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Corellian_Ale Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 9/8 6:24pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Being in bacta is like being in the dacanting bottle again. Ki made sure the bleeding was under control. I just wanted to sleep. He made sure I didn't sleep. Ki talked to me. We talked about things troopers never really talk about. I loved that part, very introspective. -----signature----- "An elegant weapon for more civilized times, eh?" "Well, guess what, times have changed." - "Boss"; RC-1138 Shades of Gray II - Acts of Contrition: http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/30043243
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 9/9 3:31am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Being in bacta is like being in the dacanting bottle again. Same kind of weird perception of time and space. Almost disturbing. A great post, as always! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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CT-770492A3 Registered: Mar '09	Date Posted: 9/9 7:01pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Hit. I got hit. My arm. I was holding out my blaster to blast some clankers and all of a sudden, I wasn't holding it anymore. It was laying on the ground at my feet. Luckily Ki was there. He is the most medically trained of our group. He knew what to do. There I lay, my eyes searching through the beautiful blue sky. I felt the life draining from me. I knew I wouldn't die. Ki made sure the bleeding was under control. I just wanted to sleep. He made sure I didn't sleep. Ki talked to me. We talked about things troopers never really talk about. Eerily accurate description of being severely wounded...nicely done. Or, as the Mandos would say, kandosii. -----signature----- The most ironic part of Vode An: "Bal kote, / darasuum kote..." 346th Legion (aka Rogues) - - - - - - "A lot of people didn't like KT's writing because they thought it made Mandolorians seem overly perfect." "But I thought we - they - are perfect..."
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MsLanna Title: CR GSFF Central = Offizieller Burger Brater Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 9/10 4:33am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Ouch. And though it is a nasty htought, in a war like that with clones dying all voer the place there shold be more than enough 'spare parts' available. Good to hear he found a friend again. Lets just hope he doesn't lose Ki again any time soon. -----signature----- I give up. Fett is great. Member of the waadas'dar Club. Cuyir adate jate, bal droten ori'dush Proud Master and buir'ika of Commander_Ducky. My New Title: Lords and Ladies of the Empire
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Takianna Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 9/10 6:02am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Corellian_Ale Thank you so much. I'm really searching myself with some of these posts. VaderLVR64 Your comments are always appreciated. CT-770492A3 Thank you. I didn't realize I could be accurate without knowing. MsLanna Yeah spare parts! Ki should be around for at least a little while. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29819847/p1 *** Loves those Republic Twinkies Friend of Mrs. Ben C. Blocked
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Ordo_S Registered: Sep '09	Date Posted: 9/10 8:50am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	I've enjoyed your posts thus far. You've definitely grown as a writer. I'd like to see an all out story as opposed to the journal entry but none the less, I've enjoyed. Spoken like a true Mando'ade. -----signature----- Sometimes when you bring the thunder, you get lost in the storm. Nu kyr'adyc, shi taab'echaaj'la. We all have a right to fight our own phantoms.
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Takianna Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 9/10 10:02am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Ordo_S posted: I've enjoyed your posts thus far. You've definitely grown as a writer. I'd like to see an all out story as opposed to the journal entry but none the less, I've enjoyed. Spoken like a true Mando'ade. I have done other full out stories as a clone. There is one in my signature! Thanks for reading! -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29819847/p1 *** Loves those Republic Twinkies Friend of Mrs. Ben C. Blocked
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AzureAngel2 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 9/15 1:20pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	Being in bacta is like being in the dacanting bottle again. Same kind of weird perception of time and space. Almost disturbing. Nice description. Even though it is disturbing to think where he got his new arm from. remembers stuff she read in the prequels of DUNE -----signature----- "There is good in him. I felt it." "Y a-t-il un coeur sous ton armure? Le mien est pur comme l'azure." Wife of DU & e-mom of DG Member of the GFFG up-date sock: TheBride
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mujapple-juicey Registered: Jul '08	Date Posted: 9/18 8:13pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	that must've hurt... but just how does a blaster get someone's arm off? just curious great entry. it's nice how each entry is unique but all in the same voice. It's so cool... -----signature----- Do you like yogurt? Do you? Do you? Padawan to Alley_Skywalker (yay Master!) é è á à í ì ú ù ó ò ç ê â î û ô ñ ã õ ö ü ï ë ä — (copy & paste to your delight ) ... if I reply to a fic, please put me on the PM list So... do you like yogurt?
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Takianna Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 9/24 12:44pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/08/09)
	AzureAngel2 Yes the extra parts are a disturbing idea. mujapple-juicey I'm not sure either, but they look like pretty powerful weapons. Entry 18 Why do I keep writing in this thing? Oh yea, it's because I might go insane if I don't write my thoughts down. I try not to let on to anyone else that I'm writing. I pretend to be reading alot and to maybe be drawing. Clones shouldn't have feelings to write. I wonder how other clones deal with their doubt and anguish. I've had time to think since I've been stuck in the medical ward, again. This time I got smart and I've been sleeping with the pillow over my head to drown out the cries and groans from the other people who are in here too. I don't want to hear that again. Ki visited again. He says the other guys would come, but they hate this place too much. It is hard to deal with our own mortality. This place makes you look it right in the face because those are the faces that are staring right back at you. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29819847/p1 *** Loves those Republic Twinkies Friend of Mrs. Ben C. Blocked
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Corellian_Ale Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 9/24 5:49pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/24/09)
	He says the other guys would come, but they hate this place too much. It is hard to deal with our own mortality. This place makes you look it right in the face because those are the faces that are staring right back at you. Again, another excellent post! -----signature----- "An elegant weapon for more civilized times, eh?" "Well, guess what, times have changed." - "Boss"; RC-1138 Shades of Gray II - Acts of Contrition: http://boards.theforce.net/b/b1/30043243
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 9/25 5:03am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/24/09)
	Ki visited again. He says the other guys would come, but they hate this place too much. It is hard to deal with our own mortality. This place makes you look it right in the face because those are the faces that are staring right back at you. -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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CT-770492A3 Registered: Mar '09	Date Posted: 9/25 1:08pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/24/09)
	Mortality...yeh, talk about the true looking-glass... Pillow...not bad, but it would probably be more effective to use his buy'ce. Better sound filter. Nice update. -----signature----- The most ironic part of Vode An: "Bal kote, / darasuum kote..." 346th Legion (aka Rogues) - - - - - - "A lot of people didn't like KT's writing because they thought it made Mandolorians seem overly perfect." "But I thought we - they - are perfect..."
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MsLanna Title: CR GSFF Central = Offizieller Burger Brater Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 9/28 1:08pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/24/09)
	I'll come and visit him - with some ear plugs. And I thought snoring roomates in the hospital were trouble. I can understand the others don't like to come. It's okay-ish if tehre's otehr people sick, but they just see themselves in all states of pain. -----signature----- I give up. Fett is great. Member of the waadas'dar Club. Cuyir adate jate, bal droten ori'dush Proud Master and buir'ika of Commander_Ducky. My New Title: Lords and Ladies of the Empire
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AzureAngel2 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 9/29 3:53am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 09/24/09)
	This place makes you look it right in the face because those are the faces that are staring right back at you There is really, really no hidding from the effects that war leaves on the soul, more than on the body. -----signature----- "There is good in him. I felt it." "Y a-t-il un coeur sous ton armure? Le mien est pur comme l'azure." Wife of DU & e-mom of DG Member of the GFFG up-date sock: TheBride
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