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Anakins_Kiss Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 11/14/07 6:43am Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/9 - (Four) Latent Danger PLS. READ/REPLY
	Hello? Is-Is anyone there? -----signature----- Learn to HATE Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27568604/p1/?1 STAR WARS MUSIC VIDEOS http://www.youtube.com/user/luckiwondr
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Kyana-Morgaine Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 11/15/07 1:05am Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/9 - (Four) Latent Danger PLS. READ/REPLY
	GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -----signature----- Lieda Mothma http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/26650971/p1/?15 Taking Breath in a Cold Night http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/25084978/p1 Frozen Blossom http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27429050/p1/?7
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Anakins_Fallen_Angel Registered: May '07	Date Posted: 11/16/07 5:33am Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/9 - (Four) Latent Danger PLS. READ/REPLY
	I love this story, however im hoping padme is somehow possessed and thats whats caused her to maybe run to Palo! Thatway all is forgiven and Anakin and Padme can live happily ever after...i hope please update soon this story is awesome!
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Anakins_Kiss Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 11/16/07 1:57pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/9 - (Four) Latent Danger PLS. READ/REPLY - Date Edited: 11/19/07 6:47am (3 edits total) Edited By: Anakins_Kiss
	ROTSFAN - She does not love Anakin but she still wants the best for him (believe it or not). It could be that since Anakin is away so much, she found herself vulnerable and Palo happened to pop up at the right time. Palo isn't so bad. He and Anakin are not aware of each other. They are both innocent in this case. Padme is the one orchestrating this secret affair which developed while Anakin was away at war. Right now, all i can say is that this is definitely Padme's baby . I know this is shocking to read about Padme and you may want to her, but there is a very good reason why she has fallen in love with Palo and wants to be with him. Everything will be revealed soon. Trust me . KELIA - I think Avaryce is my favorite OC so far. Thanks for the advice. I'll see if I can make that work. KYANA MORGAINE - Thanks ANAKINS_FALLEN_ANGEL - Welcome. If only it were that simple. Thanks for reading, everyone. FIVE – New Beginnings The sun rose the following morning with Anakin seated at the edge of the bed watching the sky change from dark to light. He bowed his head and cast an anxious gaze to his bare feet as the toes curled into the rug. He didn’t get a chance to talk to her last night. He didn't really think he was ready to anyway. When he came home the night before, she was already fast asleep on the couch. He remembered standing over her, angry with himself for giving in to his jealousy. He questioned the purpose of telling her about the visions. Though she wanted full disclosure, he didn’t want to cause her any discomfort or cause her to be alarmed. The self-disgust was growing as he gazed down at her sleeping form, knowing she loved him as much as he loved her and knowing he treated her as if she was a contemptuous adulterer. Looking back, Anakin knew it was foolish to allow his heart to overrule his mind. And he knew he had to do better. The room illuminated with refreshing bright orange beams of sunlight. He could sense Padme stirring out of her slumber and looked over his shoulder to see brown eyes flutter open. She looked curiously around the room before setting her eyes on him. Her eyes portrayed a wounded heart and a demand for justification. And it seemed just then like time froze—at least he wanted it to. He didn’t need the force to tell him that she wanted to deal with the Bantha in the room. He turned back toward the sky and sighed. “You were sleeping on the couch when I came home.” He swallowed hard. “I carried you to bed,” Anakin explained. Furrowing her brow, she took a deep breath and recalled the night before. “I must have fallen asleep downstairs watching the Holonet.” The words were just icebreakers—causal dialogue preceding the heavier topic. He allowed a short moment of silence to pass while he considered how to begin. Anakin turned back into bed and leaned back against the headboard. He took her small hand in his large one and kissed it. Cerulean met brown, as he spoke ruefully, “I am so sorry for the way I treated you. I shouldn’t have said those things and I shouldn’t have behaved that way. You didn’t deserve that. I didn’t mean to hurt you and I'd never want to.” He shook his head and looked at his feet at the end of the bed. “I-I don’t know what came over me.” Padme said, “Ani, I know you better than you think. I can always tell when something is troubling you. Bottling up your feelings will only cause you to hurt those you love.” Anakin did not meet her gaze. Padme had a nasty habit of being right. He swore to himself he would never hurt her like that again. "During my duel with Dooku, I saw the two of you together behind the statue and something clicked. I-I can't explain what happened.” “You must know that Palo was only protecting me, Anakin,” she blinked, “He just wanted to make sure I was alright.” “I know. I know,” he slowly nodded. “But it seemed like there was more to his touch than just a need to protect an old friend from harm.” “Considering the stress of the war and being away so much, I think you may have read more in to that than you should’ve.” “Perhaps.” He lifted his eyebrows and sighed. “I am just afraid of losing you.” Padme sat up and turned, completely facing him. “Anakin, while we remain Jedi knight and senator, our marriage will be a complicated one, especially while this war continues. But we can survive it. We’ll make it. The only thing that can come between us is your jealousy, your distrust, and you distancing yourself from me. I am not sure what started it, but things will only get worse if you don’t trust me.” It was apparent to him that the only way this marriage would work is if there was complete honesty. “You're right, Padme.” More than anything in the galaxy, he wanted her to remain his wife. For that, he’d do whatever it took. He swallowed and looked down at her hand he still held and absently rubbed his thumb