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Author	Topic: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS - 2/13 - ch. 18
ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/15/07 12:21pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Excellent! It is all so real and harsh. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 7/15/07 1:06pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Anakin! To be so cruel to Padme... I know it could have been worse, but still. It seems he doesn't appreciate still finding her attractive. I loved the dinner with Ta'a Chume Great update, though I confess the image of Anakin, still damp from his shower, a white towel slung low across his hips had me distracted for quite awhile -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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Kelli_LB Registered: Jun '06	Date Posted: 7/15/07 1:17pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. PadmÃƒÂ© lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?) - Date Edited: 7/15/07 1:18pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Kelli_LB
	His gaze is intent, cruel. "What you are," he says, "is a wife in name only." He steps closer again, forcing her to crane her head back to meet his gaze. "If you want your charity causes or to play hostess at fancy parties, that's fine. I will allow that. But you came here tonight wearing that dress like I'm still a boy and you still set the rules." She tries to look away, but he grabs her chin, forcing her to look at him. "Never forget," he says, "that I am your Emperor and your husband. Everything you have Ã¢â‚¬â€œ including your freedom Ã¢â‚¬â€œ is at my discretion." Just when Padme thought she was getting somewhere, Vader decides to surface to show that he is not easily manipulated. This was the best chapter yet, I love how you remind the audience that Vader is still very much alive and well. I did have to laugh when Luke came in on them. I can just imagine what he was thinking. -----signature----- Winner of the 2007 Saga Fanfic Awards for Best Villain. The Legacy: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/248894 "I'm babbling on about galactic prostitution...and that's not why you're here! You're here for battle." --The Knudson Menace
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Galactic_Girl Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/15/07 4:03pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	First off, thank you so much for adding me to the PM list. Now for comments. re-reads last few dialouge lines Wow, I don't think Vader is going anywhere anytime soon. Still loved the scene between A/P. Poor Luke, interrupting his parents like that--I too would love to know what crossed his mind when he found them in a most interesting sorts. Gotta wonder where that boys been disappearing to though. Like many others I also have a theory as to where Luke is went to, but I'll hold my tongue until all is revealed. Outstanding update, can't wait for more. -----signature----- "Our greatest glory is not ever falling, but in getting up everytime we do." - Confucius
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BattousaiCV Registered: May '07	Date Posted: 7/15/07 5:06pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	roughly renewing his claim on her. One word. DAMN You paint such good mental pictures. Please add me to the PM list! -----signature----- http://www.myspace.com/professorwashu http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=BattousaiCV
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randomangel22 Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 7/15/07 6:54pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Well Mas Amedda's plan just went down the drain now didn't it. And wow what a moment between Anakin and Padme, but then Luke had to ruin it . But then Anakin had to ruin it again by totally saying stupid things to Padme and making their relationship worse than it already was ...men. Great post! -----signature----- I think the worst time to have a heart attack is during a game of charades...or a game of fake heart attack. --Demetri Martin Yeah that would suck now wouldn't it?
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DragonLotus Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 7/15/07 9:24pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Wow, so much conflict between the couple. The Dress didn't quite work out the way Padmé hoped it would. Yet, it certainly triggered something in Vader. I think he was afraid of admitting the truth despite his harsh words to his wife. And there's no denying the sexual tension. Poor Luke certainly had perfect timing. We can only wonder how far things would have gone otherwise. Yah, the love scene was hot! It's also sad Luke & Leia had no idea how much their parents were in love. I'm pretty sure they still are deep down, despite the emotional rollercoaster between them. It'll be interesting to see how things play out.
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DarthCambius Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 7/16/07 8:40am Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	First - thanks for the PM add. Second - Wow!! I am glad you went with the black corset dress....I still think about that dress from the movies and it brought up some very nice images in my head while reading. Also, I like how you bring us to the edge of thinking Anakin is beginning to fall for Padme's ploy and then WHAM! here comes Vader. Nice work showing the duality of Anakin/Vader. -----signature----- Duct tape is like the Force - it has a light side and a dark side and it binds the galaxy together.
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Anakins_Fallen_Angel Registered: May '07	Date Posted: 7/16/07 2:24pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Hey Thanks for The PM I love the way this story is going, your wrote Vader really well, bringing forth his Harshness with Padme. Cant wait for more
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MickeyRos Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 7/16/07 8:04pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Thanks for the PM! I love that Leia and Padme are finding some common ground in protecting their positions with Anakin it was sweet in a weird way. I think you are capturing Luke perfectly! I think its rather interesting that the twins didn't know the actual nature of Padme and Anakin's marriage. I would have thought they knew all about their parents relationship at this point. But, it does make sense that they wouldn't know because I can't imagine either Padme or Anakin for that matter telling them how their marriage came to be. Padme got a rather rude awakening with Anakin, but I'd say it was probably a necessary one because she has to realize that whatever her plan originally entailed obviously didn't account for how much Anakin changed. I suspect at least now that she knows where she stands that it should be somewhat easier to adjust her plan. But, I'd bet she still has a long way to go. -----signature----- Love is easy, relationships are hard!
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noevilmusic Registered: Dec '06	Date Posted: 7/17/07 7:38am Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	Another great update. Doesn't look like Taa is very long for the world...
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Vivid_Scripts Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 7/17/07 11:33pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	The premise behind this story definitely isn't new but I really like what you've done with it Just a thought though... if Vader doesn't care about any policy but military policy, then wouldn't Padme be the REAL power behind the empire? I mean sure... guns are guns, but Trade, Commerce, Currency, Taxation, Government Regulation, Environmental Policy, Social Services, Civil Rights... If Vader doesnt care about any of that then why doesn't she just go on and create UtopiaGalaxy? indiefic posted: "Never forget," he says, "that I am your Emperor and your husband. Everything you have – including your freedom – is at my discretion." He seems so confident about that that I'm almost certain that it will, somehow, someway, reverse and Padme is going to end up holding his leash. I guess I've always liked the notion of Philosopher-Queen Padme and Sith Lord Vader just because they make for such a black-and-white contrast. The best part though, is when Padme sics Vader on someone that wants to upset the Utopia she's toiled to create. ADD me to the PM list! -----signature----- "trickbind"
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HCzGIRL481 Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 7/18/07 12:22pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	INTERESTING and ENTERNAING story here! Must be on PM list BTW- Ultimate version is a MUST for this story...don't you think ?!!
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Mara_Skywhiner Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 7/18/07 3:58pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	ack! I was so excited there was another page, but then there was no post on it and my hopes were dashed. I too really like the Padme/Anakin scenes. Keep up the good work! ~Mara -----signature----- "Ne mæg werig mod wyrde wiðstondan, ne se hreo hyge helpe gefremman." - The weary soul cannot withstand fate, nor can the disturbed heart provide aid. -- The Wanderer, 10th century GO BUCKS!!!!! Tom
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ViariSkywalker Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 7/18/07 6:22pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - AU - (A/P, V/P) Vader won. Padmé lives. 16 years post RotS (6/?)
	You just couldn't go easy on poor Padme, huh? Great post! Can't wait to see what else awaits our Empress! -----signature----- Big Sis of Lady_Rae Veil of Shadows (OT AU, L/M) - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/28500417 The Dark Fire Chronicles (OT AU) - http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/11960028 ANGST!
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