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Aiel Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 2/10 5:05am Subject: Revolution of Fate(Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT).Updated 31st of October, Chapter 4 is now up! - Date Edited: 10/31 3:20am (12 edits total) Edited By: Aiel
	Cover Art: Revolution of Fate. By Aiel Summary: It has been eight years since the ending of A Slight Disruption and much has changed in the galaxy. Han Solo, former Prince of the Empire and of Alderaan, has been working as a pilot and smuggler in order to support his foster brother, the Jedi in training Luke Skywalker, and the Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi who are residing on Tatooine to complete Luke’s training. Meanwhile Princess Leia Organa, twin sister of Luke Skywalker, finds herself being hunted by the Empire in an attempt to regain the stolen data plans the Rebellion sent her. The Plans are for a terrible weapon known only as the ‘Death Star’, that could spell doom for the small Rebel Alliance band, trying to restore the galaxy to peace once more. Welcome to Revolution of Fate, it is the sequel to A Slight Disruption, which you can find at the link if you haven’t read it yet. I hope you enjoy this story, (I find a some Beatles or some Star Wars music in the background helps the story seem a bit better, LOL, <Bowie is also good,>) and then let me know what you thought. Ta. PM LIST: Star_Angel G__Anakin JediKnight_Padme Myshia Jaded_Rose Chewie-Fan KELIA ikarit owphoenix DarthVaderette Idrelle_Miocovani TigerofRobare Darth-Semians FitJedi JediMasterJessica Tatooine_Ghost p_stotts DanaeMariSkywalker Icealina ehopepower The_Slilent_One Darth_Drachonus starwarsfan68 LordTarr voxynking jasa SITHTIFF jedilegolas walker_of_the_skies EGKenobi Ocelotl_Nesto TheOnlyJediPrincess ccp alderaanprincess CommanderK23 bkwrm752003 searth_99 dm1 dancing_star timerift22 JediNat MiralukaJedi AvenKiel TizTiz Jedi_Liz timerift22 nightt_owll whateveritis12 Jade_eyes jedipati The-Solo-Smirk LASOS Disclaimer: I don’t own Star Wars, frankly even if I had the money I don’t think I could handle the pressure, Mr Lucas, it’s all yours. Chapter One: Capture and resolution. The outer jungles of Adari were relatively quiet for mid-morning, the various bird-life twittered only occasionally in loud warbles. The unsuspecting, unusually large insect life that happened to settle on one of the zankitri plants, suddenly found itself being swallowed by the aforementioned plant while the snowy volcanos mountain ranges glittered down on the dense jungle. The almost peace was shattered by the loud thwack of a machete slicing through a large chunk of the vegetation, the vines were pushed aside by a long furry arm, and the well over seven foot Wookiee it belonged to, ploughed through the sliced vines and continued along the dirt path. Following the furry anthropoid was a male human of about six-foot one in height, his shaggy, below ear-length brown hair was plastered to his sweating forehead, he was dressed in a simple singlet and blue pants with a red-Corellian bloodstripe. “Chewie, next time I hear the words,” the man sliced through a stray vine with his own machete, “easy money, I’m going to pin down the guy and demand the exact details of this so called ‘easy money,’ while he stares down the barrel of my blaster.” Chewbacca wuffed out a laugh, [I’ll be sure to remind you,] he assured the human as he pushed aside some thinner vegetation, [all though Han, I don’t think they’d hire us after that sort of display.] The broad, good-looking features of Chewie’s companion split into an ironic grin, “you’d probably be right buddy. At least these mineral deposits were actually worth visiting, even if it was through the back door,” Han Solo adjusted the straps of the pack on his shoulders. “Man these carbon deposits are heavy.” His Wookiee co-pilot wuffed in exhausted agreement, pulling at his own pack, [maybe we should take a rest,] Chewbacca suggested, stretching out his long arms, Han inclined his head and rubbed his scarred chin. “Good idea bud,” Han slumped down on a stray log and Chewbacca sat down on the ground, leaning against a flat rock as he undid the latches of his pack, Solo grabbed the canteen on his belt and took a swig of the water