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Ascal_Elessar
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Feb '04
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5/26 12:25pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 5/25
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Good job, knew nothing good could come from lying to Dooku. Grievous got off lightly.
Can't wait for the final showdown.
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mixza
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Jan '04
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5/26 5:33pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 5/25
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Hi! I've just gotten my first chance to check out some fic in a while and I just got caught up on yours... I love it! Very original, too; I was actually expecting this to be somewhat based on Hitman the video game so I was delightfully surprised. I lov your charicterization, especially the way you've portrayed Anakin as "The Hitman". 
Is is too late to ask to be put on youe PM list and recieve the ultimate version of the last chapter? 
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even Master Obi-Wan's past? Tall, I imagine, and dark-haired.
Pathetically desperate to have anyone at all, THAT much
goes without saying..." - Anakin Skywalker, Yoda: Dark Rendezvous
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Jedi_Lady21
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Nov '06
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5/26 6:46pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 5/25
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Wow! This has been a really great story! 
Can't wait to see what's going to happen when Anakin & Palpatine meet.
Please Add me back on your PM list and please send me the PM version of your last update.
Thanks 
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Vivid_Scripts
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Jan '04
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5/27 1:07am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 5/25
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oh boy, looks like Anakin's got quite the fight ahead of him. It sounds like he has a gauntlet (lots of troops?, Grievous, Dooku) to run before he can even get to the Emperor. Go ahead and send me the PM version...
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Lisbev
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May '08
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5/27 2:31am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 5/25
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WOW this story is AWESOME. I read it all in one sitting.
May I please be included on your PM list & may I also get the ultimate version, too? I'm 18 + + and then some. 
BTW, I also just finished Why Do I Love You, which was another amazing story that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Are you really going to quit fanfiction? I'm so sad, you're such a gifted writer. 
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Anakin_Heartbreaker
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Sep '04
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5/27 11:27am
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I'm so happy today, well maybe just a little.
I bought the shorts that Rocky Balboa wears during his epic clash against Apollo Creed in Rocky II, and also the Stars and Stripes from Rocky IV. I also got the 'Win Rocky Win' T-shirt. For those of you who know, I'm the Ultimate Rocky fan, and I can't wait to workout in true Rocky fashion! 
Its the one thing that will keep me going...
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KELIA
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5/28 3:41am
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Oh Ani, don't go off alone!!!
They are expecting and preparing for you!
I'm glad he got a little alone time with Padme, though.
Great update
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Anakin_Heartbreaker
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Date Posted:
5/30 11:45am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 5/25
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Hi everyone - For those of you wondering about the ULTIMATE version. I've haven't sent it out yet. I've been so busy with DRL, I hadn't had the time to send it. For that I sincerely apologize, I'll try to get it done this weekend, and maybe update also.
I got paid a very nice compliment today by someone at work, which made me smile. They said that my passion and enthusiasm for working-out/exercising is extremely infectious, and they highlighted the fact that nearly a dozen people have joined the gym as a result of me. It made my day.
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Kitten
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5/31 11:11am
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I really hope that Anakin can defeat the Emperor. Is he really going to face him all alone?
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Anakin_Heartbreaker
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6/1 12:15pm
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Hi everyone - As promised, I have just sent out the ULTIMATE version PM chapter to those who requested. Sorry I could not update today, something came up and pulled me away.
I'm just going to give a quick summary of what will be happening, and when I'm expecting to get this fic finished by. We have now entered the final act, and trust me, it is crazy! Can Anakin defeat the Empire?!!
This takes me to how many more chapters are left and when I can update. This has been on record the longest running fic I've written, nearly a year, but its because DRL is just that much more unkind, and will be the reason why I leave after finishing this fic. There are a handful of posts to go, depending on how I structure the complex sequences that are coming up. The frequency will also be affected. I'm in Paris next week for a few days, then off to Wimbledon for several days to watch live tennis.
July will be a good month for me to write as much as I can. In the second week of August, I'm off again, to Philadelphia for a few days and will be seeing the Rocky statue and where he ran up the steps. Then I'm off to Indianapolis for WWE Summer Slam 08, before visiting family in LA.
So a busy time, but I expect to finish this fic by the end of August because of the craziness of my schedule. Take care everyone! 
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x-Anidala-x
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May '08
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6/2 9:55am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - AUTHOR NOTE 06/01
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Can I get the PM versions, please?
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MoAngel
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6/3 9:08am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - AUTHOR NOTE 06/01
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As always, I'm late on the bandwagon, but before your departure to Vive La France and Le Tour Effel, please send me the ultimate pm version of the latest chapter. Great writing. Have a great time in the City of Lights!. My Mom was born there, and I've visited it many times...
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Anakin_Heartbreaker
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6/3 12:36pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - AUTHOR NOTE 06/01
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randomangel22 - Yes, this story is almost over and with it my writing on these boards. Yes, at least Anakin has his true love.
ehopepower - I'll add you to the list! Thanks for reading!
x-Anidala-x - You're on the list! Thanks for reading! And I have sent you the PM version, I think you've read it now. LOL!
Ascal_Elessar - It's going to be showdown unlike any other. I promise! 
mixza - I'm thrilled you read the whole thing through. Thank you for the kind words, I'll add you to the list!
Jedi_Lady21 - Coruscant is about to ROCK!!!! Thank you for reading, you're back on the list!
Vivid_Scripts - I wish I could say what is about to happen, but where would all the fun be in that? 
Lisbev - WOW! You read the whole thing in one go! Thank you! You're on the list! I'm thrilled you liked Why Do I Love You? And yes, I'm leaving. But please don't be sad for me, I'm not worth it.
