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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 8/14 10:13am Subject: Water fun, SiriWan vignette PT rewrite first / last sentence challenge with art, authors thanks - Date Edited: 10/3 10:58pm (1 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
	Water fun Author: Earlybird-obi-wan Timeframe: Clone wars after Jabiim Characters: Obi-Wan, Siri Tachi Genre: Pt rewrite challenge and first sentence challenge Disclaimer: Star Wars is owned by George Lucas Summary: Obi-Wan and Siri on New Holstice during a break from the war "You call it madness, but I call it love. You are the moon and I am the star. We are shining from above. And we have travelled from afar.” Tired cerulean blue eyes rimmed with red from fatigue looked up. A big smile cracked his parched face. ‘What’s she doing here?’ “What’s she doing here? Uh Kenobi the same what you are doing here,” and the woman gripped his brown clad shoulders and kissed him full on his lips but only for a moment. “Yuck, you taste like a Nerf that hasn’t seen a bath or a shower for years and has been rolling in the manure for days. And that Nerf fur you call a beard is even worse.” “Says the lady who is a smelly mixture of oil, lubricant and acid,” Obi-Wan smiled. “Been crawling through the pipes of the hyperdrive engine of your Jedicruiser?” “Uh sort of,” Siri answered “and after that Plo Koon ordered me to take a vacation on New Holstice. It was my first stop after Kornalan and here I am. And you?” “Master Yoda ordered me to take wounded clone troopers to New Holstice and I have arrived only half an hour ago. Cody told me to take a walk in the gardens and I was just beginning when I heard that song.” “A song from the days before these dratted wars,” Siri murmured “from the days when we were just masters raising a padawan” and she began to tickle him on his chest. “Si... Siri st ... stop that,” Obi-Wan began to squirm. “Geez and this time there is no smiley in your tunics reminding you of a certain healer with cold hands,” Siri giggled and kissed him again shortly “You have to take a bath Nerfherder.” “Over there, just follow me, it’s empty at this time of the day, uh night,” Obi-Wan wriggled from her grasp and ran down the path towards the big pond that served as a swimming pool for the recovering patients from the large hospital. Doffing his clothes and piling them on a heap in a locker after removing a white towel and dropping it on the soft grass he ran the last meters clad only in his boxers and dove in the cool refreshing water only to rise shortly afterwards because he heard something. “It's the final countdown. The final countdown The final countdown Oooh, ooooh” Siri sang and threw a big thing towards the pond. Splash! “The final countdown Oooh, it's the final countdown The final countdown” Splash! “I found this!” Siri jumped graciously in the pond and pushed a purple crocodragon making a big wave. “Siri,” Obi-Wan sputtered. “It’s a toy for a boy,” Siri continued and floated it atop of him. “For a big boy.” “Is this your idea of a vacation?” “Yes” and she began the water-fight. Both were tired, watery eyed and pruny fingered when they plopped down on the blue towel. Obi-Wan turned on his back and felt Siri tracing the faint scars and the water in his eyes mingled with a few tears. “Poor girl, lost to the dark side.” “Obi-Wan shh don’t think about her,” Siri murmured in his ear. “If the Force leads me again to Asajj Ventress I will try to save her,” Obi-Wan said in a halting voice. “You will Obi-Wan but don’t worry so much. We are now here and like your master always used to say; let the living Force guide you!” She took the white towel and covered them both. - - - - Soft snoring replaced the murmured kisses. And the moon and the millions of shining stars shone on the two sleeping Jedi. For both it was a peaceful moment. Both were living in the Living Force. And somewhere a Force ghost smiled when Siri opened her sleepy eyes and kissed Obi-Wan again. A kiss could change the world. FIN -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Valairy_Scot Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 8/14 10:23am Subject: Water fun, SiriWan vignette PT rewrite and first / last sentence challenge wit art
	How sweet and very touching (as always, of course). I just love your Siriwan's. After battles, they deserved a few minutes of companionship and fun. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. 2007-2008 the quality years
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 8/14 10:56am Subject: Water fun, SiriWan vignette PT rewrite and first / last sentence challenge wit art
	how mushy! Great job! and thanks for participatiung. -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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AzureAngel2 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/15 12:00pm Subject: Water fun, SiriWan vignette PT rewrite and first / last sentence challenge wit art
	Yes, very mushy, very sweet and very gentle. Thank you! -----signature----- "There is good in him. I felt it." "Y a-t-il un coeur sous ton armure? Le mien est pur comme l'azure." Wife of DU & e-mom of DG Member of the GFFG up-date sock: TheBride
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 10/3 10:57pm Subject: RE: Water fun, SiriWan vignette PT rewrite first / last sentence challenge with art authors thanks
	Valairy_Scot posted: How sweet and very touching (as always, of course). I just love your Siriwan's. After battles, they deserved a few minutes of companionship and fun. Thanks Kidan posted: how mushy! Great job! and thanks for participatiung. Thank you AzureAngel2 posted: Yes, very mushy, very sweet and very gentle. Thank you -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 10/5 4:23am Subject: Water fun, SiriWan vignette PT rewrite first / last sentence challenge with art, authors thanks
	You do Siri and Obi-Wan to perfection. That picture is beautiful. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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