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Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chapter 19 *11/12
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JediMasterRev
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Dec '04
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9/2 8:42am
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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OMG!!!!! That was prolly the most wickedly evil clife ever 
Wow, what an incredibly riveting update. I was more than worth the wait. Your descriptions of Anakin as he listened to every charge and then was forced to relive all the horrors was simply amazing. I could literally feel the life oozing out of him.
Then, you dropped some amazing action scenes that were most excellently done. My heart was literally racing as Padme and her group completed their mission then the tension filled moments of her trying to reach Anakin. Even though I knew that something would stop them from reaching one another, I will still hoping that they would. I especially loved the chase scene, which led to our nasty cliffe  . It was really well thought out and done. 
I really liked the Obi-Wan cameo. Thought that was a wonderful touch as the situation was about to go from bad to worse. Nice to see the Negotiator in action, one more time.
I am completely blown away by this update, HT. I think this is your best one and you've given us some wonderful ones previously. Great, great work! Can't wait for more soon.
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LadyZ
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Date Posted:
9/2 10:24am
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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Awesome update!
Again- you wrote the emotions so well- emotions of the characters and the scenes!
Now I just realised that I HATE to read the word "almost" in connection with a rescue party of my favorite hero. 
Poor Anakin- he hates his own nightmares because they usually come true. The sad truth is he should hate them because usually the real outcome is much worse than it was predicted by the nightmare.
Now let's see the third world  I don't think it is a pleasant place at all!
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ratna
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9/2 10:32am
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padme-AU Angst/Action/Romance)
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Panic started to strangle him when the Narzgh went into a steep, screaming dive, aiming for the deep, dark water accumulated there. He didn't need to be told that the Narzgh intended to take Padme into the third world through it. He didn't think twice. Anakin dived after it. When the water closed over the Narzgh, Padme and the bike--Anakin's followed at full speed.
The vow of Ksitigharba:
"I swear that I shall not attain Buddhahood until all the Hells are emptied".
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...You with the sad eyes
don't be discouraged
oh I realize
it's hard to take courage
in a world full of people
you can lose sight of it all
and the darkness inside you
can make you feel so small
But I see your true colors
shining through
I see your true colors
and that's why I love you
so don't be afraid to let them show
your true colors
true colors are beautiful
like a rainbow ...
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KELIA
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9/2 3:17pm
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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the water closed over the Narzgh, Padmé and the bike--Anakin’s followed at full speed.
Now that was just plain evil
I loved Obi's brief appearance, though.
Great update
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FitJedi
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9/2 6:56pm
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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Wow, you have me on pins and needles here with the fight scene and chase. Do hurry and update soon so we know what happens to Padme and Anakin. Great job!
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Lisbev
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9/2 9:12pm
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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9/3 8:56am (2 edits total)
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Just like good ole Ben to help out when the going gets tough. 
I'm glad this situation has helped Padmé realize Anakin is wholeheartedly remorseful and truly wants to atone for the atrocities he's committed. I hope she gets the chance to tell him how much she still loves him. 
I loved how the thought of saving Padmé gave Anakin that crazy super strength.
But YEESH, talk about nail biting, super duper suspenseful … just evil.
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HandmaidenVeme
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9/2 9:18pm
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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Yay, Obi-wan made an appearance!!!
Nice update! Had me on the edge of my seat!
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Lord_Redav
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9/2 9:30pm
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padm¨¦-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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wow, that was something. I hope they have a way of getting out of the third world. And what does Obi-wan plan to do in the second world. Lyonides should have done his homework, then he'd know that Palpy never keeps his promises. Considering how much business he does with the geonosians, I'm surprised he haven't met with Poggle the Lessr yet.
-'Darth Sididous promised we would be left in peace'
-'No, the transmission was garbled, he said you would be left in pieces....'
I'm thinking Anakin's confessions didn't exactly go through the premier's thick skull, or he's just too busy gloating. What are the Falleen's gonna do now? They must be equally afraid of the Narzghs, and considering all the dents and depressions that comes with a huge ship. The chances of forming a small puddle of water on the Falleen ship isn't all that low, is it? Imagine the horror of it all. I can almost picture the fear and disbelief on the Rothians faces.
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_ThatJediScum_
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9/2 9:44pm
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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It didn’t come to that. It would have been better if it had. The two bikes shot over the boundary of the Core and into the Outer Rim. Anakin recognized where they were—flying over the recycling plant where he’d lost the old man to the Narzgh. Panic started to strangle him when the Narzgh went into a steep, screaming dive, aiming for the deep, dark water accumulated there. He didn’t need to be told that the Narzgh intended to take Padmé into the third world through it. He didn’t think twice. Anakin dived after it. When the water closed over the Narzgh, Padmé and the bike--Anakin’s followed at full speed.
TBC
EVILNESS!!!!!!
On a lighter note, WOOHOO!!! Obi-wan!!! I was in tears during Anakin's "hearing", but seeing Obi-wan gives me hope that this might end happily for both Anakin and Padmé.
bran
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MoAngel
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9/2 11:31pm
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WOW. And uh-oh!
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SailorPikaAngel
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9/3 12:39am
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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Evil cliffy!! But what an exciting chapter!! I literally held my breath when Padme got hit and captured! And the appearance by ObiWan... WHAT is going on there!! But I'm really worried that things are about to get a LOT worse before it gets better...I got so teary when Padme was suffering during Anakin's trial.. What else will they have to endure?! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Also can you please add me to your PM list?
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Jedi_Master_Cazz
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9/3 5:55am
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RE: Purgatory (Anakin/Padmé-AU Angst/Action/Romance) Chap 15 - 09/02*
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 Omg! Omg! Omg! Omg! Cliffie!
Cannot WAIT for more to see what implications Anakin's recklessness have caused him this time!
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randomangel22
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9/3 4:08pm
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OMG! That was one evil cliffie!
I can't believe that the Narzgh got Padme and now Anakin's going to have to follow it to the third world. 
I'm going to guess that the third world isn't going to be very pleasant.
You did an amazing job of portraying Anakin being all weak by admitting all the atrocities he committed but then all of a sudden getting fired up when Padme was being kidnapped by the Narzgh.
Great post and thanks for the PM!
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nick012000
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9/5 9:33am
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Out of curiosity, Saber=[url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saber_(Fate/Stay_Night)]Saber[/url]? You've already got one crossover character (Lorne from Angel), so it's not like she wouldn't fit. Besides, she certainly seems like the sort of person who'd help Padme out.
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fallenangel_613
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9/5 1:31pm
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That was heartbreaking to see Anakin like that. Its never easy to see someone's spirt broken. And Padme... 
Very good chapter! Thank you for the PM.
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