Author Topic: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 19 *11/12
FitJedi 
Registered: Jan '06
24173_Padme
Date Posted: 7/30 9:07pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 08/01*
Oh things are surely looking grim right now, especially with Anakin being arrested and drugged, and the story of his past coming to life yet again. I do hope that Padme can talk some sense into the others before they all turn against him.

 

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powerfulforce 
Registered: Mar '05
22677_Anakin's Lightsaber
Date Posted: 7/30 9:27pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 08/01*
Love the update, but now I impatiently wait for the next one. Poor Anakin, now he is facing condemnation from those he hurt in life and is now trying to help.

 

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ratna 
Registered: Mar '07
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Date Posted: 7/30 11:34pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/PadmÃÂ&# 194;©-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 08/01*
Nobody said it was easy
No one ever said
it would be this hard
... Take me back to the start

 

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JediMasterRev 
Registered: Dec '04
13589_Anakin and Padme
Date Posted: 7/31 5:58am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 08/01*
Another wonderful update, HT. Was certainly worth the wait.

Seems like everything is about to come to pieces and quickly. Loved the twist of the Falleen coming to seize Anakin. I'm sure there are a number of different species that will be knocking down his door soon. And of course, Palpy is hiding away somewhere having a good, but sinister laugh. I did enjoy reading Anakin's introspection about not knowing where his enemy will attack from.

Also enjoyed the 'romantic tension you continue to build between our favorite couple. Makes me wonder what it will take for them to finally 'get over things.' Still, you've handled that marvelously especially since I want to slap them both upside their block heads.

Looks like the fun is just starting.

Excellent work, as always. Looking forward to the next installment soon!

 

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LadyZ 
Registered: Jun '00
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Date Posted: 7/31 7:01am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 08/01*
skull Totally chilling chapter! skull

I loved the way you wrote the emotions of the characters- absolutly perfect. And the change of POVs- awesome work!!
worried worried sick

I'm so addicted to this story now! grin drooling

 

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DarthVaderette 
Registered: May '04
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Date Posted: 7/31 8:37am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 08/01*
Howdy, I just want you to know I appreciate the PMs you send me and do open them and read the updates every time. I know I'm more of a lurker as I don't reply to updates too often, I usually wait til the story is over, but I do like this story and do enjoy reading it and look forward to each PM I get.

Please keep me on your PM list.

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nabooqueen2008 
Registered: Jan '08
Date Posted: 7/31 8:00pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
Ahh...poor Anakin! He is paying for the sins he committed as Vader. Well, it is probably all Sidious' plan. Can't wait for the next post. Hope it comes soon!

~nabooqueen~

 

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_ThatJediScum_ 
Registered: Jul '05
44395_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 8/1 12:10am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
Okay, I'm confused. How can Anakin be held on crimes he committed while living after having died?

I know technically he's being held for his own safety but really Anakin's being held because he was Vader. This chapter is a nail biter for sure. I'd be crying buckets if I wasn't so confused.

Great work as always.

bran

 

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KELIA 
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Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 8/1 4:20am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
WOW - poor Ani!

He could face anything, but reliving the evil that had been his life—that he’d done

Unfortunately, Ani, the past has a nasty way of catching up to each one of us.

It'll be interesting to see what Anakin's kidnappers have planned next...

worried worried worried worried

Great update

applause applause applause applause

 

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Anakins_Kiss 
Registered: Jan '06
Date Posted: 8/1 6:55am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
I hope my advice helped you. And sorry again about that error message.

I wonder if Sidious will reveal himself to Anakin now. thinking Did Sal have an encounter with Vader when he was alive? I may have missed that. Poor Ani. worried

Great update. I can't wait for more. dancing

 

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naadi 
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 8/2 3:09am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
Wow a fantastic chapter,poor anakin,can't wait for more applause

 

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Jedi_Master_Cazz 
Registered: Sep '05
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Date Posted: 8/2 10:30pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
Awesome chapter once again! Looks like Anakin's in for some rough times. Can't wait to see what sort of moves Padmé is gonna try!

 

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Sen_Padme_Amidala 
Registered: Apr '07
24200_Anakin and Padme
Date Posted: 8/6 7:46pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
Hello Helen_Taft!

I actually started reading this story over on fanfiction.net, but then I found it here and it had more chapters to it so I got excited. Also I can comment over here because for some reason it is difficult for me to on ff.n.

Anyway, I really love this story. love It intrigued me because it is very different from any afterlife fic I have ever read. It is also very realistic. I like that you have managed to have Anakin still be Anakin, but have the good things he learned as Vader (i.e. patience) help him in this life without him using the dark side. You write Palpatine very well and even manage to make him even more dangerous. worried applause Padme's characterixation is also very realistic and I'm glad you don't have her sitting on the sidelines; you have her doing what she does best. grin When I read that Lorne from Angel was going to be in this I got so excited because I love him and I'm a huge Angel fan! I love all the other characters you have created, especially CT, and I absolutly can't wait to find out what happens next!