back and forth. “For the past few weeks I have been having these nightmares.” She placed an encouraging hand over his. “—like the ones I used to have about my mother,” he raised his eyes to meet hers. “—except they were about you.” She straightened, “What happened?” Anakin paused. “You were here in our bedroom…" He sighed, unable to hide the discomfort and said, "...with another man.” Padme’s eyes widened slightly. She asked, “What? Who?” “Palo.” He looked away from her. “It’s the same vision every time I close my eyes, Padme.” Anakin didn’t bother hiding the sorrow in his voice. "I will not go into detail." She didn’t respond right away. Instead, her eyes darted nervously around the room and finally rested on the bed. She opened her mouth to speak but failed. After a short pause, she smiled halfheartedly and said, “Ani, it was just a dream.” He could feel her attempting to mask the displeasure that was beginning to take control. Padme sounded as if she were trying to convince herself as much as him that it was nothing more than a dream. “It’s a dream that partially came true.” He looked up at her as hot tears pricked his eyes. “One foretold my mother's death and that came true. I wanted to believe this vision foretold you moving on...perhaps after my death." Her forehead wrinkled with worry and she covered her mouth with her hand. Anakin added, "It was just a theory. The visions didn't actually imply I was to die. But the two of you were together. What else could cause you to be with him?" Padme shook her head and said, "That could never happen. After all this time and all we’ve been through, you should know I couldn’t –I can’t be with anyone else." He spoke softly. "I can tell he still has feelings for you.” “And nothing will ever come of it,” Padme responded. “My heart is yours for all time, Anakin. No one could ever come between us. You know this.” Her eyes were glossy and pleading for him to believe her. And he did. He could sense her profound love of him that mirrored his love of her. He could sense her anxiety of being doubted. He could feel every emotion saturating her aura. "I do," he nodded. Padme said, “You don’t have to worry about Palo, Anakin. I am married to you. You make me happy." She leaned down and kissed him. Anakin could feel the emotion bedded in the kiss. He closed his eyes and savored the tenderness of her lips and the sweet smell of her hair. He loved feeling the warmth of her body against his. She pulled away and smiled. "Besides, how could I pick an artist over a Jedi Knight? Who will reset threepio’s parameters when he gets to be too much? Who will rub my feet when they hurt?" Enjoying her attempt at lightening the mood, Anakin chuckled. "It’s nice to know I have my uses." "Yes, it is." She spoke softly, cocking her head to the side. "I’m going to need you for the late nights..." "Mmm Hmm," Anakin smiled, enticed by memories of their vigorous activities. “Your soothing techniques…” “Oh yeah…” "The baths..." "Sounds interesting..." Anakin said with a wide grin. "Especially for the changes and the crying..." The grin on his face quickly faded. "Changes?" He furled his brow, "Crying? " He wondered for a moment what she had in mind. Perhaps a new technique she wanted to try out? It certainly sounded interesting if not off putting to say the least. Padme slowly took his hand and placed it over her abdomen. Beneath the blue silk fabric of her gown, he could feel her belly was not as flat as it should have been. It had gained a slight convex shape and the surface of it had grown unusually firm. But much deeper than that, he could feel something that only a force sensitive could feel. He felt the heat of a force entity; minute, pure, imperceptible but had a hint of familiarity. Anakin’s brow slowly unfurled as her meaning dawned on him. His lips parted in blissful shock. She raised her gaze to meet his as a smile slowly stretched across her angelic face. His breathing seemed to speed up with his excitement. “Really?” She nodded. Unbounded joy saturated every molecule in his body. He couldn’t process any other thought but that of being a father. The blue of his eyes seemed more vibrant than ever before. His heart thumped in his chest with vigor. Anakin was tremendously thrilled. But before elation could reach his face, a sobering reminder intruded. Brought back from the brink of an ear-to-ear grin, Anakin found himself at a loss for words for a different reason. His days as a Jedi knight were numbered. Hiding a marriage wasn’t too difficult. However, fathering a child would be impossible to hide. It would only be a matter of time before he would be expelled. As much as he wanted this child, he wanted to remain in the Jedi Order and attain the title of master. He wanted to go as far as he could achieve and he knew—he felt he’d go farther that any Jedi have ever gone. Anakin had already begun to believe his power destined him for greatness—to be counted among the most powerful. Apprehension and stress started to overwhelm the joy and excitement of parenthood. Padme was struggling to keep her smile genuine. She was obviously happy about having his child, but beneath it all, he could sense her uneasiness as well. The Nubian queen would not allow her to continue her career as senator if her pregnancy was discovered. Padme’s days as senator were also numbered. He looked into her eyes and saw for himself the reflection of his own apprehension. Despite the pleasant smile on her face, he could see she was struggling to remain upbeat and happy. She seemed frozen hoping he’d welcome the news. Her eyes were glossing up and she looked as if she were holding her breath, waiting on the edge of a cliff. Not wanting to add to her fears, he tried to find words to say, “Um—uhh—I can’t believe it! This-this is terrific!” Anakin grinned. He decided it was best if they both push away all the concerns of the world outside, and savor this moment. Relieved, Padme exhaled. The concern, though slightly diminished, could still be heard in his voice. “I know what this means for us, Anakin.” She asked, “What do we do now?” Anakin smiled again. He wanted so much to ease to her concerns. Stroking her cheek her said adoringly, “Let’s not think about that right now, alright?” She nodded and smiled. Still smiling, he cupped her face in his hands and said, “Padme, this is the happiest moment of my life.” Her eyes were welled up with joyful tears. He pulled her closer and closed his mouth over hers. While the sun gradually made its ascent, the Skywalkers celebrated the new edition to their family. The