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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 8:22am Subject: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary 31-10 Obi-Wan and the Force - Date Edited: 10/31 8:03am (25 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
Title: Second Diary of Marhin Adin
Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
Timeframe: intertrillogy -ROTJ
Characters: Marhin Adin
Genre: diary
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Summary: Marhin Adin writes in his diary
Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to George Lucas.


Entry 1

I have a new diary. Dad saw my face when I ended the first one on the last page and put down my ‘diary of a young healer’ and after reading it he gave me this new book.
And also important; a device to write in it.

My first diary was written by me with a pencil, an ordinary wooden pencil but now that I have entered the next classes to become a healer he has given me something special, very special.

It is a fountain-pen and coming with it a bottle of ink. And when I was writing my fist words in this new book with it I recognised the colour and stroke of the pen.
And dad told me.

It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad’s diary and dad got it from master Yoda as a gift when he could write the first words in his diary. And dad told me it was his gift to me like it was given to him by Master Yoda.

And I will uphold this tradition when I am ready.

 

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KELIA  10910 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 12:14pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge
It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad’s diary

Somehow I'm not surprised Yoda would keep the pen to pass along.

I always suspected he was an old softie tongue

Please PM me when you update

Looking forward to more

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AzureAngel2  9814 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 2:18pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge
It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad’s diary and dad got it from master Yoda as a gift when he could write the first words in his diary. And dad told me it was his gift to me like it was given to him by Master Yoda.

And I will uphold this tradition when I am ready.


Hurrah, a prequel!

 

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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 6:50am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge Oops a new girl (mini challenge)
KELIA posted:
It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad’s diary

Somehow I'm not surprised Yoda would keep the pen to pass along.

I always suspected he was an old softie tongue

Please PM me when you update

Looking forward to more

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Yoda is with Kaagi wink Thanks again.

AzureAngel2 thanks for reading

Now for the mini challenge Resolutions entry 2

Entry 2

How do I put this to paper?

Yes something has happened today. A new family has come to settle in the valley and I have seen a lovely girl.

A girl and she seems nice and of my age.
But I don’t know for sure.

Can I ask mom or dad?

Nah, dad will tell me that I am too young to get interested in a girl. He wasn’t interested in girls when he was 13. But maybe his Jedi upbringing was responsible for that.

Hey, I see the new family entering the large house of healing.

Second entry of this day.

An ink blob is on the page and that’s because I went to the large house of healing.
For your eyes only; Ink and bird and you know what to do.

And next part is quite a secret and as you are reading it you know how to make the letters visible. I have done it with another kind of ink and the feather of a bird to write it down.

And yes I know the new girl’s name and age.
She is Erenya Aerendil and she is 17 years old. WOW.

I saw that when they left in the great book where Master Eled-Hir enters all the new people coming into the valley. Her parents are Eren and Nenya and are older than my parents.

WOW


 

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Jade_eyes  6505 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 2:16pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge Oops a new girl (mini challenge)
Hee!!!! This looks to be as fun as Marhin's first diary was

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grin

Could I be on your PM list? grin

 

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AzureAngel2  9814 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 10:37am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge Oops a new girl (mini challenge)
An ink blob is on the page and that’s because I went to the large house of healing.
For your eyes only; Ink and bird and you know what to do.


Well, I always know that I am up to a beautiful story when I enter one of your threads, dear bird. rose

 

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KELIA  10910 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 2:15pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge Oops a new girl (mini challenge)
dad will tell me that I am too young to get interested in a girl

Yes, but it's not like you can stop it or anything tongue

Great update

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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 1/21 10:31am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 21-1 is she for me?
Jade_eyes posted:
Hee!!!! This looks to be as fun as Marhin's first diary was

grin
grin

Could I be on your PM list? grin




Sure and this will be again a lot of fun.

AzureAngel2 posted:
Well, I always know that I am up to a beautiful story when I enter one of your threads, dear bird.

Yes, humor and some serious business too.

KELIA posted:
Yes, but it's not like you can stop it or anything


and he has to get her interested in him wink

Entry 3

All that secret ink wasn’t necessary after all. Erenya came to school today with her parents and she was introduced to the whole class by our teacher Master Eled-Hir.