PS - Don't worry about the length of your posts, I love reading them, grin and could you add me to the PM list please?

 

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MoAngel 
Registered: Jul '05
23760_Anakin
Date Posted: 8/6 10:41pm Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31*
Oh WOW! I've just finished reading the whole of the story thus far. What a predicament Anakin's in now. He should have told those closest to him, at least they might have had a head start to deal with the reality that Anakin was once the evil Darth Vader. I don't know what's going to happen to him, let alone his and Padme's re-budding relationship, but if you could add me to your ever expanding PM list, I could be one of the first to find out. And if you haven't already gotten it...I LOVE this fic and you are an amazing storyteller! Please update asap...

 

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Helen_Taft 
Registered: Mar '08
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Date Posted: 8/7 9:27am Subject: RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 13 07/31* - Date Edited: 8/7 9:30am (1 edits total) Edited By: Helen_Taft
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A new update is a little ways off I’m afraid. This is going up now rather than leave it too long. Thanks to everyone for being so supportive and encouraging. It’s such a relief to know that people are still enjoying the story. Sincerely, thank you! rose

HandmaidenVeme posted:
He just hadn’t figured out the ‘how’ and ‘when’
Looks like that's already been figured out for him...poor Anakin, things are never easy for him. Your updates are always amazing!

Thanks! I’m so happy to read that you’re enjoying the updates grin . It makes all the toiling between updates worthwhile. As for Anakin, things are only getting to get harder I’m afraid.

Lisbev posted:
Lather slid down green skin from spiked, blonde hair while he gyrated unabashedly to his own belted-out rendition of I Will Survive. LOL! BUT ... OMG! ... Poor Anakin.
NOOOOOOOOO !!!!
SOOOOO SUPER DUPER, but I'm gonna go CRY now!!!

Thanks so much, Lisbev, you know I always appreciate your comments. hugs

FitJedi posted:
Oh things are surely looking grim right now, especially with Anakin being arrested and drugged, and the story of his past coming to life yet again. I do hope that Padme can talk some sense into the others before they all turn against him.

It is grim, and about to get grimmer *evil chuckle*. Padmé has the struggle of explanation in the next post—which is making it dialogue heavy *groan*

powerfulforce posted:
Love the update, but now I impatiently wait for the next one. Poor Anakin, now he is facing condemnation from those he hurt in life and is now trying to help.

Thank you. I’m so so glad that the story is still gripping you. More as soon as I can get it finished, which hopefully won’t be long.

ratna posted:
Nobody said it was easy
No one ever said
it would be this hard
... Take me back to the start

LOL Yikes! I would hate to have to start this fic again. *shudders at the thought*

JediMasterRev posted:
Another wonderful update, HT. Was certainly worth the wait.
Seems like everything is about to come to pieces and quickly. Loved the twist of the Falleen coming to seize Anakin. I'm sure there are a number of different species that will be knocking down his door soon. And of course, Palpy is hiding away somewhere having a good, but sinister laugh. I did enjoy reading Anakin's introspection about not knowing where his enemy will attack from.

Palpy’s laughter hasn’t even begun yet, I’m afraid. He’s going to be riding a crest of his own all too soon. devil
JediMasterRev posted:
Also enjoyed the 'romantic tension you continue to build between our favorite couple. Makes me wonder what it will take for them to finally 'get over things.' Still, you've handled that marvelously especially since I want to slap them both upside their block heads.
Looks like the fun is just starting.
Excellent work, as always. Looking forward to the next installment soon!

Don’t worry, Rev, I have a very specific point that will make or break their budding relationship. I promise I’m not just playing it by ear. More fun on the way soon!

LadyZ posted:
Totally chilling chapter! I loved the way you wrote the emotions of the characters- absolutly perfect. And the change of POVs- awesome work!!
I'm so addicted to this story now!

Thank you, LadyZ, I’m so glad to hear that the story has you hooked, as well as the comments on characterisation and POV. hugs It’s wonderful to read that I’m getting the most import aspects right of any story (i.e characterisation etc).

DarthVaderette posted:
Howdy, I just want you to know I appreciate the PMs you send me and do open them and read the updates every time. I know I'm more of a lurker as I don't reply to updates too often, I usually wait til the story is over, but I do like this story and do enjoy reading it and look forward to each PM I get.
Please keep me on your PM list. Thanks

Will do, DarthVaderette. It’s good to know you’re still enjoying the story. grin

nabooqueen2008 posted:
Ahh...poor Anakin! He is paying for the sins he committed as Vader. Well, it is probably all Sidious' plan. Can't wait for the next post. Hope it comes soon! ~nabooqueen~

Well, Vader did terrorise a galaxy and those chickens are definitely coming home to roust grin . Sidious’ plans are a little more complex, but we’ll get to that later. *wink*

