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Jedi_Lady21
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Nov '06
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6/4 9:59pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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I'm glad Obi-Wan is going with Padme.
I hope they will be able to help Anakin 
Great Update! 
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Ascal_Elessar
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6/5 11:55am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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Great post, hope Padme dosen't do anying foolish but at least Obi's going with her.
Hope you have a great time on your trip.
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and he can see the turn of the universe."
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Lisbev
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6/5 6:48pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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Thank you for the ULTIMATE pm. There's nothin like some good ole Anakin & Padme mushy lovin' 
YAY! Padme is pregnant!  .
Sir Creepster Palpy needs to die  for all the horrible things he's done to Anakin & others. Obi-Wan, please help Anakin, hurry!
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searth_99
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6/5 8:11pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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great story! mind also sending me the PM chapter?
thx!
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Kitten
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Jun '05
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6/6 9:54pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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Well, I can't say I'm not relieved that Obiwan is going with Padme. Still, I'm afraid that something really bad is going to happen to Anakin.
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mixza
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6/8 8:19pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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“Padme listen to reason. Anakin is going to face to the Emperor, even Master Yoda and Master Windu failed. By going there you will endanger your life.” Obi-Wan stated.
“I can’t stay away…I’m pregnant.” Padme looked at Obi-Wan as the tears began to fall from her eyes.
Ack! That's exactly why she shouldn't go! But I'm glad she's going, anyway.
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even Master Obi-Wan's past? Tall, I imagine, and dark-haired.
Pathetically desperate to have anyone at all, THAT much
goes without saying..." - Anakin Skywalker, Yoda: Dark Rendezvous
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Mirik
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Dec '05
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6/9 4:31am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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Can I please have the ultimate version of chapter 26? 
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bobafett15
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6/11 6:58am
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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dude, the story was ok, but seriously, the huge amounts of flowery language, the gross comma's or lack therof, and the crappy dialogue all worked against u. I dont think u got the characterization [i]quite[i]right. In other words, close, but no cigar.
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Anakins_Fallen_Angel
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6/13 1:51pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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Hey Soryr i havent posted in a while my laptop broke
but seriouslly awesome story! coudl. i have the pm version please?
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Anakin_Heartbreaker
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6/15 12:55pm
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RE: The Hitman - Don't Hunt What You Can't Kill - An Anakin/Padme AU - 06/03
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6/16 2:50am (4 edits total)
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randomangel22 - Yes, nothing ever good comes from being around Sidious, especially when he knows you're coming! I'm thrilled you like the update!  Can they all survive? 
KELIA - I agree, there is no telling what could happen to Padme and Obi-Wan. Her stubborness could put them in serious danger, that includes her unborn child.  Thanks for reading!
Jedi_Lady21 - Yes, Padme would need a friend like Obi-Wan where she is going. Can they help Anakin in time?!  Thanks for the kind words!
Asacl_Elessar - Hopefully Obi-Wan will be the voice of reasoning if Padme does attempt to do something that could endanger her life, as well as the one growing inside her. Thank you for the kind words regarding my trip, it was cool!
Lisbev - I'm honored you liked the ULTIMATE version! Yes, Sidious needs to die, but will it be so? Thanks for the kind words!
searth_99 - Thanks for reading and replying! I've sent you the PM version.
Kitten - Something is going to happen, but will our heroes be ready for it?! Thanks for reading!
mixza - Yes, she shouldn't go. But she's let her heart rule her mind, without thinking of the consequences. Sometimes you just follow your heart without thinking things through. Thanks for reading!
Mirik - I've sent you the ULTIMATE version of chapter 26. Thanks for reading!
bobafett15 - Thanks for reading and the positive feedback!
Anakins_Fallen_Angel - Please don't apologize! I'm honored that you like this story! I've sent you the ULTIMATE version.
Hi everyone - I'm back! I'll try my best to keep updating as much as I can. I'm not going anywhere now until August, I've just got arrange all my flights now. LOL! If you would like to be added or removed from the list, please let me know. And a big thank you to the lurkers who let me know what they thought of the fic!
