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jacen200015
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12/10/07 1:05pm
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CalaisKenobi posted:
“Here for a purpose is young Obi-Wan. Assigned as a Padawan to Anakin Skywalker he will be.”
*cracks up laughing*  Oh, i can just see the reactions
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MoAngel
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12/10/07 1:12pm
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This is really really good. If you have a PM list, this is me begging to be added to it!
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calimora
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I loved the banter between them in the med wing, and the way Yoda just railroaded the council. The mere thought of apprenticing Obi-wan to Anakin is enough to make me cackle evily. You've got to wonder how cautious and insecure Little Obi and the wild, impulsive, (self absorbed) Anakin will handle each other. This is such a fun story.
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EGKenobi
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Oooooooh please PM me when you update this!!
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Captain_Observant
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Man...Obi-Wan apprenticed to Anakin...wonder if he will survive long enough to make it back to his own time!!
Great story - I really like the idea behind. I look forward to more! 
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PadawanKitara
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12/14/07 10:53pm
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Obi-Wan Kenobi meet Obi-Wan Kenobi hmmmmmmm
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ratna
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12/15/07 1:20am
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"Confused, she was not," a voice declared from the doorway. All three of the current occupants of the room swiveled their heads in a near tandom double-take to the unexpected view of Master Yoda perched on the shoulders of a much younger Obi-Wan Kenobi.
Whoa! talk about yer double trouble!!
So, they're going to knight Anakin right after Geonosis, eh... and then put him in charge of Obi-Wan the Younger! I can't wait to see how THAT turns out!!!
Please keep me on the PM list!
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dparis
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12/31/07 7:08pm
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PadawanKitara
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darn you dparis, I thought this meant another post. Oh well....Happy New Year since we are both sitting here impatiently waiting 
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dparis
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heh heh heh...
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jacen200015
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UP!
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dparis
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i have a cold.
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dparis
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i had a cold
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dparis
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don't make me come over there.
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CalaisKenobi
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Political success was both a burden and a privilege. The ability to have a guiding hand in molding the Republic of the future was something Senator Padmé Amidala would never want to dismiss- but sometimes it would be nice to be able to just show her true feelings without worrying who might be watching. Watching the birth of the “Army of the Republic” today had nearly made her want to cry. And yet, she had instead worn the face of dignity and reserve that she had been taught since nearly birth. Even her parents had never really allowed her to just be “Padmé” instead of “Amidala- the once and future Queen.”
/And that’s why I love Anakin so much/ the senator thought with a sigh as she removed her burdensome gown and prepared to change into one of her much more comfortable outfits.
Anakin was definitely an open person. While he, like any person, had his secrets and hidden shames, he was also usually an open book. If he didn’t like someone, or was angry about a situation, it was written clearly on his face. /And yet, somehow, he was apprenticed to one of the most successful diplomats in the Republic/ Padmé thought with a snort, “that was certainly a match made in hell.”
“Did you say something, milady?” Sabé, her former handmaiden and current Senatorial aide asked as she went about hanging up the ornamental gown.
“Simply musing on another long day,” Padmé replied.
“Perhaps it’s time for another visit to the Jedi Temple?” Sabé questioned with a slight smile. “Anakin should have been released from the Healers by now.”
“You wouldn’t be suggesting such a trip in the hopes of running into a certain Jedi Master would you?” the former queen retorted as she finished releasing her hair from its torturous up do into a more relaxed style.
“Of course not, milady. I’m merely concerned about your level of stress,” Sabé stated innocently as she took a seat on the edge of the bed beside her childhood friend.
When Padmé gave her a disbelieving look, she nonchalantly waved a hand in the air. “However, if we happened to run into a certain auburn haired Jedi, I wouldn’t complain.”
“Of course you wouldn’t,” Padmé smiled, now looking much more like the twenty-something she was, instead of the grave faced diplomat she had spent the entire day pretending to be. “Just as I wouldn’t mind if you two happened to slip away to discuss ‘important matters of state’ leaving said Jedi’s apprentice free for a few hours.”
Flashing a mischievous smile, Sabé stood up and stretched her arms over her head. “It is getting rather late….” She began, before making her way to the bedroom door, “and we do have an early session tomorrow.”
“You’re right,” Padmé agreed, as she too stood up. “Race you to the lift.” With a final flourish of grabbing shoes and outerwear, the two young women left the senatorial apartments, giggling like the schoolgirls neither had every really been allowed to be.
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Shocked silence greeted Master Yoda’s entry into the small hospital room. Both Healer Bant and Knight Kenobi appeared to be in a state of shock, something Anakin had never before seen- even when his Master had stepped into the Gundark’s nest so unexpectedly he had appeared completely unflappable.
“Who are you?” Anakin asked, with his usual lack of tact as he took in the appearance of the Jedi apprentice supporting Master Yoda. While Anakin certainly didn’t know every Jedi in the Temple personally, he was pretty certain he’d at least met all of the Padawans. The Jedi apprentices tended to be a pretty closely knit group, and though it had taken him several years, the former slave felt like he’d at last become a part of that community.
While the other apprentice looked to Master Yoda, who was now standing beside him, Anakin realized that the Padawan did look familiar to him- in a strange, distant kind of way. Almost as if he’d seen a picture of him somewhere.
“New to our Temple, he is,” Master Yoda answered in the Padawan’s stead. “Recently arrived he is.”
“Master Yoda,” Knight Kenobi began, as he had finally regained the power of speech, “I believe you have some explaining to do.”
“My job to explain it is not,” the diminutive Master replied, “Padawan Kenobi, your questions will answer.” With that cryptic response, Yoda turned and began to hobble his way out the door. Just before the door hissed shut behind him, he spoke once more. “Your assistance I require, Healer Bant.”
Sharing a look with Obi-Wan that let him know she’d want the full story later, Bant nodded to the young apprentice before stepping past him and following after the Head Councilor.
As the door closed behind her, Knight Kenobi raised the hand not attached to the Bacta infuser to his forehead, kneading the tension that was building over his eyes. After a moment, he dropped his hand back to the bed and locked eyes with the Jedi Padawan still standing at the door. “I have a very bad feeling about this.”
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