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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 4/21 8:55am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 21-4 trouble and a big fight - Date Edited: 5/2 9:36pm (2 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
	Valairy_Scot If only Obi-Wan could have found an off switch for Anakin's gullibility. Tads said “yep and now we have to wait for an unsuspecting nit wit to put the blame on. I don’t mind if it’s one of those Djeds.” Oh, oh, he means YOU Anakin Skywalker. Yes and that off switch would have gotten both not into the trouble they are getting in the next chapter. And the nit wit. You will see who they will take as their victim. AzureAngel2 Once again a homely and nice atmospaere between master & padawan. A nice beginning to get to some more trouble. Gkilkenny posted: Obi-Wan was rounding the corner to the corridor leading to his apartment when he saw Anakin exiting it in a hurry. He ran to the apartment and after accessing Anakin’s computer he began to mutter. “Anakin you’re not allowed to go there. That sector means trouble, big trouble. You will be grounded when I catch up with you” He flung the bags of groceries down on the kitchen table and exited the door running towards the exit of the Jeditemple and saw his Padawan boarding a transport. Lets hope Obi-Wan does ground Anakin. Another great post. He didn't ground Anakin and that means trouble. All my readers thanks and in the next chapter the trouble is starting for master and padawan. Chapter 9 On Damstreet was a large building. Four blocks surrounded a courtyard great enough to land big transports. 'Policestation and Detention-station 101 Corunda central' was in bright red lettering on all blocks. The building belonged to the Coruscant police department and was the main building in the Corunda sector, being situated almost in the middle of it. The police had other buildings in that sector but the building on Damstreet was the only one to house a detention centre. In one corner of the courtyard were five transports being readied by black clad officers. Police-officers of the riot-squad were checking their gear. Their leader shouted “helm check, weapon-stick check, riot-shield check” and the squad repeated it. Warmstreet and the streets adjacent to it were quite near and there were the most houses of pleasure located. -- In one of the blocks was Captain Okkinsi of the Coruscant police department in the Corunda sector giving a briefing to his officers. “I want results. That slammball tournament of yesterday was nice with no hooligans present and it seemed as if all the slave-traders were somewhere else. Jelba, Bledder, sector 1. Regnik, Zuchin, sector 2. Ooms, Goria, sector 3.” He gave more assignments and ended with “and I have an entire squad as back-up should anything happen.” Captain Okkinsi saw his teams disappearing in the streets and wondered what the day would bring. - - - - - Running down the stairs Obi-Wan was only seconds late to catch the transport taking off with Anakin. The next transport was due in 30 minutes and Obi-Wan waited patiently for it. He was accessing the Force and the bond with Anakin and he knew where to find him. ‘What’s he up to?’ Obi-Wan thought as he boarded the next transport ‘travelling half the planet to get a new part. Melian’s droid is almost finished.’ Again Yoda’s speech “The chosen one Qui-Gon gave to us all, not proven, full of fear and yours to save. And if you do not save him“ popped up. ‘Yoda had ended with that a few months back when I was with him in his quarters. No stew but nice shoo bread and wurr that time on the charcoal fire. Yeah I saved him in that garbage pit and on Zonoma Sekot. And going to that Corunda-sector can be trouble again. He sure is exited about something, I can sense it. Must be that part he is getting. And with him meeting another droid-shop-owner he will be there when my transport arrives. Kambo-droidparts and junkyard was on the screen and from what I saw he seems to be a decent man.’ - - - - Master Aaqu Maerhin was walking towards the garden of a thousand fountains. His shift would start in the late afternoon and he had planned to meet crèche-master Rian Solma. Rian was already seated in the grass near the large old tree and one of the ponds. Rian welcomed him and Aaqu sat down. Both masters were soon talking about the initiates in the crèche and the sun shining down on them created a nice and relaxing mood. - - - - In his shop on Warmstreet was Trahael Kambo humming a cheerful song. He loved to sing and he was a member of one of the choirs that performed in one of the small theatres for the common man. And schools; he loved those children and even taught them in his free time to sing. He was a frequent visitor of the ‘Little house’ and brought smiles on the children’s faces every time he visited them. He was getting the servobrain from one of the shelves when his customer entered the shop. He observed the young boy and saw a nice looking kid obviously of good upbringing and quite capable of caring for himself already. The clothes he wore were old but clean and he had a nice expensive utility-belt around his waist. Anakin said “I am Anakin Skywalker and have contacted you about that servobrain.” Trahael said with a smile on his face “yes and here it is.” Anakin liked the man who had a cheerful look on his face and he sensed an honest man ‘so different from Watto and a real helper of people.’ He took the servobrain and began to point out the specifics. Trahael was impressed and asked “can you tell me what’s wrong with this part” and he took another droid from the shelf behind the counter. Anakin said “easy” and after some tinkering with it and using some tools provided by Trahael he said “now it’s working.” He barely stifled a yawn, he was hungry. Trahael said “you’re a great help mister Skywalker. Can I offer you a lunch in the hotel next to my shop?” Anakin gave the shop-owner a big grin and said “yes, thanks Mister Kambo.” Trahael said “here is that servobrain and you can use this number to transfer the credits” and he gave Anakin a clear plast satchel where the box with the part was safely stored and where a note was added to the box. Anakin took it and both exited the shop after Trahael put the sign ‘closed’ on his front-door. --- Sleets Onelli and Tads Hokia were entering the restaurant of the ‘Temple of Doom.’ They saw the Djeds and their slaves repeating on the stage for the new afternoon show. Some of the younger slaves were shackled with long chains and they were drilled to perform a seducing dance. More customers were seated at the tables and Sleets recognised some of the gamblers he had seen before. They had been at the Sabaac tables and he knew some of them had been losing credits to that mister Kambo. Tads pointed at a table in the centre and both miners took a seat and waited for a waitress droid to come their way. Sleets saw a young blonde haired teenager enter the restaurant followed by the droid-shop owner Trahael Kambo. They were talking exited to each other and he could hear some about new developments in droid-armour and A.I.” The boy took a seat at a table next to them and put a package on the table in front of him. Tads whispered “look that’s the part your brother needs and who has it; a nitwit from this sector. He is even friends with our nemesis. Look mister Kambo is ordering lunch for him.” Sleets asked very softly “do you have a plan?” Tads said “sure, look that Devaronian is looking mean. And look that shabby man is coming towards blonde boy’s table and by the looks of him he is retrieving his slave.” Sleets said “must be one of those Djeds. I have seen a ginger-haired bearded one yesterday. Only he had a girl as a slave.” Tads said “those slaves can serve all of them. At least in the show they were.” --- Anakin was reading the specifications on the box and grinned. ‘This is so wizard. I will help that nice man some more on another day. I have his number and I can contact him. Maybe he has more parts that I can use. Have to ask master for permission.’ Alerted by the Force he looked towards the entrance and saw a well known man enter. ‘Master, he has followed me. Oops I am in trouble. I have to explain that I want the same droid as Melian and he sure will like that kind of droid.’ --- Followed by the Force Obi-Wan was entering the restaurant of the Temple of Doom. He saw his Padawan sitting at a table and at the counter a nice looking man ordering some sandwiches and drinks. ‘Must be that shop-owner and I have seen his face on Anakin’s terminal. A nice guy to take care of my Padawan’s needs and I see Anakin has the part. Time to take him back to the temple after he has eaten.’ He started to walk towards Anakin. --- Trahael Kambo had collected two plates with sandwiches and two glasses of juice and walked to the table where Anakin had taken a seat. He passed the table where Sleets and Tads were sitting. Sleets chose that moment to stretch his leg and the result was immediate. Trahael gave a surprised shout and the two trays went flying with glasses and sandwiches falling every which way. One sandwich landed on the Devaronian who jumped up. Tads used the confusion and dove towards the table where Anakin was sitting and tried to grab the clear plast satchel. Anakin saw one beefy hand reaching towards his droidpart and with lightning quick reflexes he took hold of it. The other hand was aimed at his head but another hand intercepted that, a well known hand. Through his bond Anakin said ‘thanks master.’ Said master replied ‘you’re in a mess Padawan’ and saw in the corner of his vision a burly man ramming into a Devaronian male. Tads released the droidhead and pummelled the ginger haired man with his hands, only to meet with thin air because the man had quick reflexes. ‘Must be that training and he was the one jumping and doing those acrobatics during the show.’ Sleets shoved the coming Devaronian into the downed Trahael. Anakin shouted through his bond ‘no, they are hurting my friend’ and he tried to reach Trahael. Obi-Wan sensed the same and shoved Tads into the Devaronian and succeeded to disentangle the kind and frail looking human. He gently shoved him out of the way with a Force push and smiled when the man crawled under one of the sturdy looking tables. Trahael didn’t want to be in a fight at all and he felt relieved when the unknown ginger haired man somehow got him under a table and out of the fray. ‘Thanks guy’ and he started to head for the exit. The Devaronian – seeing a good barroom brawl to begin and seeing opportunities – attacked the bald headed miner. Sleets helped Tads and used a tray to hit the Devaronian who turned with a grunt and saw a Shistavanen using an identical tray. With a growl he attacked the black haired Shistavanen. A quick grab and Sleets had the clear plast satchel in his hands only to loose it a moment later when a human bumped into him. The satchel slithered on the floor towards Anakin. Others already inebriated by too much drinks joined the fray. They were gamblers who had lost to Trahael and the Djeds who saw one boy in the fight, thinking it was one of theirs who had escaped. Djed Moody, the leader of the Djeds on the stage saw a young boy seemingly being attacked and thought that it was one of the slaves from the hotel. He shouted “come, let’s save him.” The troupe joined the fray. A gambler grabbed Anakin by his utility belt and tried to drag him away and Djed Moody got the other end of the belt. The belt-buckle opened when Anakin used the Force to jump upwards and the belt slithered over the floor under a far away table. Obi-Wan sent through his bond ‘protect Trahael Kambo and try to follow me.’ He tried to disentangle from the fight and follow and protect the disappearing Trahael who was crawling to the exit and the street using the tables as a cover. Anakin thought ‘first that servobrain’ and was able to grab the strap of the satchel when Sleets lifted him in the air. “That’s mine” “No mine” Obi-Wan heard this and grabbed his Padawan before Sleets Onelli could interfere and signalled him through the bond ‘grab those beams and use them to get to the exit’ and tossed him using the Force tumbling into the air. Anakin grabbed one beam and somersaulted to another beam the satchel safe in his hand. Obi-Wan tried to join him but was hampered by the brace on his right arm. Hanging from his left arm he felt four hands dragging him down. ‘I need another way out of this.’ He used Force push and went flying towards the window trying to protect himself when he broke the glass. Sleets hung on pummelling the Jedi with his hands. “Lousy Djed you have parted me from my droidpart. Now you are going to pay.” “Police, stop immediately” a commanding voice blared enhanced by a megaphone. “Need back-up and transport” another was yelling in a comlink. --- Trahael Kambo ran outside and sprinted the short distance to his shop and palmed it open and dove inside. Still panting heavily he sank down on the floor and heard sirens approaching and the shouted commands of the Coruscant police. ‘I am safe and I hope that nice man will be safe too. I think he is the master of that young Skywalker coming to get his charge back. But he looked no slave-master to me and he has some strange powers pushing me without any injury.’ -- Anakin saw his master crashing through the window and shouted “Master nooh.” He jumped down on the stage right into the arms of a Coruscant police officer. The officer said in a kind voice “come young one you are safe with me” and he pointed at more police-officers entering the stage and restaurant. Anakin saw more children being cared for. Shackles were removed and he saw the smiling faces of the boys and girls. They were all dressed the same in garish red shirts and maroon pants. Some were even younger than him. He felt his Master’s pain and shouted “master hang on” and wanted to run towards the exit to the street but felt the strong but kind hands of the police officer on his arms and he didn’t want to hurt him. And he was clutching the satchel in his arms and didn’t want to part with that at all. The officer asked “who is your master?” Anakin whimpered “he is outside and he is hurt. Come I want to go to him.” Another officer saw his mate giving a signal that the fight inside and outside was under control. A large contingent of police riot control troops had entered the streets and building. The officer said “others will take care of him. I am sure he will be alright and if he is hurt we have a kind doctor who takes care of him.” Anakin looked down to his waist and asked “where is my utility belt?” The officer said “we will find it, don’t worry. Come, I will take you to a safe place.” Anakin asked “will my master be there too?” The officer not wanting to argue any more said “yes. Come the other children are already aboard the transport” and he started to walk towards the back-door of the stage. Anakin followed him. --- Jedi and miner flew through the window breaking the transparisteel glass. Obi-Wan was trying to protect the curly blonde man with his own body and received cuts and bruises when he landed on the street first. Obi-Wan was bleeding from a large cut on his scalp and one on his chin. He used the Force to suppress the pain. He tried to grab his lightsaber to show it because every being would recognise it and the Jedi holding it and end the fight but it was knocked from his left hand when Sleets landed on top of him. Obi-Wan could right himself with an agile move. Tads jumped through the same window because he wanted to help his