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Author	Topic: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 3/17 6:20pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Wriggle!! I bet that cloaked figure with blue eyes at the end is Luke. -----signature----- Jagateer of lavender bubble bath & chocolate covered strawberries Tied to my fellow L&M lovers & Jagateers by durasteel bonds of joyous !!!! !!!! SQUGGLES!
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winterseh Registered: Jul '01	Date Posted: 3/17 8:47pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Love it! Please add me to PM list?
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Toki-chan Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 3/18 8:07am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Daddy Vader to the rescue! Oh, I Love it at the end when she sees Anakin, and not Vader. Awh, such good descriptions. I love your writing! I can't wait for the next part.
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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 3/18 9:12am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08 - Date Edited: 3/18 9:15am (2 edits total) Edited By: brodiew
	Wow! Vader learns quickly that he is her father. And the memory from Hoth. So this is taking place post ESB??? Was Luke captured and turned? But as it – he – grew closer, I saw not dark armor and a long black cloak, but a black-clothed, dark robed young man. His intense blue eyes were the last things I saw before I fell unconscious. But, it's Sithly Luke to the rescue. I'm all ears. Keep up the good work! -----signature----- It's not always easy, And sometimes life can be deceiving, I'll tell you one thing, its always better when we're together from 'Better Together' by Jack Johnson
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Icecruncher_Amidala Registered: Sep '07	Date Posted: 3/18 3:19pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! Vader knows! Update soon, THIS IS TORTURE! -----signature----- 'No one is totally worthless. They can just serve as a bad example.'---Something often said by my dad.
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Jeditheskyisblue Registered: Mar '01	Date Posted: 3/29 12:57pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	I agree please update this soon. -----signature----- It's Never To Late... http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=2214874&page=1 Is It To Late?(Sequel INTL) http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=2638672&replies=1 It Wasn't A Mistake(L/M) http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=2398787
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ILDV Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 4/29 9:15am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08 - Date Edited: 5/17 12:29am (2 edits total) Edited By: ILDV
	ALL wonderful... He stared at me for a minute. “You cut your hair?” He sounded incredulous. He is so.. LOVELY... ROTFL! “Okay,” I said. “My choices are…” I grabbed the datapad. “Aisha… Sabe… and Leia and Padmé.” I looked up at him and was astonished to find that he had frozen, and his breathing had stopped. “Vader? Are you all right?” His breathing began again slowly. “What is your… your final choice?” He eventually asked, although it seemed hard for him to speak. Poor Vader... Piett barely looked at him. A very small, slouched female figure was clinging for dear life to the Dark Lord’s right arm. It appeared she was using Vader for support, and her body was trembling. Her eyes, which were darting around curiously, had dark circles around them and were so lifeless and dull that they astounded Piett. This girl was very different from the strong, proud Rebel Princess from before. Leia and Vader.. Very touching... And... I LOVE Piett. Leia "feels" the Vader's emotions (poor Leia, he is much emotional) and she dreams Anakin and his past... WOW. It's so AMAZING and TOUCHING! A very GREAT, wonderFul, touching, amazing story but... Now... Ehmmm..... PLEASE more again UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON [a VERY GREAT puppy's eyes] PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE -----signature----- Unlooked for,unhoped for,the Sith’Ari will come.Through his power,we are purged and gain strength.Through his being, the darkness will devour the light and in a time of greatest despair,there shall come a savior,and he shall be known as the Son of theSuns
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DarthVaderette Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 4/29 2:29pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Hi, I'm enjoying the story, can you PM me with updates? Thanks -----signature----- SW Fan since '77 This is where the fun begins God Bless America
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ILDV Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 5/12 7:50am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Please, More.... -----signature----- Unlooked for,unhoped for,the Sith’Ari will come.Through his power,we are purged and gain strength.Through his being, the darkness will devour the light and in a time of greatest despair,there shall come a savior,and he shall be known as the Son of theSuns
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owphoenix Registered: Sep '03	Date Posted: 5/12 2:37pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Could I be placed on the PM list? Please.
