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My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) 11-20-08: Another Rescue Mission
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KaraJadeKim
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8/7 5:45pm
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RE: My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) , 8-07-08: Obi-Wan's Confession
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Yes it is Skywalker Chaktoay/Petra obi wan loves her aww how sweet
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PetraKenobi
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Date Posted:
8/9 4:55pm
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RE: My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) , 8-07-08: Obi-Wan's Confession
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earlybird-obi-wan posted:
And now Obi is going against the Jedi code? 
Yep...though she tries to talk him out of it.
LarsKronus posted:
Uh oh...easy Kenobi, last Jedi I knew who pronounced love ended up becoming a Sith, and others who were in a relationship ended up dead! But, there you go Skywalker, he fell, now its your turn!
don't worry; Kenobi won't go to the dark side or anything like that 'cause of Petra.  
KaraJadeKim posted:
Yes it is Skywalker Chaktoay/Petra obi wan loves her aww how sweet
thanks.
I knew it! But to hear him say it for himself was different than I expected. I was planning on making some smart remark about it but I didn’t say anything. I couldn’t say anything. Here was a man who obviously cared deeply about the Jedi and about someone who he couldn’t’ have. It wasn’t’ the time for a smart remark. I nearly forgot about what he said as I felt him move closer to me, I wanted to move but I couldn’t. It seemed like I was held to my place against the tree. His lips brushed lightly against mine. He looked into my eyes. Without knowing what I was doing, I wrapped my arms around his neck and pulled him to me, capturing his lips with mine. Ten seconds later, I started coming back to my senses and I ended the kiss, but my arms remained around him.
“I…I shouldn’t have done that” I said pulling away from him and standing up. My lips still felt like they were on fire; my cheeks flustered.
He didn’t look up at me. “I’m sorry too.” He stood up and walked back to the group, his head drooping slightly. Qui-Gon walked over.
“What’s wrong?” He asked me.
“Nothing.” I said, looking down at my feet.
I felt his hand on my shoulder. “I saw what happened. I know he loves you.”
“It’s just an infatuation. It’ll pass in time.” But deep down, I knew Qui-Gon was right.
His hand cupped my chin and forced me to look at him. I never realized that his eyes were blue as well, though they were more blue than gray. But I also saw something else I didn’t see before: love. Oh wonderful; not only was Obi-Wan head over heels for me, Qui-Gon was in the same boat. This day was just getting better and better…NOT.
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KaraJadeKim
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Date Posted:
8/9 5:23pm
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RE: My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) , 8-09-08: Two Dilemmas
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He didn’t look up at me. “I’m sorry too.†He stood up and walked back to the group, his head drooping slightly. Qui-Gon walked over.
“What’s wrong?†He asked me.
“Nothing.†I said, looking down at my feet.
I felt his hand on my shoulder. “I saw what happened. I know he loves you.â€
“It’s just an infatuation. It’ll pass in time.†But deep down, I knew Qui-Gon was right.
His hand cupped my chin and forced me to look at him. I never realized that his eyes were blue as well, though they were more blue than gray. But I also saw something else I didn’t see before: love. Oh wonderful; not only was Obi-Wan head over heels for me, Qui-Gon was in the same boat. This day was just getting better and better…NOT.
Uh oh obi head over heels for petra! Love the Triangle Skywalker Qui_gon Knows and loves Her But i think its beyoned head over heels with obi.
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LarsKronus
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Date Posted:
8/9 8:17pm
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RE: My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) , 8-09-08: Two Dilemmas
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Oh snap! It comes down to the duel...Master against Padawan...who shall get the Force spawn's sister? Tune in...next! Ha! Great post, Kenobi! Thanks for the pm
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earlybird-obi-wan
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8/9 9:21pm
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Qui-Gon you are too old 
What will come
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PetraKenobi
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Date Posted:
8/11 11:01am
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RE: My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) , 8-09-08: Two Dilemmas
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KaraJadeKim posted:
Uh oh obi head over heels for petra! Love the Triangle Skywalker Qui_gon Knows and loves Her But i think its beyoned head over heels with obi.
isn't it always? 
LarsKronus posted:
Oh snap! It comes down to the duel...Master against Padawan...who shall get the Force spawn's sister? Tune in...next! Ha! Great post, Kenobi! Thanks for the pm
trust me, this story follows the movie's storyline. well, for the most part.
earlybird-obi-wan posted:
Qui-Gon you are too old
What will come
Petra thinks the same thing.
His head bent closer to mine and before I realized it, his lips were touching mine. But this time, I didn’t wait. I didn’t hesitate to pull away. He was somewhat handsome, but he wasn’t Obi-Wan. He and Obi-Wan were too different. Besides….he was just a little older than 8 years my senior. I walked back to the group, joining Anakin and Obi-Wan. Qui-Gon shook his head. “Why did I do that?” he asked himself before walking back to us. I averted my gaze from his and Obi-Wan’s. I couldn’t bear to look either of them in the eyes after what just happened.
Padme and the others were discussing plans to invade the palace, but I wasn’t listening. My mind was swirling with the memory of the passionate kiss with Obi-Wan; the gentle, light kiss of Qui-Gon.
