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PadawanMom5610 Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 6/18 7:23pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	Great update, very exciting. Go Qui-Gon! I knew [b]someone[b] would hear her in the force and come to help. Ooh, Vader's not going to be happy if he finds out who it was and what happened. Great job!
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ILDV Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 6/19 1:57am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08 - Date Edited: 6/19 1:58am (1 edits total) Edited By: ILDV
	HI, yes I'm a very JIX fan! LOL! A wonderful new chapter! GO Qui-Gon GO!! YESSSSSS! Vader has much road to make like daddy... Poor... Many thanks for ALL. -----signature----- Unlooked for,unhoped for,the Sith’Ari will come.Through his power,we are purged and gain strength.Through his being, the darkness will devour the light and in a time of greatest despair,there shall come a savior,and he shall be known as the Son of theSuns
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KELIA Title: Moderator: Fan Fiction Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 6/19 3:51am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	I decided to firmly put my trust in Vader and hope that he had the best intentions towards me. Uh oh! Loved Qui-Gon interrupting the training session. Maybe, just maybe Leia will stand a chance against Vader's teachings. Great update -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 Undue Circumstances: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28530583/p1/?10
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alderaanprincess Registered: Feb '08	Date Posted: 6/19 10:53am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	wow that was a great chapter! I loved Vader's reaction to Leia touching the Light Side and Qui-gon helping her. Too bad Vader shut off that holo before she saw Han or Luke. Maybe that would have brought some memories back. -----signature----- LEiA "Sometimes I amaze even myself!" "I don't know who you are or where you came from but from now on you do as I tell you. Okay?" http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28196366/p1/?5
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Jedi_Master_Cazz Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 6/19 10:33pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	Uh-oh! I hope Qui-gon's presence doesn't become known to Vader! Cheers_Cazza -----signature----- If you say plz instead of Please, I'll say No because it's shorter than Yes. Proud Padawan to Master VaderLV64! Preparing for Final Exams. Will be on sporatically for the next few immediate months.
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ILDV Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 6/20 2:28am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	Vader's reaction is much intense... He is convinced still that only the dark side can save those which he loves… I think… Poor... -----signature----- Unlooked for,unhoped for,the Sith’Ari will come.Through his power,we are purged and gain strength.Through his being, the darkness will devour the light and in a time of greatest despair,there shall come a savior,and he shall be known as the Son of theSuns
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Icecruncher_Amidala Registered: Sep '07	Date Posted: 6/20 12:10pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	WOW! This is by far the best chapter. More, more, more, more. -----signature----- 'No one is totally worthless. They can just serve as a bad example.'---Something often said by my dad.
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padawan_learner86 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 6/23 8:27am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	I was just thinknig how bizarre (but nice) it was for Vader and Qui-Gon to conduct a (unknowingly) joint lesson when Vader had to snap. Lol, only to be expected, but I'm curious how she'll explain, how he'll react and how long he'll continue to protect her - in the Light she is real no use him... P.S: Good luck with the novel. -----signature----- One who accepts only the SW movies as canon. Thus, refuses to read any of the SW books. ^^; Fics in Bio