matters of the senate, the Jedi Order and the tragedies of the war didn’t matter anymore. I was their moment –the moment that the galaxy faded to black except Padme, Anakin and the joy of becoming parents. ~~~ “I apologize for the damage caused during Dooku’s attempt.” Anakin walked beside his friend, Chancellor Palpatine through the anteroom. There were service droids about the suite removing destroyed furniture, repairing walls, and cleaning the debris littered about. Anakin eyed a dark patch in the wall where a deflected blast hit. “Don’t apologize. I am rather grateful for the damage considering the outcome,” Palpatine smiled. “If it weren’t for you, Dooku would have succeeded. You should be commended for your skill.” Anakin glanced in his direction and smiled appreciatively. “The council doesn’ t reward any Jedi for any particular achievement.” “Oh,” Palpatine said, “how unfortunate. A celebrated war hero, such as yourself, should receive some kind of recognition,” He added, “At least from his own sect.” “Jedi do what is expected of them,” he paused, “and wish for nothing in return.” It was years of training and study that prompted him to recall this Jedi quality. However, it was a quality that, despite all his efforts, he could not reconcile within himself. He discovered he wanted more than just stoic nods from the members of the high council. “Nobility and humility are among many highly regarded attributes the Jedi possess. Though they are admired by many for their fine qualities, there is a deficiency that in the past the senate has chosen to ignore.” “What would that be?” Anakin said curiously. “I feel a growing level of distrust between the order and myself.” Palpatine paused and said in a disillusioned tone, “The council highly values their autonomy. They distance themselves unnecessarily and are always guarded. We desire a peaceful cohesion of all entities serving the republic. Their surreptitious ways can hurt our efforts.” “The high council has functioned this way for centuries, Chancellor. They are and always have been dedicated to serving the Republic. I can attest to that.” He nodded slowly. “Regardless, I feel there is a need to be cautious. My friend, this is a difficult time for the Republic. War often creates changes within a society. If the Jedi do not adapt, they could be at a disadvantage. What was an effective practice in the past may not remain so in the present or in the future for that matter.” “What are you saying?” Anakin looked at the chancellor with furled eyebrows. “Today the senate intends to grant me more emergency powers which will include control of the high council.” “The council will report to you?” “Directly” The chancellor confirmed. “I wish there were some other way, given the tension.” “I doubt if the council will approve of this. This may not be the right time for anymore changes.” “Changes occur whether we want them to or not. Their approval or mine in this instance, is irrelevant. It’s in the hands of the senate now. I wish things didn’t have to be this way, but this will facilitate immediate decisive action that will bring us nearer to the end of this war.” Anakin sighed. “The council will not share that observation.” “I am certain of that. While methodology will continue to be the topic of debate, we all agree this war must be won.” Anakin nodded. “In fact, the council could greatly benefit from your insight and skill.” Chancellor Palpatine glanced in his direction. “I am aware that there are two seats available on the council.” “Yes. The council is currently reviewing candidates.” “Then as my first act as their administrator, I will request you be given a seat.” Anakin froze. It felt like his lungs stopped functioning. He wasn’t sure if what he heard was reality or if he had strayed into a dream. Opportunity to succeed and achieved his desires was laid before him. Life as a Jedi Master might make it easier to hide his impending fatherhood. The position would grant him more control over his whereabouts and that of his growing family. Once deeply angst-ridden, he was now confident and resolute about his future as a parent, a husband and a Jedi. A seat on the council would grant him the ability to merge his obligations seamlessly. Palpatine offered him an express trip to recognition. He thought he’d be foolish if he didn’t go for it. If there were any debate within himself, it was quickly stamped out by ambition. Palpatine turned and said with a smirk, “Can I take your silence as a sign of approval?” Anakin blinked. “Y-yes. I’m-I’m deeply moved by your confidence in me.” “Anakin, you have demonstrated exceptional skill time and time again. You have succeeded in many encounters the council as well as the senate believed to be lost. Even most recently the devastating blow you have delivered to the Separatists by removing Dooku and saving my life is a testament of your skill. I have always been proud of your accomplishments. My confidence in you has never been stronger.” “Thank you, Chancellor,” he said, overwhelmed. “ But, this will not go well. The council will adhere to their selection process. They will not accept this.” “Of course they will. They are aware of your abilities. I believe they already know how much they need you. I am certain they will agree with my judgment.” ~~~ Anakin made his way up the stairs toward the bedroom. He smiled to himself seeing for the first time a future that was more promising and brighter than he imagined. He realized he could have it all. He could serve the republic in the best possible capacity that was fitting for some one of his caliber. He could also be a husband and father without worry of being discovered. Anakin started to hope. He allowed himself to imagine sharing a moment with his newborn and his wife. He saw himself seated amongst revered masters of the high council and being well regarded by his peers. Anakin even dared to consider whether he could inspire a change to allow marriage and children. He would be in the perfect position to make it happen. He could not keep the smile from his face. He paused at the top of the stairs when he heard Padme’s voice. She was giggling and speaking in a low tone. He sensed no other presence in the room, which made him realize she was using a comlink. He slowly walked through the doorway and saw her walking toward the window that overlooked the Coruscant skyline. “Oh, what is it?” she asked in curious excitement. She stopped before the window and watched the traffic lanes in the distance. “Can’t you give me a hint?... Please?...That’s horrible,” she