from it. “You know it’s really not that bad here, better then Nal Hutta or worse,” he tossed the canteen over to Chewie, “at least there’s fresh air, temperate environment, full load of goods, ain’t half bad.” “I’m glad you enjoy it so much,” a sharp, snide voice came from behind Han and the pilot spun around with his hand already on his blaster but found another already inches away from his shocked features, he looked up at the wielder and almost gaped in shock. It was Garris Shrike. Older and with his black hair completely grey, he was missing one of his cold blue eyes that had been replaced with a glowing orange receptor. But nevertheless it was the same abusive, hard-nosed slime-ball smuggler that had kidnapped an orphaned Han twenty-three years prior, who had worked the boy, and at least forty more orphans like him, as slaves, using them to pick pockets and steal for him and his brother. Solo had escaped four years later at the age of nine while on Coruscant, trying to find refuge from kindly Senator from Corellia Garm Bel Ilibis quarters, sneaking into the building in the process, but remembering the Corellian Act at the last second. Trying to exit back out down the balcony as the lift had malfunctioned, he ended up falling onto one of the lower balconies that belonged to the apartments of the Senator of Naboo, who decided to foster Han as her own. Senator Padmé Amidala Naberrie had from then on meant everything to Han, her and her secret Jedi husband Anakin Skywalker…then after Anakin’s betrayal and Padmé’s coma induced illness their children had become Han’s main priority in life. He’d protect them tooth, nail and blaster right to the end. “Because,” Shrike continued with malicious intent, moving the blaster between Han and the snarling Chewbacca, “you’re both about to become permanent residents, on your feet, now!” The two pilots of the Millennium Falcon stood up slowly. “Hands on your head, turn around now,” Shrike barked, they turned around and Han felt the old fear of running into his old slave master slipping, all that stood before him was a broken aged man, Solo was even taller then Garris now. “This is what you’ve been reduced too, eh Shrike? Robbing people of minerals on a planet that practically gives them away,” Han said sardonically, an ironic smirk on his face despite the situation. Garris stared at him warily, “do I know you punk?” Han cocked his head to the side, “oh I’m so hurt you don’t remember me, I’m going to have to punish you for that old man,” he moved quick as lighting to the ground and side-kicked the back of Shrike’s legs, knocking the former slave owner to the ground. Garris let out a shot from the blaster that went harmlessly up into the air as Chewbacca moved just as quickly as his co-pilot and flung himself at Shrike, pinning the human to the ground and wrestling the blaster out of his grip, tossing it to the side. Han got to his feet as Chewbacca got to his own and twisted Garris arms behind his back, hoisting the two-bit being to be face to face with Solo, who had drawn his DL-44 and had it pointed in the scarred features of his former master. “This is it Shrike, this is the point when you turn around and you leave all nice like and if I ever see your smirking face around again I’ll blast it right off of your ugly head,” Solo said slowly, edging the blaster between Garris eyes. “You’ve ruined too many lives, including mine for four years before I got away.” Hazy recognition began to dawn on the features of the sweating man Chewie had a firm grip on, “Solo? Is that you? You droyking ingrate, I took you in, put clothes on your back and food in that big mouth of yours and you tell me I’m a disgrace.” He snarled, “that really hurts.” “Ingrate? You, Hutt lave, kept hundreds of kids like me as personal thieves for years,” Han shot back with a low growl, “others weren’t as lucky as me in escaping, were they? I ran into Dewlanna a few years back, she told me everything Shrike,” he revealed, Garris turned his head to the side, “all I can say is that it’s a pity you didn’t share the same fate as those poor kids and your disgusting brother.” Shrike turned back and looked him square in the eye, “I could say the same about you, Han, instead you had to live long enough to become a man and pain in my backside,” he