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JediXManSerenaKenobi Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 7/4 8:37am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	ccp: Thank you! I hate people going Dark side, but Leia will have many struggles in the near future - her father's temper, for one? dancing_star: Thank you!! Jade_Eyes: Exactly right. He's trying to start from scratch. Leia's a smart, intuitive young woman - she'll figure it out eventually - with the help of an old friend... Golden_Jedi: No, not really... Ocelotl_Nesto: Why thank you!! Yes, a full length sci-fi/thriller/romance novel. I will most certainly keep you guys posted if you want me to! I'm actually halfway done... with the first draft, that is. JediNat: Thank you so much!! I think Vader's more surprised than anything right now. After all, Leia's never used the Force before. JediMasterAmanda: Right on all counts! I think it's a combination of all three. Darth_Marrs: Eeep! Sorry. I'll try to make them longer. PadawanMom5610: Yeah, he's really not - especially since Qui-Gon's supposed to be, ahem, not to put too fine a point on it - DEAD. He's in for a nasty surprise. ILDV: GAH! You ROCK!! Not many people know who Jix is. Yeah, Vader needs to go to HOW TO BE A DAD 101. Poor guy. KELIA: Glad you liked the interruption. Maybe she will. alderaanprincess: Thank you! Yeah, Vader's gonna make sure that Leia doesn't see or hear anything about Luke or Han. But we'll see. Jedi_Master_Cazz: I think Qui-Gon can hide himself for as long as he wants. He is a more experienced Jedi, after all. Icecruncher_Amidala: Thank you, thank you, thank you! padawan_learner86: Yeah, it kind of is! Vader, I think, will be torn in the future - after all, she IS his only daughter, and he doesn't want to let go of that. Thanks for the good luck on the novel - I will most definitely need it. Sorry for the no post in a while! Busy, busy, busy! But WAIT! It's SUMMER! We're not SUPPOSED to be BUSY!! Well, er, uh... I am. SO SUE ME! Thanks for sticking with this story for so long! - Serena -----signature----- " 'Do you believe in God?' written on the bullet/ Say 'yes' to pull the trigger / And I will pull the trigger!" Talon Intelligence Squadron Artist! Talons rule! Proud member of Wrenga Jixton's Virtual Blondies! Christian=follower of Savior Jesus Christ
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DanaeMariSkywalker Registered: Oct '06	Date Posted: 7/12 8:50pm Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	Great chapter! So Qui-Gon is steering her away from the Dark Side. That's good!! Now, Vader's angry and "Aisha" probably doesn't have much answers to give. I hope Han and Luke find her soon. That way things will be better for her...hopefully. ~DanaeMariSkywalker -----signature----- "I am a Jedi like my father before me." Luke Skywalker in ROTJ Padawan to FlowerLady "Love can ignite the stars." ROTS novelization by Matthew Stover "There is still good in him." Padmé about Anakin in ROTS
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JediXManSerenaKenobi Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 7/21 11:25am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 6/18/08
	Thanks, Danae! Yes, Vader's pretty angry, and also confused. After all, Leia's never used the Force before, so how would she know how to go into such deep meditation? Poor Aisha's just confused. I have a feeling it might be a while before Han and Luke show up. Thanks for reading, everyone. Right now I'm in the process of writing this next chapter, so that'll be up soon. Sorry for the long wait! I'm about three quarters done with my novel now, though, with over 320 pages and approximately 90,000 words. Yaya! - Serena -----signature----- " 'Do you believe in God?' written on the bullet/ Say 'yes' to pull the trigger / And I will pull the trigger!" Talon Intelligence Squadron Artist! Talons rule! Proud member of Wrenga Jixton's Virtual Blondies! Christian=follower of Savior Jesus Christ
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JediXManSerenaKenobi Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 7/25 10:40am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 7/25/08
	ALIVE “W-what?” I stammered, trying to pull back from his overly tight grasp. “I felt it – you were using the Force in a way that no amateur could ever hope to accomplish! You have lied – who trained you?” I winced as his hands tightened ruthlessly. “Let go,” I gasped. “Let go, please.” I froze as I suddenly heard voices in the back of my head – one of them sounding eerily like me… Don’t get excited! Captain, being held by you isn’t quite enough to get me excited. Sorry, sweetheart. Haven’t got time for anything else. I winced, my eyes screwing shut. “Stop it,” I hissed. “I can’t… I can’t do this anymore!” I looked back up at Vader, who was staring at me, and felt a sudden wave of resentment and anger. “Release me,” I ordered coldly. But he didn’t. “What did you see?” he demanded. “I don’t know!” I cried. “I don’t know!” I could feel tears beginning to well up in my eyes as my head began to spin crazily. Just leave me alone… “You’re hurting me!” Anakin, you’re breaking my heart! I gasped again as I sensed the raw pain in those unfamiliar words. “Breaking my heart?” I whispered in confusion. Where did all of these short-lived memories keep coming from? Why didn’t I know anything yet? I was shocked when Vader