pouted and said, “I have to go a whole day wondering what it could be?...” She giggled to herself. “Okay, I should go. It’s getting late...you know I will...I can't wait...I know...me too.” She ended the call and sighed heavily. Padme shifted her head downward as if she were looking at the comlink her hand. She remained still for a moment as if thinking deeply about something. Finally, she placed the comlink on the table beside her and turned around revealing a dreamy smile that quickly vanished when she saw Anakin facing her from the other side of the bed. She quickly smiled again to hide her surprise. “Anakin! Hi!” The smile he couldn't keep away was gone by now, replaced with restrained displeasure. He glanced down at her chest and noticed the Jappor Snippet he had grown so accustomed to seeing dangle over her heart was not there. “Hello, Padme.” He walked calmly toward her and leaned in to kiss her. In a smooth fluid movement, she offered her cheek and placed a delicate kiss on his. Padme wrapped her arms around him and spoke into his chest. “I missed you.” There was something missing from this statement she made. She said it thousands of times before and every time it was convincing. However, this time though it was imperceptible, something was unmistakably absent. Whatever it was, it made Anakin feel this sentiment was insincere. She told him once that she loved kissing him. Now, she avoided it as if he were just a friend. Growing suspicious, Anakin furled his brow as his arms closed around her. Not wanting to make the same mistake twice, he kept his emotions in check and decided not to jump to conclusions. He pulled away, and smiled politely. “Who were you talking to?” Padme paused and said, “Dorme.” Anakin narrowed his eyes. “Really?” He removed his robe and walked toward the closet. “Yeah, she just wanted to inform me of a conference coming up.” It was obvious that she was lying. Anakin knew Padme was smart and experienced enough to have told a more convincing lie. It seemed like this was a lie to incite suspicion, rather than to cover something up. There was an inconsistency he found difficult to ignore, but he decided not to press the matter. “Oh.” He hung up his robe and turned to face her. “I was thinking that maybe we could get a bite to eat tomorrow night.” “Uh, no-no I can’t, Anakin.” She scratched her head and looked away, “I have a lot of work waiting for me at the office.” She looked up at him and smiled, “It can’t be put off any longer. I really need to take care of it. I’ll probably be stuck at my desk well into the night.” Anakin nodded his head slightly as he swallowed the indignation. He paused and asked, “Then perhaps I should pick you up when you’re done.” She quickly responded, “Oh no, don’t bother. There’s no telling what time I’ll be done.” Padme walked over to him. “Don’t worry about me. Captain Typho can bring me home.” Anakin looked at her for a long moment and said, “Alright, maybe some other time.” He smiled mirthlessly. Padme frowned and said, “I’m sorry, Ani.” She stroked his cheek. “Can I get you anything? Are you hungry?” “A little” He said grimacing slightly. “Then I’ll go down and fix you something.” As he watched her leave the room, he felt indignation begin to gnaw at him. He walked toward the window and looked out at the vastness of Coruscant. After everything she said about being open and honest, why would she lie? What is she doing? Who was she really talking to? His instincts suggested it was another man on the other end of the conversation. But Anakin quickly rejected it. He made the mistake of accusing her and realized he was wrong. He didn’t want his feelings to get the best of him again. Still, something deep down resonated Palo’s name. Anakin felt a burning in the pit of his stomach—a slow sensation begging to be satisfied. If I ignore this, she will make a fool of me. He closed his eyes tight against it all, forced it all into silence. He opened his eyes again and in plain sight, right before him was Padme’s comlink. It was tempting him. He conceived a twisted thought that the only way to put all suspicions to rest would be find out who she was talking to. It would be all to easy to take it and trace the last call—to easy to find out it was Palo, she was talking to—too easy to prove her to be a liar. Padme’s voice entered his mind reminding him of his misjudgment. The only thing that can come between us is your jealousy, your distrust, and you distancing yourself from me…things will only get worse if you don’t trust me. More than anything in the galaxy, he wanted her to remain his wife. For that, he’d do whatever it took. Anakin turned away from the comlink and went to the fresher. TBC... READ – RELISH – REPLY Next update 11/30 (+/- 1-2 days) SIX - Meeting of the Minds The council announces their new members. Senators meet with Palpatine. Aspirations of the dark lord. HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!! -----signature----- Learn to HATE Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27568604/p1/?1 STAR WARS MUSIC VIDEOS http://www.youtube.com/user/luckiwondr
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ROTSFan Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 11/16/07 7:33pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP
	Why is Padme being such a conniving lying #%#%&#! Why-is-she-doing-this? Damn I'm upset with her. The self-disgust was growing as he gazed down at her sleeping form, knowing she loved him as much as he loved her and knowing he treated her as if she was a contemptuous adulterer. Looking back, Anakin knew it was foolish to allow his heart to overrule his mind. And he knew he had to do better. I'm just thinking that we should pair the Padme from this AU up with the ROTS Anakin who Force choked his wife. Then, we can place the trustworthy ROTS Padme who died with this deserving Anakin and let the remaining two Adam Henrys have each other. -----signature----- Reincarnation: (post ROTS V/A/P AU) Vader encounters a cloned Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21382105&replies=7 Nominated--Best Collaborative Work FanFic Awards 2007 Anakin = Beautiful Disaster
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Anakins_Fallen_Angel Registered: May '07	Date Posted: 11/17/07 7:00am Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP
	Haha i agree with ROTSFan and the pairings of Anakin and Padme. Excellent update though! I really feel for Anakin He is in for a lotta heartbreak when he finds out truth...which is something i cant wait to find out Keep up the good work!!