spat and Solo dodged out of the way of spittle. “As big a pain as your parents were to the Republic years ago.” At that Han’s eyes narrowed, Shrike had tried playing this trick before, only when he was drunk had Dewlanna ever gotten any information from Garris about his parents, and then it was only his surname of Solo, “what do you mean?” He said quickly. “Ah now see, you always were an easy touch Han, you want information on your mother and father? You let me go with your goods and my life and I might shout it out as I leave.” Shrike laughed maliciously but stopped almost immediately as Han, expressionlessly, switched the blaster setting from stun to kill, Chewbacca muttered under his breath. “I had a mother and father that fostered me after I left you, I have vague memories of my real parents but they weren’t around to raise me, why should I care about information of how they died or what they did?” Solo invoked tonelessly. Garris swallowed, but smirked, “you say one thing, Han, but I can see in your eyes you’re thinking another, you tell your big walking carpet to release me at the very least and I’ll tell you something, give me some of that carbon and I’ll tell you more.” Han narrowed his eyes, he couldn’t trust the vile creature, but curiosity had always gotten the better of him, thinking about those sad blue eyes and dark hair tying his shoelaces, then the strong hands pushing him out the door… he swallowed and inclined his head. “Alright, Chewie let ‘im go, keep an eye on him though bud,” Solo ordered, Chewbacca narrowed his blue eyes, but wuffed out his acknowledgement and dropped the former slave-master’s arms, Shrike rubbed his arms ruefully and glared up at the Wookiee. Chewbacca glared back and bared his teeth as he put a hand on Garris shoulder and forced him to sit on the ground, [just try something scum and I’ll twist you into a Dantooine pastry coil.] *** The huge, dim techno halls of the Tantative IV, (a Corellian Cruiser. Circa just before the end of the Old Republic, it was the flagship of the Senator Princess of Alderaan,) were vacant save for a small, squat Astro droid, and a white clothed figure that appeared to be lithe and feminine. R2-D2 beeped up at the young woman, her fair features were partially hidden under a large, white hood that hooked onto the high-necked white gown she was clothed in, the girl was bending over to place a recording into his system. “Alright Artoo, start recording,” the soft, smoky-honey voice of the woman said softly as she straightened up and looked directly down into the Astromech droid’s receptor. “General Kenobi, I need your help. Years ago you helped my family and now I beg you for your help again, my ship has come under attack and I am unable to bring you to Alderaan, I have stored the information vital to the survival of the Rebellion here in Artoo.” Princess Leia Organa spread out her hands, “this is our most desperate hour. Help me Uncle Ben, you’re my only hope.” She realised her stumble in calling Kenobi Uncle Ben, but as she looked to the side, a tall, Golden protocol droid was watching the display, the young woman quickly turned off the recorder and snuck back behind the tech wall. It was too late, there was no time to re-record so the ‘Uncle Ben,’ line would have to stay there, Leia prayed it didn’t fall into the wrong hands. Artoo whirled and rolled towards C-3po, who immediately began scolding his smaller counterpart, “At last! Where have you been? They're heading in this direction. What are we going to do? We'll be sent to the spice mine of Kessel or smashed into who knows what!” Leia almost smiled as Artoo’s reply was merely rolling away from Threepio, who complained loudly. “Wait a minute! Where are you going?” The golden droid went shuffling after his companion and Organa peered around the wall, removing her hood as she did so, her elegant mouth was pursed in a serious manner and she switched the switch on her personal blaster to kill. * Shrike furrowed his brow, “you know Han, how the Sal-Solo’s are amazingly rich and that your disgusting cousin’s mother was a twin sister to your father,” he began, Han inwardly smirking at someone like Garris calling Thracken Sal-Solo disgusting, the pot calling the kettle black. “Well when your pops was seven there was a