Author Topic: Without Understanding (Re: Challenge From the Octopus' Garden; poem)
Alexis_Wingstar 
Registered: Sep '06
46285_The Clone Wars: Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 7/11 6:13am Subject: Without Understanding (Re: Challenge From the Octopus' Garden; poem)
Title: Without Understanding
Author: Alexis_Wingstar
Character: From my OC, Koria Rimstar's POV
Note: This is in response to Challenge from the Octopus' Garden.



Without Understanding

You know it don’t come easy.
I’m not smart.
I’m not a deep thinker.
I don’t understand the mysteries of the Force.
I suspect,
However,
The Force has it in for me.

I am drawn to you.
Like a moth to the flame,
My soul flutters
With excitement when you are here.
I can’t have you,
However.
The Force has another plan.

You stand there,
So dignified,
So sure,
A beacon of light and peace in the universe.
Untouchable,
You stand apart.
Unchained, no ties.

No love.

Yet here I am,
Drawn to you.
It was you who said,
It was the Force who guided me to you.
Why?

Why would it
Have me love you
When you refuse my love?
I serve the Force,
Going to where it leads,
And it’s always by your side.

I follow,
Without understanding
Why the Force wants to break my heart.

 

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"Change. It can be good. It can be bad. It can be expected or come as a thief in the night. Invited or not, it always comes."
~Koria
"Tender Shadows", co-written w/ The Musical Jedi
Padawan to DarthIshtar
Failed member of CA (Challengeholics Anonymous)
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earlybird-obi-wan 
Registered: Aug '06
6130_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 7/11 10:37am Subject: RE: Without Understanding (Re: Challenge From the Octopus' Garden; poem)
Loved it Alexis

Great poem

 

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