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KELIA Title: Hostess: 20 Questions and Bet Your Knowledge Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 11/18/07 2:54pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP
	“I am just afraid of losing you.” That is Anakin to the core. It's unfortunate he hasn't learned to control his emotions. Great update -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 Undue Circumstances: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28530583/p1/?10
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Anakins_Kiss Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 11/21/07 12:57pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP - Date Edited: 11/21/07 12:58pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Anakins_Kiss
	LET THE FEAST BEGIN!!!!! -----signature----- Learn to HATE Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27568604/p1/?1 STAR WARS MUSIC VIDEOS http://www.youtube.com/user/luckiwondr
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ROTSFan Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 12/4/07 7:10pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP
	What's going on with the story, AK? Is it coming back? I'm kind of curious. -----signature----- Reincarnation: (post ROTS V/A/P AU) Vader encounters a cloned Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21382105&replies=7 Nominated--Best Collaborative Work FanFic Awards 2007 Anakin = Beautiful Disaster
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Anakins_Kiss Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/6/07 7:11pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP
	Of course, of course. DRL attacked me. I am having some time issues. I am just putting the finishing touches on the last chapter. should be up in a couple of days. -----signature----- Learn to HATE Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27568604/p1/?1 STAR WARS MUSIC VIDEOS http://www.youtube.com/user/luckiwondr
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Captain_Observant Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 12/7/07 2:04pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 11/16 - (FIVE) New Beginnings PLS. READ/REP
	Veru interesting story here Anakins_Kiss. I feel terrible for poor Anakin! And I can't believe how cruel PAdme is being making a sham of her marriage with Anakin. But you are being very true to Anakin's character with his struggle with jealousy and mistrust with Padme after the visions he has had...too bad they are true! I have lots of questions, but I suspect that they will be answered as the story continues. I am looking forward to more!! Keep up the good work. -----signature----- "Tact is for people who aren't witty enough to be sarcastic." Innocent, unless you get blood on your hands, then guilty until you find the bleach. "I raised my daughters not to be afraid of anything - except spiders." My Dad
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Anakins_Kiss Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 12/22/07 1:35pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 12/22- (SIX) Meetings of the Mind - Date Edited: 12/23/07 9:12am (3 edits total) Edited By: Anakins_Kiss
	Captain_Observant - WELCOME!! Thanks for reading and replying. Yes, Padme is giving Anakin the business end of it. You think this is bad, poor thing doesn't know that the _____ hasn't hit the fan yet. ROTSFAN - DRL attacked me. Leaving me no time for this. Whatever little time I had, i wrote bits and pieces of the chapter on patches of paper. Finals are over and I have a whole month to dedicate to this story that i am falling in love with. (i think I love this one more the Fan.Journey. Never thought that would happen.) Kelia - Hey what's up. Like i say before its going to get alot worse before it gets alot worse and gets better. Anakins_Fallen_Angel: Thank you so much. I haven't really thought of the pairings that way. You reminded of someone on another web site replied to a chapter and said that Padme was a b. i laughed so hard (cause it was true). They even said that they hate her. Believe me, he is in for a whole lotta heartache. if we all know Anakin, he'll reach his breaking point and then...see you almost made me spill. Clever. EVERYONE: Sorry it took so long to post. This is kind of short. I will post SEVEN in a week or so. Its all ready to go. There is more information about where I am in this story after the chapter below, if you want to know. Thank you all for your replies and feedback, its my fuel and keeps me going. About Padme: Throughout the story you will see different sides of her. We will see moments when she is like the canon* Padme and moments when she is definitely not. All questions in that respect will be answered at the end of the story. Still if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SIX - Meetings of the Mind (1-7-11) Avaryce spent the better part of the day in the Jedi archives pouring over data files and any extensive information he could find on midiclorians. He returned to his quarters and removed his robe, lightly tossing it onto a nearby chair. Jedi quarters were meager and were composed only of standard issue necessities—a cot, a chair, a large bureau, a closet and a refresher. He stood before a window that offered a startling view of downtown and watched as the city lights grew more vibrant against the setting sun. Deep in thought, he glanced down to the palm of his hand at several data chips that bore information he sought to study. He never considered the months he spent researching this material as a waste of time. The plan that Avaryce was about to set in motion required much research. If successful, it would take him further than Dooku or Sidious ever expected. The latter years of Avaryce’s padawanship was spent in frustration and dissatisfaction. He always felt a growing undeniable urge to have more and become more than just an average Jedi Knight. His abilities as an elf gave him an upper hand on other force sensitives and it fed his arrogance. He knew it was extremely rare to come across a Yagarian elf with considerable abilities with the force and he felt he should have been held above all others because of this. His master as well as other Jedi that outranked were unwilling to set him on a pedestal and insisted that the Jedi functioned as a single unit—a collective. Avaryce harbored great resentment toward the council for their continued ignorance and arrogance and he swore that one day they would regret it. Shortly after being knighted, Count Dooku