space-accident involving your father and Gramps and they were kidnapped by pirates. Naturally your Grandmother thought them both dead, feeling very depressed because she’d run away with the girl the year before, leaving them to go back to luxury with her parents. “But the Solo’s had survived and your Gramps raised your father alone after returning to Corellia, his wife had remarried after thinking both her husband and son were dead. But your Grandfather grew substantially rich enough ten years afterwards to be recognised by the rich Corellian community, as being very much alive.” He cackled at this one. “He got very well known as a private ship-builder, I used to work for the company before it went bust, your Gramps would get drunk and wonder around the factory, spilling this story to anyone who’d listen to him before passing out cold on the factory floor... just in case you were wondering.” Han grimaced, “nice to know, go on,” he demanded, pointing his blaster experimentally at Shrike, Garris snarled slightly in response to the movement but continued. “Your Grandma was ashamed and begged Solo to be able to see her son again, he refused and she died soon after, the Sal’s said it was a heart disorder but common hearsay said she killed herself. Your father, Jonash, had become quite well known as a brilliant prodigy and Cor-Sec was eager to recruit him soon after he left the Intelligence school on Coruscant.” He eyed Han, “obviously it skips a generation.” “Chewie,” Solo said in response as he folded his arms over his broad chest, Shrike turned his head to look at the Wookiee who had picked up a huge, thick log and snapped it in two like it was made of cake, staring at Garris poignantly. The scarred man rubbed his neck nervously, “ah, yeah…so he returned to Corellia with a girl, a Corellian Jedi if you want to believe your Gramps story,” Shrike shrugged, Han raised an eyebrow. “Any way, this girl, Jaina or something like that?” He looked to Solo for confirmation, the younger man inclined his head, he’d found out that much a few years ago. “Well she was already pregnant with you. Unfortunately for your father he was very good at his job, so good he got caught up in politics with Senator Ilibis, whom had him out on Coruscant three years before the Corellian insurrection, spying on old Palps comings and goings,” Shrike yawned, “this is boring, what do I look like? A shaman storyteller?” Han pulled a vibroblade from the inside of his left boot, “tell you what you old coot, you can either play taleteller or,” he flipped the blade nonchalantly, “I’m done with the threats of violence and Chewie and me are going to start doing the violence.” Garris snarled again, “fine, I’ll wrap things up for you your lordship, so eventually Jonash comes back with some very interesting information regarding the people the Chancellor was seeing, or something like that. So Ilibis caused the insurrection and separated Corellia from the Old Republic, but old Palps had found out about your pops spying and traced him back to Coronet city. “He sent in his private troops to carry out the operation, he had your parents executed, but they couldn’t find their three-year-old brat, someone had tipped them off and they managed to get you out the door…” Shrike smirked, “and that would be me.” “You!” Han got to his feet, pressing the blaster against Shrike’s broad forehead, “who were you working for?” Garris shrugged, “Cor-Sec originally, then it got out that I’d tipped off Jonash and his wife, I admired your father, I really liked your mother, stang was she a piece of work…!” As if suddenly remembering that the son of the woman he was commenting on had a blaster barrel pressed into his forehead, Shrike cleared his throat, “yeah, Cor-Sec panicked because of the possibility of retaliation from Palps, and kicked me to the curb.” “So I went to work for your Gramps, then a year later that went bust. My brother came to me with an idea, we came from bad stock, why not go back to being in the pick-pocketing and thieving trade? And that’s when I remembered you. “I blamed Jonash Solo, and your Gramps, for the misery in my life, what better way then to add Jonash’s only spawn to my crew of poor unfortunates?” He laughed, “and I found you didn’t I? You’ve always been like a bad credit, always