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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 10/3/08 11:13pm Subject: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst)
	Title: Behold Author: Alley_Skywalker Genre: Poetry, angst Timeframe: ROTS, post-ROTS Characters: Obi-Wan, Anakin (in mention) Summary: Over the years Anakin had become a much larger part of Obi-Wan’s life than the Jedi Master had ever thought possible. They had become, if not everything than, a lot to each other. Yet the Dark Side has interfered. Throughout the end of ROTS and beyond Obi-Wan has to deal with a new reality – one without Anakin in it… Notes: The word “love” here is used in a very TOS-compliant, platonic/familial sort of way. Behold Behold the falling of the water, The bitter tears of fragile hopes, The rain of shards that once made up a lifetime, The brawling waves like tortured souls— Behold Behold the birthing of the darkness, The clash of chaos that replaced our harmony’s song, A ball of yellow light falls to the floor and shatters, The feasting flames feed on the eternal void— Behold Behold the death of my salvation, The shipwrecked cries of my broken heart, The fatal sinking downward towards coral To the pitch black depths where all dreams end— Behold Behold the stifling emptiness with which you left me. I lean back against the wicker couch, surrendering To the memories that shadow and roam the empty rooms, Taunting me and waking memories of you— Behold Behold the salty taste of sweet forgiveness. My love withstands the pummeling of misery’s waves, No flame, no shadow, and no chasm, can take away the dearest desire of a heart So, when the storm subsides my love will still be here— Behold -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 "No government has the right to tell its citizens when or whom to love." -- Rita Brown
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Sara_Kenobi Registered: Sep '00	Date Posted: 10/4/08 5:20pm Subject: RE: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst)
	That was very lovely. I thought that spoke a lot about what both characters could have been feeling, especially towards the end. -----signature----- Fall of the Knight (OT, PT, AU, Obi-Wan, Leia, Han) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29025519/p1/?74 The Kamino Rendezvous (Han/Leia, Leia/Other, Vader, Luke, Pre-RoTJ, AU) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29612398/p1/?0
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mujapple-juicey Registered: Jul '08	Date Posted: 10/4/08 7:16pm Subject: RE: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst)
	I am afraid to talk. That was SO good! Sad, synonym for sad, synonym for amazing, stunning, you name it. tapping fish go Master! -----signature----- Padawan to Alley_Skywalker If only I could get a new lawn mower... I'd rule I write stories too! dance!! and shoes!! and baby powder purple halipinos
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DaenaBenjen42 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 10/4/08 9:11pm Subject: RE: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst)
	Wow... picturing Anakin as an Ocean in there... wow. Well done. -----signature----- "Say it with me now. Postcard. Zoo. Not. Shopping." master to jackyyy17, micky-nikki & Trimaj e-sis to BrightFeather All cats are leopards after dark.
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 10/9/08 12:23pm Subject: RE: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst) - Date Edited: 10/9/08 12:23pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Alley_Skywalker
	Sara_Kenobi: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it mujapple-juicey: Thanks, Padawan. Your excitement is always appriciated DaenaBenjen42: Hmmm...I never particularly thought of it as Anakin being descriped as an Ocean rather the whole situation personofied in that sense but, hmm...that's an interesting thought right there it -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 "No government has the right to tell its citizens when or whom to love." -- Rita Brown
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amidalachick Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 10/9/08 12:34pm Subject: RE: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst)
	Gorgeous poem, Alley. The last verse was especially touching. -----signature----- "And it appears to be a long time Such a long, long time before the dawn..."
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Alley_Skywalker Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 1/1 10:04am Subject: RE: Behold (Poem. Obi/Ani. ROTS-angst)
	amidalachick: OMG, Kim, I'm didn't even notice you reviewed. I feel stupid now lol. I'm glad you liked it. I still have waves of SW longing, even though I know i'm not as heavily into the fandom as i use to be -----signature----- Knight of the Fanfic Order (trained by oqidaun) Master to CodyMonKenobi & mujapple-juicey Facades: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24152038/p1 "No government has the right to tell its citizens when or whom to love." -- Rita Brown
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