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Healing, a SiriWan for the first sentence challenge completed 22-8 authors thanks
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Gkilkenny
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Mar '04
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8/21 9:51pm
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RE: Healing, a SiriWan for the first sentence challenge completed 22-8
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Well done earlybird. 
I loved it and your art is beautiful. 
Obi-Wan held her. She was his friend and he felt that in the Force they would be bonded forever. He stroked her gently on her back and looked up towards the large tree with the nest. Just behind one of the supports of the roof was a well known master looking down.
“Yes Siri and up there is our little helper.”
Siri gazed upwards and smiled “thanks Master Yoda for bringing us together.”
Such a nice ending and they are bonded. Wonderful. 
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Valairy_Scot
Title: PT Rewrite Winner
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8/21 10:49pm
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AW,  . Earlybird, your stories always leave me with a smile on my face. Thank you for such entertaining stories.
Siri met him with a smile “nurse Siri is waiting for you” and she dangled the cap she had gotten from Maariah before his nose.
Obi-Wan snatched it from her hand and ran away grinning “catch it if you can and be my nurse.”
Siri followed and the two Jedi ran the entire distance to the healer’s ward, riding banisters and getting some curious looks from other Jedi. They passed the opening double doors to the healer’s ward zooming past a startled Vin Nawarra and ended up in Kaagi Adin’s treatment-room.
“Catch Kaagi!”
Kaagi caught the nurse-cap and threw it with a big smile on his face towards Siri.
Obi-Wan gave a sigh “no Kaagi that’s wrong” but his face betrayed him. He enjoyed the coming scene between Siri and Kaagi because had seen what Kaagi was holding in his hands.
I love seeing them have fun like this.
She felt Obi-Wan’s hands on her shoulder and turning around she hugged him.
A friend, forever hers and she would treasure these moments in her heart and if and when he needed help she would be there for him. “You were there for me Obi-Wan and I can live again with an open heart. I can see the joy of life and you healed me.”
Happy sigh (though no kiss). So, when do you unveil a new Siriwan?
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PetraKenobi
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8/22 8:44am
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"big feet don't turn into big height"....boy I know how true that is! 
great story and great artwork.
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KaraJadeKim
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8/22 5:03pm
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Great Story love the humor and the last part in the garden was so sweet and i loved the banter between anakin and Siri and obi wan and Yoda Great update great artwork eb your a great writer.
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VaderLVR64
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
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8/25 4:11pm
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Slowly getting my reading caught up. Lovely work on this.
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earlybird-obi-wan
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9/5 12:14pm
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RE: Healing, a SiriWan for the first sentence challenge completed 22-8 authors thanks
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Thank you all for reading and your great support. It has been fun to write this and adding some real life touches to this story. I just love to write in the GFFA
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