turning up.” Han swallowed hard, “you scum of the earth, you don’t deserve to live,” he said in a hushed tone, Garris shut his eyes tightly as he felt the blaster barrel twist into his skin, but then felt it drop, opening one eye he saw Solo’s mouth set in a firm line. “But I’m not as low as you, Chewie, tie the creep up, we’re going to make a trip to Kessel.” Shrike almost sighed in relief, but stopped when he watched Han holster his blaster with a mild chuckle, as the Wookiee removed some rope from one of the bag-packs to tie up the former slaver’s wrists and ankles. “We’ve got a friend there that I’m sure will treat Shrike here with the same curtsey he bestowed on me, and all those other kids, years ago.” * Darth Vader, Lord of the Empire, gritted his teeth as his 501st legion appeared, between their ranks a beautiful young woman. Her hands in shackles and clad in the traditional Alderaani white of female senators, her brown hair was wrapped in buns around the sides of her mild, innocent looking features. However Vader had been swayed once before by the girl’s resemblance to his late wife, but she is nothing like Padmé, he thought with a snarl, she is manipulative and a deceiver like her father, Bail likes to play the innocent as well. “Darth Vader, I should have known,” the Princess Leia Organa said, as soon as she was pushed forward to be face to face with the lumbering armoured giant, “only you could be so bold. The Imperial Senate will not tolerate this, when they hear you’ve attacked a diplomatic…” “Don’t play the innocent with me, your highness,” Vader interrupted quickly in his artificially deep voice, “you weren’t on any mercy mission this time, several transmissions were beamed to this ship from Rebel spies.” The dark Lord of the Sith lent forward slightly as Organa set her jaw, “I want to know what you did with the plans they sent you.” Leia looked right back up at him firmly, “I don’t know what you're talking about, I’m an Imperial Senator on a diplomatic mission to Alderaan…” Vader cut her short as he pointed a leather glove clad finger in her face, “you, your highness, are part of the Rebel Alliance and a traitor, take her away!” He ordered his stormtrooper legion, who inclined their heads and pushed the Princess towards the other end of the hall. Organa managed to compose herself and swiftly turned around and spat up at Darth Vader, hitting the side of his mask, “that’s for Han!” She yelled out as the stormtroopers pulled her arms behind her back harshly and marched her down the hall, “he’ll never forgive you, you monster!” Vader reached up to wipe the spittle from his mask as he watched the stormtroopers drag the Princess away, that damnable girl, now she had to remind him that Han wouldn’t forgive him for harming his foster sister…Han, where was that boy? Turning on his heal the Sith Lord marched down the opposite end of the hall, the Imperial Commander beside him quickly followed at his side, “my Lord, holding her is dangerous, if word of this gets out it could generate sympathy for the Rebellion in the Senate.” Darth Vader rolled his eyes, save me from incompetent Naval personnel, “I have traced the Rebel spies to her, now she is my only link to finding the Rebel Alliance and eliminating them,” he replied to the stern face Commander, who didn’t looked convinced. “She’ll die before she tells you anything.” “Leave that to me,” Vader said curtly, “I want you to send a distress signal and then tell the senate that all on board were killed,” he smiled to himself, there, let Bail and any other Rebel sympathisers suffer with the loss of that hope. They approached the cockpit but before they could enter an Imperial officer emerged, “Lord Vader, we could not find the battle station plans on this ship and no transmissions were made. However an escape pod was jettisoned during the battle, but we detected no life forms aboard it.” Again the Sith Lord rolled his eyes,I must insist that the Imperial Academy raise their standards on who they admit, he thought as he turned to the Commander, “the Princess must have hidden the plans in the escape pod.” He pointed out, seeing the other officer flush out of the corner of his eye, “Commander, I want you to personally arrange a detachment to send down to the planet below us to retrieve