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A chick on every planet, 2008 diary challenge updated 8-10 a birthday
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earlybird-obi-wan
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Date Posted:
1/4 4:51am
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A chick on every planet, 2008 diary challenge updated 8-10 a birthday
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A chick on every planet
Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
Timeframe: JA - ROTS
Characters: my OC Tige Moranis.
Genre: diary
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Summary: Tige Moranis makes notes in his diary
Disclaimer: Lucas = Star Wars
Entry 1
Hey good to see you.
Who am I?
Oh, let me introduce myself
I am Tige Moranis and have the most beautiful pale grey eyes you have seen in this galaxy. And my hair shines, white like the sun of Corellia.
I am on an errand for my boss.
I have come back from a small arms factory and access the holocam through my PDA.
Explosives: check
Timer: check
Counting down: 3 , 2 , 1
Blackness
I have another job for Iwana Needa done.
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Alexis_Wingstar
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1/4 9:06am
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RE: A chick on every planet, for the 2008 diary challenge
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I like the name of his boss. Tige sounds rather full of himself.  Great start, I'd like to see where you go with this. 
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KELIA
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Date Posted:
1/4 1:13pm
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Great beginning
Love Tige's description of himself. Modest, isn't he? 
Looking forward to more
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KrystalBlaze
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1/4 5:51pm
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This made me chuckle! Can't wait to see where you go with this.
-Krystal
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earlybird-obi-wan
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1/9 8:29am
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RE: A chick on every planet, 2008 diary challenge updated jan 9 a girl is nice
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Alexis_Wingstar posted:
I like the name of his boss. Tige sounds rather full of himself. Great start, I'd like to see where you go with this.
Kelia posted: Great beginning
Love Tige's description of himself. Modest, isn't he?
Looking forward to more
KrystalBlaze posted: This made me chuckle! Can't wait to see where you go with this.
-Krystal
Thanks for reading and yes he is a real scoundrel in many guises
Entry 2
That was a lovely girl in my room last night.
I had diner with her and she was looking gorgeous. A red dress with those lace gloves up to her elbows. And those matching high heeled boots.
Of cource I invited her for the night and she happyly agreed. An offer of 100 credits would entice any back water planet girl in a bar.
I am leaving this morning and she asked if I would return.
Seeing the morning news on the holotube and the newscatcher telling of the Chenni small arms factory fire I don’t think I am coming back to this planet but not wanting to have a crying chick in my hotelroom, I told her I would be back.
I packed my belongings (not very much because I use my credits to buy the local stuff if I am on an errand) and went to the hotel-cashier to check out.
Bye mister Sinola and see you again was his reply.
I boarded a public transport headed for the spaceport.
At the spaceport I contacted my boss and she told me to go to Greamaga.
tbc-
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AzureAngel2
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1/9 1:35pm
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A promesing beginning indeed...
*listens to Herman Van Veen singing "Adieu café"!*
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Nice of him to spare the "chick's" feelings.
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KELIA
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Date Posted:
1/10 4:31am
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not wanting to have a crying chick in my hotelroom, I told her I would be back
Honesty is always the best policy.
But then again, one should never say never so perhaps he will be back.
Great update
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earlybird-obi-wan
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Date Posted:
1/18 6:55am
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RE: A chick on every planet, 2008 diary challenge updated jan 18 Storm and identities
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AzureAngel2 posted: A promesing beginning indeed...
*listens to Herman Van Veen singing "Adieu café"!*
A perfect song for this diary
Alexis_Wingstar posted: Nice of him to spare the "chick's" feelings.
He will have many more chicks
KELIA posted:
not wanting to have a crying chick in my hotelroom, I told her I would be back
Honesty is always the best policy.
But then again, one should never say never so perhaps he will be back.
Great update
He is changing identities on almost every planet but that's his job.
Thanks all readers and here is the next update with the Storm challenge in it.