approached him with an enticing offer set him on a path of greater power. Avaryce believing that this was destiny calling, accepted and became an acolyte of the Sith. For many years, Avaryce trained under the tutelage of Dooku to become proficient enough in the dark arts that he could conceal the dark aura in his force signature. Abandoning the Jedi was not a difficult task for Avaryce, but was a pleasurable one. As far as he was concerned, the Jedi would get everything they deserved for not seeing what Count Dooku saw. Despite enhancing his ability with the force, greed continued to run rampant for Avaryce. Once he was aware of Sidious’s coup on the republic, he formulated a plan that would piggyback on the dark lord’s plot and change the fate of the galaxy in a manner of months. A soft beeping sound called Avaryce’s attention. He looked over his shoulder to the bureau across the room. A small red light was flashing from his holocom summoning him to answer. He immediately walked over and activated it. A prism of whitish blue light appeared and a miniature image of a hooded and cloaked figure took shape. Avaryce reverently bowed his head and said, “I am at your service, my lord.” Only the mouth and the tip of the nose were visible from beneath the hologram’s hood. His hands were clasped in the sleeves of his robe and slowly Darth Sidious began to speak, “The end of the war is near and the time of the Sith is soon at hand. This is a critical time. It is important that she does not fail her mission.” “She continues to do well, Lord Sidious.” Avaryce reported, “The young knight suspects nothing. It won’t be long before he falls.” “Good,” Sidious nodded. “I have an additional task for her to complete. She must go to the holy man on Naboo that performed the ceremony and acquire the substantial documents. You will hold them and on my command, release them to the high council.” Again, Avaryce bowed his head. “Yes, my lord.” “At the time when the temple and all the Jedi are being destroyed, you will take care of Senator Amidala. She must not live beyond the dawn of the empire.” Avaryce furled his brow, “What about Skywalker?” “He will not interfere.” Sidious said casually. “Forgive me for asking, my lord.” Avayce began humbly. “Skywalker will know if something is happening to her and then nothing will stop him from saving her. His loyalty to her will compel him to reject all things including the promise of power.” “His loyalty to her will come undone and by then, he will have been corrupted by the darkside.” “There will still be issue of the oth…” “By the time, temple has been raised to the ground, there will no loose ends.” Avaryce thought it was foolish of Sidious to waste energy turning Anakin from the light. Despite Anakin’s unparalleled potential, Avaryce felt his inability to control his emotions made him a liability. He regarded Anakin being the “chosen one” as a joke. Avaryce believed that he, and not Anakin, was destined to be all-powerful. He thought his rise to greatness was inevitable, and he would stop at nothing to achieve it. But the prophesy of the chosen one threatened that destiny. With years of observing the exponential growth of Anakin’s power and hearing of what future lay before him, Avaryce’s jealousy festered into hatred. He realized that despite having the use of the darkside, Anakin was still more powerful than he could ever be. To compensate for the difference between himself and Anakin, he expanded his knowledge of the force through study and deep meditation and most believed that he rivaled Yoda. However, this did not quench his insatiable thirst for power. He felt it was time to correct nature’s error and make himself more powerful. For that, he would need the aid of someone who excelled at gene manipulation. The procedure would be radical and crude, but in the end, his desire would be met. Avaryce would become more powerful than any being in existence. While Avaryce had ambitious plans that would take him higher than the level of Sith acolyte or even Sith master, he was more than willing to play his position in Sidious’s grand scheme. For now, Sidious’s plan had to continue undisturbed. Avaryce possessed great patience, which was a necessary trait in order for things to go as he expected. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chancellor Palpatine listened intently while seven senators seated on the other side of his desk discussed with him their position on the new amendments and the newly instated governors. While he appeared sympathetic to their concerns, he remained supportive of the governors and moffs purpose. Senators Amidala, Mothma, Zar, Teneel, Eekway, Breemu, and Organa each took turns speaking on the matters that disturbed the delegation they represented in hopes to reach some diplomatic understanding. “The duties entrusted to the regional governors are to improve inter-system defenses and update manufacturing services.” Chancellor Palpatine placed an observant gaze on each senator. “Regardless of your intentions, Chancellor, the creation of this decree is a direct challenge to the power of the Senate.” Mon Mothma said passionately. “The governors and the moffs report to no else but you.” “I am sure you all agree that since the start of the war, the senate has become a bit unfocused. The purpose of the governors is to assist the senate, not hinder it.” Palpatine glanced at each senator and said, “However, I sympathize with the discomfort you all feel. The governors and moffs will not impede any senatorial obligation.” Bail sighed in frustration and said, “Chancellor, we are here to present to you a petition of 2000 signatures from members of the senate.” He leaned forward and placed a datapad in the Palpatine’s outstretched hand. “We request that you not create any more new amendments and that you step down from power once the war is over.” Palpatine quickly looked through the document and a slight smirk tugged on the corner of his mouth. “Moreover it denounces the office of the moffs and regional governors and requests an immediate disbandment of their offices.” There was a hint of irritation in his voice. “Here we share a parallel condition. You ask me to give up my powers while quietly fighting to keep yours.” Palpatine smiled mirthlessly. “The senate is a representation of the people of the republic. That power above all else is most important. We only wish to preserve democracy.” Senator Tanel said slowly shook her head. Palpatine raised a hand in protest. “I have already stated that I would lay down this power once the