them, there will be no-one to stop us this time.” The Commander bowed his head, “yes my Lord,” he walked into the cockpit as Vader started to walk in the opposite direction, he stopped to turn his head over his shoulder to look at the officer who was just about to follow the Commander. “You, what planet are we orbiting?” The officer swallowed, “Tatooine my lord.” Vader growled, snapping his head back around as he marched off, “of course,” he muttered out loud, “of course.” *** Leia looked around the vacant, grey walls of her cell in Vader’s Imperial shuttle and lowered her head to look down at her shackled wrists, barely visible in the dim lighting. Poor Father and Silya, they’re going to think Vader killed me, was the simplest of thoughts that came to her head. Silya Shessaun had been like a mother to Princess Organa for the past eight years, ever since her cousin Callie Remon had married Crix Madine and moved to Corellia, Leia had turned to the fair haired, former senator for womanly advice. (Mostly to avoid her Aunts, who would lecture her endlessly on avoiding the mistakes of her cousin Callie, whom they acted like had died rather then living very happily with her husband and their four children Marilou, Vyyk-Han, and the twins Cayle and Kurt.) The only daughter of Anakin Skywalker had, grudgingly, become slightly more ladylike under both Silya’s and her tutor Sabé’s influence, (and that horrible Madam Vesta,) but still remained tomboyish despite her more elegant way of dressing and speaking. Leia let a thin smile grace her lips, I wonder what Han would think of me, she thought vaguely, a scowl replacing the small smile, what do I care? He’s never tried to contact me, but…I do care that I may never see him again. Princess Organa, however, had had some information about Han, as she had finally managed to briefly met up with Callie, after exchanging flimsy correspondence for many years. Two years ago when she had been dating a Corellian smashball player, Fianti Gorn, under the guise of travelling to Corellia to watch the Corellian Dreadnaughts play in the final against the Belsavis Kretch, she got in contact with her cousin. Callie had been completely delighted and very pregant. Leia had met the then five-year-old Vyyk-Han, (a bright boy who looked more like his father,) and Marilou, (Callie’s and Crix red haired adopted daughter.) Then thirteen years old and already, Leia thought enviously, with the long legs of a dancer, which Organa had found out was far from the truth. Marilou studied her adopted cousin, dressed in the finest Coruscant designed high-necked crimson dress and tights, up and down, “you don’t look like either of your brothers,” the girl said mildly as she sat down on the sofa across from the Alderaani. Leia raised her eyebrows in interest and glanced over at a solemn Callie, before looking back at the girl dressed in a simple green shirt and black pants, “Han is my foster brother and...wait, you know my brothers?” Marilou folded her arms, “of course, Han and Wormie—I mean Luke, right?” She questioned, recognition dawn on Leia’s face as the distinctive, green eyes in the younger girl’s face narrowed. “You’re…you’re Mara Jade, aren’t you?” Leia questioned, Mara inclined her head, “Han mentioned you…” Organa looked over at Remon, who had her hands resting on her large stomach with a raised eyebrow. “Now it makes sense, you were at the attack on Kashyyyk and you helped Jedi escape…you are a Jedi aren’t you?” She turned back to Mara. Jade nodded, “yes, I’m apprenticed to Master Yoda.” Organa left her cousin’s side to sit beside the startled Mara, “you saw Luke, you’ve really seen him?” She grabbed Mara’s hands, the younger girl shrugged and nodded again, “thank the Force. He’s my twin brother and I haven’t seen him since we were four, how is he?” Leia begged for an answer. “I haven’t seen Wormie for a few years, Han said he was well last time he was here…” Mara began, and the brown haired Leia looked accusingly over Callie as she interrupted. “Han’s been here? How often?” Organa demanded, Remon ran her hand over her tightly braided hair, smiling uncertainly. “A few times, he came for the wedding and when Vyyk was born, and a few times after, he was here about a week ago on some business,” the dark haired woman said