The Hitman
Chapter Twenty Eight
Padme tenderly ran her palm over the part of the capacious sapphire attire that concealed her stomach, whilst she indiscernibly sat amongst several hundred beings on a transport vessel to Coruscant. Despite her waist remaining impeccably slim, she could distinctly sense the wonderful sensation burgeoning within…growing and bonding with her with every passing moment. The blissful joy gallantly fought to eradicate the incessant apprehension frenetically surging through her mind. Anakin, her true love, and the father of her unborn child had gone alone to face his ultimate challenge, with the consequences and the ramifications being higher than ever before.
Padme tried to break herself free of the possibility that her true love may never return. That at times the insurmountable physical ache and emotional anguish to hold Anakin in her arms, to whisper into his ear that they were going to be a family, became to unbearable for her. Instead she vividly recalled her playful conversation with Sola before the destruction of Varykino, about finding true love, about giving her heart, body, mind and soul to a man that she would gladly give her own life for. Wasn’t she allowed to be with the one she wanted?
“Padme…” Obi-Wan’s calm voice broke Padme from her thoughts. She silently acknowledged the Jedi Knight, who had conspicuously concealed himself as well.
“We’ve entered Coruscant’s atmosphere…” There was an ominous warning conveyed in his words. “This is where it will be interesting; the Empire may have a welcoming unit waiting for us. We must be cautious from this point.”
Padme nodded her head.
“I understand. But will the Empire be expecting a Jedi and a Senator to come straight to the capital?”
“I concur with your thoughts, but underestimating the Emperor is extremely dangerous. They could be expecting Anakin to enter the capital.”
“As you’ve stated Obi-Wan, we must be cautious.” Padme stated.
An unusual shiver avalanched down Padme’s vertebrae as the perpetually illuminated view of Coruscant grew past the paristeel windows overlooking the capital. Dozens of memories from her past connected her to Coruscant, her numerous debates in the senate, the signing of treaties that ended the asphyxiating hold of the Trade Federation on Naboo. The lying, deceit and deception that lead to the abrupt death of liberty, by someone she had once called a friend. So much history had been made, yet from space; Coruscant’s majestic splendor remained pure, immune to the evil that lived upon it.
“Is everything alright?” Obi-Wan asked concernedly.
“Yes…” Padme gasped, freeing herself from the ghosts of the past. “Just a few memories, that’s all.”
“Yes, just a few memories.” Kenobi sighed, as he acknowledged what his friend was going through, with Coruscant being the first ever home he had himself.
The vast transport vessel entered the atmosphere, and slowly began to descend into the bustling metropolis below. The last of the glittering rays of the sun slowly succumbed to the colossal skyline that dominated the former Republic Capital, allowing the plethora of vibrant neon lights to boisterously announce their arrival to the inhabitants below. Obi-Wan readjusted his brown cloak, covering his eyes, as he re-established his potent connection with Force. They were entering the capital of the new Empire, where finding an alliance to assist them when confronted by overwhelming odds, would be a futile endeavor.
Padme and Obi-Wan walked in accordance to the other passengers, allowing the large numbers to hide their presence. They walked towards a checkpoint, where two Imperial Troopers were stationed.
“Identification please.” The clone trooper stated.
“You don’t need to see our identification.” Obi-Wan flicked his finger across his face.
“We don’t need to see their identification.” The clone trooper stated. Padme kept an unreadable face, but was bewildered by what she witnessed.
“Please go about your business.” Obi-Wan stated.
“Please go about your business.” The clone trooper announced.
Obi-Wan smiled, and walked through the checkpoint with Padme.
“What was that?” Padme whispered, as they hurriedly moved past several gatherings of Imperial Troops.
“The Force has a great affect on the weak minded.” Kenobi replied.
The two walked out into the populous city, methodically allowing their eyes to absorb the familiarity that came with being amongst numerous species on a planet that never felt as alien or as dangerous as it did at that point.