friend and he saw Sleets tangling with the Djed. Obi-Wan used his feet and left arm to keep the curly man at bay and moved his right arm in a gesture to get the lightsaber back using the Force but met with the weapon-stick of a policeman. He suppressed a groan as an intense pain erupted from his breaking arm and the blood flowing from the large cut on his scalp was clouding his vision as he crashed to the street hitting his head when another policeman pushed him using his riot-shield. Darkness enveloped his senses and he knew no more. The boot of the police officer met the lightsaber and it rolled away into the deep gutter and no one took notice. More fighters were herded into the street by the large number of Coruscant police officers. Tads lifted his hands in surrender and took care that he was next to Sleets and the downed Djed. He even started to fuss over the man showing the police officers that it was his friend laying there. A large police-transport was in the street and the captain ordered “in the transport. Take your friend.” Sleets took Obi-Wan’s legs and Tads took him in a fireman’s grip and both carried him to the transport. Sleets whispered “have to stay close to him. We can blame the entire thing on him.” Tads nodded. ‘This guy was their ticket out of this mess.’ Obi-Wan was dumped unceremoniously on the floor of the transport and Tads and Sleets took seats next to him. Other arrests were made and the transport was filled to capacity in no time. Officer Regnik ordered “take off, destination Detention 101 Corunda central” and he closed the doors. tbc- -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/21 6:38pm Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 21-4 trouble and a big fight
	Ummm, Obi-Wan may have been cast in the role of nit-wit due to his prior injury and new injuries, but he is hardly a nit-wit, just the master of one. Loved the bar room brawl - it's so different from the usual lightsaber fight. Anakin saw one beefy hand reaching towards his droidpart and with lightning quick reflexes he took hold of it. The other hand was aimed at his head but another hand intercepted that, a well known hand. Through his bond Anakin said ‘thanks master.’ Said master replied ‘you’re in a mess Padawan’ and saw in the corner of his vision a burly man ramming into a Devaronian male. If Obi-Wan wasn't hampered by that brace, I'd like to see him in real action. Instead, he'll shortly be in the Healers Ward with Enga, Kaagi and the gang. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. Proud master of several padawans
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 4/21 11:49pm Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 21-4 trouble and a big fight
	Anakin should be grounded for ever I do not like that Obi-Wan has been arrested. He is a Jedi for force sake. I hope the next chapter is Obi-Wan punishing Bratkins -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 4/22 9:09am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 22-4 Jedi to the rescue and Ani in trouble - Date Edited: 5/2 9:39pm (1 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
	Valairy_Scot Ummm, Obi-Wan may have been cast in the role of nit-wit due to his prior injury and new injuries, but he is hardly a nit-wit, just the master of one. Loved the bar room brawl - it's so different from the usual lightsaber fight. Anakin saw one beefy hand reaching towards his droidpart and with lightning quick reflexes he took hold of it. The other hand was aimed at his head but another hand intercepted that, a well known hand. Through his bond Anakin said ‘thanks master.’ Said master replied ‘you’re in a mess Padawan’ and saw in the corner of his vision a burly man ramming into a Devaronian male. If Obi-Wan wasn't hampered by that brace, I'd like to see him in real action. Instead, he'll shortly be in the Healers Ward with Enga, Kaagi and the gang. It will take more chapters for Obi-Wan to end up in the healers and he is taking care of others first like in your great story “What the heart hides” He saved the droidshop-owner. And Anakin you will see, he is in for a surprise. Gkilkenny Anakin should be grounded for ever I do not like that Obi-Wan has been arrested. He is a Jedi for force sake. I hope the next chapter is Obi-Wan punishing Bratkins Not every being on Coruscant knows of the Jedi and because of that a lot of misunderstandings are coming in the next chapters. Anakin will get in trouble just because of that and even Obi-Wan until a certain master intervenes making a grande appearance. Chapter 10 Jedihealer Aaqu Maerhin was relaxing in one of the gardens of the Jeditemple and was warned by a Force vision. As a healer and a friend of Obi-Wan he had a strong bond with the young master. Rian Solma, his long-time friend was telling him about his work in the crèche and said “initiate Gresnik is ” Aaqu paled and shouted “Obi-Wan oh nooh” And Rian felt the anguish coming from Obi-Wan when he was struck down by something. As a former crèche master of Obi-Wan he was still attuned to the master and even more so when Obi-Wan had returned from Naboo after the loss of Qui-Gon Jinn. Rian was the first to take action and he took the trembling master Aaqu with him to an elevator that took them directly to one of the hangars. Aaqu recovered in the hangar and became all business. Meeting Tomy Itsy he ordered “a speeder equipped with medical equipment” and was glad when Tomy ran ahead of them towards one and had it ready to take off in a very short time. The two boarded the speeder and guided by the Force signature of Obi-Wan they could track him. Rian piloted the speeder and muttered “no dire emergency yet but I sense trouble.” Aaqu said “and without a life-threatening emergency we cannot take the fast lanes. I feel Obi-Wan is unconscious but stable this moment.” Rian said “I feel the same but that can change any moment. He sure get’s into situations and who is the cause? I think Anakin, he has an uncanningly ability to get his master in some kind of trouble.” “Why is he at the other end of Coruscant?” Aaqu muttered. - - - - In an apartment in the Jeditemple two green eyes blinked and opened instantly. He had a Force vision and although the outcome could go many ways one of them troubled him immensely; the galaxy would be plunged for ages in the dark. Sensing the urgency Yoda took his hoverpad and guided it to the nearest elevator and signalled Tomy Itsy. The hangar technician was waiting for Yoda when said master exited the elevator and hovered full speed towards the large transport. Yoda said “emergency. We need to go and follow the transponder of the speeder of master Maerhin and master Solma.” Tomy sprang into action sensing the emergency coming from Yoda and hearing the speech pattern so unlike the master’s normal behaviour. He said “it will take a bit longer but we will get there and this transport is equipped with all we need. And should the need arise I will contact the authorities and request sub-orbital clearance. That can take us fast anywhere on Coruscant and back to the Jeditemple.” Yoda gave him a small smile when he seated himself in the co pilot seat. ‘The little one would need it and there is more at stake. The chosen one is in trouble’ and the master intended to find out where they had taken him. --- Trahael Kambo remained sitting on the floor until the noise outside subsided and turned to something more normal; the usual bustling streetlife in the sector. He heard the last of the police transports take off. He decided to remain in his shop until things had quietened down and put the sign ‘open’ again on his door. --- Police-station and Detention-station 101 Corunda central became visible in the barred viewport of the transport as it was on a descending path towards the courtyard. Safety-shields