-old daughter, and the youngest. She has her mother's brown hair and her father's blue eyes. My master also has twins, Luke and Leia who are twelve years old. There is also Jirianna, who is ten years old. Cera has an irritating way of knowing when I’m in a bad mood, not matter how hard I shield. Ugg, can she just leave me alone! I try to ignore her, but she is to stubborn to realize that I want to be left alone! I close my eyes and tell her that I’m sleeping, but she doesn't fall for it. She wants me to tell her a joke. How is that supposed to make me feel better? I tell her to leave again and she refuses. Why does she have to be so stubborn? She has this crazy idea that it’s her job to make people happy. For crying out loud, can she just go play with her dolls or something? I get under my covers and put my pillow over my face to block out the light. I tell her it’s late and that she should be sleeping. I feel her lay down beside me and feel her gaze on me. I knew that if I were to look into her eyes, she would be giving me the look that tends to make people want to give in. I hate that look, it makes me feel guilty. Slowly the time passes and I can hear Cera yawn. I hope she'll get sleepy enough to decide to go to bed. The time continues to pass by and then I hear a tiny snoring sound. I groan as I realize that she has fallen asleep, on my bed! Getting out of bed, I pick Cera up, carry her to her room, and tuck her into her own bed. I wish I could be at the Temple like the other padawans, but the only time I’m at the temple is when my Master and I have to report to the Council after a mission or to participate in lightsaber tournaments, or if I have to take classes that I can’t get away from the Temple. My Master says that it’s a good idea to train away from the Temple and that the training is well rounded. I sit back down on my bed and sigh. Well rounded indeed. I must be the only padawan who has to do at least two hours of community service everyday. Yesterday I had the task of washing landspeeders! I’m sure al my friends at the Temple would laugh at me if they knew. They would probably think that I had done something wrong and that’s why I have to do community service. Luke and Leia don’t seem to have a problem with doing community service, they don’t understand why I dislike it so much. The other two are lucky, they don’t have start community service until they are twelve. I need a vacation. A personal, long, vacation. I don’t know where I would go, but anywhere that’s far away from my Master and his family will be nice. Maybe I could hang out for a few days wit the Gungans? No, I think my patience will be worn thin to fast. They are a good people, but a few of them can be a little…um… irritating. I think they take a longer time to mature than humans do. Now what about the Wookiees? I can hang out with them in the trees. Of course they might inform my Master of my location. I could go to Tatooine, but that’s to close to Naboo. Alderaan would be a nice place, but it might get boring. Oh, I don’t know where I would go. I just need to get away from here. -----signature----- If I review then PM me when you update. thanks so much. Send me your completed 'the saga' stories! Check out my new story Descent Into Darkness Don't quote me the odds. I shall do as I must. Do or do not, there is no try.
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 6/1/07 4:01am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	Ah the perils of being young and having to obey rules you don't like or understand! Poor Anakin certainly has his hands full. I loved little Cera trying to lift Jaime's spirits. That was very sweet If you have a PM list, please add me? for the record, I'd love to read Anakin's thoughts as well as Obi-Wan's. Looking forward to more -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 6/4/07 7:54am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	I agree, I'd like to hear Anakin's thoughts as well. This is off to a very good start. Please put me on your PM list if you've got one. -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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erikawr05 Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 6/4/07 7:36pm Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	that was a good start i also would love to hear anakin's and obi-wan's thoughts. pleas add me to the Pm list i you have one
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jacen200015 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 6/23/07 7:12pm Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	KELIA: Ah the perils of being young and having to obey rules you don't like or understand! Yeah. Poor Anakin certainly has his hands full. Indeed. Who will give him grey hairs first, his padawan or his children? I loved little Cera trying to lift Jaime's spirits. That was very sweet Yeah If you have a PM list, please add me? Sure for the record, I'd love to read Anakin's thoughts as well as Obi-Wan's. Can do Looking forward to more More is coming soon. VaderLVR64: I agree, I'd like to hear Anakin's thoughts as well. That's two votes This is off to a very good start. Please put me on your PM list if you've got one. You've been added erikawr05: that was a good start Thanks i also would love to hear anakin's and obi-wan's thoughts. That's three votes pleas add me to the Pm list i you have one Sure can PM List: KELIA VaderLVR64 erikawr05 -----signature----- If I review then PM me when you update. thanks so much. Send me your completed 'the saga' stories! Check out my new story Descent Into Darkness Don't quote me the odds. I shall do as I must. Do or do not, there is no try.