demurely, “Leia, Alderaan is too closely watched by the Imperials. It’s much easier for Han to fly under the radar here, as Cor-Sec would do anything for him and Madine makes sure of that.” Organa sighed and rested her hands on her face, “Callie, I miss them so much, does Han…?” “Of course he mentions you,” Callie reassured Leia, waddling over to sit beside her daughter and her young cousin, taking down Organa’s hands from her face and squeezing them, “I show him your letters, he always reads them. You can write to me but code it if you want to tell Luke or him anything next time he comes.” Leia had written many letters, but always in code Callie had answered that they hadn’t seen Han for a while, Organa sighed in worry. Not even nineteen, and she knew there was a large possibility she would be executed by the Imperials for everything she’d done, in stealing the Death Star plans and on Kattada. Han and Luke might never know what happened to her or worse, Luke through their twin bond would feel her death strongly. She wondered if their mother and father would be waiting for her in the afterlife…but her mother was only comatose, Leia had so longed to see her again one day, along with all of her family. Leia prayed to the Force at least her life wouldn’t be in vain, that it might do a large part to bring peace to the galaxy. There we have it, the first post of ROF, the back story to Han’s parents is entirely of my own making, I’m looking forward to posting it in full as a prequel to the ASD tetralogy when completed. The next chapter should be up soon, we’re already rolling people, so anyone who isn’t on the PM list, request it in your post or PM me. Thanks for reading. -----signature----- Master to ElvisTheCat. Bar-Wench of The Meanders Inn, now featuring Fooshie! Revolution of Fate: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29771499 http://dailysnarlandmore.blogspot.com/
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whateveritis12 Registered: Nov '08	Date Posted: 2/10 5:56am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Nice story and I'm looking forward to the rest of it. Mind putting me on the PM list? -----signature----- Seriously! A WOOKIE, with a LIGHTSABER. That's just overkill. Ben/Vestara bringing dark powers to the greatest force line Reading: Dark Tide: Onslaught, Legacy Tatooine arc Future: NJO books through Balance Point, Invasion, and Dark Lord Trilo
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voxynking Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 2/10 6:05am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	AWSOME!!!!! Great job. Looking forward to the next update. Like the "uncle Ben"
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MiralukaJedi Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 2/10 6:32am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Very nice. Can't wait to see where it goes next. -----signature----- I'm amusing, if only to myself ~ a twisted sense of humour can do that to a person :; Call and Answer~ http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28668422/p1/?3 I, Exile~ http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29148129/p13
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dm1 Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 2/10 6:44am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Yes! I'm so glad you're continuing this story line and can't wait for the next update. -----signature----- Internet Mom to HSG! Hey, HSG, watch those explosives, be careful!!
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p_stotts Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 2/10 8:50am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Very nice start, Aiel. Please add me to you PM list. pout I noticed you left me off, although you did PM me, so I guess that's the most important thing. I loved A Slight Disruption, so I'm looking forward to this story and how it deviates from canon. -----signature----- How many of you believe in psycho-kinesis? Raise my hand. - Larry the Cable Guy Proud master to Gkilkenny! Stories in my bio.
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Ocelotl_Nesto Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 2/10 8:57am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	OOH... well done.
