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Diary of a young healer, 2008 diary challenge updated 31-8 vacation challenge
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Diary of a young healer, 2008 diary challenge updated 31-8 vacation challenge
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Diary of a young healer
Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
Timeframe: intertrillogy -ROTJ
Characters: Marhin Adin, Oc's
Genre: diary
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Summary: Marhin Adin writes in his diary
Disclaimer: Star Wars = George Lucas.
Entry 1
My name is Marhin Adin and I am the son of Kaagi and Arianna Adin. I am 11 years old and living in a nice cottage situated on the large estate of Eled-Hir on the planet Moniron.
Yesterday I got this new diary from my father because I have started to follow in his footsteps.
I will become a healer like him.
My father was a healer in the Jeditemple and he fled just before the temple was destroyed almost 19 years ago
My mother was born here.
I have many friends at school and at the estate.
I will tell you about them
Oops: school is starting
I will be back.
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KELIA
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I will become a healer like him.
I'm sure his father will be proud to see his son follow in his footsteps.
Please PM me when you update
Looking forward to more
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mavjade
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Wonderful first entry!!
I've got a soft spot in my heart for healers and I love that this is a child that is gonna be a healer!!
I'm excited for more!
If you do a PM list could I be on it please? 
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Jade_eyes
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I'm intrigued. I like the voice of innocence mixed with the honesty that only a youngling can provide. Being a healer in training opens the way for many adventures  I'd love PMs please? 
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RE: Diary of a young healer, 2008 diary challenge updated jan 9 school and firefighters
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Kelia posted: I will become a healer like him.
I'm sure his father will be proud to see his son follow in his footsteps.
Please PM me when you update
Looking forward to more
Mavjade posted: Wonderful first entry!!
I've got a soft spot in my heart for healers and I love that this is a child that is gonna be a healer!!
I'm excited for more!
If you do a PM list could I be on it please?
Jade_eyes posted:
I'm intrigued. I like the voice of innocence mixed with the honesty that only a youngling can provide. Being a healer in training opens the way for many adventures I'd love PMs please?
PM's are sent and thanks for your support 
Entry 2
School was nice today with the first lessons in anatomy by master Henrani Elenion.
He is the father of Lenwe and Alwin.
Alwin was raised at the Jeditemple because he was recued from slavery by master Yoda, Obi-Wan Kenobi and Qui-Gon Jinn. After he was born, an evil woman took him away and told his parents that he had died after birth.
The Jedi could save him and because no one knew who his parents were and because he was Force sensitive he was admitted to Jedi-training. What the Jedi didn’t know was that he is a Dunai elder and they are all Force users. And Dunai elder age differently and Alwin was with 13 years still clumsy and no Master took him as a padawan-learner. 13 is the age you have to be taken as a padawan and Alwin left with Magin Bhik to the agricorps.
Alwin met firefighters on Alderaan and after the Jedipurge he took refuge in the house of firechief Mick Robi in the small village of Alladea.
His son Luciano Robi also fled Coruscant with his childhood friend Boyd Vienar.
Luciano trained Alwin to become a firefighter and they ended up here on Moniron after a meeting with Obi-Wan Kenobi on Tatooine. That was almost 4 years ago.
Hm, I have to hurry. Alwin is starting with his exercises for the firefighters and that is fun to watch.
tbc-
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AzureAngel2
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It is interesting to see another slave-boy going his way. How different fates can be! Thanks, dear bird!
*is listening to Herman Van Veen singing "Klacht" now!*
Well, I can NOT complain about that new fanfic here!
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Nice connection to canon characters in this entry Very natural tone to the diarist's voice here--being fascinated with well known Jedi and firefighters & thanks for PM
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It's too bad the Jedi didn't know of Alwin's different aging/maturing status.
I would hope they would have given him more time if they had.
Great update
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Nice update!!
I really like the voice of the writer!
I loved the last line, it was really cute!
Thanks for the PM and I'm sorry it took me so long to review!