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 6/24/07 8:32am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	Aww, Anakin's padawan doesn't seem too fond of him. And hmm..what's this thing about Ani needing to find Obi-Wan...? Looks like I'm off to read the prequel Great start -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Proud Obi/Ani shipper! Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 Class of '09 forever!!!
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 6/24/07 6:01pm Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	My Master was a wonderful story. So sad and yet it produced some wonderful children. So I am anxious to read My Father, Obi-Wan's son has a lot of anger in him, and even though he says not. I think he needs his Father. Wonderful start. Could you PM me please. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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jacen200015 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 6/26/07 7:49am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master
	Alley_Skywalker: Aww, Anakin's padawan doesn't seem too fond of him. Yeah And hmm..what's this thing about Ani needing to find Obi-Wan...? Looks like I'm off to read the prequel Good idea Great start Thanks Gkilkenny: My Master was a wonderful story. So sad and yet it produced some wonderful children. So I am anxious to read My Father, Obi-Wan's son has a lot of anger in him, and even though he says not. I think he needs his Father. Indeed, he has issues. Wonderful start. Could you PM me please. Sure PM List: KELIA VaderLVR64 erikawr05 Gkilkenny -----signature----- If I review then PM me when you update. thanks so much. Send me your completed 'the saga' stories! Check out my new story Descent Into Darkness Don't quote me the odds. I shall do as I must. Do or do not, there is no try.
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jacen200015 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 6/26/07 7:52am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 6/26)
	Ugg. Politics are such a headache. This is the most irritating class I have ever had. Of course if I was at the Temple I would still have to take this course. My Master is not to fond of politics either, but he does his best to act interested when his wife talks about things going on in the Senate. There is one plus to this class. I can ask my Master’s wife for help on my assignments. I’ve been sensing something since my first class this morning. I’m not certain what it is and every now and then a picture flashes through my mind. It looks like a cell with a tiny bit of light coming through a hole. Maybe the Force is trying to tell me something, or maybe I’m so bored that I’m imagining things. My next class is flying lessons. My Master had insisted that I take a flying class this year. Hey, that gives me an idea. My Master has a spare Jedi starfighter. I can use that to go on my mini vacation since I know enough to fly a ship now. So where will I fly to? Will I go near to the core, or will I go into the unknown regions. Hmm, traveling in the unknown regions sounds like fun, and maybe I’ll find an unexplored planet. ~~~ It’s night out now. Time to go. I left a note for my Master’s wife so she won’t worry to much. I told her that I’m going out flying for a few days and will be back in five days. I start up the engines and get them warmed up. I’m starting to get second thoughts about this idea. I’m going to get grounded for sure. Oh well, its like I haven’t been grounded before and I am certain that my Master hasn’t reported to the council about my past actions. The council would give me a stricture punishment or worse, but as long as my Master continues to keep these incidents away from the Council’s ears then I will be fine. I think. What if my Master decides that he should report my actions to the Council? No, he won’t do that. I lift the ship off of the ground and exit the open hanger bay’s door and head into space. Well, to late now. I’m going and no one will stop me. I put the ship into hyperspace and then take a homework assignment out of a small bag. I might as well finish up some homework while I’m out here. I don’t want to get to far behind. ~~~ It’s my second day out in space. I came out of hyperdrive a few seconds ago. All I can see are stars. I look down at the console as the ship’s warning lights start flashing and shrilling. What is going on? I don’t sense anyt….. Oh oh. I think I’m in trouble. There’s some kind of vortex forming in space. I try everything to move away from it but the engines are not responding and I’m falling towards it. I’m going to be in major trouble if I live through this. ~~~ Oh, my head hurts. I think I got knocked out. I look out of the viewport and see unfamiliar star patterns and…oh Sith. There is a ship closing in and the minds I sense are hostile. I try getting the engines