_ThatJediScum_ posted:
Okay, I'm confused. How can Anakin be held on crimes he committed while living after having died?
I know technically he's being held for his own safety but really Anakin's being held because he was Vader. This chapter is a nail biter for sure. I'd be crying buckets if I wasn't so confused.
Great work as always.
bran

Hi there. I’m so sorry you got confused. My bad blush . Also blame it on having a shorter than usual chapter *excuses excuses*. All explanations are in the next chapter. Also, I’d ask you to bear in mind that this is a dictatorship and the only person reigning in Lyonides was Sidious, who has now given him the okay to act like the fascist he really is—unfortunately (as we know) dictators often imprison people for no other reason that they feel threatened by them. I hope that helps.

KELIA posted:
WOW - poor Ani!
He could face anything, but reliving the evil that had been his life—that he’d done. Unfortunately, Ani, the past has a nasty way of catching up to each one of us. It'll be interesting to see what Anakin's kidnappers have planned next... Great update

Doesn’t it just! Poor Anakin is finding that out for himself in a big way. Thanks for the comments and the advice—both much appreciated!

Anakins_kiss posted:
I hope my advice helped you. And sorry again about that error message.
I wonder if Sidious will reveal himself to Anakin now. Did Sal have an encounter with Vader when he was alive? I may have missed that. Poor Ani.
Great update. I can't wait for more.

Thanks very much for the advice, and the comments! Poor Ani indeed and the next update will answer your questions *darts off to check*. grin

naadi posted:
Wow a fantastic chapter,poor anakin,can't wait for more

Thanks, naadi! I’m so pleased that you enjoyed it so much. hugs

Jedi_Master_Cazz posted:
Awesome chapter once again! Looks like Anakin's in for some rough times. Can't wait to see what sort of moves Padmé is gonna try!

Thank you so much for the encouraging comments. Padmé will certainly be busy for a while trying to fix this mess and I don’t envy her at all grin .

Sen_Padme_Amidala posted:
Hello Helen_Taft!
I actually started reading this story over on fanfiction.net, but then I found it here and it had more chapters to it so I got excited. Also I can comment over here because for some reason it is difficult for me to on ff.n.

Anyway, I really love this story. It intrigued me because it is very different from any afterlife fic I have ever read. It is also very realistic. I like that you have managed to have Anakin still be Anakin, but have the good things he learned as Vader (i.e. patience) help him in this life without him using the dark side. You write Palpatine very well and even manage to make him even more dangerous. Padme's characterixation is also very realistic and I'm glad you don't have her sitting on the sidelines; you have her doing what she does best. When I read that Lorne from Angel was going to be in this I got so excited because I love him and I'm a huge Angel fan! I love all the other characters you have created, especially CT, and I absolutly can't wait to find out what happens next!

PS - Don't worry about the length of your posts, I love reading them, and could you add me to the PM list please?

Hi back and welcome to the thread. grin I’m so glad you found it here too and could catch up. Thank you so much for the detailed review. You made my day hugs . I’m chuffed to read that this is different from other afterlife fics you’ve read—being new to the fandom it can be all too easy to think up an idea that’s been done over and over. I’m also totally delighted that you think I’ve caught the characters in a realistic way. Trust me, it means a lot to hear it. Like many, I think that Padmé wasn’t given a meaty enough role in ROTS and so I’ve had fun giving her lots of action in this, I’m so pleased that has rung true with you too.

Lorne! I love Lorne, and I was a huge fan of Angel myself. In fact, it was my very first fandom and arena for writing fic. I just couldn’t resist bringing Lorne over: he seemed so right for adding a bit of colour and snark. *g*

Thanks once again for the truly wonderful review! As well as the assurance that I’m not giving you headaches with staring at a screen too long, lol. I will happily add you to the PM list. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

MoAngel posted:
Oh WOW! I've just finished reading the whole of the story thus far. What a predicament Anakin's in now. He should have told those closest to him, at least they might have had a head start to deal with the reality that Anakin was once the evil Darth Vader. I don't know what's going to happen to him, let alone his and Padme's re-budding relationship, but if you could add me to your ever expanding PM list, I could be one of the first to find out. And if you haven't already gotten it...I LOVE this fic and you are an amazing storyteller! Please update asap...

Hi MoAngel. I totally agree that he could have saved himself some angst now if he’d ‘fessed up to his friends, but I think it’s understandable that he wouldn’t want to endanger those same friendships with the information. I suppose I’d do the same blush . Thank you so much for the wonderful, encouraging comments. I’m delighted you enjoyed the story enough to read from beginning to where it is now. hugs I’m adding you to the PM list as we speak.

Also, just as an aside. I knew a MoAngel on a C/A forum called Stranger Things. Would that be you? If so, you might have known me as Helen (I’ve always had a complete mental blank when it came to usernames *g*)

Either way, thanks again!

 

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