crisis is over. Senators, you must strengthen your confidence that I will do everything I can to end this war and restore democracy to the republic. Until then, I do not see a need remove the sector decree. It is still very much needed.” “And at the end of the war, what will become of the moffs and governors?” Padme asked. Palpatine met her gaze, raised his chin, and answered pleasantly, “Their offices will be disbanded, of course.” The oldest member of the delegation, Fang Zar was notorious for his brutal honesty. It was one of many attributes that made him such a likeable Senator. He never held back and always fought for the underdog. “Since you've gained emergency powers, the amendments you have created have called your intentions into question.” Fang Zar boldly added, “I hope you will keep your word.” There was a moment of silence at first and it seemed the delegation representative collectively gasped. Fang fixed his hardened gaze onto the chancellor, silently challenging to respond. Bail and Terr looked uncomfortably in his direction. They recognized this as one of Fang's ploys, famously used to irritate and surprise someone enough to reveal a clue of a person's intent. It was a tactic that worked most of the time if used unexpectedly. Palaptine raised an eyebrow, intrigued by Senator Zar’s infamous nerve. He calmly asked, “Is my integrity in question?” Bail cleared his throat. “We simply question your methodology.” “No, you question my ability as an effective leader.” Palpatine’s voice seemed to shake slightly with restrained indignation. “According to my approval rating amongst the republic, your constituents do not share your opinion of me.” Mon replied, “That may be, chancellor, however you do realize that you have held office longer than your obligated terms.” “And I am certain you know as well as I, Senator Mothma, that I was asked to stay on by your peers and colleagues.” “You said yourself that the senate has been unfocused since the start of this conflict.” Mon mothma countered. Palpatine worked his jaw muscles and he placed the datapad on the desk and slowly knitted his fingers together. He exhaled and with a tight smile he said, “We all agree that the time after a war is over, is a delicate time. It is a time of reconstruction, reassessment, and adaptation. Any immediate change in administration will prove too strenuous during such delicate times and will complicate the republic’s recovery after this war.” Fang leaned forward in his chair and said, “What we are looking for, is some sort of contract or written guarantee stating that you will honor this petition and step down as ---“ Palpatine snapped his head in Fang’s direction and said sharply, “My word should be enough for you and your commission, senator.” He glanced at the other senators and said, “If you all will excuse me. I have another matter that requires my attention.” Padme raised her chin and said, “Then on behalf of the delegation of 2000, we thank you for your time and consideration, chancellor.” Silently the senators stood and filed out of the office under the cold gaze of Chancellor Palpatine. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Standing in the midst of eleven Jedi masters, Anakin could barely contain his excitement. He recalled the numbness that overtook him when he was informed that he was summoned to appear before council for a special session. He realized that Palpatine’s support in the election process had paid off and he would be elected to become a master. Being called “Master Skywalker” was an indication that he had arrived and that recognition for the things he accomplished had finally come. He believed he deserved it and thought he’d remember this day for the rest of his life. Anakin realized after this moment, he’d finally be able to breathe. He allowed himself to believe he could have it all. Anakin thought that as a master he could maintain the secret of his marriage and fatherhood until the time was right for the Jedi code of conduct to be changed. Anakin imagined that now he was well on his way to securing a brighter future with his family. In his mind, he had already begun to thank Palpatine for his endorsement. He braced himself and waited for recognition and acclaim to grace him. Anakin was so proud that he could barely keep his Jedi reserve. The council chambers seemed to grow unusually quiet as Mace Windu began to speak, “You will be granted a seat as council liaison to the chancellor,” He slowly shook his head, “but you will not be granted the title of master.” Anakin blinked. He considered that perhaps he didn’t hear right. But that wasn’t it. Anakin thought that perhaps this was some kind of vision. But that wasn’t it. This was reality. And those words just came out of the Korun master’s mouth. “What?” He shifted his gaze from Yoda to Mace, “How can this be possible?” The rug had just been pulled out from underneath him and all his expectations and hopes were dashed mercilessly to the ground. Anakin could feel the happiness drain from him, and disappointment settle in the pit of his stomach. “I don’t think I understand your meaning.” Mace furled his brow. “I was under the impression there were two seats available.” “Yes, there were.” He nodded his head. Anakin looked around the room, briefly eyeing a smug Avaryce seated beside Obi wan and said, “As far as I can see, you’ve elected Avaryce Lindo as a member and granted him the rank of master. That leaves one seat left. Why am I not treated the same?” The gasps from several masters were the only sound heard. No one had ever questioned a decision of the council until this moment. Anakin didn’t care. He looked around the room and saw Avaryce looking upon him with exaggerated disapproval, it was obvious to him that he was being smug. The disappointment Anakin felt began to morph into anger. He was angry that the council continued to be blind to Avaryce’s arrogance and aversion toward him. He was angry that they thought Avaryce was worthy of becoming a master and council member. “Our reasons for electing Avaryce are due to his years of experience and knowledge of the force.” Shaak-Ti explained with her hands neatly folded on her lap. Anakin grimaced at the ridiculous statement. “Right now, I am more powerful than most in this room, including Avaryce. Yet he is granted the rank of master and elected a seat on the council, while I am designated council liaison?” Though Anakin struggled to maintain his composure, it was obvious to everyone that he was deeply upset. “Agree with this decision, you do not?” Yoda’s