opened and a police speeder was leading the transport and landed first. Officer Regnic and officer Zuchin exited it and waited for the detention guards to come. The large transport touched down and the exit was surrounded by Officer Bruce Regnic and his men. The detention officers ordered the prisoners to disembark and told the ones who could walk to carry the ones who couldn’t. Sleets and Tads carried the unconscious Obi-Wan and were escorted by two police officers to the detention-block and towards one of the circular main rooms where 7 cells were situated. Bruce Regnic had followed them and opened the barred gate and ordered Sleets and Tads to enter. They did and dropped their charge unceremoniously on the floor. Obi-Wan was laying on his right arm and no one noticed the blood slowly seeping on the floor. Bruce Regnic closed the gate and directed the other prisoners to their cells. Soon the entire block was filled to capacity and other prisoners were directed to the elevators leading to other cells. Many prisoners just lay down on the bunks and started to snore. Other transports got the same treatment and when the last transport was in, the shields closed again. Djed Mooby and his troupe were led to another block of cells two floors up. Bruce Regnic gave a satisfied smile when all prisoners were taken care of. He walked with his mate Jeb Zuchin through the mazelike corridors towards the main block of the station where the offices and two interrogation booths were situated. Jeb said “captain Okkinsi will be pleased with that raid on the Temple of Doom. We could save 11 children and arrest a group of slavers.” Bruce said “and what started it? A bar-brawl after some clumsy visitor stumbled and spilled his drink. That’s what that Devaronian told me when I shoved him in the transport.” Jeb said “we have to determine who began that brawl and it won’t surprise me if it has been one of those Djeds when one of the slaves tried to escape.” Bruce said “yeah Bledder reported one of them jumping down from those support-beams right into the hands of one of those officers of Regenstreet-station. They have taken all children to that station because it is the closest to one of those houses for the homeless children.” Jeb said “that will take a while with that traffic-jam after that accident but I know officer Norrolo and his men will take care of them.” Bruce said “yeah, even stopping to get those kids something to eat. Speaking of eating, come let’s head to the restaurant first before talking to Captain Okkinsi.” Jeb said “great idea and after that we can begin those interrogation sessions. Some of those guys are too inebriated to talk yet.” -- A police transport was stopping in the hangar of the Corunda police station on Regenstreet. This station was situated in a suburb quite some distance away from the houses of pleasure that dotted the region of Warmstreet and its surroundings and was also some distance from the nearest spaceport. The ‘little house’ of Miss Dunjel and her colleagues was only 5 minutes away by speeder. It had taken the officer who piloted the transport almost 2 hours to get there due to the large traffic congestions in the streets. The children in the seats were taken care of by his colleagues and they even had stopped at a take away diner to get some sandwiches and drinks for them. The children – some with a piece of sandwich or a bottle of juice still in their hands, but all except one looking with a snug and relieved look on their faces - were led from the transport and they were guided to a room. Anakin was that one and being differently dressed from the others he was taken to another room with a table and three chairs and a large caf- and drinks-dispenser and some doors leading to the freshers. The room was built of transparisteel panels and he could see everything in the other rooms. A gruff looking older man ordered him to sit down on a hard plastiform chair. Anakin remained standing still holding the satchel and said “I am Anakin Skywalker and I want to see my master” The man said “I am officer Norrolo. Come sit down and wait” and took a seat on one of the other chairs. “Nice droidpart you have there.” Anakin said “yes, it’s for my new TU-6-BT droid I am building. He can be of great use to my master and me” and he told the interested police officer some more about droidbuilding after taking a seat and unpacking the servobrain to show it. Officer Norrolo nodded friendly and thought ‘it will keep him busy until our youth-experts arrive after getting those other slaves to a new home. The ‘little house’ will need all its free rooms. He sure is different from those children and he can be a slave of one of those thugs we arrested.’ He gave small comments having droid-building as a hobby himself. A woman came in and Anakin repeated “I am Anakin Skywalker” He sighed when she paid him no attention, visited the fresher and exited through the door again. He became quite annoyed when each officer he met and told his name just ignored him or told him to wait. ‘Master I am in trouble’ He tried to meditate but found no quiet and when he probed the bond with his master he sensed no trouble. ‘Master is unconscious or sleeping.’ One hour passed like this and he saw the other children – the younger ones – being led away. ‘Yeah some movement coming into this boring business. Only officer Norrolo is friendly and he even understands my techtalk and is very interested in droids’ Anakin thought when he saw two officers coming his way and looking at him. --- Melian was entering the work place of master Aiden O-Lenge or Spanners as he was called by the entire Jeditemple. A big man with a fair complexion and red hair and smiling blue eyes, that was Spanners and everyone liked him. “Good to see you Melian and now all we have to do is wait for Anakin and we can work on that droid” Spanners said. Melian said “yes Anakin will be here any minute. That last lesson he had was history and he likes it and he will have to get some of his tools from his room.” Spanners asked “aren’t my tools good enough?” Melian answered “sure but Anakin has some special tools and with that intricate work we have to do to join the head to the body he needs those. Some of them he got from his master and others even from the Supreme chancellor. Anakin is good friends with that nice man.” Spanners said “I haven’t met him but from what I have seen on the holotube he seems honest and friendly.” tbc- -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/22 10:22am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 22-4 Jedi to the rescue and Ani in trouble
	Oh, no, Obi-Wan is unconscious and bleeding and Anakin is "just another kid." Can't wait for more updates. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. Proud master of several padawans
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 4/23 3:43am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 22-4 Jedi to the rescue and Ani in trouble
	I am so pleased that Obi-Wan has friends to watch out for him, they must know that Anakin can get his master into trouble a lot. Rian was the first to take action and he took the trembling master Aaqu with him to an elevator that took them directly to one of the hangars. Aaqu recovered in the hangar and became all business. They sense Obi-Wan good. Meeting Tomy Itsy he ordered “a speeder equipped with medical equipment” and was glad when Tomy ran ahead of them towards one and had it ready to take off in a very short time. The two boarded the speeder and guided by the Force signature of Obi-Wan they could track him. Oh,Oh they know he is injured once again. Rian said “I feel the same but that can change any moment. He sure get’s into situations and who is the cause? I think Anakin, he has an uncanningly ability to get his master in some kind of trouble.” “Why is he at the other end of Coruscant?” Aaqu muttered. So they all know that Anakin is AWOL. absent without leave. Excellent Master Yoda is coming also. I loved this chapter. -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 4/23 9:53am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 23-4 misunderstandings
