Author Topic: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Delight  2159 posts
Registered: Mar '01
22843_Obi-Wan and Padmé
Date Posted: 4/30 11:05pm Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala) - Date Edited: 4/30 11:08pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Delight
Title: Enough
Author: Delight
Timeline: Post-RoTS, AU, One-shot.
Who: Written as an Obidala, although it could easily be Padmé/Anakin.
Also: Angst-fest, written under the influence of <<Le Damnation de Faust>>.



"I want to have our baby in the Lake Country."

She stood gazing out into Coruscant's glittering night, her pale reflection in the transparisteel window almost ghost-like in the darkened room. She would have stood there since sunset: watching the orange-golden sky turn dark was her favourite form of meditation, her daily ritual. On rare occasions when they were both on the same planet and had no other pressing business, such as this night, he would watch her. It was rare that she would break her silence before turning from the Coruscant skyline, but this night, she did.

And so, he rose from a shadowy cove that he had claimed for his own and crossed the vast expanse of her office to her side. She looked up at him as he reached her side. The strip of red that split her lower lip in the Scar of Remembrance was trembling. Startled, he took her into his arms.

"I want to have our baby in the Lake Country," she repeated wistfully.

The bond between them hummed with emotion too complex to name. His face and heart hardened against the memory of those treacherous fools who dared to raise arms against her, and the red-hazed pandemonium that followed.

"And so we shall," he promised her. Once, he would have said it to humour her for back then, her political position and the need to safeguard her safety would have rendered her wish impossible. Now, it was a promise - her wish was his command. The Naboo still called her Amidala, but only now not Queen or Senator, but Empress of the Galactic Empire.

She was a worthy heir and successor to Palpatine's ambitions. All fall before her in adoration of her bountiful wisdom or in fear of her capricious consort-enforcer. He could no longer distinguish between the two.

In their quiet moments, he had always wondered why her eyes were not golden, as his had become for her. He had never sought power, and now he held free reign to execute her justice, in her name, for her sake. He had never sought fame, and now his name was whispered throughout the galaxy as a profane fame and a nameless fear, a monster to frighten children into behaving. He had never sought fortune, and now that everything - anything - was possible, his dearest possession, his heart's greatest desire, remained only her.

She pulled away just enough to touch his face and draw him out of his reverie. "What happened to my love who would protest it was too dangerous?" There was just a touch of humour in her voice, which faded as quickly as it surfaced. "But it doesn't matter what I want."

"It matters to me." He reached between them to caress her stomach, no longer flat but still hidden behind voluminous Naboo dress, and their child. "It matters to me that you are both happy."

"That we are all happy." She kissed him above his heart. "We should have eloped back then." But they had chosen to fight for a better system, and now, they defined the system. They had invested far too much in their Empire to walk away. By her hand she brought about a war that tore the galaxy apart. By his hand he had two masters undone - one in protecting her and the other in protection of her. One order destroyed and the other twisted into something beyond recognition. They tried not to think about it most of the time, letting the mundane demands of rule overshadow the haunting repercussions of their choices and actions. But this night, especially this night, perhaps it was fitting that they did.

He felt her smile, though she was still sad. "It is a wistful thought," she said finally. "No more."

The chronometer chimed for the third time, reminding the Empress of their forthcoming appointment at the Coruscant Opera and the memorial performance (for the late Emperor was ever the patron of the arts). It was one year ago that Palpatine tried to make them into something that they were not. The late Emperor was their friend and mentor, their slaver and ultimately, their sacrifice in their war to be free.

Her arms tightened around him, and he could feel just how much she needed to hear the truth from him. "Do you regret this?"

It would be a lie to say that they did it all for the galaxy, though the elements of idealistic duty and altruistic purpose remained potent shades haunted their plans and tainted their decisions. No. In the final analysis, they did it for each other. "No," he told her, and was glad that he spoke the truth.

"Then neither do I."

That was the price they paid for their Empire.

 

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KELIA  10939 posts
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Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 5/1 5:24am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
They tried not to think about it most of the time, letting the mundane demands of rule overshadow the haunting repercussions of their choices and actions.

Very poignant.

I can understand why Obi-Wan and Padme would have a hard time facing the reality of their actions. And it would be so ease for them to focus on their new duties instead.