back online, but all of the controls are frozen. I call out to my Master through our bond as the alien ship traps my ship in a tractor beam and pulls me in. This was such a bad idea. Why oh why did I think this was a good idea? My Master is going to kill me if these guys don’t first. I unstrap myself and grab my lightsaber. They’re not going to get me without a fight. Once my ship docks inside the larger ship, I open the canopy and jump out onto the hanger floor, igniting my lightsaber. The hanger is dimly lit and I can barely see anything, but through the Force I can sense that I am surrounded. A shot is fired and I block it with my lightsaber. I’m attacked from behind by an alien wielding a wicked looking knife and I spin around and Force push it backwards. I tell them that I don’t wish to hurt them, but they keep coming at me. I really wish this was a bad dream, but its not. I blue bolt of light gets passed my lightsaber and strikes me in the chest. I drop my lightsaber and fall to the ground, my whole body paralyzed by the stunbolt. I can feel myself falling into unconsciousness. I call out to my Master again, but I fear that I’m to far away for him to hear me. I should have stayed home. -----signature----- If I review then PM me when you update. thanks so much. Send me your completed 'the saga' stories! Check out my new story Descent Into Darkness Don't quote me the odds. I shall do as I must. Do or do not, there is no try.
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 6/26/07 4:58pm Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 6/26)
	Ok so Jamie is not like his father. Obi-Wan would never sneak off to hypespace for four days. But then again maybe the force is directing his actions. What or who will he find in that cell himself or some one else. Thanks for the PM. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 6/27/07 5:18am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 6/26)
	This was such a bad idea. Why oh why did I think this was a good idea? My Master is going to kill me if these guys don’t first. I unstrap myself and grab my lightsaber. They’re not going to get me without a fight. Once my ship docks inside the larger ship, I open the canopy and jump out onto the hanger floor, igniting my lightsaber. The hanger is dimly lit and I can barely see anything, but through the Force I can sense that I am surrounded. A shot is fired and I block it with my lightsaber. I’m attacked from behind by an alien wielding a wicked looking knife and I spin around and Force push it backwards. I tell them that I don’t wish to hurt them, but they keep coming at me. I really wish this was a bad dream, but its not. I blue bolt of light gets passed my lightsaber and strikes me in the chest. I drop my lightsaber and fall to the ground, my whole body paralyzed by the stunbolt. I can feel myself falling into unconsciousness. I call out to my Master again, but I fear that I’m to far away for him to hear me. I should have stayed home. What will happen now? Great update. -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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erikawr05 Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 6/27/07 11:34am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 6/26)
	GREAT POST Jamie acted more like his mother. thanks for the PM
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 6/28/07 3:57am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 6/26)
	Jaime, Jaime, Jaime Such a typical thing for a young man to do. I just hope Anakin can reach him before he's really injured. Politics are such a headache I heartily agree Great update -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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jacen200015 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 12/15/08 8:12pm Subject: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 6/26)
	Gkilkenny: Ok so Jamie is not like his father. Obi-Wan would never sneak off to hypespace for four days. True. So who is he like? But then again maybe the force is directing his actions. Maybe. What or who will he find in that cell himself or some one else. We shall see Thanks for the PM. You're welcome VaderLVR64: What will happen now? Good question. Great update. Thank you erikawr05: GREAT POST Thanks Jamie acted more like his mother. Indeed. thanks for the PM You're welcome KELIA: Jaime, Jaime, Jaime Such a typical thing for a young man to do. I just hope Anakin can reach him before he's really injured. Yeah Politics are such a headache I heartily agree Great update Thanks Sorry, I lost track of this fic for a while. I'll get right on to writing a post. -----signature----- If I review then PM me when you update. thanks so much. Send me your completed 'the saga' stories! Check out my new story Descent Into Darkness Don't quote me the odds. I shall do as I must. Do or do not, there is no try.
