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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/3 11:54am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
AzureAngel2 posted:
Ashoka Tano, General Skywalker and General Kenobi... great names, but the war is actually mostly fought by countless clones.

*things about a famous Dutch song, whose title can be translated with "With blood, sweat and tears"!*

Haunting up-date!


Truly it is the men in the "trenches" who are the ones who do the fighting. Thanks for reading!

 

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VaderLVR64  30945 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4 5:08am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
All those men who looked like me, crying about their lost brother. A brother, I would never know, but still knew so well.

Powerful stuff. applause

 

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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4 5:11am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
VaderLVR64 posted:
All those men who looked like me, crying about their lost brother. A brother, I would never know, but still knew so well.

Powerful stuff. applause


Thank you, it is humbling to know that people find these things so powerful. I write what my heart to tells me to (I guess I wouldn't make a great jedi). Thanks for reading!

 

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Corellian_Ale  666 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4 5:57am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
When I was in the medical ward, there were so many injured who had been ferried from the ground to the main ship to be treated. Sadly so many were calling out in pain. It was like hearing your own voice over and over. It was haunting.


*shivers*


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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/4 6:10am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
Corellian_Ale posted:
When I was in the medical ward, there were so many injured who had been ferried from the ground to the main ship to be treated. Sadly so many were calling out in pain. It was like hearing your own voice over and over. It was haunting.


*shivers*


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Thank you!

 

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Date Posted: 6/5 12:43am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
It feels so good to be out of the awful medical ward.
(...)
Sadly so many were calling out in pain. It was like hearing your own voice over and over.


It must be boring to be cooped up with nothing to do if you were bred for action. Still, Healer's Ward Paddy seems a common thing in the GFFA. laugh

One of the problems of being all the same, you can see what things would do to you, No mistaking. worried

I'm glad I'm not the only one who cries.

In the end, clones are just men, too. They feel loss like anybody. not_talking

 

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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/5 5:01am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
MsLanna posted:
It feels so good to be out of the awful medical ward.
(...)
Sadly so many were calling out in pain. It was like hearing your own voice over and over.


It must be boring to be cooped up with nothing to do if you were bred for action. Still, Healer's Ward Paddy seems a common thing in the GFFA. laugh

One of the problems of being all the same, you can see what things would do to you, No mistaking. worried

I'm glad I'm not the only one who cries.

In the end, clones are just men, too. They feel loss like anybody. not_talking


Many people think that they aren't men, but the realization that they feel as we do, well it took me awhile to get there. Thanks for reading!

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 10:42am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/03/09)
Entry 12

Christophsis has ended. It was a hard battle and if not for some heroics by the jedi, we would all be dead. They are truly fearless. Although, sometimes their abilities make my skin crawl. It is so strange to see someone flying into battle, sword (or whatever) raised and absolutely no regard for their own lives. They don't even wear very tough armor.

I spoke with the Padawan Tano for some time today. She was recounting the heroics to several of us who were sitting around on the deck of the cruiser. We were not supposed to be sitting, but sometimes the thrills of victory are often recounted several times. Makes us all feel better and closer as a group. It's what we like to do.

I'm not so sure about this war. We are moving again on a mission which seems to be of no value. Yes, I've heard the rumors of trying to help out a gangster to get space lane privileges, but something isn't right. We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 12:45pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09) - Date Edited: 6/10 12:47pm (2 edits total) Edited By: CT-770492A3
Uh oh... entering Star Wars: The Clone Wars territory... sad

We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

And the clones prove to be more perceptive than the Jedi once again... happy

Interesting writing as always.

 

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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/10 12:50pm Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09)
CT-770492A3 posted:
Uh oh... entering Star Wars: The Clone Wars territory... sad

We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

And the clones prove to be more perceptive than the Jedi once again... happy

Interesting writing as always.


Yes, that territory. I'm just skirting it though! Thanks for reading!

 

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Date Posted: 6/11 5:20am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09)
I'm not so sure about this war. We are moving again on a mission which seems to be of no value. Yes, I've heard the rumors of trying to help out a gangster to get space lane privileges, but something isn't right. We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

Many soldiers feel the same way. sad

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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/11 5:42am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09)
VaderLVR64 posted:
I'm not so sure about this war. We are moving again on a mission which seems to be of no value. Yes, I've heard the rumors of trying to help out a gangster to get space lane privileges, but something isn't right. We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

Many soldiers feel the same way. sad

Great update! applause


Thank you.

 

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Date Posted: 6/11 7:20am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09)
I'm not so sure about this war. We are moving again on a mission which seems to be of no value. Yes, I've heard the rumors of trying to help out a gangster to get space lane privileges, but something isn't right. We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

There is a certain sithly gangster behind all of this. Wheels within wheels, plots within plots. The life of a single individual does not matter to this person. He is the master of puppets, moving the strings from the shadows. Poor clones. They suffer as much from the rest of the galaxy from this farce going on.

 

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Takianna  793 posts
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Date Posted: 6/11 7:37am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09)
AzureAngel2 posted:
I'm not so sure about this war. We are moving again on a mission which seems to be of no value. Yes, I've heard the rumors of trying to help out a gangster to get space lane privileges, but something isn't right. We are a huge army which is not being used to the best of our abilities. Someone higher up has no idea what they are doing or they are a genius who is setting the GAR up to fail. Either way I'm off to fight, as ordered.

There is a certain sithly gangster behind all of this. Wheels within wheels, plots within plots. The life of a single individual does not matter to this person. He is the master of puppets, moving the strings from the shadows. Poor clones. They suffer as much from the rest of the galaxy from this farce going on.


The farce, thank you for the word I was trying to think of! There is always a group which suffers from what people who are running the government think is the best thing to do, no matter if there is subterfuge. Thanks for reading!

 

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Date Posted: 6/14 10:51am Subject: I Am - Diary of a Clonetrooper (Updated 6/10/09)
Very goog update!

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