“Petra?” Obi-Wan asked, but I didn’t hear him…until I felt a nudge in my ribs. “Petra?”
“What?” I said annoyed.
Padme tossed me a blaster. “I hope you can shoot.” She said with a small smile on her face.
“If you want, I can help you learn to shoot it” obi-Wan said.
“I think I can handle it.” I said with no amusement or sarcasm in my eyes and voice. I wasn’t going to give him the pleasure of being alone with me again.
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earlybird-obi-wan
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8/11 12:20pm
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RE: My Front Porch Looking In (Prequel rewrite.) , 8-11-08: Caught Between.
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Don't tangle with Jedi Petra. If this follows TPM Obi will end up with your brother Anakin.
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KaraJadeKim
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8/11 6:49pm
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true well with you its obi but dont tell chakotay that good update Qui-Gon kissing Petra uh oh.  Petra keep your head in this at least away from obi but that is impossbile
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LarsKronus
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8/12 7:22am
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Agh! Master Jinn! Why? Don't you have that other woman? Bah..what's her name? Great post, Kenobi!
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PetraKenobi
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8/13 8:33am
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earlybird-obi-wan posted:
Don't tangle with Jedi Petra. If this follows TPM Obi will end up with your brother Anakin.
*spoiler* He'll do more than just end up with Anakin and Petra. hehe.
KaraJadeKim posted:
true well with you its obi but dont tell chakotay that good update Qui-Gon kissing Petra uh oh. Petra keep your head in this at least away from obi but that is impossbile
I think she finds that out. 
LarsKronus posted:
Agh! Master Jinn! Why? Don't you have that other woman? Bah..what's her name? Great post, Kenobi!
I think it was like Tahl....I don't remember who he was in love with at one time. I read it on his bio at wookieepedia.com but I also think she died.
We and every person with us, except for the Gungans, made our way to the palace of Theed. We split up into about four groups; I was with Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan and Qui-gon.
“Once we get inside you find a safe place to hide and stay there.” Qui-Gon said bending down towards Anakin.
“Sure.” Anakin said.
“Stay there” Qui-Gon said again just to make sure he got the point. He stood up and looked at me. I avoided his gaze but I knew what he wanted me to do; keep firing and don’t stop until he or Padme said so. Obi-Wan was standing right next to me and I felt him place his hand on my shoulder, reassuring me somehow. I looked into his eyes and the only thing I saw there was love. The love I knew he had for me. For some reason, I was okay with that.
Padme signaled to another group at the far end of the plaza. They signaled back, saying they were ready. Silence for a moment, then blasts of laser fire and blasters firing. We made our way across the plaza, the Jedi with their lightsaber ignited, to the main hangar bay. Surprisingly, I hardly missed one droid or target. Padme used a code to open the hangar doors and we were in. We were the first group to enter while a second and third group followed us.
“Get to your ships!” Padme shouted.
Meanwhile…
Nute Gunray, Rune Haako and several other council members are watching the battle in the plaza. Oh, didn’t I mention them? Sorry. Guess I didn’t. While heading back to Naboo, Obi-Wan filled me in on what had happened prior to our meeting. Nute and Rune were part of the Trade Federation, which had blocked Naboo’s trade. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon were sent to try to negotiate a treaty but instead, were nearly assassinated. Being Jedi though, they got out safely and ended up down on the planet, where they met Jar Jar. After making their way to the Theed Palace, they and the Queen were headed for Coruscant. They were involved in a space battle above the planet and the hyperdrive was severely damaged, so they landed on Tattoine, and you already know what happened after that. Anyway…back to current times.
A\N: cliffhanger! lol, would've posted more but I don't have much written beyond this point.
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And who will Petra follow?
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8/13 11:15am
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Close to the end! Hang in there, Kenobi!
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Close to the end! Hang in there, Kenobi!
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8/13 9:06pm
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Nice update kenobi you and your cliffiese.
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PetraKenobi
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Date Posted:
8/15 12:35pm
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earlybird-obi-wan posted:
And who will Petra follow?
you'll have to find out by reading! 
LarsKronus posted:
Close to the end! Hang in there, Kenobi!
thankfully, we're getting very close to the end of part 1. did I mention that there are four more parts, along with a sequel? Though that sequel will be posted separately. It'll explain more of Petra's past.
KaraJadeKim posted:
Nice update kenobi you and your cliffiese.
you're one to talk, Kim. 
“I thought the battle was going to take place far from here. This is too close!” Rune said desperately. Frankly, he was a lot safer than any of us were.
Pilots ran past us to yellow fighter ships on our left and right. I felt an elbow in my side and looked up at Qui-Gon.
“Get to cover.”
“But…” I began.
“I said get to cover.” He said firmly, but without losing his concentration on taking down droids and deflecting blaster bolts. I rolled my eyes and found a hiding place under a ship. It lifted off so I was left without cover. I moved to another place, behind a pillar and stayed there, heart beating, wondering how long this would last. I looked down at my hands and saw that they were shaking. Whether it was from fear or nervousness I didn’t know. All I knew was that I was ready for this thing to be over.
A\N: sorry this is short again, but I got really sick last night and I've been sick for several days. But I'll try to write some more today.
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