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AzureAngel2 posted: It is interesting to see another slave-boy going his way. How different fates can be! Thanks, dear bird!
*is listening to Herman Van Veen singing "Klacht" now!*
Well, I can NOT complain about that new fanfic here!
I know those songs too and I like them.
Jade_eyes posted:
Nice connection to canon characters in this entry Very natural tone to the diarist's voice here--being fascinated with well known Jedi and firefighters & thanks for PM
He will hear about many canon characters.
Kelia posted: It's too bad the Jedi didn't know of Alwin's different aging/maturing status.
I would hope they would have given him more time if they had.
Great update
No they didn't know and only on Moniron they discovered who Alwin was.
Mavjade posted: Nice update!!
I really like the voice of the writer!
I loved the last line, it was really cute!
Thanks for reading and here is the next chapter.
Entry 3
Alwin told the firefighters of storms and the dangers they give to firefighters.
Trees can snap like twigs and fires can become unmanagable and if you have a big fire the fire itself can create a firestorm.
Alwin demonstrated how to use a chainsaw and my father came to get me for diner.
Mom said when she saw us that we both were dirty.
Dad gave her an impish smile as always and yes, he is always dirty. He wipes his greasy hands on his healer’s robes and I have heard from Master Aaqu that he had done that since he became a therapist at the Jeditemple.
I was dirty because I had watched the firefighters and mum sent us both to the fresher.
Scrubbed clean we could take a seat at the kitchentable and mom had made berry-pie as a dessert.
I helped her with the dishes and after that I went to the livingroom and Dad inserted one of those holo’s from the Owl in the player.
That was again funny to watch and I remember when I was younger and telling master Aaqu that I had found the missing tool of Mr. Beaver. The wrench was from Luciano and he got it back after Master Aaqu told me the entire story.
And as the holo was coming to its end I heard again “beaks closed and eyes shut.”
Mom said bedtime Marhin and so it is bye diary.
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Cute fun update. Berry pie-- berry anything  Yum!!
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Trees can snap like twigs and fires can become unmanagable and if you have a big fire the fire itself can create a firestorm
And now they know the real dangers.
Very sweet update
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Jade_Eyes Cute fun update. Berry pie-- berry anything Yum!!
KELIA posted:
Trees can snap like twigs and fires can become unmanagable and if you have a big fire the fire itself can create a firestorm
And now they know the real dangers.
Very sweet update
Thanks all for reading and yes he will learn more and next update is also great fun.
Entry 4
Today was fun because we had a swimminglesson in the large pond and it was the last lesson of the day.
A swimminglesson for an 11 year old?
Yes it was an advanced lesson for the young healers and the teacher showed us how to treat a victim that was drowning.
That was the serious part and I learned a lot.
One of my schoolmates Sidnik who is a very good swimmer began to tickle the teacher and that got him and the teacher starting a waterfight.
And of course the rest of the children and I joined them.
Dad joined us and with him in the swimming pond things got quite hilarious. His swimmingtrunks started to....
Oops, delete that.
Anyway dad heard my laughter and told a story of his life as a Jedi in the temple and a meeting with Obi-Wan and Anakin in the swimming-pool.
Never knew that Jedi had pink or garish decorated trunks but dad was very serious about that.
I would have liked to see those Jedi playing with that purple crocodragon.
Next dad told me a story of Siri, a lifelong friend of Obi-Wan and the prank Anakin, Garen and Obi-Wan played on her.
A yellow polkadot bikini: geez that is cool. And when dad began to hum our teacher recognised the song and soon my class was singing along with him.
She was afraid to come out of the locker
She was as nervous as she could be
She was afraid to come out of the locker
She was afraid that somebody would see
Two three four tell the people what she wore
It was an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
That she wore for the first time today
An Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
So in the locker, she wanted to stay
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Mega LOL!! Hugs!!
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an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
How wonderful to see some fun being had during the classes.
Great update
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Could be worse! Could have been a Bikini that Jabba has for one of his dancing girls...
*grins a big deal!*
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