And he took me apart and said that he had seen me peeking in that book and he gave me a knowing gaze. I don’t know what to make of that but time will sure reveal that.

We had more lessons today and the second was from Master Elenion.

And Erenya, she was the best.
And when I told her that after that lesson during the break she just shrugged and went away.

Why diary?
Is she not interested in me?
Yes there are more attractive young men in my school but they are in the classes for older students.

Coming back after the break Erenya gazed only at Sidnik and another older boy Jerak and paid me no attention.

 

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Jade_eyes  6505 posts
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Date Posted: 1/21 11:08am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 21-1 is she for me?
laugh
Erenna's playing the hard to get game
mischief
wink
grin

 

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AzureAngel2  9814 posts
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Date Posted: 1/21 4:39pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 21-1 is she for me?
All that secret ink wasn’t necessary after all. Erenya came to school today with her parents and she was introduced to the whole class by our teacher Master Eled-Hir.

And he took me apart and said that he had seen me peeking in that book and he gave me a knowing gaze. I don’t know what to make of that but time will sure reveal that.


That is sweet. Secret ink in such modern times. Nostalic and romantic idea.

 

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KELIA  10910 posts
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Date Posted: 1/22 3:57am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 21-1 is she for me?
when I told her that after that lesson during the break she just shrugged and went away.


Uh oh!

Poor Marhin - there's not much worse than having a crush one someone who doesn't return your interest.

I hope he'll be able to catch her eye in the future.

Great update

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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 2/1 7:42am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 1-2 hearts? mini challenge
AzureAngel2 posted:
That is sweet. Secret ink in such modern times. Nostalic and romantic idea.


he is getting more ideas

KELIA posted:
when I told her that after that lesson during the break she just shrugged and went away.


Uh oh!

Poor Marhin - there's not much worse than having a crush one someone who doesn't return your interest.

I hope he'll be able to catch her eye in the future.

Great update

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He is planning wink and with february's mini challenge heart it's easy

Entry 4

Erenya is clearly only impressed by men who can do something extra.
Jerak scored 10 out of 10 today and I only 9 and sure Jerak got Erenya’s attention. She asked him to help her.
With what?

Sure the next lesson and that’s about the workings of the heart.
She should come to me. My dad knows everything about the heart.
(Even the more intimate things a Jedi shouldn’t think about at all. But that’s the past. The Jedicode had rules about attachment and not all Jedi were following those rules. Corellian Jedi didn’t and I have met those a few months ago.)
And yes dad didn’t follow the Jedi code anymore when he saw my mother.

Dad has explained me all about the heart.

Grr she should have come to me.

But no she went to Jerak and that was it.

Have to impress her with something different.

And that something is coming next week.
Luciano is bringing jellybeans. Yes again and I hope nothing serious happens.

 

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KELIA  10910 posts
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Date Posted: 2/1 1:53pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 1-2 hearts? mini challenge
Have to impress her with something different.

Yes, we females love creativity!

I hope Marhin is able to come up with something good.

Great update

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Jade_eyes  6505 posts
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Date Posted: 2/2 11:46am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 1-2 hearts? mini challenge
Jelly beans??? That should work. LOL

 

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AzureAngel2  9814 posts
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Date Posted: 2/4 12:36pm Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 1-2 hearts? mini challenge
I like clever lads like him as well.

love

 

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Date Posted: 2/12 11:04am Subject: RE: Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary challenge 12-2 hearts and sweets?
KELIA posted:
Have to impress her with something different.

Yes, we females love creativity!

I hope Marhin is able to come up with something good.

Great update

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He will grin

Jade_eyes posted:
Jelly beans??? That should work. LOL[/quote}

And how wink

[quote=AzureAngel2]I like clever lads like him as well.


He is and you will see

Some fun in the next update

Entry 5
Luciano brought jellybeans and guess what. They were in a heartshaped box.

I sneaked into the classroom before the lessons started and put that box on her desk.

And YES, she liked it.
The box.

Not the jellybeans?
No and she knew who has given those jellybeans.

She came to my desk and said that jellybeans were bad for your teeth.

And who told her that?
Her dad!

Figures!
He is a dentist.

And I have to visit him next week.

 

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