Entry 3
Far out in the uncharted backwaters of the unfashionable end of the Western Spiral arm of the Galaxy lies a small unregarded yellow sun. One inhabited planet orbits it and the dustball is known as Greamaga.
I am heading towards it and the spaceport of Grema is my destiny.
Strap in for landing the signal was blaring a short time ago and I have done just that.
What a sorry excuse for a planet.
I checked in giving them my name as Tipp Taredon and that port-authority man said “watch out for your health”
With that he must be refering to my belching belly (courtesy of my shopping for a disguise and finding one for the Taredon persona) That belly was very convenient for transporting some stuff I am needing on my next assignment. Taredon will dissappear in the next hour.
I exited the spaceport and was almost bowled over by the gusting wind. A real storm had broken loose and the locals muttered just a bit. Happens every day here and is good for the dust.
Dust, they would need a hurricane to get rid of it. I entered a public fresher and changed my clothes. Taredon’s ID was destroyed and the belly became a handy pouch and I went to a motel and checked in as Mats Morgan.
Tomorrow I have a job.
tbc-
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Gee, I wish I had a removable belly! 
Nice update.
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KELIA
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Wow that portable belly sounds like it comes in handy!
Tomorrow I have a job
Ooohhh, I sense the adventure is about to begin
Great update
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Date Posted:
1/26 9:03pm
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RE: A chick on every planet, 2008 diary challenge updated jan 27 a transport and a girl
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Alexis_Wingstar: Gee, I wish I had a removable belly!
Nice update.
KELIA posted:
Wow that portable belly sounds like it comes in handy!
Tomorrow I have a job
Ooohhh, I sense the adventure is about to begin
Great update
Thanks for reading  He needed that for transporting nasty things.
Entry 4
Another storm is transporting the dust in the streets as I am walking towards a dealer in spacetransports.
Iwana Needa has given me permission to get one of those unmarked transports that are quite handy for my job and what better place to get them than this back water dustball. No questions asked and if you’re showing credits they do anything for you.
Ah that’s nice I said when the dealer showed me one of those Sienar-build yachts. It was reasonably priced and had a large hold for a speeder or other stuff. It was droid operated and easy to fly.(not that I have any trouble flying spacecraft or anything with engines. My former boss did give me an education and before him my dad but that’s a long time ago. I am 37 and left my home when I was 18)
And it had a nice navcomp and was very fast. The dealer said that it could travel the distance from Anaxes to Coruscant in just under five hours.
I got the keys to the transport and went back to the motel.
In the bar I met a nice blonde haired girl and invited her to diner.
With her with that green lace dress and me in my white tuxedo and black trousers we were quite stunning on that dancefloor.
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Great update. I wonder what he'll be up to next.
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With her with that green lace dress and me in my white tuxedo and black trousers we were quite stunning on that dancefloor
Nice to see him having some fun before starting work.
Great update
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I wonder where he ends up next!
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RE: A chick on every planet, 2008 diary challenge updated feb 6 job complete and a new one
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Alexis_Wingstar posted:
Great update. I wonder what he'll be up to next.
Kelia Nice to see him having some fun before starting work.
Great update
AzureAngel2 I wonder where he ends up next!
You will see and he is up to nothing good.
All thanks for reading
Entry 5
She stayed with me during the night and after a promise to come to the same bar this evening I left to get my stuff.
Grema small starfighters factory was my destiny and I introduced myself as Trig Manning, merchant for the wealthy Dronga who needed a couple of fighters. I was shown the factory and thought ‘easy job.’
The chick was there that evening and I pretended to have a headace when she wanted to join me in my motelroom. Wishing me a speedy recovery she left and one hour later I dressed in a black jumpsuit, got the ‘belly’bag and sneaked into the deserted factory.
Planting my explosives and devices I patched the timer into the security system. It wouldn’t be detected and the place would go ‘boom’ after I entered hyperspace tomorrow in the afternoon.
When I returned to my room I found a message waiting for me. It was a ‘love-letter’ from Iwana Needa giving me my next assignment.
Geez that’s big.
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