	Valairy_Scot Oh, no, Obi-Wan is unconscious and bleeding and Anakin is "just another kid." Can't wait for more updates. Anakin is just another kid for those at the police station and the children's home. Next one is up. And thanks for reading. Gkilkenny posted: I am so pleased that Obi-Wan has friends to watch out for him, they must know that Anakin can get his master into trouble a lot. Rian was the first to take action and he took the trembling master Aaqu with him to an elevator that took them directly to one of the hangars. Aaqu recovered in the hangar and became all business. They sense Obi-Wan good. Meeting Tomy Itsy he ordered “a speeder equipped with medical equipment” and was glad when Tomy ran ahead of them towards one and had it ready to take off in a very short time. The two boarded the speeder and guided by the Force signature of Obi-Wan they could track him. Oh,Oh they know he is injured once again. Rian said “I feel the same but that can change any moment. He sure get’s into situations and who is the cause? I think Anakin, he has an uncanningly ability to get his master in some kind of trouble.” “Why is he at the other end of Coruscant?” Aaqu muttered. So they all know that Anakin is AWOL. absent without leave. Excellent Master Yoda is coming also. I loved this chapter. Anakin will get in trouble because of a lot of misunderstandings. That will teach him a lesson. Yoda will play an important part and also the healers and Rian. And a certain girl. Thanks for reading and your great support. The next chapter sees Anakin and Obi-Wan in trouble and Dexter on the scene. And a utility belt is stolen and that will lead to a certain confrontation. Chapter 11 Anakin sat on a chair and he was glaring at the officials, a man and a woman. Officer Norrolo had left the room to resume his other work; making his reports as senior officer of the station. The man trying to be cheerful said “and now let’s see who we have here. A little person.” Anakin muttered “I am not a little person, I am Anakin.” He was fidgeting with the straps of the satchel. The woman asked “who are you young boy?” Anakin said “as I told you and those others already a zillion times I am Anakin, Anakin Skywalker.” The man said “you are too small to be admitted to that house of pleasure alone. What were you doing there?” Anakin said “I have bought this servobrain and that kind mister Kambo offered me a lunch and then my master came. I want to see my master. I want you to take me to that other police-station. Why was my master taken to a different station?” “So, you have a master. Are you a slave?” “No, I am a Padawan and my master is Obi-Wan Kenobi.” “You have to wait here and I will check things out.” “Can I go now? My master is in trouble, he is wounded. You have to call that other station. Is my utility belt already found?” “Just wait. Officer Serla will bring you something to drink.” The police officer had never heard of the words ‘Padawan or Obi what’s his name’ and thinking Padawan was a new word for a slave he walked to an office with a comterminal and started to talk softly after he got his connection. Anakin sat fidgeting on his chair. ‘Why is it taking so long? Master is hurt. He sure will be grumpy and he won’t allow me to go on a droidhunt again.’ He saw the woman coming towards him with a glass of Mujaa-juice. She set the glass on the table and gave Anakin a smile. “It won’t take long kiddo.” Anakin just grumped and glared at her. “Kiddo, I am a Padawan and my master is hurt.” Officer Serla said “others will take care of him.” Anakin asked “can you ask if they treat him properly.” Officer Serla said “you are concerned for your master. Ah there is Miss Dunjel from the children’s home” and she walked to the door of the office to welcome her. Miss Dunjel said with a surprising light voice “you are the Padawan that has been brought in.” Anakin said “yes I am Padawan Anakin Skywalker. I want to go to my master.” Miss Dunjel said “I will take you with me. A police-station is not the place to stay for a young child like you” and she took him by his arm and started towards the door. Anakin muttered “I want to see my master. You cannot do this. Aauw you are hurting me” and he started to struggle to get free. Miss Dunjel was used to squirming children that were freed from slavery and just lifted Anakin in her big arms. One thing; she hadn’t counted on having a Force sensitive child to deal with, an angry child at that. Anakin was getting angry and began to kick wildly with his legs and thinking about the Blood Carver he had killed not so long ago he started to use the Force until he heard through his bond with his master ‘Anakin noooh.’ That stopped him from beginning to disable the woman and he resisted no more. ‘Oh nooh I was doing it again. Have to shield that from my master and the others especially master Windu and master Yoda. A Jedi knows no anger they keep telling me that over and over again.’ Miss Dunjel, thinking it was the temperature and choking air in the office, hurried to the entrance of the police station where a speeder was waiting. A door opened and Miss Dunjel and Anakin went inside. A brief smile appeared on Anakin’s face when officer Serla gave him the satchel with the servobrain. - - - - - Obi-Wan was slowly regaining consciousness and the annoying buzz in the back of his head slowly materialized into the murmur of voices, the same voices he had heard when they were attacking Anakin and Trahael Kambo. He opened one eye and instantly regretted it. Fireworks, big fireworks, exploding blasters, too bright lightsabers all mixed up. ‘Lightsabers? Where is mine? Where is Anakin?’ His whole body hurt and having a competition for the most pain with his head was his right arm. “Anakin” “Hey pal” a grumbling voice next to his ear said. Another high pitched voice said “get his name.” Obi-Wan thought in his numbness that he heard Anakin and whispered “Anakin.” The grumbling voice said “you’re Anakin, that’s your name?” Obi-Wan felt his Padawan through the Force being in trouble and trying to get out of it using some power of the dark side and shouted “Anakin noooh” and tried to stand up. Exploding rockets, suns and the flash of a lightsaber and he slumped back on the floor, hitting his head on a sharp piece of metal and losing consciousness again. -- Tads said “now he sure is out cold. Did you see how he hit his head?” “By the time that police-doc arrives he will be dead.” “I helped him a bit pushing him towards that bunk.” “Look now he is bleeding like a womprat.” “Do you care Sleets?” “Nah, if he’s dead we can blame the start of the fight on him and they cannot interrogate him.” “Has a nice utility-belt and those boots” “You take the belt” Sleets, the man with the high pitched voice moved to the unconscious form and removed the utility-belt and said “he has no use for that anymore.” Tads removed the boots and put his own threadbare sneakers on the feet of the man. “He won’t need them for long anymore. These are nice boots and the same size.” He pulled his trousers down on them and only the feet were visible. Tads saw four officers and a captain coming towards their cell and said “shh, come let’s move to the front. Let’s show them we are not drunk and willing to talk” and he walked towards the door, seeing others laying in crumpled heaps and snoring loudly in the other cells. The captain asked standing in the circular main space of the detention-room “who’s first to give his statement?’ Tads answered in a loud voice drowning out two other voices “I do” and he walked to the door. Sleets followed him and said “and I. That man did begin the fight” and he pointed at the beige and brown form at the other end of their cell half hidden by the table.” Another man agreed with them and said “yeah that ginger-haired hooligan. He is the one. He was tossing that teenager around like a toy. He is one of those Djeds and a slaver.” The captain gave his officers orders and the two were led away to an interrogation booth. - - - - - Dexter Jettster was rounding the corner leading to Warmstreet and saw a police-transport taking off. He saw yellow tape barring the entrance to a hotel and pleasure-house and a broken window. ‘Temple of Doom’ was on the front and Dexter smiled ‘no more doom coming from that place.’ Pedestrians were roaming the street as if nothing had happened and Dexter didn’t mind either. The sun was shining and it was a bright day. ‘Have to get my part and be back before the early dinners arrive.’ Dexter shuffled down the street and met two scantily dressed women and avoided them by taking a step in the street from the walkway. A reddish brown patch caught his attention and he saw something blinking in the sun. ‘Some lost credits and who’s ta find em, me’ Dexter bowed and tried to grab the credit only to grab something more. The ‘credit’ was attached to a cylinder and he recognised it immediately. ‘What on Subterrels moons is that thing doing here. From the looks of it, yep, Qui-Gon’s lightsaber and the last time I saw this it was hanging from Obi-Wan’s belt.’ He stuffed the lightsaber in one of his deep pockets on his trousers and decided to go the Jeditemple after his visit to his friend Kambo. - - - - - A short ride took Anakin and Miss Dunjel to a large building. Anakin sensed many beings in the house and after Miss Dunjel greeted a nice looking young woman at the reception he followed her to a large livingroom where many children were playing. One of them, a young Shistavanen boy was tinkering with a droid and Anakin recognised the shape of droid. He had seen those droids in his forays through the junkyards and new ones in the Jeditemple. They were quite sophisticated. Miss Dunjel said “come Anakin, you must be tired and hungry.” Anakin followed her to a table and another woman came with a tray with a delicious banthasteak on it. The satchel with the servobrain was placed on the table. After he had eaten Miss Dunjel asked “where were you living with your master” Anakin said “in the Jeditemple here on Coruscant. I want to go to my master now.” Miss Dunjel had had many more experiences with kids telling her after being picked up from the streets that told her they were living in a temple and ‘Jedi’ didn’t mean anything to her. Many houses for pleasure in the sector where the boy was picked up were called temples and even the restaurant and hotel where the police had found him was called ‘temple of doom.’ And she had heard that the ‘master’ of the boy was picked up with thugs and scum of the galaxy and transported to a detention centre. He was one of the Djeds a performing troupe using slaves and she was disgusted when she had read about their deeds. All those boys and girls were now being cared for in her house. ‘Tossing that boy around like a rag-doll and chaining him.’ When that Djed was tried and convicted she would enquire about him. And when that boy insisted on going back to his master she could always ask where they had taken the master. ‘Serving a long time imprisonment off planet no doubt.’ She said “you will like it here. We can give you a good education and be like a family to you.” Anakin said “Obi-Wan Kenobi is my family and the other Jedi are my family and I want to go now.” Miss Dunjel asked “who are those Jedi?” Anakin answered “they are nice beings and they teach you about the Force, sabers and how to fight. In a few months I will make my own lightsaber. I will travel with my master to Ilum.” Miss Dunjel had heard of fighting schools and seeing the lanky teenager with his well developed muscles she assumed that the temple was just that: a fighting school for slaves. And ‘force sabers’ was a term for a violent kind of armed combat. She said “a good education and a nice home can give you a good future.” Anakin said “oh but my master is teaching me although he can be grumpy sometimes and I am better than most of my class-mates.” Mis Dunjel asked “so you are the best of your group. And does your master praise you?” Anakin said “I am the best but master never praises me. He just says good Anakin, you have to learn a lot more and he takes me to the garden or the balcony of our apartment for a meditating lesson.” Miss Dunjel had heard about those ‘meditating lessons’ and didn’t want to upset the child more. Putting the boy at ease and feeling at home was of the utmost importance and she would contact the detention centre to give her statement. She said “in a few days we will go to look for your master. I am sure he is alright. You must be tired after this long day. Come” and she took Anakin and guided him to a nice bedroom-complex. Anakin was too tired to argue and even forgot to take the satchel with him. He sensed no trouble through his bond with his master. ‘Obi-Wan is safe and I sense his friends are with him.’ He went to the fresher and found a nice sleeping shirt laid on the bed for him and a glass of fruit-juice on the nightstand. He folded his clothes and put them on a chair and donned the shirt and gulped down a nice drink. ‘Hmm Mujaa and Pallie-juice’ and slipped between the crisp clean sheets and fell asleep almost instantly. -- Miss Dunjel smiled ‘the boy would be having a good sleep. I have slipped a strong sleeping medicine in that juice. No need for him to have bad dreams about his enslavement and those horrible Djeds.’ She saw him and thought about the conversation she had earlier with the director of the children's home. Mostly babies were offered for adoption but they had a file of a nice couple living on Corulag who had lost their only son. They had applied for adoption of an older child. And this Anakin just could be the one for them.’ Miss Dunjel walked to the director after sending the detention-centre a message with her statement. The director said “I have taken the liberty to contact some couples for adoptions after those raids by the police on houses of pleasure. That Temple of Doom raid saved 10 slaves and we need new homes for them. Mister and Miss Teeda from Corulag want an older child and “ Miss Dunjel interrupted “that can be that Anakin I brought in from the Regenstreet police station.” The director said “I was thinking that too. There are more couples wanting an older child but they have yet to arrive. Only that Corulag couple is on a business trip on Coruscant and they will come tomorrow.” Miss Dunjel said “I will keep watch over that young Anakin. He was quite upset wanting to go to his master.” The director said “yeah some slaves are. By the way, this was standing on the table” and he showed her the satchel. Miss Dunjel said “oh that officer gave it to him when we entered the speeder. It must hold some significance and I will take it to the room where he is sleeping.” She went to the bedroom-complex and settled down on a couch. - - - - - Tads and Sleets were each in one of the interrogation booths and both told the same story of the Djed being cruel to his slaves and starting the fight when one of the slaves tried to escape. 10 minutes later two very snug looking men were lead to the entrance of the police-station. They walked away from the detention and police station. Sleets said “we did it and now that Anakin character will take the blame.” Tads said “nah, he will be dead by now. Two interrogation booths and we were with 3 prisoners in our cell. And there were many more in those other cells clamouring for attention. They will be finished with the others before they find him, dead.” Sleets said “good riddance” and he walked with Tads towards one of the public transports that would take them to the large spaceport and a flight to the outer rim planet of Bonadan. As they boarded the transport a red and white speeder touched down near the police-station. tbc- -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/23 10:22am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 23-4 misunderstandings