ears twitched. Anakin’s widened and glanced at Obi wan who could only shake his head in disappointment. “Agree?” He voice grew louder as he spoke, “Have I not demonstrated my skill, time and time again? Have I not completed missions most believed lost? Shouldn’t I get acknowledgement for that?!” He couldn’t believe he was being treated this way. Palpatine words about the council revisited as him as possible reasons for this entered his mind. All he immediately dismissed, except for one. They are jealous He was livid. Anakin looked at the masters before him with flaring nostrils. It seemed like that his rage had set a fire behind his eyes. They burned so much. He closed his eyes and exhaled, hoping to find a way to process this unfortunate development. “While we are all aware of your abilities, you should not allow that to cloud your mind into thinking you have a right. Acknowledge that you have been granted a privilege rather than denied it.” Ki Adi Mundi interjected. “Avaryce has demonstrated years of experience and skill, which you have matched undoubtedly. However, he has something else which you need more time to develop.” “Of the force, much to learn, you still have.” Yoda pointed his finger. “If you wish to accept this duty, you may take a seat, young Skywalker.” Mace extended a hand toward an empty seat. “Otherwise, you are free to go.” Anakin clenched his teeth and inhaled a deep breath. Everything he thought was within reach was unjustly denied him. Padme’s pregnancy would be difficult to hide and a child would be even harder. Again, he had to accept that his days as a Jedi knight were numbered. This sudden upset left him with deep resentment and frustration. He would never forget it. With as much equanimity as he could muster, Anakin glanced at the masters before him and said with a bow, “Forgive me, masters.” It was a show of respect compelled by years of training, but the blood still ran hot through his veins. As he turned and took a seat beside Ki Adi, he could see the smirk starting to form on the corner of Avaryce’s mouth. There was a short moment of silence before Obi wan opened the discussion. “Matters continue to worsen on Reisa 4. We will need to send a battalion of clones there to tip the scales in their favor. It won’t be long before the system falls to the Separatists.” “As is the matter of the Gausi System, the Separatists are beginning to overpower them. They will need help also.” Mace reported. “But there are not enough Jedi to lead the clones there.” Obi wan looked around the room at the other masters. There was a moment of silence while they each contemplated a solution. “Go to Reisa 4, I will.” Yoda tapped his gimmer stick. Following Yoda’s lead, Ki adi mundi also volunteered. “I will take a battalion to Gausi. I am well known there.” “It is settled then. Clones will be ready for immediate departure. May the force be with us all.” Mace said closing the meeting. TBC… READ_ RELISH_ REPLY_ NEXT: SEVEN – AFFECT Rebels decide their recourse; Anakin blows up; Obi wan finds out a painful truth. UPDATE: Chapter Seven is completed. I will not post yet until I get it back (12/29 +/-). I am currently working on chapter eight which still needs more "Meat". Since I am done with classes, I am devoting myself full time to completing this fic before Jan 26. If you got a myspace acct. hit me up!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! -----signature----- Learn to HATE Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/27568604/p1/?1 STAR WARS MUSIC VIDEOS http://www.youtube.com/user/luckiwondr
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KELIA Title: Hostess: 20 Questions and Bet Your Knowledge Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 12/22/07 2:14pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 12/22- (SIX) Meetings of the Mind
	I loved the Senators confronting Palpatine. It's just unfortunate they did not have any success. Not surprising - but unfortunate. I see the Council is still as blind as ever to the darkside. Granting Avaryce a seat plus the title of Master has got to be one of the worst decisions ever. Great update and Merry Christmas! -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 Undue Circumstances: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28530583/p1/?10
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ROTSFan Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 12/22/07 6:19pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 12/22- (SIX) Meetings of the Mind
	Good, well written! I'm glad that I'll get to read all of this before school begins, although I can't say I will favor it over The Fantastic Journey unless Padme changes her ways He knew it was extremely rare to come across a Yagarian elf with considerable abilities with the force and he felt he should have been held above all others because of this. His master as well as other Jedi that outranked were unwilling to set him on a pedestal and insisted that the Jedi functioned as a single unit—a collective. Yeah, they expect teamwork out of you. Imagine that. On another note, it sounds like Arayce and Anakin have some mutual jealousy going on. -----signature----- Reincarnation: (post ROTS V/A/P AU) Vader encounters a cloned Padme. http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21382105&replies=7 Nominated--Best Collaborative Work FanFic Awards 2007 Anakin = Beautiful Disaster
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Captain_Observant Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 12/27/07 3:07pm Subject: RE: OVERCOME- (A/P, Obi, Palpsy, Dooks etc...) - updated 12/22- (SIX) Meetings of the Mind
	Man, Ani just can't catch a break. First, his wife cheats on him and lies, and now, the council just won't make him master. Really have to feel bad for the guy. But if he doesn't do something about that anger....yikes! Nothing good is going to come from any of this, nothing at all.... And nice twist with the council unknowingly placing a dark Jedi on the council. I am very curious as to how all the lies and deception going on in this story are going to play out. And wow, Avaryce is just turning out to be nastier and nastier! Gene manipulation - he sure is desperate to be on top! Thanks for the PM, I look forward to more! -----signature----- "Tact is for people who aren't witty enough to be sarcastic." Innocent, unless you get blood on your hands, then guilty until you find the bleach. "I raised my daughters not to be afraid of anything - except spiders." My Dad
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