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JediXManSerenaKenobi Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 5/13 10:45am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08
	Sorry guys!! I'll try to update soon. I've just had a lot going on. - Serena -----signature----- " 'Do you believe in God?' written on the bullet Say 'yes' to pull the trigger And I will pull the trigger!"- "Cassie" by Flyleaf Proud member of Wrenga Jixton's Virtual Blondies! Christian=follower of the Savior Jesus Christ
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ILDV Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 5/14 12:27am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 3/16/08 - Date Edited: 5/14 1:54am (6 edits total) Edited By: ILDV
	Many many many many thanks. This story in very very very very WONDERFUL ( ), SO TOUCHING ( ) and AMAZING ( )! I heard a sudden inhuman roar, and as my sight dimmed, I caught sight of a familiar tall, dark figure holding up the man against the wall. I heard a choking noise, and the dark shape tossed the lifeless man to the floor. Then, the figure advanced towards me. But as it – he – grew closer, I saw not dark armor and a long black cloak, but a black-clothed, dark robed young man. His intense blue eyes were the last things I saw before I fell unconscious. Incredible image. "Aisha" continues to see Anakin and his memories, not only in dreams (Know Vader these facts?!?!?!). WOW. Very interesting. They have a GREAT connection. -----signature----- Unlooked for,unhoped for,the Sith’Ari will come.Through his power,we are purged and gain strength.Through his being, the darkness will devour the light and in a time of greatest despair,there shall come a savior,and he shall be known as the Son of theSuns
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JediXManSerenaKenobi Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 5/15 11:09am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 5/15/08
	I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I don't have time for review replies today - however, I want to thank ALL of you for taking the time to review, and I'm SO happy you like this story! I know Vader found out rather quickly, but he had to find out sometime, right? I thought better sooner than later, as poor Leia will be having enough problems on her hands. To everyone who thought the young man was Luke: I'm afraid to tell you that it is NOT. For those of you who guessed Leia was seeing Vader as Anakin, you are correct. It's kind of a Force vision, almost. Once again, thank you! - Serena “What do you mean, she’s missing?” “Captain, Princess Leia left to help with your rescue but never arrived.” “Yeah,” a recently freed Han Solo said irritably, “We know that. We thought she might’ve stayed for some reason on the ship.” Luke shook his head. “No, she was on her way. You know Leia would be there to rescue you. She was a strategic part of the plan.” Han sighed. “Go on, General,” he said to the hologram in front of him. “Very well, sir. We got a distress signal from Her Highness’s ship, but by the time our ships reached the coordinates, the ship was gone.” Han and Luke exchanged deeply concerned glances; and Han rose to his feet from the late Obi-Wan Kenobi’s table and began to pace the hut of the deceased Jedi in an agitated manner. “Leia can take care of herself,” the former smuggler said, though Luke knew it was a futile attempt to reassure both himself and Luke. For himself, Luke was extremely worried. She was one of his closest friends, and for some inexplicable reason, he felt a deeper bond with her than Han. It wasn’t romantic by far any longer – he knew how Han and Leia felt about each other and couldn’t be more pleased with their relationship – whatever that was. But now that Leia was missing… “Sirs, a ship came more recently came to the vicinity of the Princess’s vessel, and I think it’s safe to say that the Princess was captured.” “Track the ship’s ion trail,” Han barked. “Already on it, General. But the ship went to lightspeed shortly after, so we’ll start looking at nearby planets.” The hologram died away. Han turned to Luke. “You think it’s the Empire?” Luke sighed. “I don’t know. I hope not.” He glanced out the window. “I just hope she’s all right.” Han nodded grimly. “Yeah, me too.” Young one… wake up. I couldn’t open my eyes… it was too painful. A warm hand passed over my head, and I inhaled deeply. The scent of roses was in the air, and a warm breeze blew past me. Slowly, I opened my eyes. Kneeling over me was an older man with the kindest face I’d ever seen. He had long blonde hair and a short beard and was draped in a dark brown cloak. His