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jacen200015 Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 12/17/08 6:07pm Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 12/17)
	Anakin’s thoughts He ran off. Why in the name of the Force did he run off and where did he run off to? Maybe I should have taken him with me this time. Maybe I let him get away with to many things, maybe I should tell the Council. But I just can’t do that, he’s Obi-Wan’s son. I’m sure Jamie had a good reason for leaving the way he did. I hope it’s a good reason. What am I doing wrong in training him? I sit back in the pilot’s chair and watch the stars streak past. Master, I really could use some advice. Was I ever that bad when I was younger. I really hope Jamie has not gotten into any trouble. At least, into any more trouble than he already is in. Jamie’s thoughts This stinks. This really does. Some Jedi I would make, couldn’t even block a stunbolt. Master would be disappointed in me. Hah, what am I thinking, he’s already disappointed in me. I’m nothing but a failure, a nobody. I’m just a piece of his dead Master. I kick out in the darkness and hit a solid wall. Pain shoots up my foot and leg and I fall onto the unforgiving ground. Sith! I am going to be in so much poodoo when my Master finds me. If he finds me. If he is even looking for me. Hot tears stream from my eyes and I angrily wipe them away. Something is blocking my connection to the Force. What if my Master thinks I’m dead? I curl up into a ball, my arms around my legs and put my head to my knees. What do these beings do to their prisoners? I don’t want to find out. A noise catches my attention, and although the cell is dark, there is a tiny amount of light coming through the hole and landing on what looks to be rags. I creep curiously over to that spot and touch the rags and then jerk my hand away when I felt a movement. Who are you? I asked, but I don’t get an answer. I gently place my hand against the rags again and I can feel the being tremble. I have a cellmate. Well, at least I won’t be alone. Is my cellmate friendly though? I ask my cellmate questions but I still don’t get an answer. What’s wrong? Can he not understand me? Can he not speak? I shake my head and feel the anger building up inside me. I hate it here. The cell is suddenly lit with light, temporarily blinding me. I hear a strangled moan from my cellmate and when my eyes finally adjust I look to where my cellmate is. My cellmate was trembling in the corner of the cell dressed in dirty old rags. His graying brown hair was long and unkept, hiding his face from my view. I carefully approach him and gently touch his shoulder. My cellmate jerks away from the touch. What has been done to this person? I carefully move his hair away from his face revealing a dirty face, swollen eyes, and sunken in cheeks. He looks like he was starving. Looking around the cell, I find that a bowl of water and a rag had been slipped inside the cell as well as a plate with a crust of bread on it and a small cup of water. Are they starving this guy to death? I take the crust of bread and break it in half. I take it to my cellmate but he refused to take it. I try getting the piece of bread in between the guy’s lips in hopes that the taste of the bread would get to him and he would eat some, but I didn’t have any luck. This guy has just given up. I don’t know why but this just makes my blood boil. Fine, he can just give up. Why do I even care? I throw the bread at him and then sit as far away from him as possible. I drink the warm water in the cup and then lay down, trying to make myself as comfortable as one can get on the floor. I need to find a way out of this cell. They can’t hold me here forever. There just has to be a way. In fact, they might not have dealt with Jedi before so maybe I have an advantage. But…why can’t I access the Force? Is it just a coincidence? I wish I knew what they’re going to do to me, then I can better plan my escape. I could always try escaping before I know, but if I did and they caught me, will they kill me on site or will they do something worse to me? I might as well try to get some sleep. Whatever happens, I’ll need my strength. -----signature----- If I review then PM me when you update. thanks so much. Send me your completed 'the saga' stories! Check out my new story Descent Into Darkness Don't quote me the odds. I shall do as I must. Do or do not, there is no try.
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 12/18/08 4:15am Subject: RE: My Father [AU](Jamie, Anakin, Obi-Wan) Sequel to My Master (Updated 12/17)
	I sit back in the pilot’s chair and watch the stars streak past. Master, I really could use some advice. Was I ever that bad when I was younger. I really hope Jamie has not gotten into any trouble. At least, into any more trouble than he already is in. How novel to see Anakin worried about someone ELSE getting into trouble! Great update. -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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