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 2/10 10:40am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Great start! Can't wait to see more. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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EGKenobi Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 2/10 11:44am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Excellent start Please keep me on the PM. EG -----signature----- The Shifting Future: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24571153&brd=10476&start=25321338 Event Horizon: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24429782/p1/?4 Proud master to CrystalSaber_1 and GeneralKenobi7
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dancing_star Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 2/10 7:02pm Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	I am SOOOOOOO excited about this story!! I loved "A Slight Disruption" so I know I'm gonna love this too! You're off to an amazing start- I can't wait for more! Please keep me on the pm list! Wonderful job!! -----signature----- God bless America and our troops. "The LORD gives strength to his people. The LORD blesses his people with peace." Ps 29:11 ~~~ "Darkest Hours, Brightest Hope" (fic below) http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29811085/p1/
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Aiel Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 2/10 7:03pm Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is - Date Edited: 2/10 7:08pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Aiel
	Author Replies: whateveritis12 posted: Nice story and I'm looking forward to the rest of it. Mind putting me on the PM list? No problems, thanks for reading. voxynking posted: AWSOME!!!!! Great job. Looking forward to the next update. Like the "uncle Ben" Thank-you, Uncle Ben is another one of my little twists on this story, glad you enjoyed. MiralukaJedi posted: Very nice. Can't wait to see where it goes next. Well hopefully it's headed for a good storyline, thank-you for reading. dm1 posted: Yes! I'm so glad you're continuing this story line and can't wait for the next update. Thanks, the storyline was just too interesting for me to leave it with just the one off story, and the next update isn't too far away. Thanks for reading. p_stotts posted: Very nice start, Aiel. Please add me to you PM list. pout I noticed you left me off, although you did PM me, so I guess that's the most important thing. I loved A Slight Disruption, so I'm looking forward to this story and how it deviates from canon. You are on the PM list, check the sixth line, second name in teal is yours! Thank you, the story will move and shift around a lot but still keep the feel of ANH, so I hope you'll enjoy. ccp posted: Great start! Can't wait to see more. Thankies, like I said to dm1 the next update isn't too far away, LOL, it gives me something to do while I'm brooding at home with my wisdom teeth. Yep, that smiley pretty much covers it. Thank-you for reading. EGKenobi posted: Excellent start Please keep me on the PM. EG No problem, one reader locked into the PM list and thank-you so much for reading. dancing_star posted: I am SOOOOOOO excited about this story!! I loved "A Slight Disruption" so I know I'm gonna love this too! You're off to an amazing start- I can't wait for more! Please keep me on the pm list! Wonderful job!! Thank-you! I hope you love this one as much as ASD, it has a lot to live up to and boy...I've got my work cut out for me with this one, (not to mention the other two I've got planned,) thanks for reading! -----signature----- Master to ElvisTheCat. Bar-Wench of The Meanders Inn, now featuring Fooshie! Revolution of Fate: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29771499 http://dailysnarlandmore.blogspot.com/
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Jedi_Liz Title: Former CR Lincoln NE, USA Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 2/10 7:36pm Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	I'll try to keep up with this one better than I did with the first one. Good start. And thanks for the PM alerting me to the sequel. -----signature----- Current Fic: Lightswords of Fury: Special Edition - L/M Romance http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24270936/ Chapter 19 posted on 7/21/08 Coming SOON: Mara Jade of Chandrila Grove Coming SOON to SAGA Fanfic
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jedipati Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 2/10 8:29pm Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Nice- I don't know if I every reviewed the first one (I'm bad at reviewing), but I read it before, and I like how things change because of it. This looks like a worthy successor to the first one, and I look forward to seeing how it works out. Could you add me to the PM list? -----signature----- If anything can go wrong, it will- Murphy's Law AND MURPHY WAS AN OPTIMIST!!!
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AvenKiel Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 2/10 10:49pm Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Oooh, this looks good, I'm excited! -----signature----- I'm a naughty little Kitty... Meow! Grilled Cheese..... mmmmmmmmm..... http://www.livejournal.com/~jediliz/ I don't know what I'd do if I couldn't dance , sing and hop around all day, I'd probably die. Death from fidgeting!
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The_Slilent_One Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 2/11 12:01am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	awesome More please -----signature----- Anakin(alive)/Tahiri(not-half-vong) 4EVA!!!!! Proud member of the F.A.D.A. To be or not to be... - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28949907&brd=10477&replies=3
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/11 4:05am Subject: RE: Revolution of Fate (Han,Luke,Leia,Vader OT) Sequel to A Slight Disruption. ANH AU. Chapter 1 is
	Very nice beginning! “Chewie, next time I hear the words,” the man sliced through a stray vine with his own machete, “easy money, I’m going to pin down the guy and demand the exact details of this so called ‘easy money,’ while he stares down the barrel of my blaster." Somehow, I don't think that will make much of a difference! I'm glad to see Garris getting what he deserves. Looking forward to more -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 32,105
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