	Oh, dear, poor Obi-Wan. And Anakin - going to be adopted. I'm glad Dex found Obi-Wan's lightsaber. I hope someone finds/saves Obi-Wan before I leave Saturday - the suspense will kill me otherwise. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. Proud master of several padawans
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AzureAngel2 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 4/23 10:52am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 23-4 misunderstandings
	Again Yoda’s speech “The chosen one Qui-Gon gave to us all, not proven, full of fear and yours to save. Well, I wonder who will save whom in the end. Wow, what a mess again! I also would say that unlucky events attrack them. Or do they attrack the unlucky events? Difficult, difficult. -----signature----- "There is good in him. I felt it." "Y a-t-il un coeur sous ton armure? Le mien est pur comme l'azure." My be darlings DU & Chilla: http://img428.imageshack.us/img428/1433/theemperorlivescopy0pv.jpg e-mom of DG
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 4/23 2:52pm Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 23-4 misunderstandings
	Oh my Poor Obi-Wan left for dead in the cells. Hurry Mace and Yoda help him before it is too late. Great post -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 4/24 8:40am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 24-4 more misunderstandings but Obi saved
	Valairy_Scot posted: Oh, dear, poor Obi-Wan. And Anakin - going to be adopted. I'm glad Dex found Obi-Wan's lightsaber. I hope someone finds/saves Obi-Wan before I leave Saturday - the suspense will kill me otherwise. Yes he is found by his friends and have a great trip. AzureAngel2 Again Yoda’s speech “The chosen one Qui-Gon gave to us all, not proven, full of fear and yours to save. Well, I wonder who will save whom in the end. Wow, what a mess again! I also would say that unlucky events attrack them. Or do they attrack the unlucky events? Difficult, difficult. That's the Jedi's life, getting into a mess and with the chosen one as a padawan that is bound to happen many times. Gkilkenny Oh my Poor Obi-Wan left for dead in the cells. Hurry Mace and Yoda help him before it is too late. Great post His crèche master, the healers and Yoda will save him. Thanks all for reading and your support. This chapter is the last for this week because with duties at the Flower-parade and some running the rest of my week is filled. Chapter 12 A red and white Jedi-speeder was on approach. 15 minutes ago Aaqu had heard the shout of Obi-Wan ‘Anakin noooh’ in his mind and he was worried when he heard no more. That meant Obi-Wan was unconscious and in bad shape. Rian piloted the speeder and landed it expertly in front of the police and detention station. -- - - - - - Dexter Jettster entered the shop of his friend Trahael Kambo and hugged him. He said after observing him “yah are a bit white around ta nose Trahael. What happened?” Trahael answered “I was visiting the Temple of Doom offering lunch to a very friendly and hungry boy who had helped me repair a droid. He was a customer of mine and has bought a servobrain and the kid was a real expert on everything. He had travelled from afar to see me. Things were getting mean when I came to the table carrying two trays of food and one man who had lost from me in a game of Podaak tripped me. That got me attacked by that man and after a big brawl started I was pushed under a table and could sneak away to the exit missing my lunch.” Dexter said “I have brought you something to fill your belly” and he gave him the box with the special. Thrahael was hungry after his missed lunch and started immediately on it savouring the taste. After wiping his mouth with a handkerchief he said “delicious Dex and now the reason of your visit.” Dexter said “Wa7’s wheel-motivator is a bit scrunchy and she needs a new one.” Trahael rummaged some in one of the drawers and came out with a part “here it is and you can take it for free.” Dexter said “thanks buddy” and after looking at a chrono “I have to leave. Hermione Bagwa needs me and that student that helps me sometimes has to go back to his parents.” Trahael said “see you next time.” Dexter left the shop and boarded the public transport. ‘After the last customer of the diner leaves, I will go to the Jeditemple to bring this back’ and he patted on his pocket. - - - - Melian was getting concerned. Evening was approaching and no Anakin yet. Spanners had gone back to work and Melian had started on the droid. ‘But I need Anakin to integrate the head. What is keeping him from coming to this place?’ Looking at the chrono on the wall of the work place he decided he had waited long enough and after greeting Spanners he boarded the elevator that took him to the residential wing. Walking past the Kenobi-Skywalker apartment he pushed the doorbell. ‘No Anakin, no master Kenobi, they must have left the temple’ Melian thought and walked towards his apartment. Master Jolin greeted his sulking Padawan and asked “what’s the matter Melian?” Melian answered “I have waited almost two hours for Anakin in the work place of Spanners. Anakin had promised to come after his lessons to help me with the droid. And he was not home when I contacted him.” Master Jolin said “I am sure they will be home after diner and I will contact master Kenobi. He is on light temple duty after that mission to Zonoma Sekot and he has to take his pills-and-get-to-bed-early-as-ordered-by-the-ever-watchful-and-oh-so-annoying-healers. That’s what he told me at Dexter’s yesterday and he was grinning broadly. Yeah Obi-Wan and healers; he dislikes going to them but he has some great friends in the healers’ ward.” Melian said “I hope they don’t need those healers.” - - - - The officer on duty at the reception saw two brown blurs whipping past his desk and started to yell “invaders” and pushed an emergency button. That got the entire station on alert but the two Jedi were running full speed through the maze dodging and opening safety-gates and setting off alarms and already entering the detention block and running towards the holding cells. Aaqu used the Force to open the barred door and ran to the crumpled form in the back of the cell. He gave a relieved gasp “he is alive” He put down his emergency kit and used his sensitive hands and probed the unconscious form and muttered “Obi-Wan what have you done this time?” -- Rian felt the desperation coming from the healer who was covering the bleeding head-wounds with bacta-patches and after that keeping his hand on the forehead of Obi-Wan pouring in all his strength to save him. He was glad when three policemen came rushing towards the cell. He stopped them with his commanding but kind gaze. He ordered “a medevac on the double.” Bruce Regnik saw the blood on the floor and ordered “Jeb, Karel do as that man orders and get doc Greg here.” Some of the other prisoners were just too stunned to react. One of them pointed at the cloaks and tunics and whispered “they are Jedi. How on Corellia’s moon could they know one of the prisoners is a Jedi.” Another said “they have a hockey religion and they are mindhunters who can control everything.” -- Only minutes later Captain Luuk Okkinsi came into