eyes were a warm blue. “Good morning, young one.” “What? Where am I?” I murmured. “In a dream… this is Naboo.” He swept a hand across to show me the gorgeous landscape, then held it out to help me to my feet. To my surprise, my legs were perfectly fine. “Who are you? What’s going on?” I asked, slightly disturbed. He merely smiled a warm smile. “You may call me… Gon.” “Gon?” “Yes. I’ve been watching you for a long time, young one. I’ve come to help you. I know you’re alone and confused, and I’ve come to guide your through your new journey.” “Journey? I don’t understand,” I said blankly. Frowning, I asked, “Do you know who I am? Who I was?” He slowly shook his head. “No. But I will help you rediscover your past… and help you for your future. There are many things you must know, young one. I will be watching you and guiding you in your dreams.” Everything became muddled, and the last thing I heard was his whisper, “I will be watching over you…” I blinked, an in an abrupt flash, I found myself standing on a molten rock, looking down into a fiery river of lava. To my horror, a young man was lying stomach down on the hill near the river. I felt ashy smoke filling my lungs, and I found that I couldn’t breathe. But my gaze was locked onto the young man. Transfixed, his eyes rose to meet mine… I had seen the young man before! I found myself remembering their azure intensity before… But as our gazes met, my heart jumped in horror. They were not human eyes. A mix of yellow, red, and orange, and filled with a lusty rage and a darker fury than I had ever seen before. I felt that I was being smoldered by his hate-filled vision that locked onto me. His lips parted into a snarl, and his eyes lit with a deadly fire. My lungs found their breath, and I screamed. “Aisha!” My eyes flew open, and choking, I tried to breathe. But it was an excruciatingly painful process, one that had me coughing the next moment as my hand flew up to my bruised and sore throat. My eyes welled up with tears, and two slipped down my face. Blinking rapidly, I saw Vader hovering over me. I couldn’t tell if he was concerned or not – his mask was unreadable. “Vader?” I whispered hoarsely. “You were having a nightmare,” he stated. I nodded slowly. “What… happened?” “A… gravely mistaken officer who believed you to be someone else. He has been corrected.” I shivered at his dark tone, wondering distantly exactly how the man had been “corrected.” But Vader wouldn’t hurt anyone, would he? Suddenly, I felt a wave of concern, but it wasn’t mine. I frowned, and somehow reached out to the feeling. I felt a touch of incredulity, then coldness. I pulled back and stared at Vader. What’s going on? I mentally wondered. You are strong indeed, young one. My eyes widened. Someone else had called me that, but this voice sounded like… Vader! Is that you, Lord Vader? I asked cautiously. Yes. How am I doing this? There was a pause, then, It is the Force, L- Aisha. Now I paused. I had caught a hint of something else, before he said my name. But I dismissed it quickly and continued, What’s the Force? Not now, young one. Now you need to rest. We have much to discuss when you are better. Sleep. My eyes drifted shut, but the last thing I remembered seeing hovering over me before the darkness closed in on me again was not Lord Vader. The darkly cloaked young man with intense blue eyes was gazing warmly down at me. I'm afraid PMs will be dreadfully late - as in, a weekend late. I'll try to get them out as soon as possible, however. SORRY!!! - Serena -----signature----- " 'Do you believe in God?' written on the bullet Say 'yes' to pull the trigger And I will pull the trigger!"- "Cassie" by Flyleaf Proud member of Wrenga Jixton's Virtual Blondies! Christian=follower of the Savior Jesus Christ
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dm1 Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 5/15 11:39am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 5/15/08
	Oopsie, Vader almost blew it there... Good to see Han and Luke again. It's going to be rough when they find out what happened to Leia. -----signature----- Internet Mom to HSG! Hey, HSG, watch those explosives, be careful!!
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dancing_star Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 5/15 5:46pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 5/15/08
	Wow! So glad to see this updated! Splendid job! I'm eagerly awaiting more! -----signature----- See my updated bio for fics God bless America and our troops. "The LORD gives strength to his people. The LORD blesses his people with peace." Ps 29:11 ~~~
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