Great job on this

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GeneralKenobi7  847 posts
Registered: Jan '09
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Date Posted: 5/1 5:36am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Great piece of work! applause A bit dark, but very expressive.

 

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Valairy_Scot  4120 posts
Registered: Sep '05
Date Posted: 5/1 2:35pm Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
He had never sought power, and now he held free reign to execute her justice, in her name, for her sake. He had never sought fame, and now his name was whispered throughout the galaxy as a profane fame and a nameless fear, a monster to frighten children into behaving. He had never sought fortune, and now that everything - anything - was possible, his dearest possession, his heart's greatest desire, remained only her.


Oh, wow, this would be how Obi would see it, wouldn't he? It would never be for himself.


She pulled away just enough to touch his face and draw him out of his reverie. "What happened to my love who would protest it was too dangerous?" There was just a touch of humour in her voice, which faded as quickly as it surfaced. "But it doesn't matter what I want."

"It matters to me." He reached between them to caress her stomach, no longer flat but still hidden behind voluminous Naboo dress, and their child. "It matters to me that you are both happy."

"That we are all happy." She kissed him above his heart. "We should have eloped back then." But they had chosen to fight for a better system, and now, they defined the system. They had invested far too much in their Empire to walk away. By her hand she brought about a war that tore the galaxy apart. By his hand he had two masters undone - one in protecting her and the other in protection of her. One order destroyed and the other twisted into something beyond recognition. They tried not to think about it most of the time, letting the mundane demands of rule overshadow the haunting repercussions of their choices and actions. But this night, especially this night, perhaps it was fitting that they did.


Very well done.

 

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Casper_Knightshade  10107 posts
Registered: Oct '00
Date Posted: 5/6 7:22am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Very rich in darkness and accumulation. Me likes, Delight-ful, me likes it a lot! Amidala takes what others have created and has made it her own: how else to celebrate than to attend an opera. Perhaps it's on Coruscant: could it be at Tragedy Bluffs? wink

BIG DADDY EVIL APPROVED!

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Delight  2159 posts
Registered: Mar '01
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Date Posted: 5/12 3:14am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Kelia Thanks. Glad you enjoy this. I think the avoidance of pain is something that most people will choose. Perhaps, having confronted head-on pain earlier on in their careers, our heroes are entitled to some latitude.

GeneralKenobi7 Thanks. Glad you enjoy this.

Valairy_Scot Thanks. It's somewhat tricky to write a dark Obi-Wan who remains (mostly) true to the character portrayed in the movies. Glad you approve.

Casper Amidala can be closer to Palpatine than one could imagine... Dark Obidala angst can be a surprisingly expressive genre. happy

Thanks, all, for reading.

 

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Takianna  801 posts
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Date Posted: 5/12 12:57pm Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
WOW! Are you gonna write more of this?!? If you are, I so want to know about it! This is awesome!


 

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Delight  2159 posts
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Date Posted: 5/28 8:39am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Thanks, Takianna. Glad you like this! I'd let you know if/when I expand this one-shot.

 

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Sara_Kenobi  20812 posts
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Date Posted: 6/11 7:22pm Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
That was wonderful, Delight! applause

 

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Lady_Skywalker87  394 posts
Registered: Aug '08
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Date Posted: 6/11 8:55pm Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala) - Date Edited: 6/12 10:26am (1 edits total) Edited By: Lady_Skywalker87
This was very enjoyable. I don't usually read Obidala but you made it believable for me...I also could see Anakin in this perhaps because I have a different opinion on him than most people.

Powerful, Poignant, Beautiful & Well Written! rose

Wonderful Job on this Delight! applause happy

 

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pronker  107 posts
Registered: Jan '07
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Date Posted: 9/13 10:06am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Fine drama in few words --- 'they had too much invested' was especially apt, as they both were devoted to causes greater than themselves, except in that devoting themselves like that, they found each other too necessary to go on without. applause

 

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Delight  2159 posts
Registered: Mar '01
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Date Posted: 9/21 9:04am Subject: Enough (Post-RoTS AU Obidala)
Thank you, Sara_Kenobi, Lady_Skywalker87 and pronker. Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this tiny story.

 

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