the cell block. He was followed on his heels by a white uniformed and bespectacled bald man who entered the cell. He was carrying a case and waving with a stethoscope. He saw the bacta-patches on the cheeks and head of the man and the hand of the brown robed man on the patient’s forehead. He knelt besides Aaqu and Obi-Wan and said “Nat Greg, I will take over. Thank you for giving him first aid.” Aaqu whispered showing his full concentration “I am Jedihealer Aaqu Maerhin and I am treating him.” Nat Greg said “he is my patient and I will take him to the district hospital, which is quite modern equipped. I take all my patients to that hospital and they have a special section for the prisoners. And before anyone says anything else this man is a prisoner.” Captain Luuk Okkinsi said “this man Anakin was taken to detention because he was attacking a young child.” Officer Jeb Zuchin said “two men confirmed that and they have made a statement.” Aaqu said giving them his famous look “Anakin? He is Obi-Wan Kenobi and one of the Jedi order. He has a bad concussion and a broken arm and I even suspect that he has a fracture in his skull. I want to transport him to the Jeditemple for treatment immediately and I need a well equipped medevac. And that is...” Nat Greg interrupted “how did you get that stat from my patient? I see only a head-wound and that can point to a mild concussion and that right arm is encased in a warriors brace.” Aaqu said “I am a Jedihealer and I used the Force and the ulna in the right arm had a hairline fracture after a fight on Zonoma Sekot. Now it is a complicated break and he needs surgery. We need to go to the Jeditemple. Obi-Wan is a Jedi and needs a Jedihealer to t...” Captain Okkinsi interrupted “never heard of Zonoma Sekot and that word Jedi, he looks human to me. And he can not go back to the Temple of Doom and his fellow Djeds. We have closed that pleasure house and taken all the children to a safe house. Are you an employee of that temple and a Djed? If so I advise you to remain silent and say no more until you have contacted your lawyer.” Aaqu sighed and said “I am a Jedi Knight and this man is also one of the Jedi Knights.” Rian saw the unwilling faces of the officers and took his comlink “Master Rian Solma emergency transmission to the Jedi high council; report immediately.” A disembodied voice said “patching through to nearest Council member.” Captain Okkinsi glared almost unbelievingly at the little green hologram that appeared on the transmitter of the comlink and even more so when he heard: “will arrive shortly sensed Obi-Wan in trouble I did.” Rian said “we ‘are’ Jedi and have you figured out how we could enter this cell? Hmm?” Captain Okkinsi answered “uh no, the cell was locked with a key. Officer Zuchin do you have the key?” Jeb Zuchin said after searching his belt “yes. They couldn’t enter this cell, but they did. Weird. And for them to appear right on time; weird.” “Weird this is not, Jedi they are. Can use the Force to open door. Sensed trouble they did.” Jeb looked down and saw a little green being with a wrinkled head and greying hair and dressed in simple garb. Thoughtful looking green eyes were gazing towards where the doctor and healer were caring for the prisoner. They were full of compassion and had a liquid look. Jeb stepped aside to let the little being in the cell. ‘Captain Okkinsi is wrong about that man being a Djed.’ Yoda said “have medtransport ready” and he moved his hands and a stretcher followed him floating into the cell. The police officers were dumbstruck and captain Okkinsi uttered after some time “this is impossible.” Yoda said “impossible is not” and he used the Force to lay Obi-Wan gently on the stretcher after clearing away the medical equipment that was stashed on it. Aaqu opened the large bag and started to stabilise Obi-Wan. An IV was applied and a tube inserted and Aaqu connected the breathing unit. He used a scalpel to cut the sweatshirt at the seams and connected leads to a monitor. Doctor Nat Greg helped him impressed by the state of the art equipment and removed the brace. An ugly open break was revealed and he put a piece of sterile gauze on the wound. Rian gave him a splint and took the pieces of sweatshirt. He intended to repair and clean it because he sensed that Obi-Wan would need it. The splint was inflated and the three secured Obi-Wan to the stretcher making sure the head was immobile. And all the time Yoda held Obi-Wan’s left hand in his three-fingered hand and gazed with half open eyes at the Jedi, encouraging him to hang on. With his other hand Yoda held the IV-bag aloft and when Aaqu gave the signal that he was ready Yoda floated on top of the stretcher and settled un-touching Obi-Wan. ‘Anakin has to wait and I sense no danger coming to the boy.’ Captain Okkinsi finally believed that his prisoner was a Jedi Knight and he cleared the way to the exit in the courtyard. He even wasn’t surprised any more when he saw the great red and white spacetransport parked there. ‘That little green Jedi must have disabled our safety-measures.’ He shouted orders to intercept the two miners. He hoped that the Jedi had arrived on time to save their comrade. And if the Jedi died the two that had ‘helped’ him had to stand trial for murder. “Sleets Onelli and Tads Hokia, their faces are on your PDA’s. Get them arrested and back here. Bruce, Jeb, come we have more prisoners to interrogate and that Jedi could have been saving those slaves.” Tomy Itsi opened the ramp leading inside the Jeditransport and ran back to the cockpit. Sensing that they were ready he took off and because he had already requested emergency clearance he could enter the much faster suborbital spacelane. That would take them to the Jeditemple in less than half an hour. Aaqu issued orders and Rian contacted the healers’ ward. Rian put his comlink back on his belt and said “Kaagi is preparing for the surgery and he will be ready when we arrive. And Hanjo Tavar is preparing himself.” Aaqu nodded but he felt troubled and Yoda mirrored his troubled gaze. ‘Safe him we will. Sure of this I am.’ tbc- -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 4/24 10:09am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 24-4 more misunderstandings but Obi saved
	‘Safe him we will. Sure of this I am.’ AW, thank the Force, they got there in time. I can breathe again. It was rather funny to see how some ordinary citizens saw the Jedi. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. Proud master of several padawans
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AzureAngel2 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 4/25 3:50am Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 24-4 more misunderstandings but Obi saved
	Yes, it is interesting what sort of oppinion some people have of the jedi. There is much fear and hate plus prejudices out there. -----signature----- "There is good in him. I felt it." "Y a-t-il un coeur sous ton armure? Le mien est pur comme l'azure." My be darlings DU & Chilla: http://img428.imageshack.us/img428/1433/theemperorlivescopy0pv.jpg e-mom of DG
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 4/27 2:37pm Subject: RE: Temple of Doom, Ani/Obi after Zonoma Sekot 24-4 more misunderstandings but Obi saved
	Aaqu used the Force to open the barred door and ran to the crumpled form in the back of the cell. He gave a relieved gasp “he is alive” He put down his emergency kit and used his sensitive hands and probed the unconscious form and muttered “Obi-Wan what have you done this time?” Poor Obi-Wan "what have you done this time, Oh just trying to help some slaves and my padawan Anakin" thats all! At least Obi-Wan will be in the Jedi temple where he can receive expert medical attention -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06