abruptly jerked away from me as if he were touching his lightsaber. “What did you say?” he breathed. “I don’t… I don’t know. This is so frustrating, Vader,” I said through clenched teeth as I stared down at my hands. “I can’t remember! Why can’t I remember who I am?” He was silent for a long moment. “This has been too early,” he said finally. “You are still suffering from trauma from your injuries. I’ll take you back to your quarters.” “No,” I gasped. “I can’t do this – I need answers. I’m going to go mad!” Vader picked me up and began carrying me back to my room. “You need to calm yourself. Perhaps this is a blessing in disguise. This could be the chance for you to start a new, better life.” “But how will I know it’s better if I don’t know what my other life was like?” I demanded. He had no answer. Once we returned to my quarters, I pleaded, “Please, Vader, isn’t there something I can do? Read? If I’m going to start over, I need to know what’s out there.” He gazed at me, seeming wary and uncertain. “I’ll have something brought to your room.” “Thank you,” I nodded. When datapads and holos were brought to me, I instantly grabbed one and began devouring the information. The Jedi’s attempt to assassinate Chancellor Palpatine failed, and thus the traitorous Jedi were found guilty of high treason and were eliminated as a threat from the galaxy. It was then that the great Empire began under the just rule of Emperor Palpatine, and his second-in-command, Darth Vader. Vader! Vader was the second most powerful man in the galaxy? But who were these Jedi? And why would they attempt to assassinate Palpatine? As I continued reading more, I discovered that the Jedi were once keepers of the peace, working under the Republic, but they had grown hungry for power and decided to therefore take over the galaxy. I suppose anything could be possible, but since they hadn’t tried to take over the galaxy before for hundreds of years, why would they suddenly do so now? I frowned. There were two sides to every story. I would like the whole picture, but these were all written by Imperialists. Well, maybe the Empire was better for the galaxy, I mused. After all, Lord Vader did save my life and take me in when he didn’t have to. Perhaps the Jedi were really the bad guys. Still… I couldn’t ignore my deeper senses telling me something was slightly off. Call in intuition, but I just knew there was more to the story. I wondered, however, if Vader, being the head of the Empire, would allow me to see the other side. But why wouldn’t he? If the Empire were as just and good as all of these documents claimed, then I would have no trouble doing more research myself. I continued reading about the new threat, miniscule but still a threat, to the Empire: The Rebel Alliance. Upon first hearing that name, I felt an odd twinge of delight and even pride, but I had no idea why. Dismissing the feelings, I went on to read that the Alliance had destroyed the Empire’s protective defense system: the Death Star. Doesn’t sound like a defensive system, I thought. Sounds more like a weapon. But why would they need that massive a weapon unless they had enemies? Maybe pirates? The whole thing seemed a bit skeptical to me, but I decided to keep these thoughts to myself for a time. I wanted to see what Vader was actually like before I made any judgments. Although, by the way he had treated me back in the training room, I was a little more wary of him. He seemed almost dangerous. Still, he had rescued me. I owed him my life. With a heavy sigh, I resumed my reading. “This is Commander Skywalker reporting in,” Luke announced over the com as his X-Wing and the Millennium Falcon soared into the Rebel fleet. “Requesting permission to land.” After a moment, Crix Madine greeted him. “Commander Skywalker, it’s good to have you back. And with Captain Solo, I see. Well done.” “Don’t sound so excited to see me,” Han’s voice dryly butted into the conversation. Luke smirked, knowing that Han and Madine didn’t always see eye to eye on things. “Captain Solo,” Madine said, sounding slightly irritated. “I trust you’re injured?” “Sorry to disappoint,” said Han cheekily. But his voice quickly turned serious as he said, “Any updates on Leia?” “We’ll talk about it inside,” Madine said after a pause. “You’re cleared to land in docking bay five.” The com shut off, and Luke frowned. Han said slowly, “Is it just me, or is anyone else having a bad feeling about this?” “It’s not just you, Han,” Luke said grimly. Once on board the head ship, Luke and Han, along with Lando and Chewie found the Rebel leaders in the conference room, all of them somber and grave. Han and Luke exchanged concerned glances at the looks on the leader’s faces. “What have you found out about Leia?” Han instantly demanded. Mon Mothma replied calmly, “Nothing. Any trace of her has disappeared. We’ve searched