Valairy_Scot posted:VaderLVR64: Oh my! I'm still getting caught up! So much wonderful stuff! Glad you like the romance, fairy-tale style. Note: I did write a PM version of "that scene" – it spans the prior chapter, this chapter and events in-between. Since I’m not sure what really qualifies as a PM chapter (degree of, er, explicitness), I will happily let someone beta it for content because I don’t know if it would be totally shocking or just "more" of what you folks want. It's, ah, more intense than what you've read; I'm not sure how to categorize it - it's not near as graphic as some stuff I've read (which would be really embarrassing to write and share) but it definitely is not board-friendly either. Illustration is courtesy of my friend Earlybird-Obi-Wan: his painting is just perfect for this chapter and artwork is posted with permission.
Valairy_Scot posted: Veloz Poeple have tried to fool me tons of times today... and this was the only time they got me i will get u for this!!!! Bring it on! I’m usually terrible at pranks. those two other chapters better not be a joke, or i swear i'll reach thru my monitor, go to the darkside and punch u Hey, I specifically told everyone that by the end of the chapter you WILL KNOW if it’s real, a flashback, or whatever. That was a real “Jedi promise.” Oh my, wonderful doesnt even begin to cover it... love it!! i'm only hoping they dont get interrupted... ur so evil, u could actually do that to us Hmm, that could be fun to write…(actually I had this really evil plot bunny while writing the prank chapter – every time they kissed, or, um, yeah, something awful would happen and they’d recover from that and then…if I ever write it, it’ll be PM only ). But for allowable interruption, how about: Siri's back barely touched the sheet when a slight snick of an opening door caught her attention. "Hey, Master, I'm back!" Obi-Wan and Siri both froze. It was an unfortunate position to be in - and worse to be caught in. Two pairs of eyes met and agreed - Siri slid off the bed as Obi-Wan nudged her with an elbow. A soft thump preceded the door opening a fraction. "Hey, Master - gone to bed early - oh." His eyes strayed to the gundark sleep pants lying in the middle of the floor where they had so unceremoniously been flung. "Hey, are those -?" Whack! Anakin dropped to the floor revealing Yoda standing there, gimer stick still raised. "Told you I did, discretion, Obi-Wan," the little Jedi scolded. "Permission is now revoked." By the way, here’s some for all your wonderful reviews and remarks over the years. As Yoda said to Padmé in AoTC “gladdens my heart” it does.
Siri's back barely touched the sheet when a slight snick of an opening door caught her attention. "Hey, Master, I'm back!" Obi-Wan and Siri both froze. It was an unfortunate position to be in - and worse to be caught in. Two pairs of eyes met and agreed - Siri slid off the bed as Obi-Wan nudged her with an elbow. A soft thump preceded the door opening a fraction. "Hey, Master - gone to bed early - oh." His eyes strayed to the gundark sleep pants lying in the middle of the floor where they had so unceremoniously been flung. "Hey, are those -?" Whack! Anakin dropped to the floor revealing Yoda standing there, gimer stick still raised. "Told you I did, discretion, Obi-Wan," the little Jedi scolded. "Permission is now revoked."