KELIA - It going to be WAR!!!!!! Yes, at least Anakin got his true love.
Kitten - Can Anakin face the Emperor all by himself? Especially when the dark lord knows he's coming?! We're going to find out! Thanks for reading!
MoAngel - I've sent you the ULTIMATE version. I've been to Paris before, its a great place!
Hi everyone - I'm off for a few days, but when I come back, I'll be really trying to push out the post! We are raging towards the climax, and for all of you staying on for the last bit, prepare...for the ride of your life!!!!
The Hitman
Chapter Twenty Seven
An infectious loving smile manifested upon Padme’s adorable face, causing her to stir as she slowly started to wake up. The beautiful senator moaned in approval, whilst she lethargically rubbed her deep chocolate orbs; the heat from Anakin’s muscular body lingered around her silky flesh, forcing her to capitulate to his loving embrace. They had made love, passionate love…she had given Anakin everything that night, her mind, her heart, her body and her soul. An offering that was taken by her lover, and returned with his own.
Padme turned around under the simple cotton sheets to face Anakin, to look into his passionate deep blue eyes, to reacquaint herself with the texture of his lips, whilst she would slowly whisper how much she loved him.
He wasn’t there.
Padme immediately sat up, holding the sheets up tightly in her hands to conceal her bare flesh. Her searching eyes meticulously looked around the simple quarters, her clothes were entwined with Anakin’s during the night, but now only hers remained. An unsettling feeling quickly devoured the diminutive beauty…something wasn’t right. She hastily got dressed and rushed into the main abandoned living quarters. Her true love was not there.
“Anakin…Anakin…” Padme walked into every room, an inescapable feeling of confusion and fear inundated her body, causing her delicate heart to pound unremittingly in her chest.
“Anakin, where are you?! Anakin!” Her voice shook with desperation.
Padme paused and instinctively pressed her palms over her stomach. She could feel a wondrous sensation burgeoning inside, and the more she focused upon it, the more its potency grew. The noble senator looked down at her lean stomach. Why was she feeling something so strange, but yet so familiar? What could it possibly be? Her heart brutally slammed into her ribcage as the plausible revelation cascaded to the forefront of her mind.
She was pregnant. She was pregnant with Anakin’s child.
Padme struggled to hold the blissful joy within. They were going to be a family. But where was Anakin? She had to tell him that he was going to be a father…unless he already knew, and left so no harm would come to their baby.
“Anakin..!”
Anakin had gone to fight the Emperor, as he said he would. Padme raced out of the simple quarters, her brown eyes incessantly kept looking around for any possible signs of her true love, but deep down the realization dawned that he was far away. She quickly ran towards the speeder provided to her by Owen Lars, and proceeded to head back towards the moisture farm. She need to inform Obi-Wan…it was the only thing that made sense.
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Obi-Wan sat with the Lars and enjoyed a warm cooked meal by Beru. The Force continuously coursed through his athletic frame, attuning his experienced senses to all life forces around them. He had reluctantly allowed Padme to go after Anakin the night before, after Owen had provided the information regarding his whereabouts.
“This is extremely delicious.” Obi-Wan generously complimented the cuisine.
“Thank you.” Beru blushed. “It’s not much, but we try the best we can.”
“It’s more than enough. You’ve been extremely hospitable…” Kenobi smiled, as he brought another spoonful of soup to his mouth. “I particularly like this blue milk. I’ve never seen it anywhere else.”
“It’s nice to know there are some things we had that even the Jedi themselves had not seen before.” Owen stated.
Obi-Wan opened his mouth to reply, but paused discernibly; causing Owen and Beru to gaze at him questioningly.
“She’s back.” Obi-Wan announced standing up, before heading out to welcome Padme.
Padme jumped out of the speeder and ran towards Obi-Wan.
“Is he here?!” She asked breathlessly.
“Anakin?” Kenobi asked in response.
“Yes…Anakin. He’s gone.” The senator stated dejectedly.
“Gone? Gone, but where?” Obi-Wan questioned.
“Coruscant…to fight the Emperor.” Padme replied. “He was broken when I found him, his eyes showed the pain that he was in. I…I tired comforting him, telling him that he’s not alone. But then he left in the middle of the night. I know he’s gone to face the Emperor.”
“If this is true, there could be a war on Coruscant of a magnitude that has never been seen before.” Obi-Wan said ominously.
“I’m going to Coruscant…” Padme announced.
“Surely you cannot be serious, I forbid it. You will be in grave danger if you head to the capital.” Kenobi warned.
“You cannot stop me…not now.” Padme argued.
“Padme listen to reason. Anakin is going to face to the Emperor, even Master Yoda and Master Windu failed. By going there you will endanger your life.” Obi-Wan stated.
“I can’t stay away…I’m pregnant.” Padme looked at Obi-Wan as the tears began to fall from her eyes.
“Your…pregnant?” Obi-Wan asked in bewilderment.
“Yes.” Padme nodded her head in accordance. “I cannot lose him. I love him. I’m going to Coruscant.”
Obi-Wan looked into his friend’s eyes, he could see her plead to him. The choice had to be made.
“I’m coming with you.”
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randomangel22
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6/3 1:18pm
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Uh-oh Anakin's gone and Padme and Obi-Wan are gonna go after him.
Nothing good ever comes out of being in Sidious' presence. 
Great post and thanks for the PM!
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KELIA
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I’m going to Coruscant.
Thank the Force Obi-Wan is going with Padme. There is no way she could handle what is about to happen without him.
Of course, she may not be able to handle it with him either
Great update
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