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Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia) Nominated for Best Child!
Alexis_Wingstar
Registered:
Sep '06
Date Posted:
3/31/08 4:21am
Subject:
Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia) Nominated for Best Child!
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Date Edited:
6/12/08 5:59am
(2 edits total)
Edited By:
Alexis_Wingstar
Title:
Daddy in Training
Author:
Alexis_Wingstar
Timeline:
End of ROTS
Characters:
Senator Bail Organa, baby Leia
IMPORTANT NOTE:
This was beta'd by
The Musical Jedi
. Thank you
Another note:
This is in response to the
Monday Mush Mania
challenge to write a non-romantic mush story.
Bail placed the baby girl gently into her bassinet and the infant promptly began crying once more. “Aw, Leia honey, what do you want?” the senator asked wearily. He had fed her, changed her, and did everything he knew to do for her. Yet every time he thought he had her placated, she started crying once more. He picked her up again and cradled her in his arms. As he walked around with her, she stopped crying. “Do you miss your mommy? Is that it? I’m sorry she can’t be here for you sweetheart, but Breha will be a good mother, I promise.”
He smiled at her as she looked up at him with trusting eyes. “You look so much like your mother.” He was amazed as she smiled back up at him as though she could understand what he was saying. He furled his eyebrows as he felt her body tense and her face turn red. “Hey, are you all right?”
As though in answer, she relaxed and smiled once more. He would have sworn her smile became wider as he realized she had dirtied her diaper. He could not help but chuckle even as he moaned. “You also have her charming personality and sense of humor. Uh-huh, yes you do.” He broke down in baby babble as he tickled her chin while walking back to the changing table. He continued to talk to her as he changed her yet again. “Only for you would I, a distinguished senator mind you, use the words diapy and pookypoo… in the same sentence no less.”
After finishing the messy job and washing his hands, he once more tried putting her in her bassinet. She started crying before he had even gotten her halfway down. “Oh, come on, sweetheart. It’s bedtime.”
Sighing he kept holding her and went to sit in a chair. “You have to sleep sometime.” Before long, the slumbering senator held his adopted daughter in his lap as she peacefully dozed.
By the time they reached Alderaan, Leia had the distinguished senator fully trained.
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Jade_eyes
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Aug '04
Date Posted:
3/31/08 4:55am
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Alex!!! Sweetness!! AWWNESS!!
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VaderLVR64
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Feb '04
Date Posted:
3/31/08 6:16am
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
By the time they reached Alderaan, Leia had the distinguished senator fully trained.
Oh how true that is with ALL parents and babies!
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Golden_Jedi
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Jun '05
Date Posted:
3/31/08 6:46am
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
By the time they reached Alderaan, Leia had the distinguished senator fully trained.
Yep, that's Leia alright, from day 1.
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MarasFire
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Jun '07
Date Posted:
3/31/08 7:47am
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
This was absolutely adorable, Alexis!
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ShrunkenJedi
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Apr '03
Date Posted:
3/31/08 8:20am
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Like Mama Vader and GoldenJedi, I loved that it was Leia who had Bail trained! What a sweet moment
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earlybird-obi-wan
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Aug '06
Date Posted:
3/31/08 12:19pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Loved this one, how Leia could train Bail from day 1.
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The Musical Jedi
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Dec '99
Date Posted:
3/31/08 12:54pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Just as cute the second time around!
Poor Bail - didn't know what he was getting into.
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DarthIshtar
Title:
Former CR
Registered:
Mar '01
Date Posted:
3/31/08 12:58pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
LOL, very accurate last sentence.
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KELIA
Title:
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Registered:
Jul '05
Date Posted:
3/31/08 1:04pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
That was wonderful!!
I can't help but
at poor Bail's attempts to placate Leia.
By the time they reached Alderaan, Leia had the distinguished senator fully trained
Sounds about right!
Great response to the challenge
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RX_Sith
Title:
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Mar '06
Date Posted:
3/31/08 1:10pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Lovely story. Bail as Leia's father and diaper changer was precious.
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Jade_Pilot
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Dec '05
Date Posted:
3/31/08 1:14pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
I love it!!!
We need more Bail stories for sure!
LOL Moment:
“Only for you would I, a distinguished senator mind you, use the words diapy and pookypoo… in the same sentence no less.”
And I loved that last line!
Well done!
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Jaina_and_Jag
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Date Posted:
3/31/08 2:14pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Awwwww!
I just loved Bail learning how to be a daddy!
Great job!
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Icecruncher_Amidala
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Sep '07
Date Posted:
3/31/08 2:25pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
Real Men Do Diapers. That's a saying on a mug we gave to my uncle when he bacame a father.
Nicely done.
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divapilot
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Nov '05
Date Posted:
3/31/08 3:57pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
How adorable! And how true! They train you to come at their beck and call, and you adore them for it.
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DountCooku
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Jul '06
Date Posted:
3/31/08 4:37pm
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RE: Daddy in Training (MMM March 2008 challenge response; Bail, Leia)
This reminds me of my own experience with my daughters.
Thanks for sharing.
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