“How are we going to find him?” Obi-Wan asked. “For all we know, he may have already had a rendezvous with the Emperor.”
“He hasn’t…” Padme looked towards the horizon. An incredible sensation powerfully connected her to true love. “I can feel it. He’s close.”
“Did Anakin ever have a conversation regarding anything to do with his life on Coruscant?” Kenobi asked.
“500 Republica.”
*****
Dozens of clone troopers continued their routine patrolling of the lower level of the Emperor’s illustrious palace, monitoring all intricate tunnels, passageways, and turbolifts that ascended up towards the dark lord’s personal quarters. Several troops sat at the highly sophisticated computers that controlled the large access point for deployment of ARC weaponry. A bright red light started flashing.
“Sir, the locking mechanism for the chamber has begun to dysfunction!” A clone shouted.
“Reset the code.” The commander ordered.
“Negative sir, something is dissolving the control.” The clone replied.
A loud dull noise reverberated through the hulking vicinity, whilst the large metallic doors opened from the middle, allowing a conspicuous hooded figure to walk through.
“Security breach!” The commander ordered.
Dozens of clone troopers materialized, their movement and arrival remained completely synchronous with each other; their guns held firmly in their hands, and pointed onto their target as they quickly circled the intruder. The hooded figure paused, and exposed his open palms as gesture of capitulation.
The commander walked a few steps forward, and stood a few meters in front of the stranger.
“Identify yourself immediately!” He ordered.
“Anakin Skywalker…The Hitman!”
The Force voraciously coursed through Anakin’s sculpted physique, congregating into his powerful hands. Skywalker simultaneously pushed his palms out to either side of his muscular frame, allowing the immense energy that he had channeled into his sinewy forearms and hands to exploded in an ever expanding circular wave around him. A perceptible wave of pulsating silver energy violently burst out towards the unsuspecting victims, in an unanswerable Force avalanche, launching the dozens of clone troopers irresistibly through the air. Their bodies spun with ferocious velocity, causing many to collide against each other, as well as with the thick walls encompassing the perimeter.
Three more clones ran out into the devastated chamber, moving rapidly along side the large columns against the walls. Anakin stuck his rippling arm from behind column, nearly decapitating the first trooper, whilst his whole body spun, before crashing on his head. The Hitman sidestepped out, and liberated his pulsating crimson blade, as he effortlessly parried the blasts from the two remaining troopers. Anakin impaled the floor with his shimmering lightsaber, causing a blast to ricochet off the ground and into the sternum of the first trooper. Anakin curled his upper lip into a snarl, reversing his grip upon the cylindrical hilt and throwing it through the cool ambience at the final opponent, piercing his chest and eliminating him instantly.
Anakin exposed his right palm, allowing the majestic weapon to magnetically bolt back into his hands. He was ready for the fight of his life, but unlike the Emperor, he wanted him to know of his arrival.
*****
The Emperor smiled, as he sat in a secluded room. The potency of Anakin’s arrival would have been felt by anyone.
"Welcome home…Hitman.”
*****
Things on Coruscant are about to explode!!!!
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Lisbev
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Date Posted:
6/15 3:40pm
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 UGG! What an evil cliffy! 
Update soon, please 
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randomangel22
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6/15 3:53pm
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Oh no, you just left us hanging there! 
I wanted to see Anakin and Sidious fight... 
Oh well, I guess I'll have to wait a little bit longer.
Great post and thanks for the PM!
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Yeah that would suck now wouldn't it?
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Vivid_Scripts
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6/15 8:15pm
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oooh. the anticipation. burns.
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MoAngel
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6/15 10:38pm
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Great update. Seriously waiting for THE confrontation and for Anakin to 'get his Force on'!
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KELIA
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6/16 3:52am
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He was ready for the fight of his life, but unlike the Emperor, he wanted him to know of his arrival. ]
I doubt Anakin could have gotten in without Palpatine sensing it.
I'm very anxious for the upcoming explosion!
Great update
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