all nearby planets, but we’ve found nothing.” “Then we obviously haven’t searched hard enough,” Han snarled. “Captain, that’s enough,” Madine snapped. “We’re already straining our resources as it is trying to locate the Princess. We know how important an asset she is, but right now we have more important things to worry about.” Han and Luke both stared at him in astonishment. “More important things?” Han said, his voice shaking with rage. Luke was also struggling to control his temper, and Chewie started to growl. “Gentlemen, please,” Mon Mothma said coolly. “The General didn’t mean it that way. What he’s saying is that although Princess Leia is a valuable member of the Rebellion, we’re hearing reports of a new, deadly threat from the Empire. Reports of a new Death Star.” Han’s jaw tightened. “What are you saying?” he demanded. “You’re going to just forget about Leia?” Luke added in shock. “Of course not,” Mothma objected, “But you have to understand that she is not our main priority at the moment. We have to think of the galaxy, Commander Skywalker. You, as a Jedi, should understand that sometimes sacrifices have to be made.” Luke felt another flash of anger. Who was this woman to tell him what Jedi were supposed to do? He resisted making a biting remark, determined to quench his anger and remain calm. “Sacrifices, my - ” Han stopped himself abruptly, breathing hard. “Leia would never do something like this. To any of you. She would’ve made sure that you were back, safe, no matter what. You don’t deserve her,” he said harshly, and Luke could see his eyes shining from unshed tears. He realized then how much Han loved Leia, and he felt a pang of sorrow for his best friend. Luke stiffened and stared down the leaders coldly. “So we’re just going to nothing about Leia?” he said. “Is this the final word?” “Commander, you’d best watch your tone,” Madine said sharply. “No,” Han growled, “Watch this. I’m outta here.” He turned abruptly and started out the doorway, when Mothma said, startled, “Captain, what are you doing?” Han turned, glaring at her. “I’m gonna go look for her. Try and stop me.” He stormed out of the room. Chewie snarled at the leaders and followed his friend out of the room. Once he was gone, an awkward silence descended upon the room until Lando said, “Forget this. I’m with him. Besides, someone’s gotta look out for that pirate.” He also walked out of the room. Mothma turned her gaze to a grave Luke. “And you, Commander? Will you desert as well? Or will you do your duty as a Jedi and a Commander and stay with your men?” Luke stared at her unflinchingly. “My duty is to my friends. To Leia. As for being a Commander, Wedge will understand completely. I’m sorry it has to be this way. But we haven’t deserted you. You’ve deserted us. And Leia.” He turned and left the room. -----signature----- " 'Do you believe in God?' written on the bullet/ Say 'yes' to pull the trigger / And I will pull the trigger!" Talon Intelligence Squadron Artist! Talons rule! Proud member of Wrenga Jixton's Virtual Blondies! Christian=follower of Savior Jesus Christ
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JediMasterAmanda Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 7/25 10:54am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 7/25/08
	nice update here -----signature----- Jedi Padawan--/---\--Trust in the Force "You have that, 'we're in trouble' look." -Snips "There's a look?" -Skyguy "You can't miss it." -Snips TISSI-2 at your service.
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dancing_star Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 7/25 11:04am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 7/25/08
	Luke stared at her unflinchingly. “My duty is to my friends. To Leia. As for being a Commander, Wedge will understand completely. I’m sorry it has to be this way. But we haven’t deserted you. You’ve deserted us. And Leia.” He turned and left the room. Go Luke! And Han and Lando! You tell them! So glad to see this updated! Excellent job!! -----signature----- See my updated bio for fics God bless America and our troops. "The LORD gives strength to his people. The LORD blesses his people with peace." Ps 29:11 ~~~ Drabbles!! http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29148282/p1/?9
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PadawanMom5610 Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 7/25 11:09am Subject: RE: Alive - Leia, Vader, Luke, Han - AU post ESB - Drama, Romance, Angst, Action/Adventure - 7/25/08
	Excellent update. I like that she's getting glimpses of her own memories and also of Padme's. Better watch it, Vader! Go guys! They know what to do to save the day, and I'm sure they'll be able to find Leia. Meanwhile, her real self is coming out in her thoughts and opinions. Great job.
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