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Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Epilogue - 10/19/09 - COMPLETE!
sethsky
Registered:
Jun '05
Date Posted:
9/30/08 4:47am
Subject:
RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Awesome chapter, but i am worried about the possible upcoming betrayel, either way Luke will find out that Mara was Sidious's servant. And having Luke be burdend by both Vader and Mara could be too much.
I look forward to the next chap.
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Jade_eyes
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Aug '04
Date Posted:
9/30/08 6:02am
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Wootness!!!! This was off the chain.
Mothma was wonderful in her conversation with Luke... as was Leia and mara in their conversation... Loved Luke's and Mara's POV in this--their feelings about each other are perfect in depth and quality ... mystifying, genuuine, deep, but still undefined
The Han and Luke scene though was the real topper
Your Han is "star" quality--
Bravo and mega-huggles!!!!!!!
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ginchy
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May '05
Date Posted:
9/30/08 7:09am
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
I loved all the conversations between characters in this update. You have them all pegged, but Han and Luke's conversation was especially well done. This is all building up--I cannot even imagine what will happen when the cards fall. But I'm thinking Luke might not react to any of Arica's secrets the way we think (or fear). Excellent update!
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Ocelotl_Nesto
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Oct '04
Date Posted:
9/30/08 10:48am
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
I look forward to the strike team... Perhaps Mara will stay and help blow up the shield, but I forsee a need for her to confront Palpy.
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angry_bendu1
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Apr '07
Date Posted:
9/30/08 12:37pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Han's on the case!
Luke and Mara will be together in no time.
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EGKenobi
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Apr '05
Date Posted:
9/30/08 4:35pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Excellent,
simply excellent.
Please add me to the updates list.
EG
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CommanderK23
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May '04
Date Posted:
9/30/08 6:57pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Wonderful update
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dianethx
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Mar '02
Date Posted:
9/30/08 7:00pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Luke may be relying on the Force but Madine might have the right of it. Arica is an unknown and that can spell trouble.
I liked that Han was playing matchmaker and also was willing to step aside if Luke and Leia were in love. Good thing Luke finally knew about her being his sister. That would give the extra incentive to let her go to Han.
Great job with this.
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walker-of-minds
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Oct '06
Date Posted:
9/30/08 8:31pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
ohh love this fic-Mara is liking this companionship/friend thing.
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dancing_star
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Feb '07
Date Posted:
10/1/08 9:07am
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
"Maybe not, but they are all extinct now, aren't they? And this in spite of their magical powers." Madine waved his hands in the approximation of a charlatan performing his tricks before an audience. "It's all a lot of parlor tricks and sleight of hand."
"Don't be too certain, General," Han spoke up quietly. "I used to think the same, but I've seen enough of what Luke can do that I can't discount the existence of the Force."
"Of course you would support him, Solo," Madine responded with some rancor. "Your friendship is well known."
"Maybe so. But I'm also known as being very practical, not to mention skeptical. The first time the Kid came on my ship I gave him and Kenobi a bad time about the Force and ridiculed their devotion to what I called an ââ†95;…¡Ã‚¬Ã‹Å†7;“ancient religion'. But things have changed since then. I don't know nothing about his mystical energy field, but Luke's surprised me one too many times to ignore him now."
"This arguing is not getting us anywhere," Mothma interjected into the exchange. "General Solo, what is your opinion about allowing this Arica to become a member of the assault team?"
Han glanced at Luke and directed his attention back to the leader of the rebellion. "I don't know Arica well, it's true, but I'll trust Luke's judgment. If he thinks she's trustworthy, then that's good enough for me."
I loved Han throughout this whole chapter.
He's so smart, looks out for his friends, etc.
His character's come a long way since ANH, and he was already great then!
Fabulous
update!!
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nabooqueen2008
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Jan '08
Date Posted:
10/1/08 11:42am
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
That was amazing....wow! So awesome! Please keep it coming...I've so missed the comraderie between Leia, Luke and Han! Wonderful!
~nabooqueen~
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Cypher18
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Apr '01
Date Posted:
10/1/08 2:49pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Loved it. Just loved it. I just wanted to keep reading and was disappointed that it ended there. Here's hoping that you post another soon.
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Jedi_QueenBee
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Sep '08
Date Posted:
10/1/08 4:11pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
HAN STILL THINKS THAT LUKE LIKES LEIA.
WHEN IS HE GOING TO TELL HAN AND LEIA THAT LUKE IS LEIA'S TWIN BROTHER?
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Tych_sel
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Nov '01
Date Posted:
10/2/08 12:01pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Well, I certainly have to say that this post was well worth the wait. I love what you did with Mara's character during the post, starting with her vulnerability and building her back up again. I have to wonder what Mara plans on doing in order to "start over." And as others have said, Han's doing his part to support his friends.
Force be with you,
Tych_sel
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AvenKiel
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Oct '03
Date Posted:
10/2/08 3:35pm
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RE: Take My Hand (L/M, canon characters) Chapter 10 - 09/29/08
Great post! I can't wait to see Mara kick some butt!!
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